Hey sweeties!!! This is Savanshi back to entertain u all…
Yes I know that I’m damn late but what to say I had my exams…
Feel a lil pity!!!
So as promised I’m back with the second and the final shot of



Jane wafa ho ke bekarar…
Barso kiya naine intazar…
Par kbhi tune nhi… ye tak kaha…
Jo Ab kaha….

These are the thoughts that are running in my mind right now.
I literally feel like I’m at cloud nine. My happiness knows no bound today coz finally my hunt has come to an end… or I should rather say a beautiful end. An end that gave me the most precious treasure of my life. I feel like dancing and singing like maniac. But I have to control right now coz many ppl are present here so it won’t put a good impression on them.

So thinking why this heartless creature is soo happy today???
Then let me describe u…
U wanna hear from beginning??
Ohkk… ohkk.. I’ll tell…

I’m same idiot whom u all consider a heartless.. merciless.. arrogant and what not…
But now let me disclose the secret of my madness…
Do U all remember once i said that I’m quite afraid of love relationship and all coz I’m incapable of bearing the pain of betrayal???

So my quest for a trustworthy guy is complete now…
Guessing hw?
Though it wasn’t that easy but yet it was not too tough also…

It was around 9’o’ clock in the morning as I was heading to my classroom when suddenly I bumped into someone… hey!!! Wait don’t expect anything romantic… we just bumped and that caused pain… let it be natural. A sorry was mumbled from both side. Then I headed to my class. I was like alwaz sitting all alone… just me and my books. What a relishing company!!!!
Isn’t it???
I made myself busy in myself. The day went away like this. But I didn’t knew that there was someone who was keenly observing all my actions and antics. Unaware of all this I made my way to hostel.

Next day was something worth remembering coz it was for the first time that I saw him… ahh!!! just a glance coz he asked me to share my seat with him… to which I unwillingly agreed. He introduced himself and I too responded. A few mere words were spoken by me… but he was a blabbering machine. I wondered how can someone speak soo much?
He was a 24×7 All India Radio. Haha!!! Nice Nick name na?
But this was damn true… he can talk non stop till infinity.. (this is what I suppose).
I just ignored some of his shitty questions while answered some. All in one that was a day when I  spoke quite more which I usually don’t do.The day went on like that.

Next day I reached my class only to find him seated on my bench. As I neared to my seat I lifted up my brow asking what is he doing there, to which he just patted to his side asking me to sit. I was about to open my mouth to counterpart his action but he just nodded me to sit. I gave up and sat and now asked him the reason of his crime. He just let out a sigh and showed me his book which was all messed up with only question marks??¿¿…
I was like WTH!!!

He then asked me to help him with studies as he had some confusion regarding some topics. I started clearing all his doubts… then I came to know that this FM RADIO is intelligent too. I was impressed. He had a very good learning power. He grasped each and everything easily. At last he was back into his mood. Oh God!!! What bad had I done that U are giving me this punishment????
He continued his blabber which I was now enjoying. Although I maintained a stern look outside but from within I was feeling to laugh out loudly at his funny show. And there he did it… he made such a cute and funny face at one instant that my resistance broke. I was laughing out damn loudly. Huh!!!! I came at hault when I found all the neighbouring eyes staring me. I was embarrassed. I just bowed my head and continued my studies. But again I let out a inaudible cry as he pinched me. Now I gave him a glare asking for a reason of his action. He asked whether I’m fine? He touched my forehead asking,”Are u sick?”
I just gave him a questioning look.

He finally said that he thought that it can’t be me as I was laughing. I just glared him to make him shut his mouth but he was he… how can he shut up his 24 hr service???
He then complemented that I was looking cute while laughing. I just ignored it. We sat there all through the class. During our break he asked me to accompany him to canteen. I said that I can’t but who can say no to him. He continued insisting me and I gave up. Now I was walking up to canteen with him. We sat there; he asked me what would I like to have?
I denied his request which later made me only to regret my decision. He started his melo drama.. he was literally acting like sobbing and was telling every passerby that my friend doesn’t trust me… she thinks that I’ll make her eat poison… U ppl only tell; why will I do such cheap things to my best friend??
I was staring him with a wide open mouth. I glared him which was futile as he didn’t paid  any attention to it and continued his drama. I ended up asking him to bring whatever he want. He immediately left from there winking.
Oh Gosh!!!! What did his mother eat during her pregnancy?
“Vada pav” ,he said; as he sat with the food tray.

