Swasan – A Surprise Love (Part 10) LAST CHAPTER


Hi All, Meeting you after a long time. Sorry for being so late but anyway i was meeting you often by another ffs…ok now lets get into today’s chapter.

Swasan – A Surprise Love (Episode 10)

Swasan and Temish discussed about the plan and they developed good bond within a short span. Teju is still in dilemma but Namish convinces her to do this act for

Swasan’s love. After sometime, they all left from there to their home respectively like Swara & Namish and Sanskar & Teju.

Shekar gets happy seeing Swamish enters inside the home with full smile. He thinks Swara accepts Namish and Mishti wonders”What happened to this girl?”. Swara hugs

Shekar and says, “Thank you so much papa for choosing Namish” and behind him she sees Mishti and shows thumbs up. Mishti too shows thumbs up to her and composes her


They welcome Namish and makes him have something there and finally he greets them and signs something to Swara and leaves. Shekar notices their sign language and gets

very happy. Mishti smirks seeing Shekar’s reaction.

Same way in Sanskar’s home, Sanskar & AP shares their thoughts through their eyes and he signs Teju about something. DP gets happy to see his son is accepting his


Sanskar goes to his room once Teju went, he dials to Swara and shares what happened in their house and she too tells him about Shekar’s reaction. Both are laughing at

their dad’s and chats for sometime. Mishti calls Swara for dinner and here Nandu calls Sanskar. Both bids bye and goes down.

DP tells Sanskar, “Sanskar, we have one business party tomorrow, he is one of my friend in my business circle and he invited us. So i want you to join with me and more

over Teju & her parents also will join in that party after all we all are from the Tejue business society and knows each other well.

Sanskar, “Why me dad?”

DP, “Sanskar, i am gonna introduce you and Teju in that party and i am sure there that Shekar family also will come. I want to see Shekar’s face when i introduce you

and Teju there in the party.”

Sanskar gulps hearing his statement and looks at AP for help, but she signs to be quiet.

@ Gadodia residency,

Swara gets shocked hearing Shekar’s statement against Maheswari’s family. Swara, “Dad..why u want to tease them voluntarily?”

Shekar, “I want to see that DP face when i introduce you and Namish in that business party, it will be worth watching to see his reaction you know”, he chuckles like a


Mishti and Swara is shocked seeing Shekar in revenge mood.

In the night Swasan shares their dad’s talk with each other and thinks to behave normally infront of their dads respectively.

Next day, both the families goes to the party with their children. DP and Shekar encounters each in the party and passing taunts on each. Mishti and AP pulls their

hubbies from each and consoles them. Swasan gets frustration seeing their dads and looks at the entrance for some one. No longer, their faces becomes bright seeing

NeTeju comes to the party with their families respectively.

Sanskar silently waves bye to Namish and Swara did the Tejue to Teju. Namish goes to Swara and Sanskar goes to Teju and joins their hands together.

DP and Shekar gets happy seeing their children with each of their partner and gives a cold look at each. AP and Mishti bangs their forehead seeing their idiotic acts.

DP and Shekar knows everyone in that party and talks to each one and introduces Sanky & Teju and Swara & Namish to everyone.

Their common friend Mr.Aditya Sharma who arranges this party wishes them all the best for their alliances and invites the couples for the dance.

The couples started dancing and Sanky & Teju and Swamish joins them too. Namish holds Swara and Sanskar holds Teju & moves accordingly.

Swara often looks at Sanskar and shows a pout face. Namish notices this, “What, you wanna dance with him?”

Swara nods like a baby and asks, “But how?”

Namish, “I have a plan. Just listen me now”

All are dancing continuously, Namish suddenly shouts saying, “Lets change the partner now” then he immediately starts circling Swara and others also follows the Tejue.

