SwaSan Revenge :a smile that has stolen my heart (Episode 12)


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SwaSan Revenge: A smile that has stolen my heart


Recap: everyone forgives Sanskar… Swara kissed sanskar infront of whole family



Sanskar rush to swara’s room n said in hurry “baby come lets go ?”

“chikuuu m feeling sleepy…. ” swara said in sleepy voice with a cute face

“uffooo baby… Forget it chlo…. I hv a surprise for you ?” Sanskar said with gleaming eyes

“hmmm” she covers her face with blanket n slept

“babyyyy” he pick her up in his arms n takes her down… Where swara is bzy in her beauty sleep

He place her in car n starts driving….
He stop the car in front of a bungalow.. N wakes her up..
“baby get up plz.. Now itz enough ?”sanskar sound irritated

“haa bolo uth gai… (she ralises that she is not at home n shouts) where I am.. ?? Why u hv taken me here?? Ohh god u hv kidnapped me… !!!! Nhi plz mujhe abi ni Marna… Abhi meri umar he kya hai… God please save me ????”

Sanskar was seeing her with”ho gya” expression ?
Bt swara keeps on blabbering…. He kissed her “now stop or else I will repeat this”

Swara keeps her mouth shut.. N lowers her eyes due to shyness… ☺
He gets off the car n open swara’s gate… N forwards his hand she gives her hand to him n step down the car…

He then blind Fold her..

“are what r doing this??? ” swara asked in confusion

” hv patience my princess ?”sanskar said with a bright smile

He takes her to pool side…
The pool side was decorated magnificently with colorful lights… N heart shaped balloons all the the pool area… With a round table in between that with read table cloth… Having a candel in centre… He slowly removes her blindfold n swara’s eyes shines seeing all the arrangements… She gets awestruck seeing the pool…
Pool looks lyk this

“sanskar ye sab ???”

She turns back n found sanskar no where…

“sanskar???!!! ” she keeps on calling his name…

Then she saw a pug(hutch dog) puppy… She goes towards him n pick his up” awww ?u r soo cute… Babu”

Then she notice a chit in itz coller n opens that
“u luv puppies n I luv u so here is a small gift from my side… Come inside I hv more surprises for u”

“aww I luv u sanskar… (to puppy) chalo cutie ?.. Now lets go in.. ”

Swara has puppy in her arms n opens the door lots of rose petals falls on her… Giving her a big smile on her face

She then saw a live size cutout of sanskar n a heart shaped helium Ballon attached to it… N a chit on it
” I hv broken ur heart now itz ur turn go ahead n take ur revenge ?”
“uff ye chiku b na… Look cutie pie now he has gone mad? “swara said to puppy

She then takes out a hair pin n burst the baloon… N as the baloon burst… A heart shaped locket falls… She pic that up… It was a photo locket… She opens that n saw their childhood pic On one side n current pic on other side…

Her eyes filled with tears of joy and she feels happiness all around
Then that puppy jump off her arms n run towards staircase…

“cutieee waitt” swara called puppy

She reached their n found another chit
“go upstairs n get ready… I want to see my swara as a real princess… Rember our childhood dream”

swara(6) sanky(9)
Swra:chiku I want to be a real princess…
Sanky;baby when I will become big lyk dad I will make u princess
Sanky: pakka promise ☺☺


“Sanskar rembers this till now ” swara feels blessed to have him..

She went upstairs by following signs n finally enter a room… N saw a packet on bed
“another small gift for my princess from her prince charming ”

She opened that n found a gown n wears that

This gown

She gets ready n tie her hair in a bun.. She was about to open the door n saw another chit
“I love your free hair more… Release them.. ?’

