SwaSan Revenge :a smile that has stolen my heart (Episode 13)

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SwaSan Revenge: A smile that has stolen my heart


Recap: swasan date



SwaSan were sleeping peacefully on the bare cold floor on terrace… But their luv was warm enough to comfort them.. Swara was sleeping on sanskar’s hand… He Has his one hand on her waist… She has clutched his shirt even in sleep which clearly shows her fear of losing him… For the first time swara didn’t get panic attack in sleep…. Bt for how long?

Sanskar feels some tickle on his face which Indeed disturbs his sleep bt he ignores that… Soon that tickle turns wet n he wakes up n got shocked “aaaaaaa” he shouts

“what happened sanskar” swara asked

“tumhara pilla mujhe kisses de ra hai that too wet kisses ???” he said in frustration

Yes that tickle was the licking of that pug puppy.. ???

Sanskar wipes his face with hankey n swara burst out laughing

“seems he too luv u????”said while Controling laughter

“urrhh come lets go we r getting late ?” he said while forwarding his hand to her


Sanskar was driving car n swara was adoring her first date…

“swara may I ask you something ” he said

“hmm”repiles bt still bzy in gazing her ring

“why u get these panic attacks??? N how u get addicted??arjun told me itz cz of ur past bt i want to kno everything” He asked her

“sanskar I will tell u bt u also hv to tell me whatever I ask agree?? ” she put her condition

” agree” he accepts

**she explains that her father’s murder affected her little heart alot n she can’t get over that… N it would be difficult for any 9 yr old kid to see murder of 5 ppl n forget that… Sumi sent her for counseling n finally she lead a normal lyf… Bt still hv a perfect picture of those murders in her eyes.. Bt everything get changed when they shift to ahemdabad as they keeps on changing places n identities due to safety reasons… Swara is now 15 n there she met them again in a charity event… They again try to kill her as she was the eyewitness… She smhw escape from there n luckily nxt day Sumi n swaragini left for dehradun… She stops sharing her room with ragini cz she gets nightmare… N she doesn’t want to disturb Sumi or rags… 3 yrs she managed all this bt at last she decide to meet doctor… N doctor clearly ask her nt to take these medicines regularly use them only when needed cz it contains a drug which makes ppl addicted to it.. she never shares her feelings with anyone as result she starts to consume pills on regular basis N now after 7 yrs she got addicted to them so much that she can’t sleep without them.. **

Sanskar was hell shocked to listen this he stops the car

“m sry swara I don’t know u hv been through this much” he hugs her tightly

“itz OK sanskar now tell me why u become guru “she asked

” I will tell u everything bt nt today.. Tmrw ok? ” he assures her

She nodded yes

“arjun ko kb se pta hai?” he again asked

“he knows this from past one month.. I fainted in office n then he came to kno everything… N I smhw manage to stop him from telling this to all ” swara sounds low

” swaraa” he holds her hand.. ” ur hands r cold swara r u fyn” he touches her forehead it was also cold… “r u fyn cz I don’t think so” he asked in worry

“itz cz I didn’t hv that pill since last night ” she said while shivering..

“swara let’s go to hospital..” he panics

“I… I am fyn.. Just feeling lil cold don’t worry… ” she said in weak voice

He removes his blazer n makes her wear that…

“sanskar m fyn” she assures him

“keep ur mouth shut swara? u r not gonna take those bl**dy pills again” he said in anger..

Swara keeps her mouth shut.. As she got scared seeing his anger.. His anger is clearly seen in his eyes… He starts to drive… N didn’t notice her in his anger.. But someone was seeing her condition n that someone seeks sanskar’s attention n got succeed..

“bhoww bhoww” that Lil pug keeps on barking sanskar stops car in irritation n look at back back.. That pug jumps on Swara’s lap n sanskar saw her shivering badly..

“o shit… M sry Swara.. just a min u will be fyn”

He took out a tablet n ask her to eat… Till then he keeps on rubbing her hands..
“r u feeling better now?? ” he asked in concerned tone

“hmm bt this medicine?” she asked

“I hv talked with Dr max… N he suggest this medicine for u..” sanskar said

“what!! How!!?” she was in utter confusion

” u r my fiancee so I can do this much for u.. I hv discussed ur case with him n we hv an appointment with him after 2 days” he said holding her hands

Both were lost in each other’s eyes

( Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna
Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhiri
Tum khwabon mein aate rehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhme kahin baaki rehna
Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samajh lena boondon mein main hoon
Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samajh lena kirno mein main hoon
Kuch kahun ya na kahun
Tum mujhko sada sunte rehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna)

They came back in senses hearing his bark again…


Everyone was having their breakfast while sumi was going out

“ma where r u going? ” swara enquired

“Beta ur nani is nt well m going to Kolkata “sumi replies.

