swasan…..a saga of love chapter 6

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Recap
Sanlak save swara…sanskar noticed swara’s cuteness…ragini hugs laksh…

Chap
Swara is being pampered by ap
Ap: swara…beta if anyone threatened u…
Swara: aunty actually i got a call.. Bt i did not pay attention…
Sanskar: can i have the no…
Swara gives him the no…
Sanskar: dont wry…n m sry… Because of saving me u fell in trouble…
Swara: plz dont be sry…
Sanskar goes from there…Ragini stops him in between…
Sanskar: yes miss ragini
Ragini: thanku so much sir..fr saving her…
Sanskar smiles…
Sanskar: u r still a kid…dont wry…ur di ll be fine…
Sanskar goes out in his car…ragini sees him…she turns around… She seea laksh staring at her….
Ragini: mr.Maheshwari… U need something..
Laksh: a favour
Ragini : ya…tell me
Laksh: can u cl me by my name..laksh
Ragini laughs…
Ragini: but on one condition
Laksh: what..
Ragini: u ll also cl me by my name…
Laksh: ok….ragini…
Ragini: thx laksh…..

Swara is sleeping in her room…its night….ragini comes and sits besides her….she holds her hand…swara opens her eyes…
Ragini: di.u r still awake…
Swara: yes…but ragini… Is there something that u r hiding… Ur eyes are saying something..
Ragini: di…i just dont know…but…
Swara: but what…
Ragini: di…how is laksh in your view…
Swara: he s such a nice guy…but y…
Ragini: di…i suppose… M in love with him…
Swara gets glad…..she hugs ragini…
Swara: n what about him…i think that he has fallen in love with u too…
Ragini: i dont know….
Swara: ask him….
Ragini: but how…
Swara makes a plan….

Next morning..
Ragini: di…m i looking good…plz tell me…
Swara sees Rag… She s wearing a pink anarkali suit with white dupatta… Her hair are open…
Swara: u are looking fabulous…
Ragini: di i ve called laksh to meet me in cafe…he ll come na…
Swara: of course….

@ cafe…
Laksh is sitting nervously…
Laksh (himself) laksh…fr what thing ragini has called u…plz god…not for tying rakhi..i ll die…plz god help me…
He turns around Nd is mesmerised to see ragini….
Laksh: u here…i mean..
Ragini: ya…wo i wanted to talk to u on an imp matter.. Plz sit…
They both sit…laksh orders two coffee…
Ragini: laksh… Actually…
Laksh: actually.. What…
Ragini: i dont know how to say…
Laksh: plz… Tell me fast…i ve to go to waShroom…
Ragini: what….
Laksh: plz….
He runs to waShroom…. Ragini looks at him confused…
He comes back to her….ragini is angry at him…
Ragini: i dont want to say anything…. M getting late fr school…
Laksh: ok…i ll drop u…
Ragini is frustrated.. But still she is able to hide…
They both sit in car…laksh is not talking to her…ragini think.. What does he think of himself… Huunh…i ve come to propose him and he……. Go to hell
Ragini: stop the car…
Laksh: what..
Ragini: stop the car now..
Laksh stops the car…
Laksh: what happened…
Ragini: u r such a feeling less person…u r very bad…
Laksh: what happened…
Ragini: quite..just be quite…i came here to propose u and u…u wanted to go to waShroom…
Laksh: propose…whom…

Ragini: yez mr.laksh maheshwari… I love u…n i love u so much…but u dont have time to listennn…so m going…bye….
She steps out of the car…and starts walking in opposite direction… Laksh is shocked.. He thinks he s in dreams… He thinks… Laksh why are u daydreaming… He pinches himself… He comes to senses…
Laksh: ragini loves me…yes….she love me…i love u too….
He runs to her….
Ragini is walking on the road….
Ragini: what doea he thinks of him…i ll never see his face…..
Suddenly someone lifts her in his arms….she closes her eyes with fear…she opens her eyes…she see herself in lalaksh’s arms…he s staring at her sweetly….
Ragini: whats all this…leave me…
Laksh laughs… He again stares at her….he takes her to car…..
Ragini: laksh… Leave me..let me go…
Laksh: do u think i m a stupid..
Ragini: no..why..

