swasan ss ‘Doorie…Sahi Jaaye Naa…’ (chapter 15)


Hello everyone…serena here..ok so here goes the next part…n sorry but its too small.
Kaveri- helloooooo everyone (turning to dp) hello tablu..sorry sorry takluuuuuu… u all know what m very baaaaaddddd(saying this she started to cry) everyone was shocked n confuse…today I will tell u all something secrettttt (saying this she put her finger on her lips) but u have to promise me that u wont tell this to anyone….ok…sooooooooo…
Swalakbeer smiled winningly whereas kavya got scared n in mid of this sanskaar was confused..
Saying this kaveri fainted… sanskaar went near her her n took her head in his lap…
Sanskaar- bua…bua get up what happened to u bua…plz get up..
Laksh kabeer n swara got disappointed..
Suddenly kaveri woke up with jerk…sanskaar as well as others got surprised coz of this sudden action..
Kaveri-(still in drowsy state) how was my acting….i know it was sooooooooo goooooooooooddddddd….hehe u know what….i m used to do these actings…n u know who is my co star… (putting finger on her chin as thinking something) ummmmm
She started to search someone n then pointed her finger towards the person..
Kaveri-(pointing finger) there…thesrs she is
Everyone turned n got shocked to see kaveri pointing towards kavya..
Kaveri stood from her place n went towards kavya n put her hands on her shoulder from back for taking support as well as to show kavya to others..
Kaveri- u know…this is …ummm…she is…ummm..yup…I got her name..she is karela (bitterguard)…sorry sorry kavya…(while giggling n looking towards kavya’s face) don’t she looks like flat bitterguard..hehe

U know she is my partener in crime….(sees everyone’s confused face) ok..ok…I know u all must be confused…as what crime, what partener… so let me tell u all..she sat on ground
kaveri-( while sitting on ground)arey sit sit all of u sit…(everyone was gonna sit on chairs) no..no not onchair…sit here with me on ground..(everyone shocked) ..u all sit…u know u all will enjoy listening to the story…SAAS BANI DAYAN ..(saying this she laughed aloud)(pagal aurat)
when everyone setteled down she started

kaveri-(making happy face0 u know what I always loved my sanskaar, my bhaiya and my reputation… but what I hated the most is anu bhabhi coz she always knew my intensions n that is to occupy my bhai’s wealth( sanskaar shocked) I even came here to get kavya married to sanskaar so that I can have the whole wealth of maheshwari’s son…but when I came here I saw that sanskaar already got married two days before my arrival….i saw my planning go flop….(now making cry face) u all know what….this girl swara (pointing to swara) she is very genuine girl….she always thought about my son…my family…(now making furious face) but still I hate her…coz she is the reason that my dreams got shattered…then ithought that I will defame her infront of the family…I will create rift between swara n sanskaar..n I along with kavya succeeded in this…we separated swara n sanskaar…
saying this she started to laugh out loud n sanskaar who was shocked till saw towards swar with teary eyes n guilt same with swara but there was something else in her eyes apart from tears…n that is ANGER…

kavya was horrified …whereas lakbeer were smilling winningly..
saying this bua fainted..
sanskaar was still looking at swara with same emotion n taking steps towards swara n swara was looking at sanskaar with teary n furious eyes….her anger was justified..
as sanskaar was walking towards her the lights get off..n when it got on…sanskaar saw something which made him shocked beyond thinking..
Precap- sanskaar-(almost crying) doctor..doctor is..is sw..swara fine…she …she is allright na?
Doc- msorry mr. maheshwari but..

Hi guys sorry for stopping at main time….but no problem keep thinking what will happen now..n wait till tomorrow ..

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  1. ?????????? precap….
    Shoking and rocking part

    1. Serena

      Thanks madhu

    1. Serena

      Thank u anu?

  2. Superb Serena… chappy was too good… Kaveri’s act was hilarious… enjoyed it dear… i have become a huge fan of ur os,,ss n now ur FF… BROKRN TRUST,,, is d OS i love d most… n ur mind blowing SS “”I LOVE U ENOUGH TO LET U GO””… i guess i have read both almost 5-6th time.. though i cant resist myself from reading it again n again…God bless u dear…

    1. Serena

      Thank u kakali…glad that u liked my work..??

  3. Awesome….. Continue soon…….

    1. Serena

      Thank u purvi??

  4. Jaldi post varna nxt episode nhi to tumhara kya hoga pata nhi
    Jaldi post karo di plllllzzzzzz
    Aap post nhi to mai apko nhi chodungi
    seriously don’t take it lightly
    Awesome ep

    1. Serena

      Thank u doll n already posted??

  5. Nice next part soon

    1. Serena

      Thanks seema??

