swasan ss ‘DOORIE….Sahi Jaaye Na…'(chapter 4)

Hello everyone…sorry for being late….n the reason for being late is written below after chapter..

Sanskaar was sitting beside swara caressing her hair when he suddenly observed that swara is shivering badly..
His fear came true..swara was having high fever…he got panicked..he quickly picked up the phone n dialled doctors number ….
After half n hour doctor came n checked swara..
Sanskaar-(highly worried) Doctor is she fine..
Dr.- Mr maheshwari..swara is like my daughter she helped me a lot…its not easy for me to see her like this….Mr maheshwari…u know naa whenever she is sooo much tensed or sad what she do! N then what’s the result of it.! Like always today also she got high fever…n it looks like that today she was more stressed about something..
Sanskaar was having tears in his eyes n was only looking towards swara who was laying unconscious on bed..
Dr. While getting up from his place n placing his hand on sanskaar’s shoulder..- see sanskaar I know u love her very much…I have seen that love in ur eyes..bit we both know how sensitive she is..though she shows that she is very strong…but we both very well know that how broken she is from inside..so plz take care of her..(looking towards swara) m just worried that fever shouldn’t reach to her brain…I hv prescribed some medicines , give her that n try to lessen her fever..
Sanskaar- thanks uncle..thank usoo much..
Dr.- no need to thanks beta..(smiling n looking towards swara) I already told u she is like my daughter actually more than a daughter…..take care of her..ok
Sanskaar smiled tearfully n nodded his head..
After dr. went from there sanskaar sat beside her holding her hand then he went to kitchen n bought a bowl of cold water n cloth n started to dip the cloth n put on her forehead in order to lessen the fever….
After lots of attempt swara’s fever is now lessening…after sometime swara gained consiousness n she saw sanskaar sitting beside her holding her hand n then changing the cloth on her forehead…she was overwhelmed by her husbands love..
Swara-(slowly due to weakness) sans…sanskaar..
Sanskaar was happy actually so happy that cannot be described by hearing swara’s voice after16 hrs..he just hugged her instantly…he was having tears in his eyes..
Sanskaar-(overwhelmed) sw..swara u..u OK naa…how could u be so childish…u made me scared like hell..(hugged her) don’t u dare to do anything like this..(now crying like a child) don’t u dare..
Swara-(smiled tearfully) I promise I won’t do anything like this again…now come on wipe ur tears or else I will drown (laughs lightly) sanskaar also laugh seeing swara laughing..
Sanskaar- (wiping his tears) OK now enough of ur jokes…come on have ur medicine n go to sleep..
Swara- (making faces) no these medicines r very bitter…(sanskaar look at her with fake anger) but I will take it if u will give me a biiiiiiiig chocolate…(sanskaar smiled seeing her antics)
Sanskaar-(smiling) OK I will give u ur biiiiiig chocolate…but before that take this medicines(passing her meds)
Swara like an obedient child took the meds
Sanskaar- now sleep like a good girl..
Swara-(nodding her head vigorously) no
Sanskaar-(surprised) why..
Swara-(cutely) first sing a song for me…that too ur favourite one..
Sanskaar-(smiling) OK but first u have too lay on bed n close ur eyes…okay!
Swara nodded in positive..
Swara lay down on bed n sanskaar took his guitar n sat o the near by chair…n started to sing
KUCH ISS TARAH by Atif Aslam(sorry meher Di for taking ur song)

Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aanso tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aasoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de


Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de…..
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aasoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de
Tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hai
Haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai
Jo bhi ghum hain yeh tere unhein tu mera pataa de


Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aasoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de
Mujhko toh tere chehre pe yeh gum nahin janchta
Jaayaz nahin lagta mujhe gum se tera rishta
Sun meri guzarish ise chehre se hataa de
Sun meri guzarish ise chehre se hataa de
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de…..

