Swasan Silent Love Story – OS

Hi, umm this is my first ff, I hope it’s good and you all like it.. Pardon me for the mistakes and this is based on third person’s
p.o.v

Sanskar Maheshwari is a 23yr old man who is our Hero, he is brother of Laksh
Swara Gadodia is a 20yr old middle class girl, Heroine, Ragini’s younger sister, Laksh’s bestie and she loves her family more than her own self
Laksh Maheshwari is a 20yr old play boy who is Sankar’s brother and Swara’s bestie
Ragini Gadodia is 23yr old, who reads Swara easily

A girl is shown wearing long light pink skirt with striped black and white long sleeved t-shirt in open hair, she looks simply beautiful. And a boy beside her in casuals is arguing with her.
Girl: Laksh, I can’t do it
(The boy is of course our handsome Laksh)
Laksh: Swara, if you’re my bestie, trust me and do it
(The girl is our beautiful and simple heroine Swara)
Swara: listen Lucky, I’m scared, and I’m not doing it ever, please try and understand
Laksh: (now really annoyed) Swara, you are loving my bro for more than 3 yrs and you are afraid just to send a ‘’Hi’’ through phone, you are silly. I’m asking you to send a ‘’Hi’’ so that you can be friends, for how many days, no years are you going to love him silently?
Swara: (feeling exhausted and defeated) Ok, fine, just for your words, I’ll try my level best and send a ‘’Hi”, if anything goes wrong, I swear I’ll kill you and it’s time for me to go home so bye
Laksh: (smiling, feeling happy) Wow, that’s great, you’re not just trying, YOU ARE sending a ‘’Hi’’ for sure, bye, see you tomorrow
Ending this argument Laksh left and Swara was too leaving for home.

At Swara’s place
As soon as Swara reached home, she freshened up, had her dinner, helped Ragini in chores and finally went to her room. She thought for herself ‘’Ok Swara, it’s just a Hi; a try is still worth, 1.youll become friends or 2. He’ll ignore you. Simple, send a Hi’’ She took her phone, opened watsapp and saw his profile picture,
Swara to herself: Oh God!! Why should he be so damn handsome to make me feel dizzy, ok now send a ‘’Hi’’
She opened Sanskar’s chat, it was empty (as they never spoke to each other), she typed a ‘’Hi’’ and was about to send but got nervous and somehow she managed to hope and have faith in God and she sent it. (Sanskar was online) Swara was hell nervous and scared, she felt like she could faint any minute now, as she was looking at the screen and hoping for something rather than nothing, there was a reply: ‘’Hi, may I know who is this?’’, Swara was so happy but stood like a frozen statue (she never express her happiness outwards like most of the people), she soon came to reality when she saw another message from Sanskar: ‘’..?’’, Swara’s fear vanished quickly and she sent ‘’I am Swara’’ without thinking, she immediately regretted it, but there was a reply again: ‘’oh, Lucky’s bestie, so anything important’’ Swara hesitantly and nervously typed ‘’Yea, nothing important, just wanna be friends if that’s ok with you’’ she was wondering whether to send or not, she somehow sent it without realizing again and soon hit her head by the phone slightly while biting her lower lip (she does that when she’s nervous), there was a reply,
Sanskar: ‘’hmm’’
Swara: ‘’Is that a yes or ..?’’
Sanskar: ‘’ A yes”
And they started texting each other, became friends soon. As days passed by, they grew more closer friends.

