SWASAN TRUE LOVE OS BY HEMANSHI

HI GUYS I AM WRITING AN OS FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME…….PLEASE READ IT AND TELL ME HOW IT IS…….THIS FAREWELL IS A FAREWELL GIFT FOR MY ONE LOVELY FRIEND RABIA……RABIA I DON’T KNOW HOW I WILL SPEND THESE 4 MONTHS WITHOUT YOU……NOW I DON’T EVEN HAVE ANYONE TO TALK ABOUT OUR KHABRILAL ‘KAKALI’ HEHHEHEEHEH……JUST KIDDING
GUYS PLEASE PLEASE FORGIVE ME IF ITS NOT GOOD…I JUST KNOW READING OS’S BUT NOT WRITING…..I AM TRYING IT FIRST TIME……
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A couple was shown sleeping peacefully in each other’s arm……cuddling into each other…..having a blissful smile on their face…….the couple was none other than our swasan……….suddenly sunrays fall on them……..disturbing their sleep…….they both opened their eyes at one time……and smiled seeing each other…..
Sanskar: good morning jaan
Swara smiled and hugged him tight and said: good morning handsome
Sanskar nuzzled his nose In her neck……she could feel his hot breath on her neck….she blushed and suddenly saw sanskar giving wet kisses on her neck…….she moaned in pleasure
Swara: ahh sanskar
Sanskar: jaan I love to listen my name from ur mouth…….i love you so much……..you are my life……you are my everything…….
Swara: aww my baby I love you too……but now get up its time for you to go to office………
Sanskar: no shona….please na not today……I want to romance with you…….
Swara: sanskar yesterday also you took leave for resting and if today also you will take leave then what about business
Sanskar: jaan please na
Swara: no no no……get up
Sanskar: you are so stubborn……acha ok I will go but first give me my morning kiss
Swara: sanky the whole night you romanced with me still you aren’t satisfied
Sanskar: jaan…….i wont go to office if you don’t give me my morning kiss
Swara kissed him on his cheeks and left to washroom laughing
Sanskar: this is not fair jaan
Swara: everything is fair in love and war my cute hubby
Sanskar to himself: oh jaan you have decided to fool me and not give me my morning kiss na……then I am also sanskar maheshwari I will take my kiss anyhow before going to office

They both got ready……..and came down to have breakfast……they both used to live alone in a big mansion…………..
Swara was sitting on sanskar’s lap and was feeding him and sanskar too was feeding her……..
Sanskar: jaan I love to eat food with ur hands…..
Swara: n I love you
Sanskar: I also love you jaan
Sanskar: chalo now its getting late……I have to leave for office….
Swara got up from his lap and sanskar stood up and was wearing his blazer…….swara started feeling dizzy and fainted………..
Sanskar: swara swara get up……..jaan………jaan utho jaan……

He lifted her in his arms and took her to the bedroom and called doctor
Doctor checked her……..by now swara was conscious
Sanskar: doctor how’s my wife……I mean nothing serious na……..is everything alright
Doctor: no need to worry in fact there is a good news for you both and that is that your wife is pregnant…..
Sanskar: what really thank you so much doctor
Doctor: now I shud leave and yaa congratulations to you both……
Sanskar: thank you doctor
Doctor: mrs. Maheshwari take care of yourself…..as its your first time you will have a lot of stomach pain and vomittings……..and yaa no need to do these house chores…….mr. maheshwari take care of her…….she will have a lot of cravings at night…..fulfil all her wishes as your baby is now in her hand
Sanskar smiled and nodded……….doctor left
Sanskar hugged swara and kissed all over her face……
Sanskar: jaan thank you so much for this lovely gift……….i am so happy today I couldn’t tell you……

After 9 months swara delivered two twins, one girl and one boy
Girl’s name was:: ritika sanskar maheshwari
Boy’s name was:: rishit sanskar maheshwari