” bye mom take care n call me tym to tym” swara orders her

“yes mam” sumi laugh n left
“bhai come hv breakfast with us” laksh ask him

“sure lucky vese b m damn hungry” sanskar said while fetching a seat for swara

He n swara starts eating he was about to gulp his first bite… Then dp says “hwz ur date?”

Sanskar starts to cough
Swara rubs his back n fetch water for him

“swara u tell us do u lyk ur engagement “ap continues

” aunty ye aap” she said with a Crimson face

“swara beta don’t be shy we all kno about sanskar’s surprise for For u??” dp winks

“dad I didn’t tell anyone that m gonna propose her hw u kno?” he asked in shock

N swara stamp his foot under table n gives him “keep-ur-mouth-shut-or-else-i-will-kill-you”? look

“Beta yesterday caretaker of our farmhouse called me n said that u hv given him leave for a week… N then I saw u taking ur lady luv in ur arms.. So itz obvious na…?”dp said

“dad aapne mom ko kaise propose kia tha” lakh asked with curiocity

“Beta ur mom has proposed me not me.. Q annu”? dp said..

“what!!!!! ???” SwaSan RagLak together

“aunty tell me na hw u propose uncle”?Rags asked

N here the heat reaches to ap’s cheeks

“Beta nthng lyk that.. Ye to ese he hain” ☺ap said while blushing hardly

“tell ur children annu hw u proposed me in my office ” dp continues to tease ap

” OMG in office.?? Woww aunty u were so daring na ” swara exclaimed

” swara beta mai btata hoon.. Ap was a new lawyer.. N a junior of legal adviser of our firm… I joined dad’s office n met her.. Ahh that was luv at first sight.. We became good friends n then my dad started to see girls for my marriage n that was it for her.. She came in my office n shouts that she luvs me n wants to marry me” dp takes a sigh

“or aage” sanskar was damn intrested

“then he too said yes n bauji also lyks me so we got married ” ap completes

” awww such a cute couple aunty uncle” ragini said..

While dp n ap blushes

(wait did I write dp blushes?? God knows m kya likhti hoon.. ?????)

After breakfast

“swara sanskar u go n take rest u guyz must be tired” ap advice them

They nodded yes n left..

“wow uncle n aunty were so romantic na” swara said with a bright smile

“so are we ” sanskar said while pulling her closer

” huh.. U n romantic.. Oh please.. Dp uncle was way more romantic than u” she said in attitude

“oh god do u hv any memory loss problem!!! I hv arranged a date for u.. Every girl dies to see me n u r showing attitude” sanskar said

“m sanskar maheshwari’s fiancee itTa to banta h?” she revet

“u r comparing me with dad n what abt u.. Mom has proposed dad in office that too 30 yrs back.. Do u hv courage to do this” sanskar frowned

“don’t u dare to challenge me.. U don’t know swara gadodia” says while pointing her index finger to him

He lowers her finger n pulls her closer n held her firmly frm waist
“prove this then mrs swara sanskar maheshwari? “.

” done… Bt don’t complain me that I make u embarrassed”she warned him

” I don’t care baby” he said in husky voice

“done then”she accepts challenge

He slowly lean towards her n was about to kiss her bt someone disturb them Actually a bark ? that pug disturb them..

“aww babu ” Swara pics him up

” m kaha se apna dushman le aya yr??”sanskar sound irritated
Swara giggles?

He left n repent for giving chlnge
“Zuban pe kaabu rakhna chahiye tha mujhe.. Who can kiss me infront of whole family Proposing me in front of 50 ppl is nt a big deal for her” he thinks


ragini was sitting in her room n seeing some photos.. Suddenly laksh enters room without knocking n that pics fell from her hand..