Swara smiles seeing his small small gestures

She opened the gate… N Found a pair of heels there with a chit
These heels

“my princess’s look will be incomplete without heels… Isn’t it ”

She smiled seeing corridor filled with rose petals then she wear those heels n start walking… She walk a step or two n she saw that puppy again
” aww mera babu.. Kaha bhaag jate ho aap ” swara said to puppy

N found one more chit in his collar
” uff this sanskar na ” swara said to herself

“I am sry princess… Bt this one is last…
Walk down to poolside… N these petals are there so thatt u don’t need to step on floor.. The way I filled the corridor with rose petals I want to fill ur life with rose petals… I will shower my luv on u the way I hv showerd flowers on you.. ”

Swara was overwhelmed seeing his luv… Seeing his romantic side…


swara reached there but still sanskar was nowhere” sanskar now its enough come here na”

Then she heard a confession *sanskar was wearing same clothes which he wear in his SR in serial*
Then he slowly walk towards swara

“I hv hurted u… So I will heal u… I hv broken u… So I will unite u… I am the reason for tears in ur eyes… So I hold the right to wipe those tears…. I am the reason for ur sadness… So I will become the reason for ur Neverending smile… I will fill ur lyf with my luv… I want u to be the first person whom I will see in morning n last person whom I will see at night…
I want to start my day with your good morning n end my day with your good Night… Zada nhi bas apni zindagi k kuch 60-70 saal tumhare saath bitana chahta hoon… Tumhe swara gadodia se swara sanskar maheshwari banana chahta hoon…. Will u allow me to do so…? ?☺☺?”

Swara’s eyes are filled with tears of happiness

He kneel down infront of her n opens a ring box infront of her
This ring


Swara forward her hand n sanskar was about to make her wear that ring bt she recalls her medical condition n takes her hand back… She was about to go from there but sanskar hold her hand n pulls her back.. Her back is meeting his chest.. Here tears were brimming from Swara’s eyes… Then He simply wraps his hand around her waist n slides ring slowly in her left hand in that back hug position only n said in her ear”u r not gonna die… I won’t let you go”

Swara got shocked by hearing this she realises herself n starting going away while crying.

“u r not gonna die swara… I kno every thing… Every thing abt u.. Abt ur addiction…. Abt ur cure… Abt ur luv for me… Agar aaj tum chali gai to mujhe zinda nhi dekh paogi I promise this to u”

Swara’s feet stuck by listening his words… SHe turns around n saw sanskar standing with open arms she ran into his arms…

{god knows hw will she run in heels ??}

Sanskar’s warm embrace gives her a sense of protection… A sense of luv… N she broke down

{ Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu
Taa-umr main tera saaya banu
Keh de toh ban jaaun bairaag main
Kehde toh main teri maaya banu
Tu saaz hai, main ragini
Tu raat hai, main chandni
Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai
Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon
Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai}

He keeps on carsing her hair n clams her down
“swara stop crying… N Complete the ritual first”

Swara looked at him with teary confused eyes..

“aree u too hv to make me wear a ring then only we got engaged na??” he said n brings another jewl box which contains
This ring

She makes him wear that n hugs him tightly as if she will loose her grip on him.. They both get separated…
A long hug full of pure emotions.. Full of luv… Full of need of each other…
They finally broke the hug n sanskar kissed her forehead..
Then wipes her tears with his thumbs….
“swara there r nt tears these r pearls….. Don’t waste them.
“sanky said lovingly

“these r tears of happiness sanskar… Today I got everything “swara looks satisfied

” swara I want to see ur happiness in ur smile nt in tears I can do anything to save these precious gems from wasting” he said

“I love you sanskar… M blessed to have you ” swara said

” I love you too princess… ” he admits..

“hw u kno all this” she raise her doubt

“first lets hv smthng then i will tell u everything” he said

He took her to the table.. N first fetch a seat for her n makes her sit n then sat infront of her.. N removes a closh Swara’s look changed after seeing dish under closh n she shouts”gol gappe”???

