SWASAN TS – UNEXPECTED (by Anu) Part 1

THIS TS IS DEDICATED TO MY SWEET LITTLE SISTER PRAKRITI AND ADORABLE NAVI AND MY SO MANY WONDERFUL READERS WHO HAVE SUPPORTED ME THROUGHOUT THE JOURNEY. I AM NOT CONTINUING MY SS “we are destined to be together” BECAUSE I AM NOT ABLE TO GIVE TIME TO IT. I DONT WANT TO DO INJUSTICE TO YOU ALL BY GIVING EXTREMELY LATE UPDATES. I APOLOGISE AND KNOW THAT YOU ALL ARE DISAPPOINTED. IF THERE’S SOMEONE WHO IS WILLING TO CONTINUE THE SS FURTHER, DO MESSAGE ME, I’LL ASSIST YOU WITH THE STORYLINE I THOUGHT. THANK YOU FOR YOUR RELENTLESS SUPPORT TO MY WORKS. LOVE YOU ALL
#ANU MODI

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A girl is standing beside a wrecked car, all alone, at an isolated road..

SWARA (holding her pendant which had a small idol of Krishna Ji)- Kanha Ji.. What is this? Now, how will I return home. Is car KO bhi abhi hi kharab hona tha.. All strayed at a lonely place..

She heard some sound and looked up to see some lantern light coming from the mid of the forested area..

SWARA- Seems that there is some village inside. I can seek help from there.

She went towards the area and slightly peeping moved in. She continued moving inside and further inside.

Looking at the view, she stepped back in horror. She was highly shocked. Never in her life she had witnessed something like these.

Many girls were tied to a rope and were kept in a cage as if birds and animals for sale. Some seemed to be 19 years of age, some 15 years and some hardly of 10 or 12 years. All were shouting for help. A group of men were standing near them. One of the men spoke..

MAN 1- Shout how much you want.. Ask for help but you won’t get any and in sometime we will take you to our boss and there along with other girls you will be sold.

MAN 2- boss would reward us highly, afterall we have collected so many girls for him.

The whole group laughed and enjoyed. The goons moved a little far from the place and involved themselves in playing cards and sleeping.

SWARA looked at the girls and her eyes filled with tears. The looked so pale, so impeccant then how did they fall in this grave trap. SWARA wanted to help them. She had always been a social worker. That’s what her parents taught her. Though belonging from a very high class social family, she never felt indignant to land on the floor and eat her meal with the poors.. She was a lovable, kind heart and her so pure heart didn’t allow her to let the girls suffer.

As she noticed that the men were sufficiently far away, she reached out to the girls and carefully opened the lock. All the girls passed her a huge, warm smile. Slowly, slowly, she freed them and the girls ran from there. When SWARA was saving the last girl, the men came towards them. Both of them shook with fear.

SWARA- baccha run.. Go run fast..

Fortunately, the girl was saved and she Hid herself behind a bush but the men got hold of SWARA.

MAN1- you girl.. You made all other run away. Now boss won’t leave us because of you , he will kill us today.

MAN2 – hold this girl and take her to asla mandi. She saved others and no would be able to save her from us.

Two men held swara and tied her with chains dragging her somewhere to their leader.
SWARA- leave me you all.. Leave me..

The girl whom SWARA saved , saw all this. She ran at the roads and shouted. There was a vehicle coming towards her and the driver seeing the girl at the middle of the road applied sudden breaks giving a jerk to the car.

SANSKAAR- what happened laksh? Why did you stop the car?

LAKSH- sanskaar.. There’s someone out infront of the car..

They both came out and the girl fell on their fight.

THE GIRL- sahab Pls save that didi.. That angel. Those people won’t leave her. Pls save our angel.

LAKSH- beta.. Stand up first..

SANSKAAR- now tell… Who are you? What happened?

THE GIRL- sahab.. My name is shruti. I am from a nearby village. Some goons had come to our village and kidnapped all the girls. I was also one of them. They had kept us nearby then angel came and she saved us from them but those bad men took her. They must be taking her to asla mandi. Sahab Pls save her, otherwise they will sell her there. That’s a very bad place.