Sanskaar opened his eyes n saw that swara is sleeping peacefully ….wide an angelic smile on her face….sanskaar was very happy seeing swara like this..he sat beside her on the bed n kissed her forehead n then slept beside her…
Next morning..
Swara was fully recovered now by the care of sanskaar…swasan were getting ready in their room…swara was sitting in front of the mirror..sanskaar saw her n went towards him n from back hugs her…
Sanskaar-(huskily) u know u r looking so beautiful today..
Swara blushes..
Sanskaar-dont blush Mrs maheshwari..well today I have a small gift for u..
Swara in excitement turn so forcefully that she forgot that sanskaar is standing at her back n as a result she collide with sanskaar n due to force they both fell on bed..a short eyelock took place between them…but soon sanskaar came into his senses n saw that swara is still staring at him..
Sasakaar-(naughtily) Mrs maheshwari why r u looking at me like this…m ur husband only not of our neighbour…sooo(teasingly) if u want u can surely take my advantage..(winks at her)..
Swara came to her senses n blushed but soon composes herself n with fake angry face glared at sanskaar..
Swara-(fake anger) sanskaarrrr.
Sanskaar-(light laugh) OK sorry sorry… But right now I have a cute gift for u..
Swara-(exited) really…tell me na..
Sanskaar-( for that u have to first get up from me..(smiles naughtily) but if u want( wrapping his hand on her waist) m OK with this also..
Swara beat him playfully on his chest…
Swara- shameless..
Swara got up from him n then he went outside n after sometime came back..
Swara-(more exited) now tell Mr what’s it..
Sanskaar- ya ya I will tell u but first u sit down
Swara obeyed him..then he took a basket which he bought with him n then he opened the box n then bingo..
A rabbit jumped from basket n landed on swara’s lap..
Swara first got panicked but later when she saw the rabbit she became over happy n she yelled..
Swara- jaaannuuuuuu
Sanskaar’s was first happy that swara is so happy that she called him janu…but swara’s next action was like water on the fire of sanskaar’s happiness…
She kissed rabbit tightly on his nose n then started to play with him..???
Sanskaar was sitting there opening his mouth in shock
Sanskaar-(still in shock) swara what was that..
Swara-arey sanskaar…remember I told u that before marriage I was having a rabbit as my pet..
Sanskaar- yeah….that’s why I brought a new rabbit for u coz ur old pet died na..
Swara- arey no no he didn’t died….actually before marriage I used to take care of him but when our marriage was going to happen I thought that now who will take care of him so I give him to the owner of pet shop…
But see may be god wanted us to meet once again..
Sanskaar-(confused) but how do u know that he is ur same “JANU”
Swara- woh actually na he has a birth mark on his neck n moreover didn’t u saw how he jumped on me..
She again started to play with rabbit oops sorry JANU
Sanskaar was mesmerised seeing her smiling n laughing like this..
Sanskaar leaned to swara n swara noticed this n understanding sanskaar’s in tensions she closed her eyes n sanskaar also getting positive response closed his eyes…but swara didn’t found any response n suddenly she heard a suppress scream n when she opened her eyes she found that sanskaar is sitting in front of her but she can’t see her face coz..
JAANU was hugging his face n if u look from far it looks Like that jaanu is kissing sanskaar n sanskaar was continuously protesting to be free from his group…
Swara burst out into laughter seeing the scenario…
But when she saw sanskaar she immediately pulled janu
N as soon as sanskaar n janu departed sanskaar was looking at Janu in horror n panting heavily…
Swara-(controlling her laugh n cutely) sorry sanskaar actually I forgot to told u…Janu is very possessive about me…he don’t like when someone comes near me..
Sanskaar was shocked n he was cursing the time when he bought jaanu..
He was continuously looking at jaanu then to swara…then jaanu then swara…
At last he sighed heavily n swara giggled on his antics…
When suddenly they both listened AP’s voice calling them..
They both went downstairs…swara while giggling n sanskaar while giving jaanu death glare n jaanu while licking swara n showing his teeth to sanskaar
*jaanu is little bit grown up rabbit that’s why he is having teeth that too big wala*
Swasan reached downstairs giggling n romancing secretly …..sanskaar from the fear of jaanu n swara from the fear of lady thangabali..?
As soon as they reached their kaveri got irked by seeing them together happy…
She told them to sit n showed them a girl…
Kaveri- sanskaar sit naa…she who has came…
(Pointing to girl) (very happily)she is my friend’s daughter KAVYA..she came here for some business purpose n believe me she is very good girl with(looking curtly towards swara without anyone being noticed except swara) good family n status..
Sanskaar said hi to her…n she also said hi looking at sanskaar in different way which made both swasan uncomfortable
Swara found something suspicious in kaveri’s tone when she introduced kavya to sanskaar..n kavya’s behaviour towards sanskaar..

One more chapter over…guys m in very mood today…coz of my Lady gabbar…I mean my princi…
Coz she has ordered to reopen the school on two days before…we were about to go school on 24 but now we have to join from 21 i.e. today….I got this news yesterday only…that’s why I was not able to update yesterday…coz I have to do many preparation…
After I got 3 months holiday…n in this 3 months my system got jammed so I was greasing it…??
But there is really very less response n comments r also decreasing day by day…. If u guys r not liking it then plz do tell me…coz after that I won’t write…..coz it really feels bad when we write for 3-4 hours n then we get so less number of comments….sorry if m rude…but plz comment n do tell ur opinions…
Bye for now n one more thing if u r not liking it then I will end this ss in next chapter..

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  1. awesome … update next part soon…

    1. Serena

      Thank u anu..

  2. Hey dear. As usual awesome.. Don’t ever think to end it.. It is one of my fav

    1. Serena

      Thank u anu Ann..

  3. MOU

    No no don’t end this…..the chapter is good

    1. Serena

      Thanks mou..n m sorry actually I was feeling low that’s why I said this..m sorry

  4. Soujanya


    1. Serena

      Thanks soujanaya..

  5. No dear pls dnt stop writing. I really like your ff. Dnt be sad for less comments but surely care for those who really wait for your ff so long so pls continue and dnt stop your ff in middle waiting for your ff

    1. Serena

      Thank u n will surely update the chapters n won’t leave it in middle..