I gave him a look asking what?
He replied: “My mom ate Vada Pav during pregnancy.”
I was again left open mouthed, to which he just chuckled bringing me back to this world.
I mumbled,”How he knew what I was thinking?”
“I know u very well sweetheart”, came the reply.
I just shrugged my shoulders and looked at the tray.
I was just overjoyed.. he brought my fav ice- cream. OMG!!! I was missing it from many days. I just felt like kissing this boy out of my excitement;after all he fulfilled my most awaited wish.
“Hey dear, u can kiss me later; right now let’s focus on this tempting delicacies”,he retorted again.
” I wasn’t gonna kiss u and stop calling me names”, I muttered.
We looked at each other, our lips curved into a smirk and we together attacked the ice-cream bowl.
After having a good fight for dominancy over ice-cream, we finished it and again left for our classes but I didn’t forgrt to mutter a hearty thanks to him.
He just smiled at it and walked towards class leaving a confused me behind.

Days kept on passing and he paced up with time to irritate me more. But now that didn’t seemed irritating to me anymore. I have literally started enjoying his company.
I was sitting in my class looking at him; who was busy in talking to one of his friend.
Suddenly it struck me.

“Why the hell!!! am I thinking about him?”
“Simply because you have started falling for him”, replied my heart.
“But u can’t let anyone break your walls”, it was my mind this time.
“But how long are you going to engross urself in this fear?”, my heart questioned.
“U know na u won’t b able to bear a betrayal later”, my mind debated.
“Do u think he can betray u?”,my heart retorted.
“Is there any guaranty that he won’t do it?”, my mind protested.
“Ask urself.. I hope u won’t regret giving him a chance coz deep inside u also want the same”,my heart adviced.

“Hey!!! Where r u?”, someone shook me up from my thoughts.
It was him. I stared at him. He waved his hand in front of me making me land back from my imaginations.
I said,”nothing”.
He asked whether I’m fine. I just nodded.He let out his hand and asked me to accompany him. I held his hand and said let’s go. He was looking at me as if he saw a ghost. I shook him asking where are u lost. He just sighed and dragged me to his car.

“Where are we going?”, I asked him. He said he wants to propose his lady love so he wants me to accompany him.
I felt an immense pain. It was just like as if someone took away my most precious possession.
I had to be strong. I agreed coz I knew he won’t let me go without helping him. I silently sat in his car. The whole way he didn’t crack any of his silly jokes and I was really thankful to him for this coz I just didn’t wanted to meet my eyes with him otherwise the barrage that were holding my feelings would break any moment.
I just closed my eyes and arched my body comfortably on the seat.
Suddenly the car came to halt with a jerk.I opened my eyes only to find myself in an unknown place which Off course didn’t resembeled a Shopping complex.

I gave him a confused look but the thing that caught my attention were those shiny black orbs which now shone with some new glow. I was busy analysing what could be the cause of that sudden glow when he jerked me bringing me back to reality.
I was about to open my mouth when he swiftly opened the car’s door and came towards my side. He opened the door for me and lend his hand.
I looked at his hand; then him and again his hand just to understand what was going on.
But u know I’m very bad at guessing it’s even worst than maths. Huh!!! Idiotic me; in these serious situation also my mind is poking up such nuisance.
He took my hand and pulled me out of the car. But since I wasn’t ready for such an action; I landed up banging to his hard masculine chest.

Oh God!!! Why are u making it hard? His cologne drives me crazy. I shook up my head from left to right breathing heavily at such close proximity. We both muttered sorry at the same time.
He took hold of me and lightly dragged me to the centre of place which was flocked with many people. Suddenly we came in focus and I felt many gaze on me. That felt quite embarrassing. I turned to look at him; only to find him sitting on his knees. I was speechless. I was looking at him with a shocked expression.

