SWASAN SS BY ANU 08 – WE ARE DESTINED TO BE TOGETHER “pain”

THEME – PAIN..

QUESTION BANK IS CLOSED.. IT IS OPENED ONLY ON FRIDAY AND WEEKENDS.. LOL.. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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SANSKAAR’S POV

PLS don’t do this swara.. You are making me weak.. I am not able to resist you.. I’ll not be able to keep myself away from you.. I know you know me better than me.. I know my unsaid words speak many thing to you.. I know you love me but stay away from me … I have to do something big.. I am going to hurt you a lot swara .. A lot.. Never forgive me and go away from me.. Somewhere far.. Far from all these problems..

I approached her … She was standing at a corner .. Her eyes gleamed on seeing me as if she had already expected me to come..

SANSKAAR- SWARA.. I want to talk to you..

SWARA- I love you sanskaar.. I know it’s shocking for you but I really love you and it’s not attraction or something.. I truly love you..

SANSKAAR- I knew it..

SWARA- you knew it.. Seriously..

I nodded my head in a yes.. I hugged her.. She was smiling so wide.. This is just for few more minutes .. I am going to snatch her smile .. Why me??.. I hugged her more tight..

SWARA- sanskaar.. Easy.. I am not leaving you and going anywhere..

I didn’t reply.. I just tucked her soft locks at the back and leaned towards her..

SWARA- sanskaar..

She wasn’t able to complete her sentence.. I had fused my mouths with her.. I gently sucked her lips and she responded.. It was a heavenly experience.. I left her but the next moment, again kissed her.. For the last time, I wanted to feel her completely, solely mine.. She departed, touched her lips and smiled..

SWARA – I love you sanskaar..

SANSKAAR- hmmm

SWARA- sanskaar.. You are listening to me na..

SANSKAAR- hmm

SWARA- sanskaar….

SANSKAAR- hmmm

SWARA (angry pout face) – so you are teasing me .. I hate you laddoo..

SANSKAAR- I hate you too chipkali…

SWARA- euuuuuu…

I laughed and she stared at me.. Wait wait.. Did she call me laddoo.. Oh no.. She is remembering past incidents or what… But she is happy..
I am going to miss you a lot Swara.. God give me strength to do what I am going to do…

SANSKAAR- SWARA.. Wait here.. I am coming..

She held my wrist..

SWARA- sanskaar, pls don’t go.. I don’t know but I am feeling as if something really bad is going to happen.. If you are with me, I feel good.. Pls..

SANSKAAR – I am just coming SWARA.. Wait .. Ok..

SANSKAAR’S POV END

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After few minutes of SANSKAAR leaving, someone held Swara’s hand and pushed her towards himself towards a dark corner side..

SWARA- sunny leave me..

SUNNY- baby.. You are looking so gorgeous today.. I don’t feel like leaving you..

SWARA (sobbingly) – sunny .. Pls leave me.. What have I done to you??

SUNNY- nothing just that you are Damn too beautiful and now seeing you today in this dress, I just can’t keep control on myself..

SWARA cried due to fear.. She clutched her dress and held her head.. She was getting some flashes of a girl requesting some man..[remember SHONA begging SAHIL to leave him.. She is remembering the same scene]

From back , a voice came..

SANSKAAR- SWARA…

What is SANSKAAR going to do??

What is his plan??

Will he end up hurting SWARA or will SWARA become more determined to gain his love??

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A/N
GUYS.. The next chapter is a crucial point for the story.. You all know why it’s a chotu update.. I promise on Friday and weekends I’ll give a super long update.. From tomorrow, one more work is added into my schedule.. It’s going to be really tough for me to be regular… Story is coming to its end phase.. I may end it till next week or so.. Moreover the comments have also decreased but it is nothing to do with the comments.. love u all and navi.. I am missing you.. Where are you.. Love you more..
#ANU MODI

35 comments

  1. Pramudi

    Awesome part dear… Loved it. It’s ok dear. Take your time & update.
    Oh no… U r going to end this soon?? Will miss u you a lot.