Finally one day,
Sanskar: ‘’Swara, wanna say you something’’
Swara: ‘’Sure, what’s it’’
Sanskar: ‘’Umm, actually, my parents are planning to marry me to a girl I love, a girl whom I love since 15yrs old, I know it’s funny but I just wanna share this with you’’
Swara was hell shocked, teary eyed and completely shattered but she managed to send ‘’Oh, well, that’s a good news, I’ve some work left to do so bye, text you later’’ she ended the conversation and cried until she dozed off to sleep, silent tears were flowing from her closed eyes even when she was asleep. It’s been almost a week now, Swara hasn’t spoke much lately to anyone and mostly she avoided Sanskar, she locked herself in her room and all she did was cry, she was so broken more than anyone could imagine.
Right now, Swara heard a knock on her door and it was
Ragini pleading: Swara, please open the door, Swara I’m begging you.
Ragini was practically crying. Swara felt bad to make her beloved sister cry and she opened the door, as soon as Ragini saw Swara she went almost numb, and suddenly pulled Swara into a comfortable warm hug.
Ragini: Swara, what have you done to yourself, you look weak, and lifeless, Swara what’s happening?
Swara: Di, it’s nothing, just a friendship breakup with Riya, a new friend, you know friendship breakups hurts
Swara lied while silent tears escaped her eyes.
Ragini: Swara, I know you are lying, you are really bad at lying, but it’s okay, just hope and have faith in God, whatever it is making my cute little sister cry will be aright eventually, I promise
Suddenly Ragini broke the hug, and smiled at Swara, while Swara was confused
Ragini: I’ve got happy news for you, you’ve got marriage proposal from the love of your life (Ragini knows about Swara’s silent love towards Sanskar)
Swara shocked and confused: Di, stop kidding!
Seeing Ragini’s face: what are you saying, it can’t be possible, no ways
Few days passed and Swasan’s marriage got fixed but Swara was upset, she didn’t want to marry Sanskar as she knows she’ll ruin his happiness because Sanskar already loves a girl, she agreed for marriage as she can’t destroy the happiness her family felt.
Few days before marriage
Maheshwari’s has invited the Gadodias for dinner. Swara, Sanskar, Laksh, Ragini along with all the youngsters are having dinner separately. Laksh was cracking jokes, everyone was laughing and eating, except Swara, she looked down at her plate, not showing her face to anyone, and drawing patterns on her plate by fork but not eating or laughing, she was sad and teary eyed thinking about something, a tear slipped her eye to her right hand, Swara still looking down, excused herself and went away to balcony, she was silently crying in the balcony (the balcony is out of everyone’s sight) suddenly while crying, she felt a hand on her shoulder, she soon wiped her tears and turned, she was shocked, scared and trembling for no reasons
Swara stammering: Sanskar?
Sanskar: Are you okay?
Swara put on a fake smile: Yea, I’m okay, whatsupp?

Sanskar pulling Swara into a hug by her waist and shocking her more: I know you’re not okay, stop hiding from me, why are you upset? And moreover why are you avoiding me? What happened?
Swara hearing this burst into tears and was crying (not loudly)
Swara: I’m sorry, I’m really sorry, this shouldn’t happen, we’re getting married very soon when you love a girl from a long time, because of me you can’t live with the girl you love, but trust me, I want your happiness, I agreed for this marriage for my family sake but I never want to ruin your life, I’m such a mean person
Swara was saying all these while crying, Sanskar hugged her tighter hearing this and comforted her: ssh, everything’s alright, you are not mean, everything’s okay
Now Sanskar broke the hug and cupped her face, wiped her tears,made her look at him
Sanskar: Swara, I love you
Swara was shocked like nothing and said sarcastically: Don’t lie; I know you love her since a long time, you yourself told.
Sanskar: and say me who’s that girl
Swara was out of words as she never asked him the girl’s name, she stayed silent
Sanskar: Dumbo, I’ve loved you since long time not any other girl, it’s you idiot, you are the girl I love, my girl
Saying this he hugged her again and was caressing her hair, Swara stood numb and frozen,
Swara: No, it can’t be, you are lying, you don’t like me and I know it, you don’t have to lie because I accept the truth.
Sanskar: My dumbo, I’ve loved you from the very first time you came here with lucky to study, I’ve loved you every second from then, you never know that I’ve had and I still love you, one and only you, I swear I love you Swara, now please don’t cry and be upset, I hate it

Saying this he broke the hug and kissed her forehead, Swara was looking straight into his eyes and can see the truth in his eyes, so this time she believed him. After a while,
Swara: I like you too
Sanskar: Whaat? You don’t love me, you just only like me?
Swara smiling: If I love someone or something a lot more than my own self, I say I like it.
Sanskar: I know Meri Jaan, I was just teasing
Swara: First dumbo, then idiot, then my girl and now Meri Jaan. Hooo!!
Sanskar just pulled her by waist and hugged her, Swara hugged him back, and both were happy and feeling comfortable, feeling home in each other’s arms. After a few days they got married and lived Happily Ever After..
Hey, I know this is not good, I never write stories, I only read them but I love to write, so just gave it a try, a try is still worth, please please please, comment something, anything, good or bad, it’s ok, I just want to know how it is, so please comment, and finally sorry for wasting your time by this so not good story..
Bye, Luv u all, Tc

108 comments

  1. Sri varsha

    Though it is a small one.. It is nice.. I really liked it ?.And yes continue writing bcz it improves your skill.The storyline was good but it would have been very nice if u can make the story longer as per my opinion. We would really love to read it. And yes come up with more stories bcz I feel that you have good taste and ideas. All the best ?

