Swasan – I thought it was love but it was a mistake { episode 1 }

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Hey guys … I am back so soon.. I was having time so thought to give u one more update .
Thnx for suggestions
@ I will give past between present …. but past will be more than present …
@ lakshya opposite will be ragini .. if the situation will suit I will add her sry but I can’t promise …
@ and plz try cooperate with me if will give u short updates .
@ I will concentrate on each and every charcter of ff … so the story will go slow … so plz don’t panic….
@ thnx for ur comments in Proglogue …

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Link : Prologue

Recap – Proglogue ; A girl confronts a boy .

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β™‘Episode 1 β™‘
The boy was sitting on bed and was crying recalling his past . His face is revealed . He is none other than sanky {many or all of u have guessed right }
Sanky {monologue}- why ???? Why have u done this with me . . Why ???? When first time I falled in love u snatched it with me … why ????? I know I have done wrong with I should not …..
His chain of thought was disturbed by someone’s knock on the door . It was her mom sujata .
Sujata – chore , come food is ready … 😊😊
Sanky nods yes . Sujata was about to leave when she notices tear marks on sanky’s face and his eyes which had swelled bcoz of crying .
Sujata {with concern }- chore , are u crying ???? 😟😟
Sanskaar {hiding his tears and with a fake smile }- no mom , just work stress and nothing… u go na I will come down …. πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
Sujata {in a little ordering tone } – ok …. freshen up fast and come down … ur papa is waiting for u …. 😊😊
Sanskaar {with again a fake smile } – ok meri mata now go …. πŸ™πŸ™

Saying this sanky takes sujata out of the room and closes the door from inside . Here sujata is still thinking what had happened suddenly to his son . SHe goes from there with unsatisfaction.

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Here the girl reaches to his house and he rings the door bell . A lady in late 50’s comes opens the door .
Lady {with little concern }- bohot jaldi aagai tu shona{ u have came so early shona } πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
{ So the girl is one other then our shona urf swara … again most or many of u have guessed correct and the lady is swara ‘s ma shomi }
Swara {with blank expression as she is still thinking about sanskaar } – there was much work in office …😡😡
Shomi sensed something is fishy so she asked – I am ur mum I can easily sense that something is wrong so tell me clearly where u were till now bcoz u should have returned one hour before this … πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
Listening shomi’s queries about his life swara became furious and blurted out snanskaar’s anger on shomi .
Swara {with his full anger } – ma… I am not a small nursery kid …. I am big enough to take care of myself & who are u to question me … I am ur daughter not ur servant to answer ur each and every nonsense question … so never try to ask me this question again that where I were ??? I can …. 😠😠
She was interrupted by his father’s voice .
Shekhar {swara’s father} { with same angry tone as swara }- PRINCESS…. how dare u to speak like this with ur mom … she is also ur mom …. not ur servant ….😠😠
Swara {realized what she said to shomi and asked for forgiveness} – sorry papa ….
Shekhar {with a little calm tone but still angry } – ok … bit remember taht ur mom is not at all ur servant …. she does work of the whole house but never complained … she neither asked for holiday nor a break …. I know there are servants in house to work but still she had to work … but where in house where there is no servants .. then these women work day and night for their .. sometimes a woman had to work in home also and outside also to earn their livelihood … so now mind ur tounge … and go to ur room now .. 😑😑
Swara goes from there with a guilt in her face .
Swara goes inside her room and closes the door and cries .
Swara {monologue } – why god ??? Why have u done this with .me .. this is second time … I hate u SNANSKAAR MAHESHWARI … now enough … I can’t bear this pain … I want to share this pain with someone .. but with whom .. 😒😒
Suddenly swara sees a diary kept on her study table . She goes near her table and sat on the chair .
Swara {a idea popped out in her mind }- DIARY …
{Hope u guys understood the idea }

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So guys … this was the 1st episode hope u liked it … do share ur valuable comments …. and i know today chappy was boring but i want tell about mother’s importance in our life. So
… want a precap … ok ..ok… lelo …
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Precap – Swara started writing diarry {past } happy moments of papa mumma and princess ….😍😍

Ok tata ….

Next update : maybe on sunday if not then definitely on monday .

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17 Comments
  1. Tamanna

    Nice…

  2. Rabia

    Nice sanjana 😊

  3. So they are not married yet good start

  4. SNY

    Amazing sanju…
    Plz nxt one soon…

  5. Arunika

    Amazing Sanju….Loved it!!!

  6. Deeksha

    Nice sanju!!!!!! Continue soon….

  7. Mind blowing

  8. Soujanya

    Awesome

  9. Mica

    ahemm.. aheemm.. just continue soon Sanju orelse…. *wink

  10. Nice

  11. Kakali

    Superb chappy Sanjana… u totally said correct about our Mammas… thnk u for that…n n n update soon…

  12. AnuAnn

    Awesome dear

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