Laksh: then how can i let u go…i ll never let u go ragini…
Ragini looks at him…she blushes… Laksh is at cloud 9…
Ragini: means…u..
Laksh: i love you too ragini….
Ragini is glad….she hugs laksh…. Laksh too hugs her back….they both are lost in each other….

@ hospital…
Swara is checking sanskar…
Swara : now u r completely fine..just take those multivitamin tablets fr one more week…
Sanskar: thx a lot doctor…
Swara: hmmm…
Sanskar: so those goons did not called u again…
Swara: no not yet…
Suddenly her cellphone again rings…she sees ragini calling…
Swara :yes ragini… What…congratulations… SO happy fr u…m busy right now…cl u later…
She cancels the call…
Sanskar cell rings…its from laksh…
Sanskar: ya lucky…congratulations… I ll meet u..treat…
He cancels the call..
Swara: so..
Sanskar: so….
Swara: my sis and ur brother…

Sanskar: my brother and ur sis…..congratulations….
Swara laughs…
Sanskar: so finally we are going to be relativeS…
Swara: plz talk to aunty…n get them married as soon as possible…
Sanskar: ya..sure…i must say u should start the prep…
Swara: i miss my parents at the moment…
Sanskar: dont be sad plz..
Swara smiles…
@ night…
Swara is going home by her scooty… Suddenly it breaks…
Swara: oh god…plz..how can i return…
A car stops near to her…sanskar comes out frm the car…
Sanskar: what happened any prb…
Swara: yea yeah..my scooty… It broke down..
Sanskar orders his driver to take the scooty to garage…
Swara: thx…
Sanskar: come with me..i ll drop u..
Swara complies…. She sits there…after sometimes his car too stops…
Swara: i think that my luck is bad…
Sanskar: no…actually i just dont know…how this…i ll inform driver he ll take it to garage..ur home is At just a little distance from here…we can go…
They start walking…. Suddenly rainfall starts…
Swara: wow rain….

Sanskar: do u like rain…
Swara: yes…i love rain…dont u…
A flashback starts in sanskar’s mind…
A female voice…Oh god..rains…i love it…come sanskar… Get drenched in rain together…..
Swara: where have u lost…
Sanskar comes back to reality… He looks at her..
Sanskar: nothing… Lets go…
Sanskar is remembering old moments… Tears start escaping from his eyes….because its raining noone can identify that he s crying… But he was wrong…
Swara: mr.Maheshwari… U r crying…
Sanskar : no…who told u..
Swara : i can see…u r crying….
Sanskar: doctor swara.. Its raining…
Swara: ya..but the rain from one’s eyea are different… If u want u can share it…with me…
Sanskar: how can u..how can u saw..which nobody ever noticed…
Swara: may b god wants this…
Sanskar looks on…storm is coming…
Swara : oh god storm…u ve still not recovered… Its not good fr u…
She sees sanskar who is getting dizzy…swara holds her hands…anyhow she drags him to her house…they both are drenched in rain….sanskar is half unconscious…. Swara rings the doorbell… Ragini opens…
Ragini: mr.Maheshwari… What happened to him
Swara: i ll tell u…
laksh too comes from back…

Laksh: bhai… What happened…
Swara makes ssanskar lie down on bed…laksh removes his shoes…
Swara: laksh… U here…
Ragini: he came to drop me..but storm started… And he s not able to go…
Swara: its good…stay here untill storm subsides….will u please help me…his clothes arw very wet…plz adjust a pair of clothes…
Laksh: oh…bhai ‘ s beg..it always contains extra pair of clothes… I ll change his clothes…
Swara: till then…i ve some injections at fridge..i just get those…
Swara goes… Laksh changes sanskar’s clothes…swara comes back…
Swara: he has high fever….at this time…this much of high fever…
Laksh: he ll be fine na…
Swara: ya..he ll be..so dont take tension… Swara gives him injecttion ..
Swara: ragini.. Laksh. U both take rest… M here…laksh u ll be tired…dont worry about himm…he s fine..had ur dinner…
Ragini: i ll make dinner… U sit with sanskar..
Swara: ok…Laksh u too get fresh… Ur bro ll be conscious within an hour…
Laksh complies…he goes….swara is staring at sanskar…
Swara: he seems to be strong..but what made him cry…
Suddenly sanskar hand start movement… He is muttering something… No…kavita…dont leave me…dont…i love u..dont leave…he suddenly hugs swara tightly… Swara is shocked…. Sanskar gets conscious…. He sees himself hugging swara…he breaks the hug…
Sanskar: sorry…
Swara: its ok…r u fine..