  6. Tvisha

    Awesome One this was mindblowing…
    Loved it very much..
    Kaveri bua lol she told everything and called DP taklu haha
    Apart from it I feel bad for swara and her anger is totally justtified for sanskar

    1. Serena

      Thank u tvisha …n have already posted…
      Can I call u doll as I abbreviate everyone younger to me as doll

      1. Tvisha

        Sure as you wish I have no problem

  7. Kaynatk01

    oh my god ?? i am really horrified seeing precap is swara in danger or something else next part update asap

    1. Serena

      Thank u Di..n next part already posted..??

  8. I miss you yaar!! Come soon!! Please wrote the next part longer!!

    1. Serena

      Thank u sooo much dear???

  9. Awesome….plz revel suspense fast

    1. Serena

      Thanks swasan??

  10. Shreeyu

    Please update it positively tomorrow ….. Awesome chappy loved it

    1. Serena

      Thanks shreeyu ??

  11. Yaar don’t separate them

    1. Serena

      Let’s see…may the writer grant ur wish of not separating them??

  12. AnuAnn

    Awesome but short dear

    1. Serena

      Thanks anuann n next part will be big than this..??

  13. Arshaanya

    Finally d truth is out…yippie bt plz dun let swara forgive sanky easily plzzz..
    Luvd d chappy

    1. Serena

      Thanks arshaanya??

  14. Meher

    Dekh sàaf sàaf baat h swara ko Kuch hua to tu yaha b pitegi.. and next chapter lmba hona chahiye..

    Tu Kya ye ek ek paragraph k chapter de Rahi hai..

    1. Serena

      Aap mujhe maaroge??
      Dost dost na raha???
      Koi nhi maarlo…
      Virtually kitna maarloge???

  15. Soujanya

    Awesome . …..update soon

    1. Serena

      Thanks soujanya

  16. Deeksha

    Nice dear… Update soon….

    1. Serena

      Thanks deeksha?

  17. Awesome dear..
    Update the nxt part soon. Eagerly waiting.

    1. Serena

      Thanks pramudi?

  18. hey nothing gone to happened swara and her child.all ff show this type of abortion to swara so in your ff atleast don’t show abourtion scene plz plz

    1. Serena

      Well even I don’t know what’s gonna happen next??

  19. O god everyone is living it in suspense yar… O god plz update soon dear ????

    1. Serena

      Thank u n have already updated

    1. Serena

      Thank u ?

  20. Abirsha

    Awesome but pls post next soon with a long part

    1. Serena

      Thank u n I have already posted?

  21. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Oye, itni chotu chappy??.Anyway,chappy is awesome.But precap is shocking????. Kuch galat mat kar dio.Otherwise, teri di silent se violent ho jayegi???. Waiting for nxt.
    Take care
    Keep smiling that to teeth nikal ke???

    1. Serena

      Oh god silent se violent??
      Rowdy rathorni bana rahe ho kyakya???
      Thank u Di n will pakka smile that too daat nikal ke??

  22. Samaira

    Kahaniya ghuma ghumake sar paka diya yaar

    1. Serena

      Thank u for ghumadar compliment??

  23. ??????no plz .u stopped at suspense plz post next part asap.otherwise I’ll die in excitement .this part is awesome. Finally truth is out

    1. Serena

      Thanks reethi??

  24. Scary precap

  25. Sriya

    Hayeee serena di yeh kya kar rahe Ho aap ek punch milega agar swara ko kuch hua toh love u loads and this chappy too kavya ‘ s reaction rofl tu ko phada da la pane take care bye sisso Cum frnd ???????????

    1. Serena

      Toh chappy kaun likhega…mujhe treat karne wala doctor????
      Arey baap re…phaad dala….chal fatafat sil ke aate h…agla chapter bhi yahi post krna h….nhi silenge toh next chappy kahi gir jaayega???

      1. Sriya

        arre nahi nahi serena sissy woahhh agar aap kuch karenge swara ko tabhi hi aur agar aap karenge toh 1000 punch aur free milenge rofl haha haha nahi girege mai huna usse superwoman ki tarah akar bacha lungi aur kisi ki itni himaat ki woh serena di ki chappy go gira de main uska katal kar dungi love u loads muahhh…!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  26. Awesome chappy???but precap is horrifying??hope nothing happened to swara….n pls update next chappy as soon as possible…love ur writting so much???

    1. Serena

      Thanks seebu??

  27. Vyshu10

    awesome….finally d truth is out. upload soon

    1. Serena

      Thank u vyashu??

  28. Mica

    it’s short Serena.. but the truth revealed.. yippiee!!!
    uuhh someone stabbed Swaraa ?..
    luv it Ser! ty

    1. Serena

      Sorry for short one..next will be dhamakedar..don’t worry party is without knife??

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