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A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 5)

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Hello everyone..
I got really less comments last time.. Aren’t you all liking it??🙁🙁
Thanks to all those who are commenting on my ff.. Thanks for your support.. Love you all😘😘
Recap: SwaSan meet at café..
SwaSan were talking for some more time.. Swara was about to leave but Sanskar wasn’t feeling good..
Swara: Hmm.. Ok Sanskar.. I’m leaving now.. See you soon.. (her eyes get moist)
Sanskar: (held her hand) Swara.. Plzz don’t leave.. I’m feeling that something bad is going to happen..

Hearing this a small curve formed on her face..
She held his hand and said, “Sanskar.. Don’t worry!! Nothing will happen..”
Sanskar: Plzz sit for some more time.. Plzz.. (his eyes were teary by then)
Swara saw this and cupped his face..
Swara: (sits back on the table) see Sanskar.. I’m here only..
Sanskar just hugged her tightly.. Swara smiled and a lone tear escaped from her eyes..
They sat for some more time.. Swara was continuously looking at her phone.. She was worried..
After some time, Swara got a call from her mother..
“Haa maa”
“….”
“I’m with Sanskar, maa..”
“…..”
“Is it urgent??”
“…..”
“Ohk Maa.. I’m coming..”
Swara: Sanskar.. I’m going.. Maa is calling me..
Sanskar: Ohk.. Wait a min.. I will drop you..
Swara: No.. No… Sanskar.. don’t worry.. I will go by myself.. don’t worry..
Sanskar hugged her tightly.. They parted the hug then..
Swara was crossing the road..

Sanskar was standing at the café only to see her going..
It was a four lane road.. Two lanes and then a divider..
Swara crossed the first two lanes and stood at the divider..
The moment she stepped on the road, a black car bumped into her.. She shouted, “aah, Sanskar!!”
Sanskar who saw this from the café got shocked.. He ran towards her, but alas!! The vehicles were not giving him way.. He somehow crossed the road and went towards her, but she was gone.. It seems like they took her with them..
Sanskar sat on the divider and started crying.. He was cursing himself, “Swara, Swara!! Where are you?? Plzz return to me back.. It is all because of me!! I should have come with you even after you said no.. It is all because of me..
At that time, Laksh was passing from there in his car.. He saw his brother crying sitting at the divider.. He got teary eyed seeing his brother’s vulnerable condition and went towards him..
Laksh: What happened Sanskar??

Sanskar: (hiccupping due to crying) Swara… Swara.. Bhai.. Swara..
Laksh: Swara?? What happened to her??
Sanskar: Ac..tually.. She..she..me..met..with..an..ac..accident.. (Actually she met with an accident)
Laksh: What?? When?? And stop crying Sanskar!!
Sanskar: No.. It’s..all bcoz of me..
Laksh: What the hell are you saying Sanskar!! Nothing happened bcoz of you okay.. Tell me where she is!!
Sanskar: I don’t know.. She met with an accident.. And when I crossed the road, she was nowhere.. They took her to the hospital I guess.. (still crying)
Laksh cupping his face: Nothing will happen to her.. We will search her.. don’t cry..
Saying so, laksh took Sanskar with him in the car.. They searched for her in many hospitals, but weren’t able to find her..

Sanskar slept due to continuous crying.. Laksh was worried for Swara.. He thought to check at her house too.. He went at her house..
But her house was locked.. He got more worried for her.. But took Sanskar with him and headed to their house..
After one month:
Third person’s POV:-
One month, one month passed, but everything changed now.. Sanskar is no more that happy person.. He always smiles for his family but only a fake one.. He never cried too.. He juzz kept everything in his heart.. Laksh came to know that Swara DIED in that accident from Swara’s parents.. Swara’s elder brother Akash came back to his parents..
A new phase is going to start in their lives.. What will happen when Sanskar will come to know that Swara never died??

What will happen when Swara will meet Sanskar back after years??
What will happen when Sanskar will not understand Swara and her motive??
What will happen when…
Much more to know, right??
Character intro of Akash Somani:- He is Swara’s beloved BHAI who loves Swara more than his life and vice versa.. He is two years elder than Swara.. He completed his +2 when that accident happened..

