swasan – my savior (Episode 1)

Thank you all for the comments. I am very happy that once I used to see your comments on others ff and now I am seeing them in my ff . Friends please bear this short update for today I will give a big one tomorrow. And please also bear my grammatical errors .( you all have to bear many things for this little friend please…)

His point of view

Such a great day. The atmosphere is soo cool ! I wonder whose face I saw today ? Today I feel like to go for jogging. What is happening me and jogging ?? Never mind today I will go to gangaa ghat .I didn’t went there for 5 months. Gangaa ma will Be very angry with me . PAR ME UNHE MANA HI LUNGA AKHER SANSAR SE KOYI KESE NARAJ HO SAKTA HAI !
He went outside the apartment and saw some kids were playing . He said ” hey bacha party what you all are doing here

Kids ” bhaiya we came here for playing and we can’t cross the road
Sanskar : bass ? Itni si baat par mu to ase pulaya hai ki jese mere dulhan bhag gayi!
Kids : where are you going to bring your dulhan ?
Sanskar : Bandar ! Go now there is the orphanage and tell mother I will meet in evening.
Kids : bye

Sanskar reaches Ganga ghat and feels something . He thinks why Ganga maiya is calling me today ?
Suddenly he sees a girl in red salwar suit is going to jump in gangaa
Sanskar : No please naya pant liya hai bhig jaye ga
The girl jumps
Sanskar says “stupid ” and jumps in the river .
Without knowing that his life’s most important part had started in the Ganga ghat.

Guys please please please please please comment those are really precious for me .
And please suggest me two characters

Girl’s brother –
Priest –

Credit to: sinin

16 comments

  1. Rosey

    It’s amazing plz write a little longer
    N for priest I can suggest chirag from meri aashquie tumse hi

  2. vyshu

    nice…..plz try to write longer chapters. For characters: girl’s bro-aadarsh from serial, priest- anyone will be fine

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