SANSKAAR (shouting)- SWARAAA!!!!!

SWARA fell down roughly.. Here KAVITA shouted in pain. She twisted the knife and took out from her stomach and as she did so, there was a bright flicker and the dark forest changed when the evil was sighing her last breath. The forest was made beautiful. It was no more dark. The bright green leaves rustled. The birds chirped and the sun spread its warmth .. The souls were no more captivated.. All seemed good but two poor soul stood their lifeless.. The nature witnessed their pain and bowed down in sorrow.

Blood flowed out on and on from her body. She looked pallid and her eyes struggled to open to see the glimpse of her beloved. He rushed towards her and placed her head on his thighs. He was free from the curse but he was not ready to pay his life for it. He was not ready to loose swara. He patted her cheeks and his tear drops fell like the pious rain on her face..

SANSKAAR- wake up swara.. Wake up.. Look at me.. You can’t leave me like this. You promised to love me na.

SWARA (with slight consciousness)- I will always love you sanskaar. My promise won’t ever break but I thought destiny wants to make us meet. Destiny wants us to be together but destiny doesn’t wants so. I’ll be always yours Sanskaar. We will come again. We will come again to be together. I love you and I will al.. ways…, d…do..so..

She gave a peaceful sanskaar and died!!! She died leaving a cleavant sanskaar.. Her body slipped from his hands. He shaked her but she didn’t respond.

SANSKAAR- swara.. You left me alone.. You left me again in this cruel world who has always separated us. But I lived only for you swara. Last time when you left, i had some responsibilities which I had to complete but now I am free.. I am coming to you swara without you there’s no meaning of my life.

He took the fallen dagger and stabbed himself to death. He fell down and intertwined his hand with hers and then departed from this world TOGETHER.

After few minutes, raglak arrived..
Ragini fell down on the ground and cried

RAGINI- it’s all because of me laksh .. Only if I had opened bhai, he would have saved swara. It’s all because of me..

She cried vigorously and like a true soulmate, laksh supported her. Both looked at the two bodies hugging each other .. SWARA who to give her love and others a good life, sacrificed her life and then at sanskaar who didn’t even allow the destiny to break his promise. Promise of always staying together. That is true love.

Was this the end or a different start? Definitely a new chapter of love. A new era of selflessness. A new example of its own rare kind. Please please comment today.. ATLEAST today please..


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  1. Mica

    <——– fainting

    1. Anu_M

      <___ ___ _ loving your comment. No problem ..??? I'll soon give a dhamaka..

  2. Rekha


    1. Anu_M

      Thank u rekha .. ??

  3. What have u done Anu?? seeing them in that condition my heart ache.. i dont have much word to say.. the way u write d story its awesome ,, the way u narrated their imotions its also outstanding.. ur story clearly says that nobody can separate them,, not even destiny not even death.. bcz they r destined to b together..thnx Dear for ur memorable chappy..???

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u So much for such a beautiful comment kakali.. Love you dear.. ????

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u.. 🙂

  4. Ashikyl

    Simply awesome.But somewhere it hurts

    1. Anu_M

      Sorry.. Didn’t intend to make you feel sad..

  5. Is this the end???????,wow beautiful part dr……

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u madhu.. Some ends are beginning of a beautiful start so it’s not an end its just a closed chapter of a saga..

    1. Anu_M

      Thanxx simi.. ❤️❤️

  6. AnuAnn

    Excellent sissy… Is this the end?

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u di.. I believe It’s not an end .. Umm its a different start..

  7. Scooby

    Y should evrystory has lovly dovly ending.. they hav end their life but started it as new in paradise… bt i wil kill u nw…. show me beautiful epilogue.. becoz in fiction anythng can happen.. anu dr… tc buhbye…

    1. Anu_M

      Navi.. U started so nicely,, beech Mai ye daayan chadh gayi kya.. Don’t kill me.. Post karti hu one more chapter.. Aaj hi karti hu.. Abhi likhne jaa rahe hum.. Ab thik..

  8. this is not fare yr….
    u made me cry…..i dont cry easily….
    u see i m a though nut….
    bt still they r together….
    luvd it…. simply awsm…
    luv u dear….

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u so much and you are not a tough nut.. You are very sweet and very soft.. ❤️??

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u Sam..

  9. Astra

    Hey…are you serious?? The story is. End…? No… Swara can’t die.??

    1. Astra

      But…it was a very nice story…loved it…

      1. Anu_M

        Thank u Astra.. Glad you liked it..

    2. Anu_M

      SWARA has really died.. ???

  10. Hey …..chappy waz amazing…….bt yr feeling bad fo swasan……der lv wz really selfless……

    1. Anu_M

      Thanx xavia.. So sweet of u.. ??

    1. Anu_M

      Thank u s.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

  11. Arshaanya

    Wat ?its an end??
    Dfntly No as u said a different start..
    chapie was gud n now feeling sad.. post next part ASAP n make ur readers happy ?

    1. Anu_M

      You are so bad.. So bad.. Gosh.. How did you get to know? You spoiled my surprise.. ?????.. People here are extra genius yaar… Need to conceal things a lot.. Spoiled my surprise.. Thank u for your comment and soon wishing to see a smiling and happy face comment

  12. RUPA


    Yeh kya kr diya??

    Neverthless i loved it and i know this not THE END.

    U r gonna make them rebirth or something like that. Isn’t it???

    Udate soon..!!

    Love ya !!❤️

    1. Anu_M

      Next part is updated .. Take a look at it.. Love you and yup it is not the end

  13. Samaira

    What can say ?
    True love. Felling diff not drama. Haaye itna love. This is is the best ss. So cute. Ur relly diff di. Relly. 2 janam khatam.

    1. Anu_M

      Beta Ji teesra janam start go gaya.. Read the next chappy .. ????

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