AFTER 7 YEARS…….
Ritika and rishit were 7 years old by now…….swasan were living with them happily……
One day sanskar and swara were busy hugging each other when both their children came running making them come into senses….
They both were embarrassed
Rishit and ritika shouted: HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MOM AND DAD……..
Rishit: dad how much you love my mom
Sanskar smiled and said: as much as I love you both……you trio are my life
They trio smiled……
Ritika: dad today is your anniversary and you promised us that you will tell us your love story today??? How it started?? How you convinced mom!!
Sanskar: arre arre my child these much questions………I will answer all ur questions……..
Sanskar continued: we were knowing each other from childhood we slowly started loving each other and confessed it….first your mom refused but the your father is also a genius……..i made her agree
Rishit: papa do we look like small kids to you that you are telling us simple answers of our question…..tell us in detail…….from starting till end
Sanskar smiled and giggled
He made both of his children to sit on his lap
Sanskar: ok my children so now listen

FLASHBACK
Swasan were childhood friends cum enemies…….in their college days they came to know that their family is deciding to get both of them married………both were shocked……both decided to meet at ccd to plan something
CCD
Swasan were sitting
Sanskar: listen we will have to do something……this marriage cant happen
Swara: you are saying as if I am interested to marry you
Sanskar: listen just now we don’t hve to fight and argue but pay attention to break this alliance……..
Swara: yess ok…….but what will we do….
Sanskar: do you have any boyfriend
Swara: what kind of a question is this??? N no I don’t have any boyfriend
Sanskar: yarr why don’t you have any boyfriend
Swara: why is it bothering you so much
Sanskar: as I thought that you can elope with him on the day of marriage
Swara: uuuuuuuu I just hate u mr. how do you thought like that uuuu go nd elope with ur girlfriend…….even If I would have any boyfriend I wont elope with him I will try to convince my parents
Sanskar: ohk ohk sorry…….sit down we will think something else………
They both kept on thinking and planned something but nothing worked……..and finally they both had to marry each other……..

3 months passed to their marriage……..now they both started enjoying each other’s company………sanskar slowly and gradually fell for swara and her innocence
One day sanskar was moving here and there in his office cabin
Sanskar to himself: yarr……how can I fell for this swara…….but yarr she is so innocent……..so cute…….so beautiful…..and perfect for me…..only she can handle me best……I am in love with her……I am in love with my swara with my shona……..I LOVE YOU SWARA……I LOVE YOU…….I CANT IMAGINE LIVING WITHOUT YOU……
Sanskar: but mr. sanskar maheshwari how will you convince her and what if she refuses……I will lose her trust……no no…..i cant take any risk…..but I will have to confess her my feelings…..i have decided I will confess my feelings to her tomorrow itself

Sanskar went to home after calling someone and straighly rushed to his room where he saw swara sitting and watching tv
Swara: arre sanskar u came…….ur dinner is served u can eat it…..
Sanskar: I will have my dinner later but first I have to talk to you something important
Swara: yes say
Sanskar: woh….woh….wohhh
Swara: what woh woh
Sanskar: I was thinking that if we go for a picnic tomorrow
Swara: haa why not…..it will be fun…..we whole family together…..a fun family picnic wowww
Sanskar [in mind]: yarr this budhhu girl……..cant even understand that I am thinking to take her alone for a picnic…..i don’t know how I fell in love with her
Sanskar: swara actually I thought to take u alone for a picnic
Swara: u mean only u nd me
Sanskar: yess……will u come??
Swara thought for a while and then said: okay……..
Sanskar: thanku soo much
Swara smiled
Sanskar gave her a packet
Swara: what is this
Sanskar: who I want you to wear this tomorrow but if you don’t like it then u can wear anything else also…..i wont mind……..
Swara: no no I will wear this only
Sanskar in excitement hugged swara and twirled her around…….which made swara shock……
Swara: sanskar what are you doing
Sanskar came in senses
Sanskar: oh I am sorry…..i wasn’t in my senses
Swara: its ok
Sanskar left without looking at her
Swara [monologue]: what happened to him……why is he behaving so weird….but I don’t know why but I felt so good when he hugged me…..i wanted to be in his arms forever…..i wish the time could stop……..no no swara…..what are you thinking…….but nowadays I am liking his company…..whenever he goes to office I miss him badly…..whenever he comes back my face lits up……am I in love with him……yes I am in love with him…….SWARA YOU ARE IN LOVE WITH YOUR SANSKAR…..I LOVE YOU SANSKAR…..I LOVE YOU…..and tomorrow in the picnic I will confess it to you…….

