swasan ss ‘Doorie…Sahi Jaaye Naa…’ (chapter 19)

HI GUYS …SORRY FOR LATE…READ THE NOTE AFTER THE STORY…
Sanskaar-(crying n innocently) are u that much angry on me that u decided to leave me…I know m ur culprit..but u know na m mad I nevr do anything right n u always scold me on my mistake na..then why r u not getting up n scolding me…plz don’t do this prank with me…I know that…that doc is also with u in this prank…I will see him later on…but before that plz get up…n talk to me..(now crying badly) plz get up na..plz get up..plz get up
Sanskaar sat there crying for hours..after 3 hrs laksh came there n saw sanskaar in vulnerable state..he felt very bad for him he was about to go to him but then he got the flashes how sanskaar mistrusted swara,how swara used to cry whole night, how swara got into the accident nd
Her present state…his expression suddenly changed into disgust…he moves from there n as soon as he reached near door n was about to open the door the door got opened from opposite side nd kaveri came inside with dull n guilty face…laksh saw her n got more angry..his eyes are wholly red now due to anger…
Kaveri looked at laksh and got scared for a moment but then she gather some courage nd fumbly spoke
Kaveri- L…L…Laksh m..m m sorry beta
Laksh- don’t u dare to call me beta… u have lost that rights….(seeing sanskaar with disgust look) m not like someone who will believe ur lie blindly
Sanskaar was all num…he could not understand anything…he was not even listening..he was just holding swara’s hand nd was seeing her with blank expression
Laksh- u know what…she(swara) is gem…nd u people don’t deserve the girl like her…nd specially this person(sanskaar)….m ashamed to call u bua…u r not worth of any relation…u don’t deserve any relation..
Kaveri-pls laksh don’t say like this..

A nurse came nd interrupted them
Nurse-sir pls complete all the formalities nd pay the patient’s bill
Kaveri- (wiping her tears) I will pay the bill as repentance…pls transfer ur bill to(interrupted bylaksh)
Laksh- to SWARANGAM Co.Ltd.
Kaveri was shocked as she or any other in the house don’t have the company which has this name..
Kaveri- laksh what r u saying…we don’t have this company on our name…infact this company belongs to late Mr. ARNAV BOSE ND HIS WIFE SWATI BOSE WHICH THEY NAMED ONTHIER DAUGHTERE ND SON SWARA AND SANGAM….ND NOW THIS COMPANY BELONGS TO HIS DAUHTER SWARA AFTER HIS DEATH..
Suddenly she remember what she said nd she looked at swara in shock…
Kaveri- S…W…A…R…A B B…O…S…E

Laksh- yes swara bose…she is none other than swara bose the one and only heir of SWARANGAM….nd kabir is his p.a cum best friend….u wanted to know her class nd status na….so listen she belongs to that class for which u r doing hardwork since years…nd she have a status of being kindhearted nd down to earth…which unfortunately u don’t have..nd u surely wanted to know na that how she was able to make that presentation of bhai which u had burned that day…..so listen u must know that swara bose had made a record of cracking maximum deals in year 2012 2013 2014 and 2015…continuosly 4 years…so this was just a mere presentation for her..(to nurse) u pls transfer this bill to swarangam.
Nurse- no no sir…what r u saying…why u want to take my job…swara mam is the one who has helped me out to operate my mother…and even she every month gives donation to our hospital…nd we r strictly prohibited to charge from any employ of swarangam…nd she is toh herself swara bose..
Sanskaar- (interrupting) SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI….SHE IS SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI…DID U GET THAT.
Nurse got afraid nd nodded her head nd went from there…sanskaar came to kaveri nd anrily said..
Sanskaar-(angry) what do u want now…why have u came here…just get lost…I don’t want to see ur face..(crying) I have always loved u more than ma and what u gave me in return…only betrayel….just for some mere money u have snatched my life ….u have snatched my swara from me…. I won’t forgive u…I won’t ……u destroyed my life…(saying this he sat on his knees and cried hardly)
Laksh could not see his brother like this he immediately hugged sanskaar and consoled him…sanskaar was continuosly crying….after sometime he got up and went to swara and again sat beside her holding her hand ….there was darkness in the room …only moonlight was giving some piece of light…wind was blowing smoothly with light rain showers….and sanskaar was sitting there holding swara’s hand tightly and was weeping continuosly..

