swasan ss ‘Doorie…Sahi Jaaye Naa…’ (chapter 18)

After 7 months
A boy was running here n there holding ballons in his hand n all over drapped in decorative ribbons n instructing everyone
Boy- lucky u plz check the flowers …n kabeer u plz check the lights over there n kaka plz call to bakery n ask them about the cake…whether they will deliver it today or in next birthday…n mom have u prepared the mishti doi…u know na she likes it very much n I want everything to be perfect today..
Ap- ha ha sanskaar I have done everything(laughing on his antics) today everything will be perfect…n ur princess will surely like it..
Sanskaar- umaaah…thank u maa.. I love u soooooo muchhh
Ap- ok ok now go n get changed…or else what ur princess will think that u r like this on her special day..
Sanskaar-(hitting his palm on his head) oh no…how can I forget…I will just go n change…but see..its already 11:30 n I want all of u to be ready by 12…ok
Lucky n kabir-(dramatically saluting) yes boss
Sanskaar laughed a little n hurriedly went from there..
Ap-(teary eyed)…oh god what sin he has done that u r punishing him so hard…plz don’t do this with him
At 12 am
A room was full of darkness n a lady was sleeping there

Suddenly all lights get on n whole mahwshwari family came there shouting
Sanskaar went ther with cake in his one hand n in other hand a bunch of flowers..
Sanskaar- princess get up…see today is ur birthday na that’s why all of the family members have come to wish u…see even I called kabeer also…plz get up na…see its been 7 months now…how much will u sleep…don’t u feel bad for me…don’t u feel bad for ur husband…don’t u feel bad whenever I don’t get my things n got late..u used to give my every belongings to me at right time na…u know till u were awake I never felt any difficulty but now when u r sleeping Imy way is full of difficulty only….i know I have done a mistake..no no I have done a crime but plz forgive me plz give me only one chance to rectify plz….(now he was litrary crying) (wiping his tears) but now no more crying(smiling teary eyed) today is ur birthday na we allwill celebrate ha…see mom has made mishti doi for u…ok (to all) comeon guys..lets first cut the cake..
All cutted the cake with sleeping swara with so many machines attached to her..nd sang birthday song…every one was tearyeyed seeing sanskaar’s condition…when everything was done sanskaar told everyone to go n sleep n he himself sat behind swara n took her palms in her hands nd kissed it n started to talk to sleeping swara..
Snskaar- swara see today 7 months have been passed of that incident but still u r giving me punishment..he remembered what doctor said to him..

Doctor– actually mr. maheshwari she had a so much loss of blood…we tries our best but we r sorry..she slipped into coma..
Sanskaar was shocked..
Sanskaar- c…o…m..a…..
Wha…what r u sa..saying doc…
Doctor- mr maheshwari plz control urself…I know its very difficult for u to believe this…but its real…mrs. Maheshwari has slipped into coma..but she can listen everything u say to her…
Sanskaar-(emotionless) can I meet her doctor
Doc- umm yes u can
Sanskaar went to ward n looked at swara who was covered with bandage all over her body n many machines were joined to her body…her condition was vulnerable…a tear drop fell from sanskaar’s eye…he was just looking at her with teary eyed nd was remembering every moment he spent with her n how he mistrust her
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

he went to her..n sat beside on stool n hold her hand
Sanskaar-(crying n innocently) are u that much angry on me that u decided to leave me…I know m ur culprit..but u know na m mad I nevr do anything right n u always scold me on my mistake na..then why r u not getting up n scolding me…plz don’t do this prank with me…I know that…that doc is also with u in this prank…I will see him later on…but before that plz get up…n talk to me..(now crying badly) plz get up na..plz get up..plz get up
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

Guys I know its late…but I cant do anything my mobile got hanged nd my computer also broke down so plz forgive me but I will try to end this story as soon as possible but I cant give u the guarantee that when I will post next..

precap- continuation of past

Nd ya one more thing there is a page on fb “sanswara: the other name of love” …plz do visit nd like it..there u will get all the stories of meher di, kritika din d jyoti di..

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  1. Rabia

    :'( sadd but nice epi dear 🙂

  2. Wow dear amazing…u made me cry..it ws too painful…nd flng bad fr sanskar…hope swara recover soon…waitng fr nxt eagrly..

  3. Feeling sorry for swasan………pls continue soon………

  4. Awesome. Feeling sad for swasan????it’s emotional

  5. Deeksha

    Nice dear…. But I felt it was short!!!!!!!!!

  6. Nice one.. Plz update soon

  7. Kritika

    Its awsm dear!
    But i am not di!
    M just 13

  8. di i m not on fb

  9. Meher

    Itta bda chappy post Kia h tune k Kya batau!! Pdhte pdhte pareshan ho gayi ????

    Well swara zinda ho h bt srf khne ko…

    Let’s see More

  10. Nice

  11. Arshaanya

    Nyc… i wntd swara to not frgve him easily n punish him… bt here its all dffrnt n shez in coma m so exctd to knw wats gonna happen nw… plz try to post nxt chappy ASAP

  12. Kaynatk01

    well am angry on u posted too short but emotional one

  13. Tvisha

    thank god atleast swara is safe waiting for the futher updates
    Awesome one upload soon

  14. Mahavir

    awesome dear feeling bad for my sanky

  15. Kakali

    Sooo cutee n short chappy..
    Swara is lifeless ,, hmmmm !!!
    Sanskar is Swaraless. ,, love it dear.. thnk u

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  17. Vyshu10

    aww…so emotional

  18. Heartrob update

  19. Mica

    you are bad.. make me cry….

  20. This is so emotional part????

  21. Anisha

    I’m not satisfied ????
    I don’t have anything to say???

  22. Hi Di, How are you???After a long time Di…Aree Di yeh kya hogaya….Hum kuch din TU se door kya rahe yahan to sab kuch badal gaya…Pata nahi kya kya naam apko milgaya hai….Seriously Atankwadi????????……

    About Chappy-
    You gave made me cried…..Poor Sanky, I am feeling bad for him…You nailed it Di….Yeh episode Super se bhi upar wala tha….And Please post ASAP..

    Itna sab kuch likh diya par pata nahi main aapko yaad bhi houn ki nahi…

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