Swasan – REBIRTH (OS)

Swasan – REBIRTH (OS)

@ Central Park

Sanskar, a handsome guy is walking on the grass and look everyone around there. He is finding different kinds of people. Some are sleeping, some are reading

newspapers, some kids are playing games. He smiles seeing those kids and walks to them, he is about to go inbetween them to disturb their game and doing all the stunts

infront of them. But none is aware of his presence and continues playing the games. He keeps a pout face and walks away from there.

He stands near the small pond seeing the couples enjoying there. He moves his gaze around the pool and stucks at one point where he spots a girl who stares him. When
he see her, she turns her gaze to other side. He gets a wierd feeling and thinks to tease her. He starts walking towards her with a mischevious smile on his face. She
finds him coming towards her, she passes him a sharp look to alert him, but no way he cared it and continues walking towards her. At one point when is about to bump on
her, she raises her hands upto her chest level and shouts, “STOP” which makes him to stop abruptly and stares her in shock. Yes he is boggled looking at her and he
looks down his body once and then shifts his gaze to her.

Girl, “What are you trying to do? Are you gone mad? Don’t you see that i am standing infront of you and you are walking towards like a rampwalk”

Sanskar is speechless and continuously glaring her without listening her scoldings. She waves her hand infront of him and gets irritated seeing him with no expression.

She walks away from him, after a minute only Sanskar gains conscious and looks for her. He spots her walking towards the butterfly park, he runs towards her and stands
infront of her by showing his hands to stop her. He is breathing heavily and speaks in between.

Sanskar, “Hey, you able to see me?”

Girl gets confused seeing him and by his questions, she just nods her head as yes.

Sanskar, “You able to hear what i am speaking?”

Girl again nods her head as yes.

Sanskar is surprised and close his mouth in one hand and another in his hip, he looks here & there in the park.

Girl get confused and asks, “Why are you asking this?”

Sanskar looks at her, “When you died?”

The question Sanskar asked makes her bewildered and she starts remembering the accident she met two days back.

Girl with sad tone, “Two days back”

Sanskar, “How?”

Girl, “Car Accident. Spot dead”

Sanskar, “I am Sorry”

Girl looks at him, “It’s ok. And you?”

Sanskar, “Shall we sit somewhere and talk?”

Girl nods her head with a smile. Sanskar looks around to find some place and finally found it but it is occupied by a couple. He takes her there and stands behind


Girl, “They are already sitting here na”

Sanskar, “So what? Now they will vacate”

Girl is so curious to know what he is gonna do. Sanskar sits beside the guy and starts tickling him. The guys is laughing coz of that and that makes his girl friend
looks confused seeing him laughing when she is telling about her problem. She is frowned seeing him laughing continuously, finally she slaps him on his cheeks which
makes the trio gets shocked.

The guy who got slap holds his cheek and looks on shocked. Sanskar who sat beside him, immediately gets up from there and blinks seeing them. The Girl who looks all
these closes her mouth and opens her eyes widely in shock. Soon the girl who slapped, scolds him badly and goes from there, the guy who got slap follows her to
convince. Sanskar keeps a puppy face and looks at her who is laughing seeing his reaction.

Sanskar laughs at his mad and signs her to sit now. They both sit beside each other and maintains a good distance between them.

Sanskar initiated the talk, “Hi, I am Sanskar”

Girl, “I am Swara”

Sanskar, “So you were asking about me right? huh…i came to this world 10 days back.”

Swara, “How it happened?”

Sanskar gives her a painful smile, “I got killed”

Swara froze hearing him and stammers, “Killed? But who? Why?”

Sanskar signs her to relax and continues, “Becoz of property. I am the only heir of my family property. I don’t know whether you know or not? I am the legal heir for
Maheswari group of companies. Have you heard it?”

Swara, “Yes, i heard it”

Sanskar, “Hmm…i am the only son of DurgaPrasad Maheswari who is the Chairman of Maheswari grp”

Swara, “But how it happened? I mean….who killed you?”