Then he feed her with his hands
“yummmyyyyy sanskar they are so tasty I can even eat this utensil? “swara giggles

” are ni swara I hv to return these utensils to ma.. If u eat them then what will I do?”he winks

She stops eating n shout”sanskar vo.. Babu.. Where is he!! ”

” babu?? ” sanskar gives her confused look

” are that puppy u idiot “swara sound worried

” don’t worry he is safe”sanky said calmly

“pheww thank god I was worried about him” she takes a relief

Then after having their chaat party.. They start talking.. They were roaming in garden

“I kno u must b thinking mujhe kaise pta chla sab”he asked
She nodded yes
“roshni told me ” he said

*u can imagine tridha aka swadheenta from dehleez as roshni”

” arjun’s fiancee? ” she asked

He nodded yes

” how” swara asked in confusion

*that day the person who has listened SwaRjun’s talk was roshni… She is sanskar’s frnd n came to meet him.. She told everything to sanky.. N thn kavita Told him abt that pill… N he confronts arjun n he finally told everything to him*

“u r going nowhere “he tightens girp on her hand

” sanskar reality can’t be changed ”
She said choakingly

” I will change everything for you swara”
He said with determination

“darr lagta hai sanskar.. Kahi meri maut tumhe tod na de”she said

“sshhhh never say lyk this.. Tum nhi marogi… I will take u out of this addiction… I will.. Just trust me” he said

“I trust u more than anything but I don’t trust myself “she said hopelessly

” u trust me that’s enough”he said

They talked for hours… N finally sat on terrace floor

They both were lying on cold floor gazing stars… Swara was using sanskar’s hand as a pillow she suddrnly sat n asked…

“hv u ever tried butterfly kiss?? “she asked out of curiosity

“what’s that?!” he looks at her shockingly he too get up..

“wait then let me show u just don’t move n do as I say”she said

She move towards him.. Their faces were so close that they can feel the warm breath of their soul mate on their faces… She slightly entangle her eyelashes with his.. N said”slowly blink ur eye”
He follows her order n she taught him butterfly kiss

“do u lyk it?? “she asked innocently

” no.. I will like if u give me kiss here” he shows his lips

“u r so naughty na… Truly shameless” she blushes

“look who is talking abt shamelessness who has kissed me in front of whole family ?”he winked

To be continued….

Precap : family teasing tym… N another twist.. Twist of feelings..

Tell me guyz do u lyk this… !!!???

Credit to: Meher

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  1. Amazing surprise 🙂

  2. Ek b link “link” jaise ni show hua ???? itti mehnat ki thi mne

  3. Love it…wts the song name?

    1. Thnku… Itz sapna Jahan from brothers… Lol one para didn’t get copied here ??

    2. Sapna jahan from brother

  4. awesome…..i loved dis a lot…..

    1. Thanku so much…
      Keep reading ?

  5. Awesome part yaar and even I have doubt how she was able to run in heels if I would be on her place I would definitely land up in hospital and then there u could see the game of marriage- marriage on hospital bed??????????????and can I ask u something

    1. Don’t ask me hw she can run in heels that only God knows???

      Doctor would chant mantras of wedding ??

      U can ask me anythingu don’t need toask for permission?

      1. What have ur mom eaten in ur time. what a brain u hv got. Hpw can someone be so humorous..??just loved ur writing style???

    2. Ahh I think she must hv eaten locky… N that gives side-effects to me ???

      My daily routine is lyk 15 hr laughing 6 hr sleep n 1 hour in other work ???

      To be honest I wasn’t lyk this… I was damn shy n introvert… No one could say that m a ‘dilli ki kudi’ but I luv this change… I luv myself l??

      Me n my friend are too much we don’t need anything to laugh upon seeing each other’s face is enough for laughing ???????