NEXT DAY
Swara got ready in the dress given by sanskar…..it was a pink long maxi dress in which she was looking like a princess……sanskar came and was mesmerized to see her….he was lost in her beauty…..he went and made her wear the mangalsutra and filled her hairline with a pinch of sindoor
They both had a sweet eyelock which was broken by a phone call……they came into senses
Sanskar: shall we go
Swara: yess come
They both left

Sanskar blindfolded swara and took her to a beautiful decorated garden with total privacy….he open her blindfold and she was shocked to see the arrangements……she began searching sanskar but couldn’t find him……
Swara: sanskar sanskar where are you….
She suddenly saw the lights in the garden going off she became scared suddenly a spotlight went somewhere grabbing swara’s attention se looked towards the direction and saw sanskar standing ………….
Sanskar was coming towards her…..
Sanskar: swara……today I want to tell you something………swara I don’t know when but slowly and gradually after our marriage I fell for you…..i don’t know whether you will accept me or not…….i don’t know whether you will be able to give me husband rights or not……but I know one thing that is I love you and I will give you all the happiness which you deserve…..I LOVE YOU SWARA I LOVE YOU……..I CANT IMAGINE LIVING WITHOUT YOU……..will you be my soulmate……will you accept me….will you be the mother of my children…….do I deserve you and your love??
Swara was overwhelmed…..she was just frozed there
Swara [in mind]: I love you sanskar……I love you more than anything…..but I want to know that till which limit you can go for your love……..and that is why I am taking this step…..i am sorry
Swara: I am sorry sanskar but I don’t love you…
Swara said this after turning around…..now her back was facing sanskar
Sanskar moved towards her and cupped her face…..
Sanskar: swara I know you are joking………I know you too love me…….i know we are made for each other……i know you are lieing
Swara turned around again and said: no I am not lieing I am saying truth I don’t love you………
Sanskar went to her and said: swara say this while looking in my eyes……
Swara was numb

Sanskar: I know you cant do this…..because you too love me…..but you aren’t accepting it….ok take time…….as much time as you want……
Sanskar placed his hands on swara’s head
Sansar: swara I swear I will make you fall for me if you don’t love me……I can do anything for you……I will accept any of your punishment for loving you but not living away from you…..i cant do that no no
Sanskar continued: swara you can take as much time as you want but you will have to accept my love and I am sure you will
Sanskar: swara I am going to office…..i will be back to home when I feel like…..driver is here only you can go to home with him…….i will come back soon….till then let me be alone…..dont call me
Sanskar left…..he was having tears……he was crying for the first time in his life he was crying……..
Swara [in mind]: oh no swara what have you done………your this joke has hurt sanskar a lot…..you will have to tell him the truth that you love him…..
Swara was going to sanskar but the scene shocked her…..a car hitted sanskar and he was lying unconscious in a pool of blood……
Swara shouted: sanskaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Swara rushed him to the hospital…..
She was standing outside the OT waiting for the doctor………her hand and her dress both were filled of blood………she was crying badly……she cursed herself for his condition…..

Finally after a long wait……doctor came out and swara rushed to him
Swara: doctor hows he…..he is ok na…
Doctor: mrs. Sanskar your husband is fine but he is unconscious now…….we are shifting him to normal ward you can meet him there
Swara: thank you doctor…….thank you so much
She went to sanskar’s ward…..
She saw him lying unconscious she went to him……..his hand and head were bandaged…….she sat down on the chair rested her head on his shoulder and cried her heart out…..
Swara: sanskar I am really sorry……I just wanted to see that what you can do for me………..and that is why I refused you…..but the truth is that I LOVE YOU…….I CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU EVEN FOR A SECOND……..I LOVE YOU SANSKAR…..please wake up sanskar wake up for your shona
She again rested her head on his chest
Sanskar: I l-o-v-e y-o-u t-o-o s-w-a-r-a
Swara lifted her head and saw him opening his eyes……
She hugged him tight
Swara: thank god you are ok sanskar…….you know how much scared I was…..i am sorry sanskar I am really sorry……I don’t deserve your love sanskar……I should go away from your life……
Sanskar: shut up swwara……how dare you say that…….dont do this mistake again…..dont separate me from myself…….dont do that please I wont be able to live without you…
Swara smiled and cried huggng him…….
They both heard clapping sounds……they parted and saw all their family members
Ap: so finally both of you confessed your love……
Sanskar: but how you all came to know about our love
Dp: beta we are your parents…….and we could see you love in your eyes…….
They smiled and blessed them
FLASHBACK ENDS

