Swasan – A Surprise Love (Part 1)

Hi Friends, This is Sathya aka Satz again with a shot FF. Actually i have written this for Manmarziyan and i thought of giving it for our Swasan also..coz this story will be suitable for them too…i hope you all like it and encourage me in this too…

Swasan – A Surprise Love (Part 1)

Hi All,

This is a small FF on Swasan and hope you all will like it…please let me know your comments..both positive and negative are welcome.

The mandap hall is full of chaos and everyone is blaming each other. Bride family and Groom family blames each other. It becomes a severe argument which leads into a big fight and after sometime they all left the mandap sadly. The workers there starts gossiping and one of the person asks another about the reason of this fight.

Worker: Both Bride and Groom eloped from the marriage.

Another: What? Y they eloped when they are getting married.

Worker: Because they don’t want to get married to each other, they written the letter that they are not interested in this marriage and they eloped seperately.
Because of them their parents are fighting.

After that they gone to do their work.

A girl who is of mid 20 is sitting near the window seat in the plane and thinks, “Thank god..finally i have escaped from that marriage otherwise they would have tied me with that unknown person. How can i lead a life with the one whom i don’t evven know and i haven’t met him also. My parents are really dumb and now they are only suffering. I m not gonna return to them…when they are not ready to hear my concerns, then i am also not”.

Her thoughts get disturbed when she feels the some one in her adjacent seat. She turns to see but stuns seeing him. Her mindvoice, “OMG..how dashing he is. So handsome and what a manly look. Oh god that brown eyes.. i wanna steal it. It looks at me…staring at me ..oh god…oh god…i am shivering now… i couldn’t see him eye to eye..it is hypnotizing me…Oh he is smiling too and that too at me…What is happening here…morning was a very bad day and now i am getting all the happiness together..he is smiling at me still.. what should i do now? Smile Shona..idiot…Give him a pleasant smile so that he should think about you the same way you thought about him”. She smiles at him slightly.

He finds his place and sits at his seat and looks at his adjacent and finds a beautiful girl who lost in her self thoughts. He admires her and he likes her at first sight. She did not look at him and he wants her to see him, he starts adjusting his seat and intentionaly he is moving here and there to grab her attention. To his surprise, she looks at him and starring him continuously. His mindvoice, “Yes..yes…she sees me..wow..what a face. she looks so adorable , some charming is there in her face. Her eyes tries to say something…thoses dark black eyes it just attracts me. Her long wavy hairs and she is trying to tuckle it behind her ears..tht’s so cute. She is smiling at me seeing me smiling. She looks so beautiful while smiling, i want to capture this precious moment in my heart. I will make her friend”.

He extends his hands and says, “Hi i am Sanskar”.

She gets shocked for a min and thinks, “No no…is there only one Sanskar or what? he will not be the one”. Then she too gives him her hands and says, “Shon..Swara”

Sanskar also shocks for a sec and thinks, “No defintely she cannot be the one..”

Sanskar: so where are you going in US?

Swara: New york. ANd you?

Sanskar smiles broadly and says: New York

Swara is in full excitement and it clearly shows in her face.

@bride home

Sharmista cries seeing the picture and says: Shona..where are you. I will not force you for anything now. pls come back to me.

Shekhar is in angry mood and says: From now on no one should talk about her in this house.

He grabs the picture and tears it and puts it into dustbin.

@Groom home

Annapurna tries to calm down Durga Prasad her husband but he is going out of control. He calls his managers and tells them to remove his son name from all his properties and he asks his family lawyer to make a will saying there will not be any share for him in my property. AP looks at him and holding her head in disbelief.

Precap: Swasan lands in US and bids bye to each other.

Hope you all liked it. Let me know the comments and then i will think to continue this or not.


  1. swarna

    Wat if unknowingly both r in love wid eachother bt yet nt seen eachother and after knowing whole truth i mean love n mrg oh my god their face will b lyk :-O

    • Sathya


      Thank you so much dear ???

      Currently m writing 5 ffs including swasan.

      If u would like to read pls search for the Below titles

      1. Manmarziyan – Enemity to Love (season 1 is already completed and season 2 is currently writing)
      2. Manmarziyan – My Impossible love
      3. Manmarziyan – Just the two of us
      4. Manmarziyan – Unexpected Love

      Unexpected love only I have written it for swasan as a surprise love.

  2. Tamanna

    |Registered Member

    Nice… A good start… Plz continue it…sathya u again rocked it by this ff of yours….anyways how many ff you are writing

  3. pari

    vw…it ws superb yaar…intrstng plot…
    waitng to see swAasan reactn whn dey got to knw dey r d bride bd grooms who eloped..bt i wabt dem to knw after dey in love…plz continue dear

  4. Anika

    Oh ho jese shadi kar ne si dar rahe usee hi pair kar bathi. After knöwing truth it will b fun.

  5. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    dear this is fab.. I love your other ff also but not a regular commenter. . sorry for that.. I will comment in this ff regularly. . Please write more ff on swasan.. I like your way of writing

    • Sathya


      Thank you dear… Indeed I m a fan of ur ff… Well I m so happy to read ur comment… Sure I ll write more on swasan…. ???

  6. Aahna

    |Registered Member

    Awsm…both are going to marry each other BT nick of time both eloped.It will be great fun if they come to know they r going to marry each other….

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