ASSLAM O ALAIKUM beautiful people , how r u all well I am not new here , I often comment on ff but not too regularly this is my first try and there will lots and lots of grammatical mistakes kindly ignore them plzzz and suggest me if u want any changes and if u didn’t like the story but plzzz don’t BASH.
Special thanks to Kaynat api she guided me a lot and she is a wonderful person. And also riddhima di who supported and motivated me love them a lot and yeh plzzz read their stories they are amazing I can’t write like them or like stella di , zaimal, mars ,tanu and many more but I tried now enough of my bak bak lets come to the story……

PART : 1
A bride with a veil was sitting on the bed, it seems like it was her wedding. The room was not decorated yet the room was simple and elegant. She was sobbing.
Bride’s POV:
I am Swara Sanskar Maheshwari today was my wedding with my best friend Sanskar. We are together since our school days he is one of the best persons I ever know I used to like him or u can say love him but I never showed him that I have any such feelings for him because I knew he only considered me as his best friend nothing else. On the last day of our college I got to know that his parents fixed his marriage with his cousin Kavita I was heartbroken but I was happy for him as Kavita was a really nice girl she used to be our neighbor during my schooldays then she shifted from there to another city. He always use to say that he will find a perfect husband for me and I always use to laugh at my fate. But my life turned upside down on that unfaithful day that day took everything from me even the reason of my living also. After that I got to know that Sanskar got married I was sooo heartbroken , unable to take these anymore I went abroad for further studies.(end of the POV).
The door opened and Sanskar walked in. tears were continuously flowing from her eyes and she was nervous.
Sanskar: Swara u must be tired go and change ur dress.
Swara hummed in response and went to changing room.
Sanskar sit on the bed with thud holding his head.

Sanskar POV:
I am Sanskar Maheshwari, one of the famous business tycoons in India. My life is totally a mess this is second time I am entering this room as a groom yes this is 2nd marriage of mine ut the difference is 1st time when I entered I was happy as got married to my love but this marriage although I married to my best friend and I really like her but only as a best friend this marriage happened due to certain circumstances.
His chain of thoughts was broken by knock on the door and a smile appeared on his lips thinking who it might be. He went and opened the door and there she was his life and the most and adorable person of his life HIS DAUGHTER….. KHUSHI SANSKAR MAHESHWARI!!!
He smiled at her who was seeing him with her innocent eyes and a teddy in one hand and milk bottle in other hand looking sooo cute Sanskar picker her in his arms and closed the door.
Khushi: papa whele wele u I was mishing u (papa where were u I was missing u)
Sanskar: awww papa’s princess was missing me!!
(Khushi nodded her head quickly)
Sanskar: sorry beta (holding his ears)!!
Khushi: itsh otay but don’t do thish thing athain otay oll I will be velly anthly (its okay but don’t do this again akay or I will be very angry)
She said this while folding her hand up till her chest
Sanskar laughed and started tickling her
Sanskar: acha now u will get angry with me han wait I ll show u and he again started tickling her
Khushi: bash basshh papa otay I will be anthry on hehehe but u have to u to thive me a big big chotolate (bas bas papa okay I will not be angry on u but u have to give me a big big chocolate).
Sanskar: okay pakka (he then hugged her tightly)
This whole scene was witnessed by Swara who came from dressing room after changing.
She smiled and a lone tear escape her eyes that she quickly wiped off.
Khushi who saw Swara standing there squeal in happiness and from Sanskar’s lap and run towards Swara
Swara sit down and took her in a tight hug
Khushi: CUTIEEEEEE!! I mished u (I missed u). u wele looting soo beoti full lite Barbie(u were looking soo beautiful like barbie)
Swara: aww thank u sweety I too missed u and u know what u were also looking like cindrella
Khushi: (shyly) thanthooo (thank u) and I always loot lite cindrella (I always look like cyndrella)
Swara laughed and kissed her cheeks in return Khushi kissed her right cheek tightly….

To be continued….
Phewwww done with this part yaar hats off to those who write its soo difficult to write…
I hoped u like my story and will try to update next part soon .
Thank u…
Take care
Allah hafiz!!! And byy!! 1

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  1. Mars

    Amazing dear.I loved the first part.nice start.And I m glad u wrote my name but don’t underestimat yourself u r best in yourself. U had written it beautifully. I m happy to see new swasan story.
    Continue soon……waiting….
    Take care.

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u sooI much yaar never thought that u will comment on my story. Thank u
      Remember me in ur prayers
      Take care!!

  2. Rosey

    Amazing start

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u dear!!!

  3. interesting

    1. Rockleon


  4. Awesome,??????????????

    1. Rockleon

      Awww thank u so much!!!

  5. Neptune

    amazing start…..
    will be waiting for you to continue dear…
    waiting for SWASAN love story to start….

    1. Rockleon

      THank usooo muchneptune
      OOwill try my best to.write next part soon!

  6. Awesome

  7. Independent

    Awesome dear loved it

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u so much!

  8. Phoniex

    i know dear its difficult to write. i liked it dear

    1. Rockleon

      Yeh u r right!!!
      Thanks for liking it!!!

  9. Mumpi

    amazing one.. i loved dis part. plz update soon.

    1. Rockleon

      Thanks for loving it and I willl post soon!

  10. Soujanya


  11. Nice start..I liked it a lot..continue soon..tc..

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u will surely post….

  12. AbrahamEzra

    Beautiful. It was amazing yaar. Nice start and feeling so sad for swara .plss post next one soon

    1. Rockleon

      Thaank you will post next part soon!

  13. Kanha

    Nice concept. Keep writing sweetu. Waiting for the next update?☺️

    1. Rockleon

      Thanks will surely post….

  14. Kanha

    Nice concept. Keep writing. Waiting for the next update?☺️

    1. Kanha

      Sorry for repeated comment

  15. AnuAnn

    Interesting dear

  16. Kaynatk01

    well indeed it was beautifully written….
    and this well written…
    in ur first attempt u wrote so well….
    well coming bavk to story khushi is there too am so much excited….
    and waiting to know reasons behind it….
    post fast love u????

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u kaynat apii!!!!
      Love u soooo very much
      And will post soon didn’t even expect such beautiful comments…..

      1. Kaynatk01

        Its just starting ull get more comments like this ??

  17. Rachna

    Awsm Dr

    1. Rockleon

      Thanks for commenting!!!

  18. Awesome. Excited for the next part

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u will try to post next part soon!

  19. Beautiful story… Waiting for next part

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u soo much!

  20. Awesome pleasecontinue soon

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u will surely post next part soon!

  21. nice dear…continue soon

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u and will surely continue!!!!

  22. Scooby

    Superb ??

    1. Rockleon

      thank u!!!

  23. Arshaanya

    Loved it

    1. Rockleon

      Thank u sooo uch for.liking my story!!!

  24. Gayathri.visu

    Very good start….

    1. Rockleon

      thank u very much!!

  25. Kakali

    Woah! Awesome dear! Good to see you writing! Keep it up! Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Rockleon

      GODDD someone plzzz pinch me !!!
      thank u kakali di !!
      i can’t believe it that u r commenting on my story (fainting)
      hehehe well thank u sooo very much….

  26. Simi

    Awesome dear…

    1. Rockleon

      thank uu soo much!!!

  27. Vyshu10

    awesome..cute n sweet

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