Sanskar: so this was our love story
Swara: chalo now enough of talking…..its time for lunch lets go down…..
They four went down and sat with everyone
Rishit to ap: dadi you know today dad told me his and moms love story…..
Ritika: dadi dad is so romantic with mom
All laughed and sanskar spilt out the juice in his mouth and swara blushed……
Rishit: wese dad how we came in this world…..that to at the same time
Ritika hit him on his head playfully and said: arrre budhhu dad must have kissed mom…..
All bursted out laughing and sanskar coughed
Sanskar [monologue]: yar yeh toh marwake chodenge……they are chota packet bada dhamaka……..
Laksh: you are right beta……see my princess is so smart….hahahahahahahahaahhaahahhaaahhaha
Ritika: chachu don’t laugh much…….your love story is more romantic then dad’s………so shut your mouth
This made sanskar laugh a lot……
They all had a family time and lived happily together……

………..THE END……….

GUYS SORRY FOR MAKING YOU BORE BUT THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I AM WRITING OS…….I ONLY WRITE FFS………..PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME HOW IT WAS……..

106 comments

  1. Shrinjal

    I didn’t liked it dii..really I DIDN’T likedddddddddddddddddd it.













    Becsuseeeeeeeee……I lovedddddddddddddddddd it..it is reallyyyyy realllyyyy amazinggggggggg…

    Muaaha!
    Love u

  2. SRSL

    |Registered Member

    Arrre who told you this is boring…you can’t decide it all by yourself…ohhoo it was superb and sugary sweet…srsly no one will think this is your first time…I can understand you di because even I was also damn scared the first time…but you are like an experienced writer….loved it and do write more on swasan and raglak…

  3. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    Ummm let me think hemanshiii 💭💭💭💭 ummmmm how u wrote it first ans me this??? Thn i will tell u 😆😆😆

    After all u r having a very bzy routinee andddddd this is awesomee u wrote it for mee on having my opinion seriouslyy yarr luv u loadssss 😍😍😍😍😍 and noww i want to achieve my challange specially for uuu alll u all the doing this much for mee thn i will also dont let u all down its my promiseeee 😆😆😆😙😙😙

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Aww thanks a lottt dearer
      Well I used to type it in my happy during my breaks and early in the morning😉😉😉
      And I thought I will complete it on saturday and so I told u I will upload on saturday but I completed that’s why I posted it today😉😉
      Nd u have to return with a big bang N I want to hear that u achieved ur goals from u as soon as u come😘😘😘😘

      We all will miss u a lott😘😘
      All my ffs…. are incomplete without ur comment😥😥😥

      Come soon……as I don’t even have someone to talk about khabrilal kaku😂😂😂😜😜

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Dear I will surely save all my ffs and os’s links for you😘😘😘😘
      N I am sure you will come soon with a bang and a good news that u achieved ur goals……..
      Nd I know u will achieve it surely……N u have to do it for us😘😘😘😘

  4. Alia

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god….this is sooooooo sweet n cute love story…….I loved it soooooooo much….keep writing is like this!!