  2. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anu

    This was more like a teaser

    Now it’s getting on my nerves. U r increasing my curiosity girl and i hate u for this.

    Will wait for friday.

    Love u more Anu

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Umm teaser.. Stay curious and you hate me for this but I love you for your message.. In next episode then you are surely going to kill me.. Koi nahi..

  3. Astra

    |Registered Member

    Anu… curious to know what happens next….😦
    I love this ff so much dear….
    Wow…. A very nice update… Loved it..😍

  4. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Sorry Di for late comment…Today only saw your page…About Chappy Superb…Itna choota sa Chappy…Koi bat I will manage…And ha I have replied you in private message…Don’t know why comments are decreasing…This story is very good…I loved ur each work…But this very special for me…This SS I am loving more…Keep writing my sis…
    Love u a lots…May God bless you…
    Happy Friendship to u in advance…
    I may not be able to comment in your ff any more because my Mom is not allowing me to touch phone…Maybe at night in your time it will be day, I will comment or have chat with you…But today you reply me OK…

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      No problem with late comment.. Happy friendship day and will miss you a lot.. Message me whenever you get time.. And thank u for your love towards my work.. 😍😍

  5. navi

    Hi Anu, hw r u????? so wt did u cook for ur cousins and friends??
    Ok im xtrmly sorrie for being here late. I had prblm in visiting tu my own prblms so I could nt visit or read ur ss. Today only I read ur 8th part. It ws awesome dr. so waiting for sanski plan hw he is gonna make swara hate him. And promo wr kavi wil bite swara im waiting for dat.. may be agn to save swara wil sankar bite her turn her into vamp ah???
    PRANK STORY :-
    I studied as hostelite in college so during Sundays, morning brkfst wil be bread butter or jam in alternate. One Sunday I ws continuously waking my friend to wakeup so we could take food before its taken back to mess.. she din wake ok I made her sleep again. Me and another frnd went took food our 3 . usually I used spread jam nd make it ready… this stupid na to make me angry she got suddenly seeing me making brkfst ready.. I told her to tke rest bt she went to brush…… now my freaky brain told don’t leave her.. I suddenly went and squeezed close up tooth paste and mixed it with little jam and spread on bread an kept ready in her plate.. this stupid came she had first bite and looked at me.. I ask hr what by rolling my eyes… she said somthng is wrong.. I told nothing.. angn she had another bite and confront me his taste like tooth paste ???? I askd her don’t u believe me??? If u want taste ours too!!!!!! Its same…. Then she told I believe u and ate one whole bread.. my another frnd cud not wait anymore she spit the truth… nxt wt me nd my frnd had quarrel laugh pulling eachothr leg nd fed eachothr d same bread….
    I had so much to ask u … bt now im not in situation.. becoz my cousin sis has come and she has lil 1 yr old twin babies.. omg they are chubby lovvly dr… <3 <3 playing nd managing them itself my tym goes off…. Il bck soon.. bye tc…
    And finally don’t stress urself dr tc of ur health… think paitiently don’t panic… ok bye…
    This one I typd strdy bt due to guest kids no tym yaar.. bye…

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Who will do what.. For that I am supposed to write the next chapter and unfortunately I am not able to do it.. Umm about the dishes there’s a long long list..
      Chocolate tarts
      I made chilli chicken and with same stuffs I made chicken tikka and rolls too
      Fish chips
      Marble cake
      Caramel pudding
      Wangtos
      And idli and sambhar.. had to search the whole mall for finding the packet.. Atlast I had to order online the idli mix..

      Lol.. Good.. Good.. I also did it with my friends… I had done a prank like this only.. All irritated me a lot Na so I had made muffins and the tart base which was there, I filled it with toothpaste.. First bite khate hi all spitted..