SANLAK- “ASLA MANDI”

SANSKAAR- laksh .. You take her to a safe place.. I’ll save the girl and RAW’s next mission was to capture these asla mandi’ people only who are selling the girls. I need to leave now .. You be ready with the force and come soon.

LAKSH- thik hai bhai.. But how will you recognise the girl?

(Yup sanlak are RAW AGENTS)

THE GIRL- didi wore a pendant of Kanha Ji..

SANSKAAR- thik hai beta.. Now you go with this uncle. I will save your angel..

THE GIRL(cutely) -pucca promise..

SANSKAAR (smiling)- pucca promise

Otherside, SWARA was brought to asla mandi. She clutched her pendant tight. The scene which she saw was worse than the previous scene she witnessed. There girls were only tied but here the girls were being sold and bargained. Not 1, not 2, not 5, not 10, it seemed the whole girls of the city were being tortured here. She was made to go in a prison type room where many other girls were there. She was determined to fight back and save herself and sis he tried to talk to the girls, but none of them replied back. It was said they have been carved out of an alabaster stone and placed them to be seated there. Not a single girl replied to her or talk to her. She believed in making her own destiny but here, it was as if the girls accepted their situation. They didn’t want to fight for their respect. They didn’t want to struggle. They just believed simply that they were the next to be sold and bought. Her heart grew with fear. What was she supposed to do. A tear escaped her eye and she firmly held her pendant.

#PRECAP- Will sanskaar be able to save SWARA?

How will he do that all alone?

Will swara be able to save herself?

Will she be able to continue being brave or some disaster would happen.

The story starts from next shot and then the last. You are gonna see Swasan moments. This chappy was sort of a promo and lil boring too but If I get good good comments then the next chapter may be posted today itself. Lol. I am selfish ..I know. Par kya karun. If less comments then no motivation. If more comments then I may tamper a little with my schedule and post the chapter soon

48 comments

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Thank u Anu di.. Love you too so much.. I think I’ll be able to post the next part in an hour or so before leaving for college.. ☺️☺️

  1. shiksha

    Nice concept,continue soon n about ur ss we are destined to be together u can update it in weekends or in free time.But update this one,fast.

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      This will be updates soon.. No worries but about “we are destined to be together “.. I need some time.. If I get sufficient amount of time then I would post it.. If not then I won’t continue it.. 😊😊

  2. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anu !!

    I was so worried for u. Where were u these days???

    Are u all okay na??

    coming to TS it’s amazing.

    Regarding FF plss don’t stop it.

    We will wait for updates.

    Try to update it whenever u get time.

    And plss take care of urself dea…
    Love ya!!

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      No worries rupa.. I am good .. Just was too stressed out so didn’t get time to write .. Moreover we all are busy in the annual exhibition practices…. Thank you for appreciating my ts and SS, give me sometime.. I’ll analyse and tell..

      Rupa.. Love u so so so much.. Yaar, you are loaded with extra cuteness and goodness.. Send me your pic.. I’ll squeeze your cheeks virtually only..

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Thank u for your criticism.. You inspired me more but as your name suggests if you did it because I wrote for swasanian and not for ragini.. Then no thanks .. Keep your comment with you

  3. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Superb, Amazing, Mind blowing, Fantastic concept and storyline Di…..Loved it so much….Thank you so much for your love….So sweet of you Di…Sorry for late comment…But what to do I was busy in Independence Day programs….Well Di A Happy Independence Day to you…Keep Writing my sis…Waiting for next part…Bye and Take care…
    Love u till infinity…

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Koi baat nahi my baccha.. Happy independence and enjoy your holiday.. Love you more than infinity( if possible)..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  4. tanu

    Hey anuki bachi kaha gayi thu itni din??
    And wat about ur othr shot of shova….😒😩
    Cmng to dis ff its asusual awesome like u…..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜
    Take care dear….😚😍

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Di .. Pehli baat Meri shaadi bhi nahi HUYI hai.. Bacche Kahan se aa gaye..
      About me .. I wasn’t well di.. Was stressed out because of constant busy schedule but now better.. Yup .. I’ll take care.. You too

  5. tanu

    Read ur note after commenting dear pls do continue dat too yaar……cmplt a stry n den post other one….dnt mind its just a suggestion….cz am missing it vry badly…..☹