Tere bin yaara
Berang bahara
Hai raat deewani
Naa neend gawara.
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe dil mein basaya hai
Khud toot ke dil mujhko
Iss mod pe laaya hai.
O tere bin yaara
Berang bahara
Hai raat begaani
Hai rashq sahara
O tere bin yaara
Berang bahara
Hai raat begaani
Na neend gawara
Maine chhode hain baaki saare raaste
Bas aaya hoon, tere waaste
Meri saanson pe tera naam hai,
Pehchaan ve (x2)
Maine kiye hazaaron minnatein
Mujhe mili na Rab ki rehmatein
Ik tu hi mera anjaam hai
Yeh maan ve
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe dil mein basaya hai
Khud toot ke dil mujhko
Iss mod pe laaya hai
O tere bin yaara
Berang bahaara
Hai raat begaani
Hai rashq sahara
O tere bin yaara
Berang bahara
Hai raat begaani
Na neend gawaara
After two days swara was discharged and was taken to MM with all the required equipments…and from then she was just lying on the bed lifeless..whole family including kabeer forgave sanskaar and kaveri was thrown out by sanskaar…sanskaar used to talk daily with swara in night for hours…he used to celebrate everything with her, share his daily routine with her..talk with her continuosly for hours and hours…he made the lifeless swara also live for everyone…though swara could not respond but she could listen his each and every word…
Flashback over

PRECAP- BACK TO PRESENT

HI GUYS I KNOW U ALL ARE VERY UPSET FROM ME…BUT I CAN NOT DO ANYTHING…AS I HAVE ALREADY TOLD U..MY CELL AND PC BOTH HAVE BROKE DOWN…M GIVING THIS CHAPTER ALSO FROM MY UNCLE’S CELL PHONE….PLS FORGIVE ME…EVEN I ALSO JUST VISITED TU AFTER A LONG TIME…SO SORRY FOR DELAY..AND SO SORRY FOR NOT REPLYING U GUYS…I M SO SORRY…PLZ FORGIVE ME…AND PLZ DO COMMENT…SO THAT I CAN SEE THAT HOW MUCH OF U REALLY READ MY STORY NOW ALSO…AND I CAN WRITE A BIG CHAPTER NEXT TIME…THANK U

31 comments

  1. Shreeyu

    Awesome chapter Dr…. I was waiting for this from a Long…. chalo at last u uploaded …. thnkew for posting and don’t feel sad update as time permit

  2. Meher

    |Registered Member

    Tu ye bta swara uthegi ki nahi??

    Cz dekh vo nahi uthi to tu pitegi 😂😂😂😂

    Coming to chappy..

    Chalo Kaveri Nikal gai but use dhakke maar k nikalna chahiye tha.. nevermind

    Sanskar bechara but he deserves this.. he was the one who doesn’t trust swara..

    Leta see Kya hota h..

    Btw happy Diwali in advance tera pata nhi Diwali pe mile na mile

  3. Tvisha

    SERENAAAAAAAA
    This chapter was really emotional😭😭 well when Kaveri got to know about swara I really wanted to see her expressions😜 Going back feeling bad for Sanskar but he kind of deserves it😘😍 but overall this was
    AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGG👑💕🎊🔥

  4. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Not at all feeling bad for sanskar coz he deserve dis..
    Bt y swara again shez suffrng from coma
    Ab utha do usko 🙏🙏😜 bt dun let her forgive sanskar
    Chappy was gud

  5. Reethi

    Awesome part. I really missed u aloooot.I thought u left writing. But finally u posted. I’m happy today.feeling sad for swasan.plz post next part asap.will be waiting

  6. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    It’s brilliant Di…Too Emotional Di….I love your story very much…Please write next chapter soon if possible..
    BTW I m feeling pity for Sanskar and I don’t think that the whole mistake was of Sanskar because he believed his bua…He didn’t do it intentionally…He didn’t knew that his bua is betraying her…This is what I think…The same is currently happening in Seriel..
    Bye Di and Love u loads..
    Keep Smiling Di

  7. Kaynatk01

    |Registered Member

    well serena u know am damn angry on u ek toh update late upar se chotu but loved it sanskaar was crying but he deserves but now plz unite them and come back soon warna i have to take out my gun

  8. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    It’s superrrr dear….Finally the chudali kaveri is out😡😡…Awww, abb tumhe patah chala ke tum galat thei….pity for you dude, tch tch tch…..Haww, swara is rich😱😱..Great, excellent…..

    No problem dear, take your time….We can understand….A teddy bear hug for you…HAPPY DIWALI IN ADVANCE…
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

  9. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Awesome chappy dear..loved it..nd hahaha bechari kaveri i thnk her mouth uld b open by listening swaras personality..greedy women..m happy dat nw c ia out
    Nd sanskar words were soo emotional but somewhr he deserves dis coz he mistrust her..
    Nd no need to b sry dear..u tk ur time..
    Well m soo mch hapy to rd da part..u knw i ws waitng fr dis part soo long
    Take cr☺☺

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