  2. Manolove

    |Registered Member

    Really nice no one can say bad…u did justice to Ur story.. On the first day itself no one can be Shakespeare… It was a good try…

    Best wishes waiting for more on the way friend….

  3. pari

    vw yaar..it ws simple nd awsm…sooo cute stry…..lvd it very much….plz write more os….

  4. Vaikha

    |Registered Member

    Ohooo.. That was sooo cute.. I wished if it lasted for long… But need to say u had done an amazing job.. Loved it..

  5. me

    ur os was really nice. it was something different. plus do write more waiting for some more os by u.

  6. laila

    i really like that “hooo” really addicting word. about the os it was really nice and sweet.loved it

  7. Ameera

    OMG this was cute awesome fantastic fabulous amazing and nice. it was so nice. u shud write more. waiting for more loads of love and hugs to u. love u

      • Ameera

        hey it was a really awesome os. short and sweet but not that short really but i really loved it the story line was good and it was really good.
        i know u are not much of story writer but a very good song writer and i wanna say that keep writing new stories, i know u have so many ideas, u shud really write them and post them.
        dont decide the story is not good by yourself but show it to others and ask their views.
        see u said this story was not that good but see the comments uve got?
        anyways wanna say it was good and hope and wish u write more.
        plus loads and loads of hugs to u and love u alot. keep smiling. AND keep reading my ff! love u 😉 🙂 😛

      • Ameera

        hey it was a really awesome os. short and sweet but not that short really but i really loved it the story line was good and it was really good.
        i know u are not much of story writer but a very good song writer and i wanna say that keep writing new stories, i know u have so many ideas, u shud really write them and post them.
        dont decide the story is not good by yourself but show it to others and ask their views.
        see u said this story was not that good but see the comments uve got?
        anyways wanna say it was good and hope and wish u write more.
        plus loads and loads of hugs to u and love u alot. keep smiling. AND keep reading my ff! love u 😉 🙂 :-P:-D<3<3<3
        i know its a long comment but DO READ IT.

      • Ameera

        and u write better stories than me:-/:-[ any ways leave it.
        😉 🙂 :-P:-D<3<3<3
        i know its a long comment but DO READ IT.

      • Isabel

        |Author

        crazy you, I’m dying 🙁 here to read ur ff, but u write way lot more good than me, write an os and post it, lets see who is good, it’s definitely u, i am really happy you liked it, post ur ff asap, keep smiling u too 🙂

  8. divyani

    hey isabel who said its not gud its awesome and really i agree with laila the word hoo is really addicting, i am also going to use it if u dont.mind but wer did u get it?
    anyways the os was not too short but it was short and it was really cute and loved the last part and ur os was u know like somewhat different.
    the story line was also good and u shud try writing more stories.
    sorry for the long comment haope u take time to read it.

    • Isabel

      |Author

      Hooo is of course an addicting word, one of my friend used to use that word and i like it, so i added it to this os, thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it and of course i would read yours or anyone’s comment, no matter its long or short, I’m sorry for a long reply

  9. Beba

    its amzing dear….. a story that left a smile on ur face……. make u believe in happy ending.. 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Isabel

      |Author

      Oh thank you, thank you, thank you so much, I’m so happy that you commented, I’m at cloud nine.. Miss u soo soooo much, pls try and let’s meet.. Keep smiling.. 🙂

  10. Nisha_Anu

    |Registered Member

    Owie! So cute ??
    At first I thought it was going to be a sad one. ? ? ?
    But after reading this I couldn’t help but smile like an idiot.
    Swasan ❤❤❤
    And your writing❤❤❤
    My sister is so talented. ???
    Write another one soon. Sorry for reading this late. I didnt visit the ff page since eternity. I would’ve surely missed it had it not been your PM. Chaloo!! Bye!! I’ve to study bio ??

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