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      No di.. Why would I mind if you say something.. If you all won’t say then who would say.. Di you are missing my SS.. I am so pleased di but di I didn’t post because I wasn’t getting a single good moment to write.. If I wrote long chapters then I would take atleast 5 good episodes to complete it .. But then prakriti messaged ME and expressed her wish.. I just couldn’t disappoint the little heart and so I wrote this.. First I thought to write an os but unfortunately I couldn’t complete it so I made it a TS which I can complete with small episodes too

  6. Anjali

    Sorry for late reply. It was awesome . Update soon and happy independent day. 😜😍😍

  7. Samaira

    Nice Di but very sad that ur not continuing ur ss. I didnt cmnt in ur that ss but i was big fan of ur story. How can u leave anything in middly. If u post latly n small then too we well read it. All are saying this. If u leave anything in middle all will disponit. Anu di u write plz. Some tyms we need to do fr others. M not saying to leave ur work but weeknd . Nd if write 5 lines atlest we will read it. Becoz something is better then nathing. Plz acpect our reqest. Plz plz plz. Dont waste my plz. Nd nice ts.

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Arey arey.. All have done bawal against me.. So bad .. Not talking to you all.. Katti and I am continuing my SS.. I have even posted the next part.. It’s chotu Sa.. So you all have t pad just in it.. I just got 15 minutes to write it..

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      You said Na that sometimes we need to write for others.. “We are destined to be together” is my fourth work.. I used to always lack time but writing gave me pleasure that’s why I always used to write os or TS but people asked me to write a ff and I started it.. The hate story.. Fairytale story.. All was readers demand.. I disn’t starry that story for myself or because of my interest.. It was because of the readers.. They requested me but all of a sudden where are all my loyal readers lost.. I wrote it for them but they don’t even tell that they want me to continue or not.. I am not saying that I stopped my ff because of comments problem .. I stopped it cause of time problem.. But I am continuing it now.. You only tell once in a while you get 100 comments and suddenly 30 comments.. What will you do? No na.. Still I continued it because I loved my many readers who had supported me from beginning unlike others … There never comes a comment problem but I am sorry seeing your message I am highly frustrated.. I appreciate your view.. And I am always ready for criticism too but I expect your cooperation..
      I am sorry I have been extremely rude but I am just very agitated now and it’s not for you personally, it’s for every reader.. Specially silent ones.. If I have hurt you I am sorry.. Really I am..

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Even this work I wrote because someone wanted.. Ok .. I was extremely rude.. I will confess to you all as to why ended it.. I am getting distracted from studies and my health is deteriorating.. From childhood, I have a disease.. Don’t wanna tell what but it has a symptom that whenever I stain my body, my body starts shivering and its normal within some time, I faint if I don’t take my capsule.. These days I was being a lot of stressed so I thought to end it but now I am not ending it and would complete it.. Really sorry for disappointing you all.. I have posted both my stories about 2 hours before.. Hope you all don’t mind

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      I’ll surely continue dear and human trafficking Has become really common in India.. It’s needed that people should be alert and government should take some strict steps

  8. Anu_M

    |Author

    Samaira baccha.. I am genuinely really sorry.. I was just now just having my meds and there my friends came and ruined my name.. Yup, all these messages are not written by me.. They are written by my four freaky friends.. The first one is written by someone else.. Second one by again someone else.. Third one again someone else wrote and did you look at those starred words that editing had been done by my next friend.. I am so sorry dear.. They are my emotional buddies.. They love me a way too much.. But I think Thai was one of their dare plan or Somethin but whatsoever, a huge Beary hug sorry for you and I’ll look up as to why they did that and I am continuing my SS and big thanks for liking my TS.. Love ya.. 😍😍

  9. Anu_M

    |Author

    Whatever we said is true.. The first part was written by me , I am siya.. The second part was written by Jerry.. The third part was written by lawren and the editing and proof reading was done by anu’s best friend trisha.. Sorry for being rude.. Ab we are giving her phone back to her otherwise I am sure that she’ll pour the whole ketchup bottle infront of us in few minutes.. Again sorry

  10. Anu_M

    |Author

    Guys really sorry for the fuss.. I will talk to you all about this later.. Just now I need to leave.. 😳😊☺️

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