  6. nyc..good going..

  7. Awesome. Jannu is super ????. Will be waiting for next part.post asap

    1. Serena

      Thank u reethi.

  8. Purvi

    Awesome…… Continue soon…..

    1. Serena

      Thanks purvi

  9. Deeksha

    nice dear………………….

    1. Serena

      Thanks deeksha

  10. Meher

    I love you…

    U know I HD two rabbits one male n one female.. N the male one was very possessive about me… Actually he gets jealous when I took female rabbit in my lap…. N I too returned my rabbit to shopkeeper cz of my nani’s death.. As No one would be at home to take care of them…

    N at last that song.. That’s my favorite…

    N wait rabbit hv teeth since childhood… I mean rabbithood… Bt they hv only 4 teeth that too in front side

    It chappy makes me nostalgic today…

    Luv u shukla ji ?????

    1. Meher

      N same thing happened with me after my 3 month holiday… Lol It took me 2 months to regain my speed of writing ????

      1. Serena

        U have to work on ur writing only but I have to work on whole system….n yesterday I was sitting with screwdriver n nuts NWA’s greasing my whole system????

        U know sooo many virus???

    2. Serena

      I love u tooooo Di???

      N Di I don’t know about rabbit more…I also like them but my mother wont allow me to have one….coz she is scared of pets???

      N luv u infinity??

  11. Divyanshri

    awsome update….. dnt end it……. u got 3 months holiday…. wow…. what r u studying yaar…..

    1. Serena

      Thank u n m currently in 11 std..

  12. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    Wow ms.shukla and mrs………Loved it.Awe,caring +jealous sanky, lol.Awsm chappy. I can understand. Study is also important. But be careful from your gabbar.

    1. Serena

      Thanks uma Di n don’t worry now I will definitely call u in my marriage(if by god grace koi ladka man gaya toh??) n then u will get to know the name after “Mrs” but condition apply apko apne ‘ae Ji o Ji’ ko bhi Lana padegapadega??????

  13. Abirsha

    Its awesome…. Dont stop it

    1. Serena

      Thanks alot

  14. awesome yaar.update previous parts yaar

    1. Serena

      Thank u n I have already updated previous parts…

    1. Serena

      Thank u alia

  15. Sree

    Aww this was a very sweet ep. Bohot accha tha??????
    I loved jaanu cuz i love rabbits. Jaanu is amazing???
    Tumhare Lady thangabali ko suddenly kya hogaya?? School jaldi kyun start kardiya????
    Aur ittniiiii jaldi end mat karo. I love this . Mujhe aur bohot kuch dekna hai issmein??
    So dont end so soon??
    Love u dear????

    1. Serena

      Thanks Di…n I also love rabbits??

      I too don’t know what happened to her…..I think garmi kaa asar dimaag pe chadh raha hai…baraf daalni padegi.???

      Or kya kya dekhna hai aapko….m already telling u….main bohot sanskaari ladki hu…bilkul apne sanskaar Bhaiya ki tarah…????

    1. Serena

      Thanks afra

  16. awesome….

    1. Serena

      Thanks vyashu

  17. Kaynatk01

    are yr dare not to end it u r going superb and yaa one more tbing whenever u get time u write but dont forget to write ?? neither am having a gun ??

    1. Serena

      Arey arey sorry I was joking….???? why u always show gun to this innocent child???
      I will write on time…pakka

  18. Wow what a possessive rabbit I loved it
    And that kaveri is not less than a chudail

    1. Serena

      Thank u n that kaveri is more than chudail??

  19. Tvisha

    Awsm yaar..it was fabulous..I loved it..plzz try uploading soon…

    sorry for less words 🙂

    1. Serena

      Thanks tvisha n don’t be sorry…u commented its enough..

  20. Janu hahahahaha..

    1. Serena

      Thanks radhika

  21. Pleazzzz. Dont end this ff yaarrr,pleazzzzzzzzzzz

    1. Serena

      Thank u n don’t worry I won’t end it so soon

  22. Hiiii serena , i have just red all the chappys of ur ss , they are superb , u r a talented writer …. and please dont end this , its really a nice story ….

    1. Serena

      Thanku n thanks for reading it..

  23. Nice sisy. dont stop writing. Meher di ,dvyansri di .kritika is my fav.writer now you too.

    1. Serena

      Thank u samaira

  24. I am angry with U Di…???
    Why are you ending Your SS too early…???
    Maaf nahi karungi aapko dubra agar aapne ye SS khatam kiya to…
    Take your time di when you are free from your lady gabbar …???
    I mean from your principal..
    By the Way Di Episode was awesome as usual…
    Kuch iss tarah is one of my favourite songs..
    Love U sooo much Di????

    1. Serena

      Cholllllyyyyyy…dekh kaan pakad rhi hu….tu Kaise dekhegi hehe??

      Or meri lady gabbar ki baat rhi toh unhone do din ki special chutti di hai…..or kaha hai
      Jaa shivangi pura karle apne ss???

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