Precap: LEAP☺
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Sorry for being this much late guys.. Hope you all liked this chappy..
And ARSHA DII, I dedicated this chappy to you, as it was your birthday na.. I’m sorry but I didn’t knew it.. I read it in Kaku dii’s ts and came to know about it.. Belated Happy Birthday dii..😘😘

47 Comments
    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dear..☺

  1. Awesome….eagerly waiting for next part

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks Vanisha dii..😘

  2. Tamil

    Awesome……feeling bad for Swasan…don’t Separate them….

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dii..😘
      Hiw can I seperate them??

  3. u killed swara ..waiting for next

    1. Manasvi

      I have submitted the nxt one dear..

  4. Scooby

    Good 😊😊

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks navi dii..😘

  5. Aarushi_99

    It was amazing!!😍
    You told through the questions that Swara is alive, so unite SwaSan soon ha..!
    Loved it! Update soon, take care!!😘😘

    1. Manasvi

      Thnk u so much Aarushi dii..

      1. Manasvi

        Thnks..

  6. Rabia

    manaaa i kneww somethingg musttt be going on in your tiny brain as u r the intelligent gf of ayyan baba na ;)… awesomeeeeeeeee and read all partss itss superb :* 🙂

    1. Manasvi

      Thnk u Rabu dii..😘😘
      See, Ayyan is so much proud of me😂😂

  7. Sus

    Awesome

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dii..

  8. Awesome
    continue soon

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dear..

  9. Mica

    ugghhh Manu dear… awesome part, love it

    1. Manasvi

      Thnk u dii..😘😘

  10. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. Manasvi

      Thnk u..😘

  11. nice dont seperate swasan jaldi milao un donoko

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dear..😘

  12. IME

    AWESOME!!
    LOVED IT!!!
    Manuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
    kevi che??
    majama ma??
    post nxt part soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
    love uuuuuuuuuuuuu
    take care
    byee

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks Ishu..
      Hello..
      Hun majja ma chhu..
      Tu majja ma chhe na??
      Love you toooo😘😘

  13. Amore

    well done ma Manu bachha… keep it upp..

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dii..😘😘😘😘

  14. Gayathri.visu

    Nice… But don’t separate Swasan.

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks gayu dii..😘

  15. Seebu_s

    u killed swara😭😭😭😭😭waiting for next part…continue soon

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dii..😘

  16. Arshaanya

    I knew swara was goin somewhere dats y wanted to meet sanskar for last tym..
    Bt y she did all dis??
    Accdnt hpnd or it was fake?
    Y her parents said she died?
    So many quez 😟😟😟
    Aaaawww thanku manasvi for dedicating dis chappy.. it means alot…
    Love u 😘😘😘

    1. Manasvi

      You will get the answers of all your quez soon dii.. Dont worry..
      And love you too dii😘

  17. loved it…hope swasan will unite soon

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dear..

  18. Vyshu10

    😭😭😭😭😭😭

    1. Manasvi

      Dont cry dii..😩

  19. loved it..hope swara is fyn

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks dii

  20. Fenil

    Osam chppy !!
    Impressed, must say u have great writing skills.
    Loved it .
    I’m big fan of Swasan without watching any single episode of Swaragini :D:D:D:D:D:P:P:P
    same is with Twinj.

    BTW Manshvi dii , u have to send me links of previous chppies so that i can connect myself with story if u want .

    Baki, kem cho ? Gujju badhe Zanda ghadhi ave ;);):D

    chalo bye Good Night.

    1. Manasvi

      Thnks Bhai!!
      Actually yes, SwaSan are so adorable and cute that anyone can fall in love with them!!😍😍
      And I m only 13 years old l, so you are elder than me, right??
      And I m sending them right now, dont worry..
      Hun toh majja ma chhu..
      Tame kem chho??

  21. Yashu24

    Hey…manu.. sorry sweetie for commenting late…
    Heyyyyy you killed shona😭😭😭😭
    I know that she is fine as how can you do this hai na????😇😇😇
    I am going to read next part
    Byee😘😘😘😘😘

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