Sanskar & Teju understand their plan and did the same. Soon the ladies moves to different partner and Swara expecting her to land on Sanskar’s hand but unfortunately

she lands on some other guy who looks so happy to get her. She widens her eyes to see him in shock and looks at Sanskar stands behind him starring him angrily. Swara

pleads him through her eyes but Sanskar also got some other lady in his hand and dancing angrily. But to surprise, Temish lands into each other arms and shares a cute

eyelock. They find something difference in their closeness and they like it too. Swasan gets jealous seeing Temish and keeps crying face seeing their dancing partners.

Finally they are done with the dancing and Shekar takes Swara from there before she goes to Sanskar and DP also did the Tejue with Sanskar. Swasan looks each

helplessly while Temish laughs seeing their sad face. Mishti and AP scolds their husbands silently.

The marrige preparation starts and only both the dad sincerely doing the preparation. Swasan and NeTeju meets in the cafe and keeps pout face.

Swasan holds each other’s hands tightly and Swara leans on Sanskar’s shoulder. Temish laughs seeing them like this and starts teasing them.

Namish, “So How long you gonna stay like this? We can go ahead with the plan na?”

Sanskar, “Mmm yeah, but still some nervous is there with us. Unnecessarily we are troubling your families also in our problem”

Teju, “You don’t worry about that, we both already informed about the plan to our families. Initially they shouted but somehow we managed. And the ultimate is now they

are also part of our plan. This marriage will happen only between you both. So don’t worry and go as per the plan but be careful.”

Swara holds Teju’s hand saying, “Thank you so much Teju”

All the 4 spends sometime and leaves to their home respectively.

DP and Shekar fixes the marriage date and informs to NeTeju’s parents. They also agree for it just for the name sake. Marriage preparations going on in full swing.

The Sangeet, Mehendi and Haldi ceremony going on and everyone looks happy. Shekar finds some difference in Rad’s face and finds her little upset. After haldi, Swara

goes to get ready for marriage and locks her door. It’s been an hour since she went, Shekar gets panic and knocks her door. Mishti also gets worried (acting to be

worried) and knocks the door by shouting Swara’s name. Finally they started banging the door and finally breaks it. There Shekar gets shocked seeing the room empty and

finds a letter near the table.

Shekar reads the letter,

“Dear papa, First am asking sorry for giving you a false hope regarding my marriage. Yes Papa, i was acting to be happy all these days but the truth is i am not happy

with this marriage. I told you so many times but u were so stubborn and fixed my marriage with Namish but papa i still loves Sanskar only. I know i did a mistake

earlier of not listening your words but the punishment you have given me for that can’t be acceptable papa. I love Sanskar and only Sanskar. I cannot forget him in my

lifetime papa, if i do so, then i would be died at that time. Hope you have understand my point now.

Maa, i am really sorry for leaving you alone. I don’t have any other way other than this. Papa did not give me no option other than this. I will miss you maa, pls

don’t scold me for doing this. I can’t live without Sanskar. I am going far away from you all…finally I love you maa..Love you papa.

Maa it is for you—I am going to XYZ Place. You can find me there. By the time you reach i will not be able to see you for the last time too.

Good Bye !!!

—Swara .

Mishti starts scolding Shekar for pushing her daughter to this decision. Shekar also feels bad and starts crying seeing the letter and both starts to the place where

Swara mentioned in the letter.

They reached the place and gets shocked seeing DP and AP also there at the same place with a letter in their hand too. Shekar understands and cries seeing him. DP also

gets sad looking at him and both rushes to the place and gets numb seeing their Swasan lies in the floor lifeless. They both lies nearby by holding their hands


Shekar and DP is in ultimate shock and cries seeing their bodies, they hugs each other to console and says, “We did a mistake of seperating our kids, if we got to know

that they will take this decision then we would have forgotten our ego and make our children married to each.”

Temish also comes there at the same place with their families and looks at both the fathers crying vigourously. But Mishti and AP stands silently behind them…LOL

Namish, “So you are now ready to get them married to each right?”

DP & Shekar nods, “Yes, but how can it be possible now? My children are no more”

Teju, “Uncle, just answer, if they are alive then you are agree for their marriage right”

Both nods positively and NeTeju gets happy seeing them then together says, “Chalo, Ab yeh drama bandh karo, your fathers accepted for your marriage”

Shekar and DP did not understand anything and gets shocked seeing Sanskar & Swara gets up slowly and gives a sheepish smile by looking at their fathers.

