SwaSan TS : FOREVER ( by swarmayi ) Part 1

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Hello everyone! I'm back with a new TS. Which is based on current track of swaragini.. Love-hate track! I hope u guys will enjoy.. Here's a short promo/teaser of my TS..

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Scene 1 :

Sanskar : Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. Where are you going? Don't you remember what I told you?

Swara looks at Sanskar with teary & painful eyes..

Sanskar : Aa aa.. Ye jo aapke aansu hai.. bachake rakhna.. keep it very safe.. You'll need it in future.. Now pack your bags & cm back to ur 'home sweet home'.. ( winks )

Swara : ( with determination ) I will..

Scene 2 :

Swara was looking at Sanskar with horrified expression.

Swara : Sanskar! You are drunk!

Sanskar : yes sweetheart. M drunk.. pichle 6 mahino se yahi to hai.. jo mere saath hai.. Liver kharab kar deti hai sharaab par dil ke repairing ke liye achchi hai.. Main to kahunga agr kisiko heart problem ho to bypass mat karo bas thodi whisky pass karo.. ( stumbles holding whisky bottle )

Swara : ( cries ) Sanskar!  Leave that bottle.. give it to me..

Sanskar : Naa.. I won't. Tumhe pata hai.. tumse mohobbat karke maine meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti ki hai.. ye toh uske samne kuch bhi nahi.. Ye toh sirf whisky hai.. Mohabbat se kum risky hai.. cmon.. let's go to our bed.. ( holds her hand tightly )

Swara : Sanskar!  Leave me.. you r nt in ur senses..Ye kya paagalpan hai.. I said leave me..

Sanskar : ( laughs ) Paagal pan!! Hmm.. you knw wat swara.. Jab zindagi mein mohobbat ya nafrat saare intehaan paar kar de toh paagalpan bann jati hai.. ( chuckles ) Mohobbat toh main tumse karta nahi hoon.. par toot ke nafrat karne par tumne majboor kar diya.. Welcome to the sanskar's hell, Mrs. Maheshwari! ( pushes her on bed )

Scene 3 :

Ragini : ( angry ) Swara! What's this? Why are you bearing all this tortures? You are not the swara I knw.. My swara was brave & used to fight back..

Swara : No Ragini.. m old swara only.. bt m bearing this all fr him .. He wanna punish me.. He wanna break me.. He can punish me as much as he want.. bt he can't break me.. I have full faith on my love.. I'll get my old sanskar back.. (smiles with teary eyes )

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66 Comments
  1. nice..continue soon..tc..

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks dear..

  2. Rosey

    awesom

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks Rosey

  3. Shilpi99

    Nice awesome please update soon

  4. Ohho!
    That was superb! Well I know the storyπŸ˜…πŸ˜‚
    Write soon…love u😘

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks kiddo.. love u too..😘😘😘

  5. Simin

    Shalu where were u
    U know i was so scared when u said those words in IWL
    I am happy that u re fine
    Good to see u back

    1. Swarmayi

      Simin.. m very sry dear.. I made all of u worried n scared.. sry.. n m perfectly fine. Thank you 😊

  6. Superb…….. Sharab toh sanky ko shayar bana diya…………….

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks dear.. ya.. sanky shayar bann gaya

  7. Shrinjal

    Hey.. Continue soon

  8. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Wow, it’s awsm….loved it… Keep it up dear…..your dialogues are amazing….Waiting for nxt…
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

    1. Swarmayi

      Thank you so much fr your lovely cmnt dear..

  9. SRSL

    Loved it a lot. Upload soon.

    1. Swarmayi

      Thank u dear

  10. Nyc

      1. Shrinjal

        But dear when will u upload SwaSan happy ending?

      2. Swarmayi

        Very soon.. m ill dear..

      3. Shrinjal

        Ohh..get well soon fast n post it

  11. Nice continue yrr…. & post long part’s ☺☺☺

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks dear. N will post very long parts.. dnt wry

  12. Kakali

    huhhhh !!! *no comment…

    1. Simin

      Very good kakali keep it up
      she scared us na now we wont comment good

      1. Swarmayi

        Simin! You too.. m sry na guys.. bt situation was like.. thats y I blabbered anything.. sry! Pz plz plz plz plz..

    2. Swarmayi

      Kaku…. sholly na.. y r u angry? If u dont talk den hw will I get to knw.. 😳 Plz talk with me na..

      1. Simin

        Hmm fine but if u repeat it again i wont spare u got it
        Till then take care of yourself and be happy and watch swasan ka tashan
        love u…
        i dont know what kakali will do
        i think u should bribe her by giving chocolates

      2. Kakali

        M talking to d author “Swarmayii !! love it dear… it seens soo interesting..continue soon… thnk u.. ”
        now with my friend Shalu….”huhhhh m not angry with u,,take care,,”…

      3. Kakali

        huhhhh !!! Simin badii ayyi mujhe chocolate dekar kharidne walii.. kangal kar dukhi pure desh kooo…*hungry angry pout…

        waaiseee u can doo it.. i don’t mind… *blush.

      4. Swarmayi

        Ohh myy.. Kakali! U r blushing? 😜
        Kuch toh hua hai.. kuch hoo gaya haiiii.. lala la la la.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  13. Alia

    Looks interesting

  14. Deeksha gupta

    Awsm yr …

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks dear

  15. Shreeyu

    Swarmayi u really scared me I was so tensed that as of sudden wat happened to u … But now m relieved that u r fine…. Achha continue soon
    Aur mujhko Happy ending aur Ishq wala love aur yeh wala sab ke updates chahiye … Tc dr

    1. Swarmayi

      Sorry shreeyu! But I was passing through a bad phase of my life.. thats y.. aah.. leave it.. I’ll post my all ffs parts very soon..

      1. Shreeyu

        Its Oky Dr … Just take care of urself… these all things come afterwards the main priority is u n urself …. So stop worrying abt us we’ll b angry just for a short tym … U know na how can someone get angry after reading ur cute ff’s so stay calm … Bubyee

      2. Swarmayi

        Aww.. thats so sweet of you shreeyu.. Thank u sooo much fr understanding me.. bye.. love uh.. 😘

  16. Nice

  17. Soujanya

    Awesome

  18. Wow plz continue ❀️

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks dear

  19. Super awesome

    1. Swarmayi

      Thanks tani

  20. Superb

  21. Dharshini

    Nice,,,

  22. awesome…loved it…!!

  23. Kakali

    Haaa !!! bohot kuch huwa hai.. bukh laggi haii,,, parhai karte karte saar phata jaa raha hai.. mom is not even permitting to watch Tv..
    Papa is out of town.. koy meri baat nehi sun raha.. maii puri ki puriii chocolateless ho gayi hoon… *crying in footpath..

    1. Swarmayi

      Awww.. sho shad.. dont wry.. I’ll give u chocolates

  24. Deeksha

    Loved it dear… Continue soon

  25. Mahjabeen

    Woww awesome..continue soon

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