swasan ss ‘DOORIE….Sahi Jaaye Na…'(chapter 1)

Helloooo all of u…Serena here…thanku guys for immense support…I really got lot of comments on intro part….n hoping many more on this chapter…so here goes the first chapter of ‘Doorie…..Sahi jaaye naa…’

It was a pleasant morning….a room was beautifully decorated n a couple was sleeping peacefully with an angelic smile on their face….looking at the room it can be clearly said that the couple is newly married….meanwhile..the Sunrays falls on the girl’s face n she opens her eyes n she see her husband beside her who is sleeping Peacefully taking his life in his embrace…the girl smiled on him..when suddenly the man spoke up.
Man- why r u staring at me like this swara…..(smiling naughtily) meri izzat toh tum kal raat ko hi lut chuki ho…abb kya irada hai…?(u have already taken my virginity last night…now what’s in ur mind)
Swara-haww!! U shameless…now go I won’t see ur face again..(fakely angry)
Sanskaar- areyyyyy! If u won’t see my face then how will ur day go perfect….so come on now look at me baby..
Swara-(surprised by his shamelessness) what? (Now seriously angry) what do u think of urself?
Sanskaar-(innocent look) ur husband!!
Swara-(now more frustrated) I mean what have u think of urself??
Sanskaar-(with attitude) handsome hunk of kolkata !
Swara(also in attitude) in your dreams..
Sanskaar- aye haye! Tum mere sapnon me aana band karogi tabhi to main koi sapna dekhunga. (I will see other dreams only when u will stop coming in my dreams)
Swara-(acting to be angry) what? It means I disturb u in ur dreams….go now I won’t talk to u…
Saying this she went from there…
Sanskaar-(unbelievable look n wide open mouth??)- yaar main toh yaha romance karne ki soch raha tha….yaha toh world war shuru ho gaya..??
Sach kehte…bhagwan ne pehle duniya banai…phir chain se soye…phir bhagwaan be aadmi banaya….phir chain se soye……phir bhagwan me AURAT banai….phir na bhagwan soye naa hi aadmi soya..??
No one can understand these women..seriously…

Sanskaar got fresh n went to dining area n saw her angel serving breakfast…his trance was broker by laksh n dp.
Laksh- arey bhai what r u doing over there…come na…see Bhabhi has breakfast today…
Dp-(in between eating) ya ya sanskaar…come fast or else I will eat everything then u have to eat bread butter…
Sanskaar smiled at his family’s antics n went to the dining table…
Sanskaar passed smile to swara but swara gave him full on attitude look…
It was not gone unnoticed by dp n laksh…n they asked sanskaar slowly..
Dp-(slowly) beta hv u both fought over something?
Sanskaar-(shocked) how do u know papa.
Dp- beta 30 saal se Annapurna naam me aatankvadi ko jhel raha hu….itna toh pata chal hi Chuka hai ki kab kaunsa bomb fodti hair ye biwiyaa.
(Son m tolerating this Annapurna named terrorist since 30 yes…I know very well that when these wives used to blast which bomb)
Sanlak look towards each other than to DP n Spain said in unison- EXPIRIENCE..
Sanskaar- papa but now plz tell me how can I convince her…
Dp- sorry son! But its ur personnel matter…u have to solve it by urself..
Sanskaar gave a look to dp n dp chuckles…then sanskaar looked towards laksh with pleading eyes….n laksh understanding his intentions noded his head in no…
Then sanskaar having no hope leaned to his chair n with painful eyes(in funny way) started to say a poem looking at dp n laksh…..
Khusi me toh sab khaate hai
Jam, butter or toast.
Khusi me toh sab khate hai
Jam butter or toast….
Par Jo musibat me saath de wo hi
Hota hai sabse accha dost..
Laksh who was eating food coughed listening to the hilarious poem by his bro whereas dp who was sipping his coffee , split all his coofee on annapurna’s face n Annapurna was giving him death glare..
Laksh- (giving unbelievable look to sanskaar) bhai u have became mad only after 24 hrs of ur marriage…(turning to dp) dad m going to Himalayas.. M not gonna marry….coz I don’t wanna become insane..
Dp- laksh beta kaash main bhi ye bol pata….(wiping his fake tears) but Jo galti 30 saal pehle ki thi Ab uski sazaa bhugat raha hun….koi baat nhi m proud of u that u r not doing that same mistake as ur bhai n me…
Everyone was looking dp in amusement n ap was fuming in anger…
Ap- (angry) oh! So marrying me was ur mistake..
Dp-(realised what he said) oh god no no ap…I was just joking….don’t take it seriously yaar….
Ap goes from there n dp follows her..
Dp-(following ap) listen ap ..see yaar in process of convincing u I hv become bald in these 30 years..plz don’t be angry on me….see now not even a single hair left on my head….see yaar mere takle ka tablaa ban gaya..Ab toh man jao…??
Sanskaar to himself -(touching his hair) oh god sanskaar agar baalo se pyaar hai toh biwi ko mana le beta..( oh god sanskaar if u love ur hair so go n convince ur wife..)
When the two men were busy in convincing their wife they suddenly heard a lady shouting their name…
Lady- Bhaiya….. Bhabhi….sanskaar….laksh…..
All of them excluding swara- kaveri/ bua..