He chuckled a little and looked straight into my eyes. I was lost; and yes I literally mean it. I was brought back when he cleared his throat.

He started speaking,”Look sweetheart I know U must b thinking that what this FM RADIO is gonna blabber now.. but plz JAAN listen to me this time and I hope after u listen me now then u’ll have ur whole life to speak…

So yaa I’ll start from the beginning; I know I’m a maniac.. 24-hr bak-bak machine… idiot.. irritating.. but the truth is that I’m that only for u MY LOVE…
U know the first day I saw u.. the day when we bumped each other… it was there only I lost my precious treasure to My Precious Treasure!!!!
I lost my heart.. my mind.. my soul… in fact my everything to u..
I myself don’t know why that happened but I’m grateful to GOD that it happened.
All through our sweet journey I kept irritating u bcz I like the smile on ur lips and I love it when it comes coz of me.

I know MILADY that u are very afraid of betrayal and U don’t want anyone to enter ur heart…Opppss!!! It’s mine now…
But u also know na that this handsome… ohkk.. ohkk.. irritating guy..can’t do it in his worst nightmare. So Dear will u for once and lifetime believe this FM-RADIO of ur’s.

Will u like to enjoy all the shows of this PERSONAL FM- RADIO of ur’s?
Will u like to get irritated by this handsome hunk?
Will u like to break all those walls which are now nearly torn apart carving for some love?
Will u give me the pleasure to hold ur hand forever?
Will u like to give me the chance to make ur life colourful by my presence?
Will u like to love me?

I was flabbergasted at his sudden outpour. I was looking at him without blinking my eyes. I was literally shock at the intensity of his love.
How can he love me soo much?

He pouted a lil and urged me to answer. I looked at him.
He said: “Princess my knees are hurting badly”.
Suddenly I heard the crowd shouting and asking me to say yes.
I looked all around merrily and then looked back to my cute baby who was looking damn adorable in this pout look.

Tears made way from my eyes and I shouted
“Yes!!! My baby I would love to…”

He stood up immediately and took me into a bone crushing hug and twirled me. We rejoiced the blissful moment

mongst the whistling and clapping sound of the crowd.
We released the hug although we weren’t willing to do so.
Soon we waved to the crowd shouting Thanks and made our way to car.


I was still not able to believe what just happened. I was thinking; Is it a dream?
He pinched me and  answered;”No babe… it is real”.
I just looked at him amused. And within no time I sat on his lap and kissed him hardly.
I started kissing him softly till the time he reciprocates. Finally he was out of this sudden shock and reciprocated back. We sat there in our car’s seat intertwined to each other tasting the ecstasy of love.

Love… immense love that we have for each other. We were drowning into the bentic zone of love;where there were only we. No one else.. just us… our love. We were lost in one another; forgetting the flattering world. This was a moment of  utter satisfaction.
A person whom u love and who loves u back with much more intensity; is in ur embrace.. isn’t it a heavenly feeling?

We broke up for a moment and exclaimed… LOVE U BABY!!!

Sorry for the typing errors!!!!
Now plz flood up the updates with ur comment… a sweet one one word to long cute one… all will be heartily welcomed…
But plz let me know ur views…

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  1. Simin

    It feels soooo good to read this beautiful thought

    1. Savanshi27

      ThNk u soo much Simin… glad u liked it..

  2. Sana27

    Awesome episode..Loved it..:)

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u soo much dear… seems I have a new reader…

      1. Sana27

        Yes dear…

  3. loved it

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u soo much priyanka…

  4. Scooby

    Plz give me previous epi links… i need to complete thn b4 reading this…

    1. Savanshi27

      Hey Navi dear… U have already read it… actually this was planned to b an OS but I divided it into two part… the first part was an outlay…
      U forgot me soo easily???
      huh!!! I’m mad at u now???

      1. Scooby

        Noooo….plz dnt b mad on me…. thnk god u atleast provoke my brain to dust them who are lying rusty. Sorrry………..
        it was fabulous idea… both were cute and their talks and fights wr lovely… loved and being loved this line ws awesome. Thnk u for wonderful part dr. Pardon me puppy; cute kitten face..