Sanskar, “I din’t finish it yet. I said legally i am the only son but my dad had one more son from his illegal affair with a woman. My dad was having a long time
relation with her and coz of that they have a son also whose name is Sahil…and yeah now he becomes Sahil Maheswari”

Swara makes faces and he asks, “What happened?”

Swara, “Actually Sahil is fine…but Maheswari did not suite for him”

Sanskar laughs seeing her reaction and he continues, “Ok..he is Sahil. My so called Step brother. You know what though my dad loves that lady he loves me more than
anything else in the world. He always protect from that b***c from my childhood. Yes..my mom died when i was 5 years old due to some health issues. He brought me up as
a responsible father but still he also got some weakness and there she came in our life. Due to that relationship, she was pregnant when my dad married her and got her
to my home. Her Name is kaveri and She was good with me though she delivered her own son but the truth is she never liked me. I was yearning for Mother’s love and
when i was informed by dad that she will be my mom…actually i was happy but god has some other plans. She was acting all her life just for the property sake. When
Sahil was a baby i loved him a lot but she filled his ears against me and dad. We both grown up together and his hatred on me also grown up with him. That day, i can
never forget that, where my dad tells me to take over the company responsibilities and announced me as the heir for all the property, which wasn’t liked by Kaveri &
Sahil. They fumed inside seeing me but i was not aware of her intention. Their calculation was if am not there then obviously the whole property will go to them and
Sahil can be owner of all and thus they decided to kill me. They got succeeded in their plan…they poisoned the food given to me and somehow managed the police saying
tht i was having love failure and i did suicide. They belived them and closed the case.”

Swara eyes are dwelled with tears and rolling on her cheeks hearing his story. Sanskar looks at her and moves his hands to her cheeks to wipe it but he couldn’t do

that and with a smile he said, “Sorry i couldn’t even wipe your tears. Pls do it yourself. You are not looking good while crying”

Swara smiles at him and wipes her tears saying, “No punishment for them is it?”

Sanskar, “I believe in god. Now they are working in a textile industry as a daily labour”

Swara gets curious, “How how how?”

Sanskar, “They thought that property will come to them when i am not there alive but my dad wrote a will long back saying the property will go to the trust and

orphanage home if i die. This information they did not aware but soon after i gone my dad gave the property to them as per the will and he too went and joined in one

oldage home to spend his rest life. When Kaveri & Sahil questioned him about this he said, “My son is a pure soul..so he don’t like if i punish you the same way you

did to my son. Just coz of that i am leaving you now..don’t ever come infront of me again.” after that he handover all the properties to trust and went from there

leaving them alone.

After that they also left from there and joins as a daily labour.”

Swara, “I am sorry that so much bad happened with you”

Sanskar, “It’s ok. But you know what..i am very happy here but onlything is i am missing my dad. but that’s ok he also forgets everything and living a normal life now
with his age people. So you tell me?”

Swara, “What to tell? Mine is a very unfortunate death. I too miss my family a lot. Still my mumma is crying and not eating anything. Dad also broken down inside and
somehow managing the household things and dadaji…he is my …sorry he was my best friend. He too missing me a lot now. I can see them but unable to tell them
anything that i am fine and not to worry about me”

Sanskar, “Leave it. If you think about this again then you will have only pain…nothing else. So just forget about everything and live your pending life here”

They both have a nice talk for sometime and discusses about their likes and dislikes. Soon they both understands each well and become a good friends.

They hear someone is talking to them saying that, “Sanskar, Swara our leader is calling you both. come fast”

Swara confused, “Leader?”

Sanskar, “Yeah…for souls like us , they have one leader in this world and some nonsense rules also they kept. I think they got to know what we did to that couples and
that’s y he is calling us. Come on will see what happens”

Swara nods her head and walking with him.


@ Courtroom,

Swara blinks seeing so many members standing in the queue to get punishment for the mischeif they did. Sanskar also stands with her and comforts her. Now it is
Ardhika’s turn, Swara is looking scared but Sanskar is not.

Leader, “Why u did that to them?”

Sanskar, “We were looking for place to sit and talk? They were sitting there for so many hours but did not talk only..that’s y i made them go from there”

Leader, “Do you aware that all this activities are prohibited in this world and if you did you have punishment?”