“m sorry ragini ” laksh apologize while picking the pics

” no no itz OK.. Leave this.. I can collect all this” she said in nervousness

“are m helping u na.. ” laksh forcefully help n got shocked to see the pics

” ragini bhai ki pics tumhare pass kya kr Ri hai.. Ye photos kisi ke pass ni hai.. Only bhai hv theses.. N whts this han bhai’s lyk n dislyks written on back of each pic.. What r u planning rags”

Rags was speechless

“tell me “he ask while holding her shoulders ” answer me damn it” he shouts

“i hv his pics cz I.. I” she can’t Complete

“I I what”? he asked strictly

“cz I luv him” Rags admits

Laksh was he’ll shocked
“are u insane… Do u even kno what r u saying ?.. Wait.. U r joking ryt.. Bhai luvs swara.. U cant luv him ryt” laksh can’t digest her confession

” that’s y m nt telling this to anyone I luv him for 4 yrs.. ” Rags said while sobbing

“u r confusing me Rags.. u behaved so badly with bhai that day when swara was ill u slapped him also.. n ya u too support me in my plan to provke swara.. When she kissed bhai infront of us” laksh is now confused

“i am sane.. M nt blind in luv.. He tried to kill my sister I behaved with him badly cz no one has right to harm my sister? not even my luv.. N that day I was with u cz I want her happiness nthng else” she said

“hw could u luv ur sister’s luv” laksh said

“luving is nt a crime.. I luv sanskar cz I feel some connection with him… We share same past our parents died n then someone else adopts us… N m nt coming in btw them… Cz I want Swara’s happiness” Rags sound determined

“u r great Rags.. M sry I should not shouted on u” lucky hugs her..

“m nt great m a sister lucky… N I kno if she would be at my place she would hv chosen same” Rags respond to hug…

To be continued…

Precap:reason behind sanskar becoming guru.. N Swara’s proposal

Guyz m sry I forgot to mention that the butterfly kiss is not my imagination itz Taken from a novel “I too had a love story” by ravinder Singh… Itz an autobiographical account n a must read… U cant stop urself admiring this accidentntal writer’s work..

This is a true story of luv.. A luv by chance n one tragedy changes everything…

If u hvnt read this then don’t worry I will write a short story on this novel after my exams…


Now something about myself…
I was overwhelmed to see ur luv n support… N as I hvnt tell anything about myself till now so m telling u all now..

My real name is mugdha and m from Delhi..
I am 18 n currently studying in DU(Delhi University) …
My favourite past tym or hobby is laughing ????
I can laugh for hours… N my partner in crime I mean laughing is Kiara… She has joined TU yesterday only… I made her write on swasan though she didn’t even watch swaragini ??
She is the only reason cz of which I go to college ?

N ya plz read her first one shot “a beautiful mistake”


Credit to: Meher


  1. anu

    nice.. but got doubt in precap swara’s proposal..? .. whats this new thing? waiting for this. update soon.

  2. Anjali

    I finally saw this on time…. 😮 😮

    Hugee achivement for me… And a very nice fun cute epi!!

    Dp blushing 😛 😛

    I would love to see that!!

  3. Sree

    Loved it meher di i mean mugdha.todays ep was great .i loved dp and ap cut love story.dp blushing 🙂 .i loved that dog’s role as it is united and also spoiled their romance. Haha;) .u r a great writer.i never thought that u will be only 18;). If u get time plz read my ff mr maheswari and his secretary.u had read the first ep so i just wanted to ask u whether u liked it. If u read plz let me know it through comments.love u di and post next soon .waiting eagerly.:)

    • I just luv dp blushing ???
      I will give more important role to that puppy… I just luv him ??

      N what do u mean by only 18… Q ji m badi LGti thi…

      Dear m reading it…. Bt what to do.. I read it lately…

      • Sree

        U r reading it that a big thing for me and i said just 18 cuz i have seen my seniors who r 18 even speak english little badly. But ur writing skills r great.btw i am 16 and my english is also not so good.anyways fi post next soon. I am waiting

    • Itz noithng lyk that n I promise I will comment on tym once my exams will get over… Cz now I hardly found tym to write…

      N I hv read ur ff n I don’t feel that ur English is lil week… ??

  4. Sueño

    Hy…… Jus a cuttest epi…….. Dp blushing?????
    Aweeeeee………. N pug licking sanky, no no wet kiss????
    OMG ur so gud dear…… Bt plz……. Don’t separate swasan……. Plzzzzzzzzz?

  5. Serena

    Awesome part and really I was laughing like hell on pug kissing scene?????and babu between swasan????feeling bad for both swaragini. One loves sanskar but can’t tell him and has told him but don’t know whether she’ll be alive or no,?

