SWASAN SS: TUM KISMAT SE MERI DUA BANE HO (PART 15)

HIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!GUYS…………THANK U ALL OF UR COMMENTS AND UR IDEAS AND I HAVE DECIDED TO USE ALL OF THEM BUT WITH FEW MODIFICATIONS AND SORRY FOR BEING LATE….. WAISE I HAVE A SURPRISE …….NO……NO…… SHOCK (MAY BE) FOR U GUYS…….. WELL LETS START THE NEXT PART……….

***********NEXT MORNING************
Sanskar’s sleep is disturbed by the sun rays and he wakes up by rubbing his eyes and finds his beautiful wife sleeping holding him……He slowly takes her hand and places it on a pillow and gives a peck on her forehead and goes to freshen up.While he was still inside Swara wakes up and on not finding Sanskar in the room she gets scared and starts crying by putting her head on her knees.She thinks that she was dreaming of Sanskar returning home and cries continuosly.
Here inside the washroom Sanskar hears Swara’s cry and rushes to her…..When he comes out he finds Swara with her head down on her knees and crying…..He goes near her and places his hand on her shoulder……….
Swara:(feeling his touch)Sanskar……..
Sans:(cups her face)Swara ……..What happened ??????Why are u crying ???????
Seeing him Swara gets happy and hugs him tightly.He also reciprocates the hug and rubs her back to calm her down….. He breaks the hug and makes her drink water and wipes her tears and both settle on the bed.
Swara:Sanskar…..Sanskar..(cups his face)Ur fine……na…..U know …..last night…..(again starts crying)…in…..the… news……….they…..they……..u……car……..
Sanskar:(taking her into his embrace) sssssshhhhhhh…….Swara……look I’m fine and yes there was a blast yesterday but that was not my car….I’m perfectly alright and nothing can happen to me till u r in my life…..
Sanskar:(thinking)Sorry Swara I can’t tell u that it was my car only ….I know u r already stressed and after knowing the thruth u will be more stressed…….Well today’s day will be the most special day of ur life……Today I’ll tell u how much I love u…….
Sans:(trying to lighten the mood)Waise Swara…….Kya main tumse kuch punchu?(Shall I ask u something?)
Swara:(still in his embrace as she is comfortable)hhhhhmmmmmm……..
Sans:Why were u crying ?Did my absence matter to u so much?And if yes why?
Swara: Of course it mattered…… because I…..I…….(she herself gets thinking)…. don’t know…
Sans:(smiles at her behaviour)Ok ..Let it be…..Today be ready by afternoon…….
Swara:(confused)But why??????
Sans:Offo!Pehle puri baat toh sun lo…(First let me complete)Today we are going out as some of clients have arranged a lunch for us.So be ready and if u don’t mind can u pls wear a saree?
Swara:(happy but then then her smile fades away)But Sanskar………(with a pout face)I …..
Sans:(he also remembers)U don’t know how to wear a saree……..
Swara:No…..problem u r there na to help me ……U will help me like u did last time……
Sans:(shocked)What did u say?
Swara:I said that u can……(then realised what she said)……I mean…….
Sans:(in a teasing tone)Really …….If u want…… I don’t any problem helping u……….
Swara:(feeling shy without realising)Why will I have a problem?
Sans:Ok then I’ll surely help u…….
Sanskar goes to the cupboard and chooses a pink saree with golden combination (the one which helly wore on karwachauth) and he starts draping the saree and Swara was feeling butterflies flying in her stomach whenever he touched her and was enjoying his touch(but still our idiot Swara didn’t realise that this feeling is only called love)….Sanskar helped her rather made her wear the saree and then he made her wear the accessories and then he himself got ready in a white T-shirt with a pink over coat and blue jeans.Seeing him Swara was lost in his eyes and was just looking at her handsome prince….. Sanskar brought her out of her dream world and then both left informing Swati.

On their way Swara was getting bored so she switches on the the radio.The love guru’s show (RJ Rishi)was on air……
Swara:(excited)Wow……Sanskar……..U know what he is my favourite RJ and his show is the most popular one specially among the youth……. and u know what his advices have made so many pairs…
Sans:Do u also follow him?
Swara:Well……I like listening to his advices but never had a chance to ask him something…..
Sans:Then would u like to try?
Swara:(excited)Really…….But what will I ask ??????
Sans:(dails a number)Come on……he is online….Ask whatever u want…….
Rishi:Lets see who is our next caller……Hello my dear caller……May I pls know ur name….
Swara:(nervous)Hello RJ Rishi……Myself Swara……..Swara Rajvanshi……..
Rishi:Oh hello Swara……Tell me what do u want to know?Have u fallen for someone?
Swara:No….actually….(looking towards Sanskar who was encouraging her to speak)I wanted to know how can we know that we have fallen for someone?
Rishi:Well Miss.Swara……
Swara:(cutting him)Its Mrs.Swara…….
Rishi:oooooooo……So ur married but don’t u think the question ……..
well no worries ……one can know if he/she is in love ……wait wait lets play a game…..
Swara:Game??????????
Rishi:Don’t worry……Its a simple game…..First tell me if ur husband is beside u…
Swara:(looking to Sanskar with lots of love)yes…..
Rishi:Ok now I’ll ask u few questions and u don’t need to answer me but just keep them to your self……. and trust me at the end of the game u’ll get ur answer………

