SWASAN-MY TRUE LIFE PARTNER-EPISODE 18

“The world breaks everyone, and afterward, some are strong at the broken places.”
—Ernest Hemingway

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Episode 18

Swasan went back to the hotel….. Actually they planned to spend two to three days in mumbai after they sign the deal…. Swara noticed that sanskar is silent through out the journey…… She thought to ask him once they reached the hotel…. So she too kept silent….. They reached the hotel…… Sanskar do no what to do…. He silently went front…. Swara went back…. When he try to close his room swara stopped him and entered in….

“Sanskar u were normal till i went inside to take the mobile….. But what happened within that 3 minutes that u turned into a moody one….. ”

“Swara first sit down…. We will talk….. ”

“K i sat down…. Now tell me…. ”

“Swara actually when u went inside to take the mobile Mr.Mukherjee’s valet fall down…. So i took that and gave it to him…. In that i saw a photo…. ”

“So what??? ”

“Uff swara just listen to me…. ”

“Ok ok i zip my mouth now tell me…. “Saying this she kept her finger in her lips…. Sanskar lightly smiled seeing her action…..

“Swara…. Actually i saw a lady photo in that…. U know whose photo is that??? “she nodded her head in no…..

“Swara that is Sharmistha aunty photo….. “Suddenly she stood from the place…..

“What r u saying sanskar???? ma photo???? how come her photo be in Mr.Mukherjee’s valet???? ”

“Even i do no swara…… Wait do u know aunty’s ex husband name???? ”

“No Sanskar….. How can i know his name???? ”

“Ya u r right….. What if we ask dida???? ”

“Its good idea…. But she will ask us na y we are asking????”

“Ya….. We will think….. ”

“Yes….. Whether he wants to take revenge from ma???”

“R u mad swara???? if he wants to take revenge he would have took it from her long back….. And y he wants to take revenge???? just answer me….. ”

“I do no sanskar…… I feel very bad….. ”

“Swara swara so that only i didn’t tell u….. I thought to inform u after getting enough details…. ”

“Sanskar pls we have to find soon….. If he has any intention to hurt ma na…. I won’t leave him…. ”

“Ha ha this is my sherni…. “Both didn’t realise that Sanskar said her as my sherni in tension….. At that time sanskar got a call from Nirbhay’s pa…. After talking to him sanskar came to swara…..

“Swara as we signed the deal Nirbhay wants to give us a party…. So he is inviting us to his home…. ”

“What??? ya this is nice chance…. We can ask him anyhow…. ”

“Swara r u mad???? how we will ask him???? ”

“Sanskar no need to ask him directly….. We can ask him to tell about his family???? ”

“Ya good idea swara….. Mm i accept that u have brain….. ”

“Sanskar shut ur mouth….. U idiot….. I always have brain unlike you….. ”

“Ha ha yes…. We don’t have brain…. Now get ready madam…. We have to go….. ”

“Ya ya i will go and get ready…. ”

“Yes get ready soon swara….. Don’t take 2 hours ok…. ”

“Shut ur mouth Sanskar…. I take only 30 minutes to get ready…. Ok…. U first get ready fast….. “Saying this she went from there….

After half-hour swara got ready and came and knocked sanskar’s door….. Sanskar opened the door and got mesmerized to see swara….. She is very beautiful in her blue and pink flower printed skirt which is till her knee….. Sanskar is in his t-shirt and jeans….. Swara snapped her finger before sanskar….. He came out from his thoughts…..

“What happened sanskar???? mesmerized in me?????”

“Am i looking like a mad??? that to mesmerized seeing u…. Ha ha super joke swara….. ”

“U idiot…. Just get lost…. I am going down…. After getting ready come…. Bye…. I hate you…. “Saying this she walked ahead….. Sanskar hit his forehead, “shit man ur words are ur enemy…. “Saying this he grabbed the brown jacket and went behind swara wearing it….

“Swara swara stop it….. I just joked yaar….. Pls don’t take it seriously….. ”

“Get lost sanskar…. “Sanskar hold her hand and stopped her….. “Swara pls i didn’t mean it…. Actually was just teasing u…. “Seeing sanskar’s worried face swara laughed….

“U black cat….. Teasing me haan???? not bad and madam i will also get a chance….. At that time will see you…. ”

“Haan haan we will see…. “Saying this both went down…. Already a cab is present there to pick them…. Both went and sat in the cab…. Then they reached Nirbhay’s house….

Nirbhay welcomed them inside…. Both swasan went inside Nirbhay mansion…. The mansion is very beautiful….. Its big than maheswari mansion…. Swara is just seeing inside and also waiting if anyone will come and receive them…. Nirbhay brought them to living room…. Both settled in the sofa….

At that time Sanskar started the convo…. “Mr.Mukherjee where is ur family???? I haven’t seen anyone here….. ”

“Oh SM…. “Interrupted by sanskar….

