After few minutes of SANSKAAR leaving, someone held Swara’s hand and pushed her towards himself towards a dark corner side..

SWARA- sunny leave me..

SUNNY- baby.. You are looking so gorgeous today.. I don’t feel like leaving you..

SWARA (sobbingly) – sunny .. Pls leave me.. What have I done to you??

SUNNY- nothing just that you are Damn too beautiful and now seeing you today in this dress, I just can’t keep control on myself..

SWARA cried due to fear.. She clutched her dress and held her head.. She was getting some flashes of a girl requesting some man..[remember SHONA begging SAHIL to leave him.. She is remembering the same scene]

From back , a voice came..



She went tightly and hugged him, frightened by the event which took place… Hearing to the noises, people collected and made groups in that area.. SANSKAAR departed SWARA from himself…

SWARA- SANSKAAR.. He tried to force himself on me..

SUNNY- no everyone.. She is lying.. She was trying to lure me.. I didn’t do anything..

SWARA (shouted)- stop it sunny.. SANSKAAR, you saw na what happened.. Look what he is saying..

Swara’s eye were drenched with tears .. Her only support was sanskaar but he backed out..

SANSKAAR- just shut up SWARA.. I know what kind of a girl you are.. Few minutes before, you were roaming all around me and even forcefully kissed me and now shamelessly you are luring sunny..

All people started gossiping about swara’s character. She step back aghasted..

SANSKAAR- shame on you and your parents..

Befor he could continue more, Swara gave a tight slap on sanskaar’s cheek.. Her eyes were full of rage and tears were continuously rolling her eyes

Swara- I hate you sanskaar… I hate you … You wanted to listen this na.. So now listen and know that I hate you … Now I will never ever disturb you… You have broke my love into peices and my belief in love is lost.. Thank you for destroying my life. Thank you for ruining my respect.. Thank you for using me and throwing me like a tissue in bin… Live your life and stay happily.. From now on you don’t have to see my face.. And whatever you did .. Chii.. I don’t believe that you will fall so low … Well .. Have a pleasant life ahead Mr. Maheshwari..

Swara was totally shattered.. She didn’t know what to do.. Aimlessly, she ran around the roads and went deep inside the forest.. She cried .. She shouted but there was no one to console her…

SWARA- no SWARA.. You can’t cry.. Stop crying.. SANSKAAR is not worthy of your love.. Don’t cry..

She closed her mouth with her hand but it didn’t help.. Her cries didn’t stop.. Her tears increased more and more.. She fell down crying.. Suddenly she heard a ferocious voice of an animal and then she reliased her surroundings.. Her body started to shiver.. The voice grew louder and louder .. Out of the mist, appeared SANSKAAR … But for SWARA, he didn’t look like SANSKAAR.. He looked completely different creature.. His face had big fangs.. His hand and nails were rough, pointed and wild.. His cloths tore and shredded at places.. And his eyes which were always too soothing for her, a sense of relief was brought to her by those eyes but these eyes were different.. They were filled with blood and that made SWARA scared..


But the beast didn’t reciprocate at his words.. He jumped and inserted his fangs in her delicate neck.. SWARA felt immense, unbearable pain..

WHAT NEXT?? Will destiny won’t allow them to meet again? Will SANSKAAR himself become his poison for his love??

#tada.. Shocked.. Yup.. I am not discontinuing this ss.. All requested me so much that I am forced to complete it but you have to manage with such short and may be irregular episodes and this one dedicated to my TANU DI.. You know who I am and you in know I love you all too but still.. Love you all so very much

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  1. Thank u anu di. M first tym cmnting in ur story. Love u very much. M on cloud 9. Thanks again fr continuing it.

    1. Anu_M

      Pleasures all greatly mine and love you too.. ????

    1. Anu_M

      Tq tamanna.. ❤️❤️

  2. Awesome writing yaar… I thought of reading fixing broken souls once again as I m bored today… But the pages r showing error n updates r not coming. Do u know anything about it n is it not opening for everyone or only me???????

    1. They took it off from TU because the writer had copied the ff word to word from wattpad and posted it here.. (the original ff was about virat kohli)

      1. Anu_M

        Well that was bad.. She shouldn’t have done this.. According to the copyright infringement, the real author could take legal actions against the writer who copied her work.. I am sure there was no need to do something like this but it’s really sad to know about plagiarism…

    2. Anu_M

      Sweety.. Actually I am different Anu and the person you are talking about is different.. I am Anu Modi and the other one I really don’t have idea about her

      1. Oh m so sorry…. N thanks for informing me…. Thanks to Anu modi n unknown too….. Anu keep writing….. Nxt update plzzz

      2. Anu_M

        I’ll continue sweety.. No problem

  3. Hina.khan3

    Thank u soooooo much ??????

    1. Anu_M

      Your welcome.. But dear why are you thanking me .. It always make me feel good to write for you all and your comments encourage me.. ??

  4. Scooby

    Ha ha too much of surprise dr…loved dis shrt sweet chapie… bt painful scene wr sanski spoke ill abt swara. .. waiting for nxt part… tc dr… bubye…

    1. Anu_M

      I know .. It was too painful.. It was so hard for me to write.. But but but.. Let’s see.. Navi how’s ur back now? All fine..take care

  5. Superb dear.. but the chappy was short. thank God you are not discontinuing this…

    1. Anu_M

      I know .. In fact it was too short.. The little time I got I wrote in it.. Don’t thank god .. It was because of some readers.. Lol.. ??

  6. thanks anu di for continuing the ff….
    hell scared fr swara….
    luv u…
    take care…
    nd the update was awsm as always..

    1. Anu_M

      Thank youuu janvi…
      Love you too dear.. 🙂

  7. Rosey

    It a suspence

    1. Anu_M

      Lots of suspense.. Even in the next chapter

  8. Hey Anu dear thank you sooooooo much for uploading it…..??
    Love u my sisso…..?
    And the shot is short but sweet as u….?

    1. Anu_M

      Love you too so much di.. ???

  9. Rekha


    1. Anu_M

      Tq dear..

  10. Astra

    I was scared that you will stop this,… Welcome back….?

    1. Anu_M

      Nope I won’t stop this.. And thank u

  11. Nice twist
    What next?

    1. Anu_M

      Next chapter you will get to know and more twists are awaiting for you all..

  12. Thank God You are not going to discontinue it….Well Loving Chapter so much….Never ever thought that Sanskar will do this…Superb Update….Waiting for next part eagerly…

    1. Anu_M

      But SANSKAAR did this and soon you will know why.. I’ll try to post the next part sooner..

  13. Mica

    oh God… breath taking
    ty for the update, have nice day Anu!

    1. Anu_M

      You too have a nice day dear and thank u so much… ??

    1. Janviiivyas

      sorry for not commenting

    2. Anu_M

      Thank u and don’t talk to me.. I am extremely upset and angry at you.. You went all of a sudden missing.. Didn’t inform also where and how? ?????

  14. RUPA

    Sorry for late comment i’m a bit busy

    Thanks to u for continuing?

    Oops dosti mein no thank u and no sorry

    so cancel them.

    But wat r u planning girl???

    Wat did sanky did with swara??

    I hope she is all fine.

    I’ll wait for ur SS.

    But don’t u dare to discontinue.

    Love ya !!❤️

    1. Anu_M

      Koi baat NAHI and good you understood on your own warna mujhe aur bhi bahut taareken aate hai..

      Something utterly good and dangerous

      Read the next chapter

      Nope she’s not gonna be fine

      But I won’t discontinue..

      Pucca.. Love u too

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