So the questions are:
1.Are u happy being around him?
Swara:(whatever Swara will answer will be to herself)Very much…..
2.Does his existence affect u?I mean are u restless when he not around u?
Swara:Yes……
3.Does his touch makes u feel as if butterflies are flying in ur stomach?
Swara remembers the morning incident
4.Will u like to see him with some other girl?
Swara:The thought itself killed her…..
5.Now Mrs.Swara the last one…….Just close ur eyes and see if his face is the one which comes in front of u?
Swara closes her eyes and she sees Sanskar’s face and opens it with a jerk……
Rishi:Well Swara I think u got ur answer……
Swara:Thank u Rishi……..U r truly the love guru…….
Rishi:Well Swara……I should thank u as this was my 2nd century…….I mean ur jodi is the 200th jodi which I have made through my show and on this occassion I will play my favourite song for u and ur lucky husband……
All this while Sanskar was staring at her cute antics and expressions and smiling like an insane….
The song hamdard from Ek villian plays while Swasan are lost in each other…..

Suddenly Swara realises that they have been travelling for few hours and still not reached the destination……
Swara:Sanskar I guess we have been travelling for quite a long time and still not reached the place…….R we on the right path?
Sans:Don’t u trust me?
Swara:Of course I do……..
Sans:Then have patience……(saying this he stops the car and takes a cloth and blindfolds her)
Swara:Sanskar…….
Sans:U said u trust me……Then u will not ask any questions till I open ur eyes……..
Swara:Ok…..

PRECAP:SWASAN ROMANCE

WELL GUYS I HOPE THIS IS LONG AND U WILL LIKE IT ……… AND YEAH THE SURPRISE IS THAT IT IS THE SECOND LAST PART AND NEXT ONE WILL BE THE FINAL PART OF MY SS……AND ITS A HUMBLE REQUEST TO THE SILENT READERS TO PLS COMMENT ……….. WELL SEE U EITHER TMRW OR THE DAY AFTER………….

Credit to: praju

40 comments

  1. Ariba

    |Registered Member

    Thank u for posting long part n i loved this whole part???? post next part as soon as possible n that too long one

  2. Nikita

    Wow very nice but what Yarr u end it soo soon I will miss it u know I really like this soo much and yaa plz last part must be extra long ok

  3. Ridhima

    |Registered Member

    I jst loved ur ff too much …i opened tu after long tym nd read this first nd the last parts of ur ff….
    it was all amazing…..hats off to u…
    sty for being late…

  4. Hope

    Love guru! I think i need one… I am waiting 4 swasan confession..and do plz come up wid a new swasan ff

  5. Jenisha

    |Registered Member

    It was lovely but short one….. If you don’t mind can you show swara pregnancy and her mood swings…… It will be fun…

  6. Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    Last part…. Umm short sweet love story…. Swasan romance…. The word itself gives butterflies flying feeling….. ? ???

  7. Reethi

    U will end this ss so soon????.it’s ok but Plz u should come back with another one
    Will be waiting for last part

  8. Unknown Fan

    Awsum…really sesum..dat Love Guru wala scn was jst awsum.loved it..bt itna small part..plzz update soon n a Longer Part plzz

  9. Avan

    Nyc episode… I really liked.it……thanks for long one n I want the next part also long one…..BTW praju why are you ending so fast….???

  10. shona

    Praju ur story is so enchanting a cute love story btw two people who love each other immensely and i loved it thank u for writing this story and entertaing us nd im a silent reader

  11. nandini

    awsm dear… U could have cntinued it bt never mind had a very nyc tym readng ur ff… Waitng fr nxt…

  12. Manasa

    It’s awesome.waiting eagerly for swasan conversion post next episode as soon as possible

  13. sanya

    Omg love you but feeling sad the you r Ending so soon but plzzz Come with another swasan ff plzzzz

  14. Rain

    Mein toh silent reader thi par srsly I love ur ss and I couldn’t control myself so I commented:):) awesome. Keep it up:) loved it:)

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