“Sir better call me sanskar….. Its weird to hear SM from u….. ”

“Mm ok sanskar….. U too call me uncle itself….. ”

“Mm sure…. ”

“Mm u asked about my family na….. I got divorced long before….. So now i am living alone….. ”

“Oh!!! But ur son???? ”

“He is not my own son…. He is my adopted son….. ”

“Really u r great uncle….didn’t u get married again?????”swara asked….

“No beta…. I love my wife alot…. So i didn’t remarry….. ”

“Uncle then y u divorced ur wife???? ”

“Bcoz she loved other man…. I just want her to be happy so i left her….. “Swara got emotional hearing it…..

“Ok ok…. Enough of my sad story….. Now come dinner is ready….. “Saying this he took them to dinning area….. There servants serve them dinner….. After finishing the dinner swasan bid bye to Nirbhay and went from there…. He felt some feeling seeing swara…..

Swasan came back to the hotel and went to swara’s room as its first…. Sanskar sat in the coach and swara sat in the bed….. Swara is in deep thoughts….. Seeing her in deep thoughts Sanskar called her….. But she didn’t listen…. To bring her back from her thoughts sanskar took a flower from the vase and throw it on her…. She came out of the thoughts…..

“Sanskar what happened????”

“Swara i am seeing u from long…. U r in deep thoughts…. Tell me what u r thinking…. ”

“Sanskar i do no whether my thinking is right or not….. But before that i have to talk to dida face to face….. ”

“Ok then shall i book the ticket now???? ”

“No Sanskar….. Ma will be there and if dida accepts my thinking even i have some work with Mr.Mukherjee….. ”

“Swara then what will we do???? ”

“Sanskar ok i will tell u…. Just say ur opinion…. ”

“Mm ok tell….. ”

“Sanskar see Mr.Mukherjee loves ma even now….. Y don’t we get ma and Mr.Mukherjee to get married???? “Sanskar is shocked….

“Swara what r u saying????? ”

“Ya sanskar….. See i know how much ma suffered without baba…. So that only i took soo much effort to unite ma and shekar Gadodia….. But he???? for his daughter he left us again…. After knowing the truth he will come again to us but after someday if again anyone point me or ma he won’t stand for us…. Enough Sanskar…. My ma suffered a lot….. She doesn’t have anyone to share her pain…. I want her to give the happiness again sanskar….. ”

“Swara i can understand you…. And u r right….. But just say me one thing will aunty accept it???? ”

“Sanskar about that i will take care….. I just want dida to accept this….. If she says ok then convincing ma is not a big job…. And Sanskar i need ur help…. Can u get the total info about Mr.Mukherjee???? bcoz i don’t want to make mistake again…. ”

“Sure swara….. I will get u know by tomorrow afternoon….. “Saying this he called someone and informed him to get full details about Mr.Mukherjee… Here swara called dida and asked her to come to skype…..

Then dida too came on skype…. Swasan were sitting together….. Dida thought sanskar proposed swara so that only they called….

“Dida i want to ask you onething….. ”

“Ya shoru ask me…. ”

“Dida what u feel about marrying again at the age of 45????”

“Shoru what r u planning???? tell me clearly….. “Then swara told everything….. Hearing this dida is shocked at first….. But after swara explained she too accepted as she too saw how shomi suffered all these days…. So she accepted……. After sometime she kept the call….

After that swara hold sanskar hands and dragged him up and twirled around(imagine the scene in which swara feed chocolate to sanskar and she fell down on him)…… And hugged him and in excitement she also pecked sanskar’s cheek….. Sanskar is shocked and kept his hand in his cheek…. Swara didn’t realise it all…. She just went and took her bag and took a chocolate and un wrapped it and fed a piece to sanskar…. He too ate it smilingly…..

“Swara i know u r soo excited that doesn’t mean u kiss me….”swara is shocked to hear that…..

“What r u saying sanskar???? i kissed u…. It must be happen in ur dreams….. ”

“Oh madam that much happy that u forget that u gave me a kiss here???? “He showed his cheek…. Swara got it but she pretended to not know that…..

“Sanskar if u want a kiss me ask me…. But don’t think i will give u ok….. I am a very good girl…. ”

“Ha ha good girl don’t say it outside all will laugh…. ”

“Sanskar…. ”

“Swara see u kissed me and i lost my dignity….. ”

“Oh god…. Pls y left me alive for hearing all this nonsense…. Pls call me….. ”

“See there is no tower in heaven….. So he can’t call u….. ”

“Urgggg sanskar i will kill u for this most bad joke….. ”

“Ha ha…. Ok don’t worry i forgived you….. ”

“U idiot…. Go from here i want to sleep…. “Saying this she pushed him….. After he went she closed the door and blushed…. “Swara wait for few days…. After some days u will propose him na at that time u can do anything….. Oh god my dirty mind will think more…. So to stop it i will sleep now…. “Saying this she went and changed her dress and slept…..

Here sanskar too is in same state…. He is now confirmed that she too loves him…. He is very happy…… He too went and change his dress and kissed her photo in his mobile and slept….

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Hows it???? hope u liked it…..