      1. Can u please tell me how to post story on tellyupdates.I want to upload one BT dunno how.

    3. On the top of pie there is menu.. . Click that n it will extend as a pop up tym that has an option “submit your article” click that n u will be directed to submission page…

  6. Superb meherdi!!!all those suprises were awesome!!!my doubt cleared!!!!

    1. Thanku Lil sissy ?

    1. M glad that u lyk this… M trying smthng lyk this for first tym?

  7. nice…. actually what problem she is having and why she addict.. please reveal her health problem…. nw she is ok but whats the condition wnt to know/………. superb part.. ur 2ffs are nice……

    1. Tha ku so much dear n don’t worry in nxt episode I will clear this doubt also… ?

  8. The episode was just awesome.. beautiful.. cute.. dashing.. ecstatic.. fantastic.. gorgeous.. heartwarming.. imposing.. joyful.. and I am stopping here coz my full name starts with k (arey! It is indeed very difficult to write adjectives with 26 letters fully…so only stopping ?lol)
    Waiting eagerly for next

    1. THNKU u kno when u said u stop at k… I re read comment to notice abcdefg ???

      Keep reading ?

    2. I read all ur episodes in one go…..just awesome story…loves both swara n sanskar character….esp sanky..it was a mast epi ….as I know ur also from Delhi
      ….now I will talk to u in Delhi’s bindaas lang…no formal ….haha kya kare Delhi wale pedaishi besharam hote h….?????????
      N meher ur maths Is very weak??
      15+ 6+1=22….Baki ke 2 ghante kha gye…..
      Wait !wait ! I know varun kapoor ke dreams me na…..
      I know kyunki mai b wahi hoti gun???

      1. Thnku for reading…

        Yeyyy I finally found someone frm Delhi… N yeah we are born beshrm.. Akhir dilli wale hain ??

        N yr ese ni bolte mne achha score kia tha 10 n 12 m ???

  9. Wow awesome

  10. Shalmali Kamble

    Wow sissy.. It’s another amazing epi.. You just nailed it.. Perfect confession.. I just loved it! N I can understand ur state coz my name is more complicated than u.. SHALMALI! except my few family members no one say it properly.. So in short all calls me shona at home.. 🙂

    1. Thanku sissy…
      U won’t believe log naam k8s tarah bigadte h… Now m use to it if anyone get my name in one go then itz kk.. Otherwise I won’t repeat my name I just spell it out ????

  11. very nice. simply awesome. mind blowing update…. loved it so much

    1. Thanku tani dear…

      Keep reading ?

  12. Superb ep.loved the chit communication. I love ur each and every ep.love u di.

    1. Thnku dear…

      Keep reading

      1. I will cuz u r one of my fav writers and i love ur ff.

    2. Awww luv u dear?

  13. Amazingggg update meher…lovd it a lot..:)
    Nd the surprisezz were damn awsom.. 🙂

    1. Thnku dear… M glad that you like it ?

  14. Wow proposal was so nice especially that cute puppy one I love puppies swara ran in heels I can’t walk properly in that.. I’m not allowed to wear that due to my height just once want to try pencil heel but dk what will happen after that will land on floor… Leaving jokes apart wonderful part now again another twist…. Meher ur name is so sweet ??

    1. Thnku I too luv puppies.. . M crazy about puppies… . Nt only puppies every aninal??

      Ya she ran in heels talented girl?? I always go to buy pencil heel n ended up in buying wedge heel ?

      May I ask u what’s ur height if u don’t mind…. N thanku bt meher is nt my real name..

      1. 5.7 that’s the problem whenever I go out with family or friends my mom doesn’t allow as she is too much protective n friends they just simply threaten to throw my heels ? no body allows to buy only
        I have only flat heels that too little or shoes… Meher isn’t ur real name oh than what is it? Feel free to ans no forcing

      2. Oohhh…. I know her real name…. shall I tell???? ???

    2. Wow 5.7 a perfect height.. M 5.5..

      I always want those 2 extra inches… So I add 3.5 inches as a wedge heel???

      N still I feel small my all frnds are damn tall.. Not only Boyz bt girls too.. N same with my mom she doesn’t allow m to wear heels usually when I go with her… N ya anji go ahead ??