  5. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!! we r really sisters…. haaaaa !!! seee u write an OS n i also did d same…. huhuhuuu !!!! this is called a sisterly telepathy… huahhh haaaa haaaaa !!!
    Love it very muchhhh !!!! waaaaa !!! see today’s generation… shameless…
    pata nehi kya hone wala hai agge jakar meraa…..
    it was beautiful n cute Diiii…
    LIVED it….
    Thnk u. ;-*
    love u… 😀

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Hahaha even I thought that when I saw ur os….we even posted at same time😂😂

      Today’s generation is really veryyy smart and good enough to understand everything……hahhahaha really even I don’t know what will happen later on of this generation😂😂😂

      Love u too dear😘😘😘

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Yooo !!! i go too my account.. then d option POST… i click there n we can find all our posts…
        Then tap at d name of d post … waa tap it for 3 4 seconds n we can see opinions like select copy new tab… but u have select PAGE INFO n u will get copy URL n Copy link…

        u COPY LINK n paste it where u r going to write d nect part… do d same with other one toooo… ;D

  6. Vidhi

    Seriously how can u say that it’s boring….. It’s amazing dear… Loved it… It’s really a sweet one… 😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍

  7. Navi

    |Registered Member

    1.hemanshi if ur considering me as friend do me a favour. Will u?? S means read further..
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    2.take u palms slap urself on both cheeks.
    3.do it nicely…
    4.sorry for slapping…
    5. This punishment since u told this os as boring..
    It was awesome os.. loved it… superb.. nowadays kids are so brilliant ritika told hr papa is so romantic amd due to kiss thy wr born.. hahahehe kids.

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Navi u literally scared me😂😂😂
      Hahhahaha thanks a lottttt dearrrrrr .
      I am very blessed to have you all
      Now I have a lot of confidence that I can post os’s also……😊😊

  8. Anu

    |Registered Member

    disgusting…ghatia..aisa bekar os koi likhta h bhala…….chii…agar aisa kisi ne kaha toh muh tod dungi!! haha…lovely fantastic os yaar…nd last part …just out of world..dad must have kissed mom hehe!!………waiting for your other works yaar…ya but i must say rabia di must be a lucky one…actually uh all r lucky to get each other……i dont know uh guys or rabia di…but i know uh must be gud person..come back soon…

  9. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Haha it was really sweet dii…. Kids were really funny ….
    Di I have a question for you that what r u doing now …. Mtlb smjhe kya I mean main pooch rhi thi that aap aaj kal kya kr rhe ho ? Please don’t mind han… U know na curious meeee

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Thanks a lot dear shreeyu……
      Well nowadays my life is like waking up in the morning preparing bf after that waking up my hubby and making tiffin for both of us then leaving for hospital and then after coming back I get my dinner ready by my mother in law and after that I give some time to my hubby and then sleeping time….Huhh….

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Di u r married ? A big shock for me …. I think now I have to slip in coma like kaku Di… Huh

        Achha hospital kyon? R u a doctor? C I don’t know anything cause I never talked with u .

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Hehehe kaku ki sangad ka thoda asar toh sabko hi hota hai……u r talking about slipping into coma and I have got rabbit of typing long comments from kaku😂😂😂

      Well yes I am a doctor😊😊
      N I am 2 months married😊😊😊

  10. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Realklyyyyyyyyy dear this is your first os reallllyyyyyyyyy dont lie plzzzz….

    I cant belive this your first os…It was awsome you are talking about liking but you dont know I am loving this os….

    Once again i am asking is this your first os…
    Just tell me truth plzzz

  11. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Wow, my doctor di, you write it so well… Loved it…😘😘😘😘..It’s not boring at all.keep writing like this…
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

  12. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Hemanshi …… uhhhhh !!!!!!!! I am going to give u a punishment …….

    first raise ur right hand ….
    Then keep it near ur right cheeck …
    And pull it …..

    How are u feeling ????

    sry for this stupid comment …
    ok so it was more than awesome … loved it to the core …plz write more … hemanshi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love u dear … stay blessed keep writing

    • Hemanshi

      |Author

      Sanjuuuu you don’t know how much I am missing u😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      I was thinking to start a new ff dor Rabia but then I wanted u to read do I remembered u said u can read os’s and I wrote it just remembering u😘😘😘😘😘

      I love u and I am missing u a lott😘😘
      Come back yarr

      • Sanjanaagrawal

        |Registered Member

        What to do yaar !!!!! I am really busy with studies !!!!!!! But plz update both ur ff on wattapad I really miss them … and congo u completed 100 comments on ur one shot

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