And about Mr.Mukherjee i will reveal one thing he is positive…. And guys i do no whats ur view about Sharmistha and Nirbhay marriage….. But i felt its not wrong….. Bcoz after a particular age both men and women need a life partner to share everything…. And here shekar is not worth of it…. He enjoyed some moments with janki….. But Sharmistha haven’t seen any happy moments with her life partner….. And she didn’t deserve shekar and also didn’t deserve to be alone….. So i took this decision of showing her marriage….. Hope u guys accept my point……😊

Bye bye…..😊😍

51 comments

  1. G.Chandu

    G.Chandu

    |Registered Member

    superb…!!loved it…!!! I loved the thought of nirbhay and sumi’s marriage…!! But I feel it as something odd…!! She married him earlier…and left him she can’t love him and loves shekar…!! She again married shekar due to swaragini at 45 years…!! and she left him because he don’t deserve her love…!! She was unable to forget shekar and love other guy at the age of 25 itself…how can she do it at 45??!!! Morever I personally din’t like this concept of marrying again and again…that too with in short span…and same persons…!! It would be much more better if she would change shekar’s mind set and take ragini’s responsibility as a mother and guide her correct path after she is exposed…!! It would be something like setting her married life…!! Well…!!it’s just my opiniun…!! I am ok with anything…!!!

    • SHAN

      SHAN

      |Author

      ya i can understand….. but seriously chandu even Sharmistha changes shekar mind set he can’t be a good husband to Sharmistha and a good father to swara….. haven’t u seen it in serial???? he asked forgiveness from sharmistha and swara….. but when ragini made swara sign the divorce paper y he didn’t scold ragini???? swara cried infront of him only…… he didn’t do anything…. he let her do everything….. but when laksh married kavya he separated both swasan just for ragini….. he always cares only ragini ragini ragini….. so i don’t want Sharmistha to go with shekar….. and coming to marrying again and again…. ya its weird….. sharmistha won’t accept Nirbhay as soon as swara tells her to marry….. but some situation will make her accept him….. and u told sharmistha can’t forget Shekar at 25…..ya true…. but at that time she divorced her first husband bcoz she was carrying swara and don’t want to cheat him….. if she didn’t do any mistake with shekar she would have been happy with nirbhay now….. and now shekar pointed her brought up and even pointed swara a characterless girl…… so no mother will accept such husband again….. in the serial they did blunder but in my ff i won’t unite Sharmistha and shekar….. shekar is a good father only to ragini….. he haven’t consider swara as his daughter even once….. hope u understood….. and one more thing she didnt leave shekar….. shekar only left sharmistha…..

      • G.Chandu

        G.Chandu

        |Registered Member

        Well!!! Yup…you are right!!! I didn’t think in this way…!! I didn’t get this thought that she might have left nirbhay because of swara in her womb…!! And yaah…You are right…shekar left her not sharmista…!! I wrote it in a flow…!! As I told it before… I am ok with her remarriage too…!! I didn’t consider whole serial…and I do know they have done many blunders and potrayed shekar as useless…!! I considered only story…which you have written until now…where shekar doesn’t know truth yet…and believing his mother’s and daughter’s words…!!! He may punish ragini and his maa…after truth exposal…or may still show partiality and support ragini only…!! It’s up to you how you will show him further…!!
        If you potray him further as the same serial type shekar who will be supporting ragini and show partiality after knowing truth…I would strongly support for remarriage…!! It’s not that..I am not supporting now…!! I am supporting now tooo…!! but not ‘strong’…!!

        Don’t take me wrong buddy…!! I just don’t like marriage again and again…!! That too swara making them marry…even after knowing that shekar is in big misunderstanding…!! In your story..until now shekar supported as a father only to ragini…!! And sharmista even supported as a mother only to swara…!! I hope you got my point positively…!! Just give a plot line to degrade shekar’s character like serial….and do sharmista’s remarriage….!! It’s upto you…!! ANd it’s just my opiniun…!! Since you are saying…sharmista will accept marriage due to some strong reason… may be I will also accept for that too…!!! It’s your story…and your wish…!! I would love to read anyway…because your plots and concepts are super interesting…!! Merry christmas dear…!!! 😀 😀

      • SHAN

        SHAN

        |Author

        No dr i didn’t take u wrong bcoz i can understand ur view…. Even when i thought about her marriage i was also confused….. But after thinking about shekar in serial i concluded that its right….. And dr i will show u a scene where Sharmistha will hate shekar completely….. Actually i don’t want to show Shekar soo much wrong but his doings forced me to take decision of remairrage….. If he just humilated swara alone swara wouldn’t have taken decision of Sharmistha marriage…. He insulted Sharmistha’s brought up….. And even sharmistha is not ready to unite with shekar…. So y she have to be alone??? so thar only i brought this remarriage concept….. And chandu i know u buddy….. And surely i won’t take ur comment negatively…. Actually i just told the consequence thats it….. And if my comment is rude i am sorry dr…. Actually u r my regular reader so i just want to make u understand buddy thats it….. And don’t worry u will accept their marriage decision soon…. Keep smiling

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