      2. Savanshi27

        Navi this I the last time that u r pardoned.. U know I can’t resist that cute puppy face.. but never repeat this again… I’ll myself kill u???
        now my good girl thank u sooo much for ur praising… seems like all the butter in ur home vanished?????

  5. Vyshu10


    1. Savanshi27

      Thanks Vyshu!!! Was expecting a huge one from u but never mind… this is also heartily welcomed☺☺☺

      1. Vyshu10

        I didn’t know that my comments are in demand?? Anyways i forgot to mention…i loved d proposal.
        And its true…. sometimes girls build walls to protect their hearts. As a girl, i can relate to that

      2. Savanshi27

        Off course dear.. it’s alwaz a pleasure to get comments from frnds like u!!!!??
        so yes definitely ur comment is in demand… at least for me it is☺☺☺☺

  6. awww
    soo cute story dr!
    i lv it soo much!
    its rly sweet lv story!
    when sanskar propose her na! i ws jst awwww! *slip in 2 coma*
    i fall 4 him once again!
    i lv dis swara and her fm radio!

    keep writing dr
    be happy always!
    🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Savanshi27

      OMG!!!!thank u soo much dear… I’m blessed that u liked my story… now let me pour a bucket full of cold water on u….
      hey bhagwan!!!! My dear chanu slipped in coma…. plz some one bring some icy cold water to splash on her….??????
      have u gained ur comconsciousness Chanu???
      Or still some treatment needed???

  7. Arshaanya

    Omg savanshi i jus loved it ?
    Aaaawww it was so cute lovely sweet beautiful adorable story ???

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u soo much swthrt…. i missed these eyes soo badly… and thanks a lot for ur appreciation

  8. Shinchan1205

    The proposal was soooo sweet whole story was sweet but I loved the “precious treasure”part….

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u sooo much dear… I’m glad that u liked it….☺☺☺

  9. loved it..tc..

    1. Savanshi27

      Thanks a lot dear

  10. Rabia

    Awseomeee concept dear and awesome proposall ??? keeep it up ????

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u very much dear… I’m blessed that u liked that?????

  11. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Superrrr.. Loved it up.. Every scenes are perfectly described.. Keep writing like this dear..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. Savanshi27

      Hey Uma!!! Do u realise how late u r???
      I was waiting for ur comment dear???
      but finally glad that u liked it☺☺☺

      1. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        Choly??.. What to do I am latelatif in comment??

      2. Savanshi27

        Chalo I forgive u for last tym…
        next tym if u r found doing such crimes then u will b severely punished????

  12. It’s awesome..

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u soo much dear!!!
      R u New on TU????

  13. Shivika22kapoor

    Hi ? Cinderella SURPRISED to see me here actually I was just checking out with some updates when I saw your name in the comments section so thought of messaging you and not giving you another chance to ask That whether I missed you or not’????.
    Well jokes apart I didn’t know that you write an ff but now when I know I would love to read it so can you just send me the link.
    How are you dear ??
    What’s up?
    And yes definitely I missed you sweetheart ? ? ? ?.
    Now I will take your leave hope to see you soon ?.
    Bye ? bye ?
    Take care ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

    1. Savanshi27

      Ohhhooo!!!! I tooo missed u… it was just that I was busy Wid my xams….
      but yaa I didn’t missed any of ur updates dear… but I wasn’t able to comment….
      I’m literally surprised to se u here?????
      well glad that u liked ur Cindrella’s work… ??????
      and thank u sooooooooo much….
      never forgetting to mention that ur Cindrella too missed u??????

      1. Savanshi27

        u can view my one shots collection on this site and there r few other one shots that I have written and dear I don’t write ff coz I’m not at all punctual therefore it’s better to write os than getting flying chappals… tomatoes and all….
        At last… where is ur update????
        I know I said that u r punctual but tHat doesn’t means ki u will stop giving us regular updates….
        now if u need my big comment… update asap…☺☺☺☺☺
        kuch jyada hi likh diya??????????????

  14. it was amazing
    u write so beautifully

    1. Savanshi27

      I’m literally thankful for ur praise dear!!!!

  15. Beautiful

    1. Savanshi27

      Thank u dear!!!

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