Sanskar, “I am aware of it and ready to bear the punishment”

Leader, “No one can change you. Your punishment is you have to hang upside down in that tree for whole day. you can go now”

Sanskar makes face and goes from there. They did not punish Swara since she is new here and don’t aware of the rules. But she feels bad seeing Sanskar.

Next day, they both go to the same park and Sanskar is hanging upside down in the tree. Below Swara is standing looking him up.

Sanskar, “Swara, you go and sit somewhere, i will manage it. Y r u standing like this…your neck will be paining”

Swara, “It’s ok. I won’t leave you alone and go. Because of me only you are having this punishment right”

Sanskar, “Nothing like that. How long you can stand like this?”

Swara, “How long ever i can..i will”

Sanskar smiles seeing her and she too smiles back at him. They both are spending their time in talking so many things. Without her knowledge Swara likes him and

Sanskar also likes her. He finished his punishment and going back to their world and while going they met a pair who is fighting with each other badly.

They both calling them as Laksh and Ragini.

Laksh, “Shut up Ragini….you are so insecured and always doubting on me”

Ragini, “You are behaving like that Laksh. If you are not doing anything wrong then what are you hiding from me”

Laksh, “I am not hiding anything and i don’t need to proof anything to you”

Ragini, “See this adamant only makes me to think a lot about your behaviour. You are cheating me Laksh”

Ragini starts crying badly and cursing Laksh for cheating on her. Sanskar & Swara watching them and looks each other.

Swara, “Why they are fighting like this?”

Sanskar shakes his shoulder saying, “Don’t know”

Swara, “I am feeling bad for them”

Sanskar, “We can just only feel for them. Now come with me..we wil go”


Swara is unable to come out from that couple’s fighting. She even tells this to Sanskar but he convinces her that they can’t do anything. Swara somehow manages to go

out alone without Sanskar and peeps in to Raglak’s house. She saw them sleeping in the same bed but showing their back to each other.

Swara, “Okay..so they are husband and wife. It will be easy then to make them one. but how? I don’t know what to do? If i ask Sanskar he will stop me definitely”

Swara gets shocked hearing Sanskar behind her and saying, “Definitely”

Swara, “Sanskar..u here?”

Sanskar, “I should ask u. what u r doing here? See if the leader comes to know about this then he will punish you also”

Swara, “Punishment only right..i will have it no pbm”

Sanskar smirks, “He will give the same punishment to you also which i had. Just imagine…how it will be ” he smiles and makes faces.

Swara gets furious and starts chasing him inside their house. They couldn’t touch anything but their force blows a strong wind inside the house wherever they are
running. Due to that the screens are waving fastly and it makes the vase fallen down from the table.

Raglak both wakes hearing the noise and Ragini looks scared. She looks at Laksh who is going to hall and kitchen to check what is that. He came and told that, “Nothing


Till they sleep, Ardhika sits on their bed silently like a innocent kids. Ragini is not aware that when Laksh went out to see what is that…from that time Ardhika were
sitting on the bed and looking at Ragini who was scared and worries for Laksh. She was continuously praying to save both of them. They go out once Laksh comes and

Swara tells to Sanskar, “See…they are still love each other. but some misunderstanding is there. We can help them to sortout the issue na”

Sanskar, “Nothing doing. Come it’s getting late. We will go now”

Next coming days, Ardhika become so close with each other and always be together where ever they goes.

One day, in the same park Ardhika sits on the bench and watching the kids playing. Swara often looks at Sanskar and moves her gaze when he sees her. She feels so

nervous inside and thinks to open up her feelings to him.

Swara, “Sanskar”

Sanskar, “Hmm”

Swara, “I want to say something”

Sanskar, “Say na”

Swara with lot of hesitation, “Sanskar, i want to feel your touch on me”

Sanskar is shocked and did not expect it that she will ask something like this.

Swara determinedly says that, “I really wanna feel your touch Sanskar”

Sanskar stammers, “But…how”

Swara asks him to follow her. They finally go to NeRagini’s home and finds them still angry on each other. Ragini murmurs, “How many days i have to wait? Can’t he say

that he loves me? Y he is expecting me to say it always?”