      Koi baat nahi.. Aww .. I love cutie bacchas.. It’s fun to play with them.. My sister’s kids or I may say my nephew and neice (twins).. Gawd at beginning the girly use to never come to me while the boy stuck to me whenever they were at home.. When di was staying for some days at home then eventually, she built a great bond with me… She’s so cute my aaloo.. And chabbu…

      Happy by your wishes.. Love you,. You too take care and enjoy with lil muchikans ..

      • navi

        Seriously i did not read d note anu dr… sorry for being careless…. so my buddy ws missing me so much… im sorry worry making u worry… due to guest i ws not able to come here.. sorry dr and nxt sunday is my IFS exam anu.. i hav no idea wt they are gonna ask???? My mom is afraid seeing me sitting casually and not preparaing for exam. I told her im jst gonna try dont expect anythng from me
        πŸ˜‰ im too nervous dr donna wt im gonna do for xam im blank…
        So wts ur clge tymng??? Wt u wil do whn ur free??? And wts d anothr wrk loaded to ur schedule anu??? My kind wish stay cool B-) miss u tooo anu :-*
        Take cre bu bye… reply me soon.. wil b waiting for ur reply… and i expect u too laugh whn u see my msg πŸ˜€
        sunday i wil go for xam so im wishing my cute dr frnd anu in advance # hapieee frnshp day dr ;-*
        ;-* # no worries abt comment they wil show up in nxt chapie…

      • Anu_M

        |Author

        Arey careless.. Where did dis come from.. You out of your schedule is spending so much time for me.. And you are saying careless.. I am angry.. IFS exam.. Civil service and all.. Oh… Same here I also don’t know anything about this exam.. Heheh you enjoy.. Mumma se bolo hume kala jaadoo aata hai.. I will do it on sir or madam, whoever.. You will rock the exams.. I have full trust on you.. College time for classes is late but everyday I reach college at 8:30 am .. Classes end at 5:00 pm but I go to library after that.. Library is open 24 hours other than on Friday night and saturday.. I have got an extra tuition.. One more..
        I was laughing literally u know but accha hua I Ma at group study room.. Happy friendship day to you too.. And seriously no worries about comment

  6. navi

    Hi anu…. hw ru??? Kids went yaar.. nd same pinch for prank.. so hw ws ur day?? And comin to dishes u did so much wow B-)
    Ok my question section starts…
    1. Wt flavour ice cream do u like???
    2. Do u like nature if s then tell me whether u like day or nite…
    3. Wt are places u wish to visit??
    4.hav u evr got betrayed by ur frnd???
    5. Wt is ur reaction when a person uses other for satisfying her needs and neglect her later.
    6. How wil u react when author uses commentor for her her purpose and asking about her stories and never talk with her other than that???
    7. Finally u can too ask me questions πŸ˜›

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Fine.. Feelin low abd freak.. You all will come to know the reason soon.. I have published an article.. ABCD DoNt touch me.. Crocodile pinch too.. lol.. 😝😝 I never realised that I made so much.. But it was much needed out of my all boring tight schedule..

      1, my favourite icecream flavour is chocolate, specially world class chocolate from br ..

      2.i like night.. Silent and cool.. Calm and quiet.. I am an admirer of nature.. My di loves photography.. She always used to click really good pics..

      3. Melbourne, Australia.. I wish to visit there..

      4. Yea, I had have a bad experience in friendship..

      5. Punch his or her face and destroy the work for which he destroyed the other persin’s life.. I seriously feel they should be treated the same way then only , they will know the pain

      6. umm.. This question I didn’t kinda get but with whatever I understood, I would say that, every person is different.. Some authors may only talk about the story and may consider other’s question of talks as an intrude in their life and same for the comment

      • navi

        Too much work in clge ah anu… tak rest… what hav u planned??? Dnt give me heart stroke??? Ok im eager to read ABCD nd i like to bite my frnd whn im hapie so puppy bite instead to crocodile pinch πŸ˜‰

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Fine.. Feelin low abd freak.. You all will come to know the reason soon.. I have published an article.. ABCD DoNt touch me.. Crocodile pinch too.. lol.. 😝😝 I never realised that I made so much.. But it was much needed out of my all boring tight schedule..