  6. Neha

    Hey u r 18 I thought 20 so ur name is mugdha nice name n DU one of the best university

    Epi was mind blowing sanskar Sach mein dusman le aaya apne liye ? I think ? is jealous of swasan closeness ? …..and dp blushing now this is something I desperately want to see n meher read ur comment on anu ff really sorry to hear that n ur height is 5.5 that’s really good… Stay blessed keep smiling and ?u

    • meher

      Yup m 18 undoubtedly ??

      Ya he luvs swara he can’t see her close to anyone else?

      Ya 5.5 without heels ????

      Itz OK.. Now he is with me everywhere so I don’t feel his absence ??

      Luv u loads ????

  7. Dharsha

    Aww…….so sweet part…
    Loved everything…..
    From wet kiss of babu ???
    To dp blushing ???
    Arey!!! Waiting for the reason of sanky change to guru….more than that waiting for swara proposal :)….in short waiting for next part…..
    Will definitely read “a beautiful mistake”….
    U study in du…..shall I ask u a question….

  8. musku

    Hey Meher….aaj Hume hansa hansa ke Marne ka irada h??….l mean literally dp blushing….n by god….ap is actually daring n have lots of guts???….loving dp is really a task that worth Bharat Ratna????….
    N meher I wanna know in ur imagination young dp has hair or is bald….bcz if he is bald then toh ap should get Nobel prize….??
    N episode was just amazing….n that puppy always become KMH….Let me tell u I just hate dogs….rather I m scares of dogs….I can’t tolerate them beside me…ughhhh….
    Yeah…I m suspicious about raginii intentions…. Bandi kuchh chuppa ri h ….don’t u feel that…y will u feel that …?? u r the one who only knows haha
    Now my bak bak ends here… N urs will start….???dont mind haaan
    N ya r u a commerce student???

    • Ni ni bilkul ji tumhe maar dia to mere ff kon pdhega ????? upar se murder ka charge alg????

      NYC que yr… He has hair n moustache too??

      N try once to luv a dog n that dog will shower luv on me… M crazy about animals my frnds said k zoo ghoomne chlnge.. N I was lyk ha thik h.. Then they said tu to wahi milegi kisi janwar k sth khlti hui?????

      N ya I too feel smthng suspicious in ragini????

      • musku

        When I was reading ur comment I thought ur friends say tu wahi milegi…with in the cage….bcz if my friends were their then they would have even thought that to which animal species I belong ….

  9. Neha

    Hiii meher I am a silent reader of your ff and one shots…and they all are amazing and your msg after every os is just superb…aaj isliye comment kr rhi hu kyuki tumhare baare mein pta chla ki tum delhi se ho I am also from delhi….aacha lga kii aaj koi dilliwala mila yha..otherwise my all friends on this site are from other states…

  10. Hi meher..
    to days episode is too good, too much funny (that dog lol),romantic n courageous also.. ty for informing about ur self.. 🙂 really want to know how sanskar became GURU..?

  11. sneha

    Awsom meher as alwayzzz…
    nd that babu…hahaha :)..i mean pug…t was too gud…i was imagining sankyzz expressionzzz that tym..hilarious… 😉
    Thnxxx dear fr such a nice update.. 🙂

  12. Jannat

    Now a days I’m got addicted with swasan…swaragini ff…
    bt in fact I’m not a fan of swaragini serial … .. in fact i didn’t even watch a single epi of it…

    bt after ff… i thnk i should start watching swaragini…..

  13. Aditi Singh

    who said that the links were not working they all were working…..n yaa meher ur story is soon beautiful I just love it….n love u too….plzz don’t make ragini a problem for swasan….

  14. Nita

    Thank thank u so much Meher for getting my homework done. oh sorry, impossible-to-be-completed wala homework….. Oh sorry u must be wondering how…. actually when in the evening i saw your ff has been updated, i divided my hw in 3 parts n gave a gift to my self for completing 1 part(it included icecream aslo haha)…. After completing it all i get to read episode 13 of swasan revenge- a smile that has stolen my heart…. n u wont believe i completed my hw very quickly……
    sorry for boring u, about tge episode, awesome as always…. nice to see sanskar caring for Swara. N now i m thinking what will Swara do when she comes to know abt Ragini. But its gonna be RagLak after all…. n ya excited to know abt Guru’s truth….. love u baby….
    n ALL THE BEST for ur exams….

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