  15. it wasawesome dear

    1. Thnx alot dear ??

  16. Awesome as always….Meher..u truly rock!!!! 😀 😀

    1. Thnku Eva dear… ???

  17. Dying to read d nxt episode n dis 1 was so romantic tht evry grl can imagine herself as swara with her better half..

    1. As if u hv read earlier episodes ??
      Don’t die we hv exams nxt week ??

  18. awesome as akways

      1. pls read my ff Mr maheswari and miss gadodia and give your suggestions.pls only comment if u lyk it

    1. I hv that open in browser bt dint get tym to read ? bt surely I will read by night

  19. Awesome…but di what is the disease of swara…i cant understand till now pls tell me the name or my small brain will blast bcz of thinking so much…..

    1. Basically itz nt a disease itz an addiction lyk addiction to drugs…

  20. wow meher u worked sooooo hard…really its amazing specially the gown I loved it…..plz give the next soon…n what’s twist of feeling means…..

    1. Ya It took me two days to write this completely…

      Aww u hv seen that gown ?? so sweet of you yr… Sara kuch itti mushqil se search kia tha bt ek b link ni chala.. Huh

      Read nxt part u get to kno ??

      Luv u dear

  21. nice epi..loved it..am new to telly updates..hv u written any other ff?

    1. Thnku..

      N yes I hv written ff ” kuch iss tarah” ?

  22. ????????????

    No words for this epi…..

    Just loved sanskaar’s proposal!!!! His words

    1. Thanku ?????

      I too luv him n his words.. I was laughing lyk an idiot while writing this cz I was thinking if a guy would propose me what should he say ???????

  23. Superb episode and superb proposal

    1. Thanku dear

      Keep reading ?

  24. Awesome

  25. Wow nice Episode like always Can i ask you something? How Old steht you? You Can only Tell me if you want of you don’t want to say it i won’t mind but really a mindblowing Episode i Love varun kapoor a lot I’m a very big fan of varun kapoor and helly shah Love you ❤️?❤️

    1. Thank you so much dear.. ..
      N m 18 n in July I will turn 19

      Same pinch I too lyk both of them alot ??

  26. Meher…. awesome episode….. n plz send the links again. They r not opening in my phone….. n ya all the best…. thodi bahot padai kar lena otherwise bill humare naam ka phatega.

  27. I meant How Old Are you sorry steht is a German word

    1. I got that already… R u a German or u just kno German language???

  28. meher ji …. unbelievable…u r the most romantic person…n I loved the butterfly kiss..!

    1. Lol romantic that too Me… ???? I just does not believe in all that…
      N that butterfly kiss is not my imagination itz adapted from a novel…

  29. I’m from Pakistan and in switzerland we speak German so i Can speak german❤️?

    1. Switzerland ??

      Most expensive country of 2014 ??

      Wow u live actually in heaven ??

  30. hi meher..
    oh god this is so romantic episode.. n he knows the truth.. in last episode u said that it’s not sanskar but to day u relieved me .. too good 🙂

    1. Thanks for reading dear ?

  31. I asked about Youre age because i didn’t Know How to call you meher or meher di because i have Heard that if someone is Elder than you,you should call her as di i don’t Know if it’s Right because i’m s Muslim so Can i call you as meher di?

    1. Cm on dear u can call me anything….

      The thing which matters is feeling.. So now u kno my age so u can call me accordingly ?

  32. I live in switzerland Thats why i Can Speak german

    1. Can you read hindi?!!

  33. Ohhhhh!!!!!! Thts jus amazing……… So nw sankys love vl bring swara back to normal I thnk…….. Hope fr d best?
    U R jus amazing dear?

    1. Aww thnkuuu so much ???

  34. Yes i Can because Hindi and urdu are simillar meher di

  35. If you Write in Hindi like this mujhe apka ff Bohot Acha Lagta Hain then i Can read it?❤️

  36. Yes switzerland is really a beautyfull Country❤️

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