      1, my favourite icecream flavour is chocolate, specially world class chocolate from br ..

      2.i like night.. Silent and cool.. Calm and quiet.. I am an admirer of nature.. My di loves photography.. She always used to click really good pics..

      3. Melbourne, Australia.. I wish to visit there..

      4. Yea, I had have a bad experience in friendship..

      5. Punch his or her face and destroy the work for which he destroyed the other persin’s life.. I seriously feel they should be treated the same way then only , they will know the pain

      6. umm.. This question I didn’t kinda get but with whatever I understood, I would say that, every person is different.. Some authors may only talk about the story and may consider other’s question of talks as an intrude in their life and same for the commenters, don’t want to be confined only to formal chats and not much if fun, etc..

      7. I love you .. I’ll ask just one question.. It is said thAt a clap sounds only when both hands are joined.. I agree, I share a Special bond woth you.. Why did you Trust me?? In this virtual world where most are face whAt made you inclined to me..??

      • navi

        Hey anu os back im so hapiee to see ur msg… im laughing myself… ok thnk u for ur response…
        yup when two hands meet they clap… and in this virtual world i believe nd hav faith in u beciz u speak wt u feel nd i really like ur bond… where i feel wt ur telling is true…. even rumours contain half truth… so i knw u wil wont lie nd ur truthful nd the first moment i liked ur bonding is u asked ur readers can we chat and know abt eachother… there u stood anu… that moment i felt ur kind heart… and in simple word i wil say FAITH on u nd our friendship… i hav made para i think.. sorry wrote wt my mind told….

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        oh my cry babe… enough stop crying….. dhn i wil feel guilty… and i hav left another msg above look that too….
        gud mrng hav nice day……….. and i wont bite :p

      • Anu_M

        |Author

        Pls pls don’t feel guilty.. Stupid me and I am giving a 1000 watt wali smile.. You too have a nice day but I believe it is evening in India.. You left a message I’ll see.. I am sure I would have missed it if you didn’t tell

  7. navi

    Im laughing while seeing ur reply.. dont call urself as stupid… and anothet tution oh my poor child tc… and do u knw i hav poor netwrk in my place nd i ws seraching for ur name for 1/2 in anu modi name nd it gave no result i tried with caps, small, undrscore, later i hv ur stories as pdf dhn sw ur mane nd finally left u msg dr… and u spend tym in library suprb… and 1000 watts smile haheha… oki dr.. bye tc….

    • Anu_M

      |Author

      Da… That was bad.. Poor network still you were able to find me na.. Navi the detective.. Junior Holmes.. Yes, I spend my time in library.. I love silence.. They are the best companion.. And books are my Soulmates.. Though from a long time, I haven’t read any novel.. Buhbye.. Al the best for your exam.. Happy friendship day and tc

      • navi

        Im bck to torture u agn…. so sweet of u… nd love to hear u likes… nd my xam
        part 1 in mrng vry was difficult dr :'( part 2 not bad bit easy πŸ˜€
        €€€ hapie frndshp day ma dr anu β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
        Lov u loads… i knw u wil b hanging with novel or frnds… so tc…
        hey dr mee too wil tel buhbye to frnds….. bunny bite πŸ˜‰

      • Anu_M

        |Author

        Torture or pleasure.. Love u so very much..
        Difficult.. 😳😳 its ok yaar sometimes it happens.. We can only wish for the best..
        Good.. ☺️
        Nope couldn’t.. All my sweetest ever born idiots had collected at home and from 12 at night , they were making cake.. I thought I will take round and round of washroom after having it but fortunately saved..πŸ˜‚

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