Sanskar: yes…m fine… What has happened to me..
Swara: u were unconscious… I brought u here…n treated u…and u were muttering something… And u hugged me..
Sanskar: oh…m so sry…
Swara: its ok..
Ragini too enters..
Ragini: so u r fine… Dinner is ready…
Swara: we are coming…
RaginI goes…
Sanskar: who changed my clothes…
Swara: dont wry mr maheshwari…. I ve not seen anything…. It was ur bro…
Sanskar: lucky… What is he doing here…
Swara: dont u think u ve a bad habbit…
Sanskar: oh…what
Swara: u ask too many questions…
Sanskar: oh…m sry..
Swara: u ve another….
Sanskar: oh…what was that…
Swara: u accept others advice very early…
Sanskar looks at her…
Swar: u wait…i ll bring ur dinner here…
Sanskar: no i ll join u in dining hall…
Swara: mr.Maheshwari i ve a plan…why shouldn’t we let the love birds spend time together… I mean r u feeling hungry right now…

Sanskar: no…
Swara: me too…should we let raglak dine together…
Sanskar: sure…
Swara : m coming in a while…
@ kitchen….
Ragini is cooking food…she is making chapattis…. Suddenly laksh hugs her from behind….
Ragini: u here…
Laksh: yea….do u have any prb…
Swara: i ve…
Ragini and laksh turn around and see swara….They get embarrassed…
Ragini: di u here…
Swara: i came here to tell u that mr sanskar is not feeling hungry nn me too…so u can continue ur romance on dining table…..
She goes from there….raglak laugh….they hug each other…
They both sit on dining table… They dine together….
Laksh: so my would be wife is a good cook…
Ragini: oh…so my would be hubby is a good lier…
They both laugh….
@swasan
Swara comes… Sanskar is staring at the storm….
Sanskar: rain has not stopped….
Swara: yes…u have to stay here…tonight…
Sanskar:i ll inform parents….
Swara: laksh has already….

Sanskar: oh…so this kid has grown up.. M happy for him….i know how does it feels when the person u love… LLoves u back….
His eyes again get wet….
Swara: i can see a pain in ur eyes…may i…
Sanskar: do u really want to listen….
Swara: yes…. I do..
Sanskar: ok..
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Past(3 years ago)
Its sanskar marriage… He is getting married to his childhood sweetheart… Kavita..he s filling sindoor in her hair…claiming her forever…but suddenly some goons come…they hold kavita…. They hold everyone…
Goons: so..Sanskar… U flopped our plans… Now ur wife will pay for it..
Sanskar: no…u ve enmitu with me…kill me but leave her…
Goons did not listen…. They shot bullet after bullet… 10 bullets in kavita’s body….her body covered with blood….she fell down…. Sanskar hold her…. She look at sanskar…. Sanskar kissed her on forehead and she closed her eyes….. Forever…
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Present
Swara gets tears in her eyes….
Swara : i can feel it…
Sanskar: i know…thats why i shared it with u….
Swara holds his hand…sanskar looks at her….

PrecAp
Swasan take dinner together..Swara starts falling for sanskar…. But he s anawre

Credit to: mugdha

13 comments

  1. I dont know wat to comment gow come u express emotios so well im a regular reader of ur ff mugdha love u pls may i know from wich place u r? Im from bangalore

  2. L Khan

    Awesome just update the next part as soon as possible can’t wait at all I’m eagerly waiting for it

  3. Swen Woni

    When will u post the nxt part soon??
    Please post it soon, this is a total new and different concept and the story is proceeding really gud that I can’t just wait to know what happens nxt!

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