Swasan SS “I love uuu” Part 1

Hello everyone!!! Till now I am a silent reader but now I also want to write something on our beloved couple swasan. Firstly let me introduce myself..I am neha 17 years old..and from delhi. It’s my very first attempt so please ignore the mistakes.
It begin after the swalak conversation in the farmhouse in the show but there is a twist in my ss. In my ss swara started realising her love for Sanskar but she didn’t disclose it to anyone as she wanted to tell Sanskar first. So let’s begin…
Sanskar hears the conversation of swalak and gets disheartened. He misunderstood swara that she is going back in laksh ‘s life…So to lighten the pain he left for bar…
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IN BAR
Sanskar is continuously drinking and remincsing his moments with swara. He is fully in druken state. A man came and sat besides him..due to the influence of alcohol he starts talking to the man…
Sanskar :(in drunken state)You know my wi…wife…doesn’t loves me(teary eyes)…bbbbut…I loves her a alot…
Man:(in drunken state ) kyu…whyyyyy…
Sanskar :because she loves my brother…and my bhai also loves him…but not more than me…
Man: how much youuu love herrr…
Sanskar :(smiles and stands on his chair and widens his arm) this much…
He was about to fall but the waiter comes and hold him…
Waiter :sir please come down otherwise you will fall..
Sanskar : no I won’t come down..I want to dieeee..
Waiter:no sir please niche aaie lag jaaegi aapko…
Sanskar :(shouts) nhiii…I want to dieeee…
He is about to jump…but stops…
Sanskar : hey you waiter..won’t you ask from me why I want to diee..
Waiter : why you want to die sir…
Sanskar :(in childish +crying tone) I won’t tell you…
Waiter: okk sir then let me go and you also please go..it’s closing time…
He is about to go but stop by Sanskar…
Sanskar:wait….first say please…
Waiter in tiring tone said please because it’s their daily work to convince drunken people…
Sanskar :ok ok listen I …(interrupted )
Man: he wants to die because his wife doesn’t loves him and moreover she loves his brother…
Sanskar :(starting crying in childish tone)..she doesn’t loves me …she is going back in lucky ‘s life…now I will be alone again..nobody loves me…
Man: majnu ki laila use child kr chlegi…hehehe lgta hai tu pyaar pane ke layak nhi hai..hihihi

Hearing this Sanskar became sad…
Sanskar : in sad tone I think you are right I am not capable to get love..I am useless…
By saying this he take a beer bottle and left the bar disheartened.
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He is walking on the road..due to the over drinking he is not in his senses…
Bg song plays…

Pyaar hai ya saza,
Aye mere dil bata
Toot-ta kyon nahi,
Dard ka silsila
(He remember his fake marriage with swara)
Iss pyaar mein hon,
Kaise kaise imtehaan
Ye pyaar likhe, kaisi kaisi daastaan
(He remembers his chocolate celebration)
Ya Rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na,
Dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Ho..
Ya Rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na,
Dilbar pe ho na koi asar
(He remembers the tent scenes with swara)
Kaisa hai safar, wafa ki manzil ka
Na hai koi hal, dilon ki mushkil ka
Dhadkan dhadkan, bikhri ranjishein
Saansein saansein, tooti bandishein

Kahin toh har lamha, honthon pe fariyad hai
Kisiki duniya, chahat mein barbaad hai
(At last he remembers sealant laughing in farmhouse )
Ya Rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na,
Dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Sanskar sat down on the road and shouts
WHY..WHY ME..BHAGWAN..WHY ARE YOU NOT HAPPY WITH MY HAPPINESS..KYA BIGADA MWINE APKA..DOBARA PYAAR HUA PR WOH BHI CHHIN LIA APNE…
He cries his heart out..and soon went to maheshwari mansion in fully drunken state…
EPISODE ENDS…
Friends if you like it then please comment..I don’t want big comment just a single word…It’s my first attempt..so for any mistake please pardon me…and ya criticism is always welcome wholeheartedly..
Your comments will decide the future of this ss…
Thank you
Love Neha

Credit to: Neha

30 comments

  1. yashasvi ( yashu )

    wowwwwwww nice attempt neha di….. wlcm….
    ummm can i call u di as i am of 12 ……
    sryyy if u didnt like……………

  2. Neha

    Thank you friends very much for the overwhelming comments…next part will be tomorrow morning…and once again thank you very much…

  3. Musku

    Amazing dear …
    Neha I m also from Delhi n me too 17
    Would love to b friend with u…??
    Continue soon …

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