So here ends the first chapter…sorry for being late n plz give me ur feedbacks..bye..
N yup NATASHA Di oops BHABHI m same Serena..

80 comments

  1. Tvisha

    |Registered Member

    awesome serena.. it was so hilarious sanskar saying that poem then laksh going to himalaya and the DP AP it was so refreshing plzz post soon

  2. thamiazh magan

    really funny of break fast table antics.. by the way i cant understand hindi. thanks for giving translations also. Can u plz tell the meaning of title?

    • Serena

      |Author

      Thank u…n the meaning of title is ‘ distances….can’t be tolerated..’ Its a name of song sung by atif aslam..

    • Meher

      |Registered Member

      He is my favorite… Mere pass uske sare songs hai… N doorie was first song of him which I had listened… N I fall for him.. N his voice ????

  3. Sree

    |Registered Member

    Wow Sanskar poem was very nice???? kahan se aate eise ideas tumhe???
    Dp is very funny???
    I loved this ep.??
    Love u dear???

  4. anu

    awesome.. laksh want to go himalays.. hope kaveri dodnt do anything with swasan.. if she is negative character..

    • Serena

      |Author

      Thank u n would give u the translation…co somewhere I have to use Hindi…but surely give u translation in English..

  5. Annie

    |Registered Member

    Hi Serena…

    Loved the way you write and humour which is shown is just awesome…I was laughing just imagining Dp and Sanskar….

  6. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    Oh my god,I like ROFL. But yeah,ladki o ki bareme esi baate karti hain jab tu khud ek ladki hein ,sharam nehi aati…….hehe,just kidding. About chappy, super se upar.Waiting for nxt.☺☺☺☺☺☺

    • Serena

      |Author

      Thanks uma Di..n it was complement to ladies in indirect way…see na we girls r sooo beautiful…that after our creation men wanted to see this creation carefully that’s why they never slept…n if they slept our sweer dreams never let them sleep peacefully…
      U know different way of taking things..???

  7. Aami

    |Registered Member

    soooooooooo cuteeeeee eisode… statrng with romance, naughtiness n ending woth ee entry….. i lved dps chrctr…

  8. Harshitha

    |Registered Member

    Ur ss is just fab dp is just hilarious I liked dp in ur ff rather than serial loved the episode waiting for the next part ❤

    • Serena

      |Author

      Thank u…even I don’t like that dp….even when he cries in someone death also it looks like he has lost his chocolates????
      No emotions at all….that’s why m taking revenge from him in my ss??????

  9. sneha

    Nice serena… the family anticss and sanskarzz poem ws jst hilarious…i was laughing soo loudly that my dad came into my room to know why i was laughing lyk a mad…lol..
    I mst say that u hv a vry gud sense of humour… 😀

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