Both are at hypertension and raised their hands to beat them but stops seeing Mishti and AP stands infront of Sanskar and Swara respectively.

Shekar to Mishti, “So you are aware of this drama?”

Mishti, “Yes”

DP to AP, “Y u hidden this from me?”

AP, “To teach a lesson to you. How long you both gonna fight with your ego..just care about their love and life. I am with my children in this decision.”

Mishti, “Yes me too..we are mothers and we also have equal rights as you to decide our children life. Me and AP are decided that Sanskar & Swara only will get married.

Even now also if you both did not accept it, then fine..you don’t worry. As a mother we both get them married to each and bless them”

DP and Shekar are shocked seeing their wives like a Tigress infront of them. Finally they too give up and accepted for the marriage. AP and Mishti gives hi-fi to each


Swasan gets married on the same day and Finally DP and Shekar forgets their ego, joins hands together. Swasan thanks Temish for supporting them everyday in each

situation and hugs them. Both gets blessings from the elders and wishes from Temish.


After a month leap, Swasan gets a call from Teju saying that she is running away from her marriage. Swasan is shocked and actually they are ready to go for the

marriage only.

Immediately Sanskar calls Namish and gets to know that he also ran away from the marriage.

Sanskar, “Why Namish?”

Namish, “It’s simple Sanskar. Me and Teju did not have time to understand and love each other deeply. Before we propose each other, our families decides our marriage

and asking us to love after our marriage which we don’t want. We told so many times but they are not listening, that’s y this shock treatment for them.”

Sanskar kept his mobile in speaker so that Swara also heard his talk and opens her mouth widely in shock. After that he disconnects the call saying, “Wil meet you so

soon Sanskar till then don’t worry about us”

Swasan looks at each other unbelivingly.


In the plane, a cute, modern and trendy look girl sits in the window seat and looks outside restlessly. Suddenly she feels someone’s presence near her and turns to see

who is it. She is stunned and mesmerised seeing a dimple, chweet boy beside her, actually she forgets to blink her eyes after seeing him.

The boy also sees her and lost in her beauty, soon he comes to senses and extends his hands to her saying, “Hello, I am Namish”

The girl also shakes her hand saying, “Hi, I Teju…Tejaswini”

NeTeju together, “Nice to meet you”

—————-THE END——————-

Finally i am done with the surprise love concept. It is a short ff only. I thank each and everyone of you who supports me in this SS..thanks a lot.

So now its ur turn to comment it…pls

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  1. Dharani


  2. Scooby

    Omg omg omg… is it true??? Satz is it u??? R u planning to kill me… it ws fantabulos satz.. awesome.. the ending ws tremendous.. like history repeats bt this tym its temish… marvellous ss.. loved it satz ♥♥♥♥♥

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much my dear navi ???? yes it’s me only… U read this from first na?

      1. Scooby

        Yup satz read it frm first.. i said it becoz of joy.. we will ask na to our frnd.. dei unmaiyavey needhan eludhuneyea?? Semma da… i said in dat way satz ;-*

  3. Maha6


  4. Soujanya


  5. Mica

    waaa.. last chapter….Temish so funny, DP & Shekar also, and swasan.. huh ! all of them so hillarious..
    wondering, how about the writer ? 😀
    love it soo much Sathuu.. ty

  6. Abirsha

    Wow super akka….. Very very nice…. Loved it…..

  7. Wonderful journey

  8. Jnana

    Hey!!!! You have posted the on mmz webpage also right….??? God!!!! I love your writing…… Okay…. I actually have a request…… See the request of you are sure you won’t bash me later on……

    WO actually…… I…… Write…… A ff….. On mmz page itself…… Once you just peek into it and tell me how it is…. Name: manmarziyaan a new turn…..

    You are not suppose to scold me now okay…????? ??
    Waiting for your next ff……

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