They Laksh’s murmuring also, “She only started the fighting and y she is expecting me to talk first. She only doubted me and let her come and talk”

Ardhika looks each other, Swara smiles and moves forward towards Ragini but Sanskar stops her asking, “What you gonna do?”

Swara, “I said na, i wanna feel your touch. Now i m going to Ragini’s body and you too go inside Laksh’s body”

Sanskar, “You know what you are doing?”

Swara, “I know what i am doing. Will you do what i am saying?”

Sanskar sighs and goes towards Laksh. Simultaneously Swasan enters into Raglak’s body. After 5 mins, Raglak looks each other and gets up from the bed and walking

towards each. Raglak looks each other….Tears drops from Ragini’s eyes, Laksh raised his hands to wipe the tears. When he touches her cheeks, Ragini closes her eyes

tightly of unable to bear his touch, she holds his hands tightly saying, “I LOVE YOU Sanskar”. She opens her eyes and looks at him with lot of love.

Laksh is shocked for a min but soon he also realises his feelings for her and says, “I LOVE YOU TOO Swara”.

He cups her face and kissess on her forehead.

Immediately Swasan souls gets out from Raglak’s body and stands little far from them.

Raglak gets conscious and surprised seeing their position. Laksh stares Ragini’s face and she too looks at them surprisingly and she gets happy seeing him.

Laksh is about to take his hand but Ragini holds it saying, “WHy now? I am yearning for your touch”

The very next moment Laksh gives a bone crushing hug and planting a kiss everywhere on her face then he takes her to bed and they both make love and starts their life

Swara closes her eyes due to shy and runs out followed by Sanskar.

They both are walking on the center of the road, Sanskar often looks at her and smiles.

Swara noticed it, “Why are you smiling at me?”

Sanskar, “Finally you made them one”

Swara smiles and pats her shoulder herself.

They both gets into a laughter but a voice over disturbs them and tells them to meet the leader immediately.


Swasan stands in the courtroom where their leader is sitting infront of them starring them angrily.

Leader, “How dare you both can do this? You both broke the rules and crossed your limits”

Sanskar is about to talk but Swara interrupted, “It’s all because of me only. If you want to punish then give it to me”

Sanskar, “No..she did not do anything. Everything is my mistake only. Punish me”

Leader watches them silently and says, “You both did two biggest mistakes being in this world. 1 is pushing your souls into others bodies and 2 is..” he pauses seeing


Swasan watches him tensedly and he continues, “You both loves each other nd that is the biggest mistake you have done. So you both will get punished for this sins”

Swasan chorusly asks, “What is the punishment?”

Leader smirks seeing them and says, “REBIRTH”. He stops seeing their shocked face and continues, “You both will born as human again and suffer in the earth. This is
the punishment”

Swasan pleads him not to do that but the leader did not listen them and says, “It is decided and no changes in your punishment. So you both will disappear from this

world in another few mins…so i pray god that you both will get a good family and surroundings”

Swasan looks each other with tears and before they could react, they get disappeared from there.


@ Sunshine Residency,

Radhika Mehra gets labor pain and her husband Arjun Mehra makes her sit in the car safely. At the same time, their neighbour Sam Malhotra also gets labor pain and
her husband Neil Malhotra keeps her safely in the car and drives off.

@ Fortis Hospital,

Both Radhika and Sam screams coz of labor pain and they taken to OT immediately. Arjun and Neil waits outside the OT respectively.

After 40 mins, a nurse came to Neil Malhotra and said, “Your wife delivered a baby boy and both baby & Mom are doing good” He gets happy and hugs Arjun who is waiting
for his good news.

After another 30 mins, a nurse comes and informs Arjun Mehra says, “You got an angel….girl baby. Both are good now”

Arjun and Neil shares their happiness by celebrating with sweets and distributes to the entire hospital.

Both the babies kept in the seperate labor ward.

Nurses keeps them nearby in the cradles and goes from there by tagging their number.

Soon, both the babies starts squealing seeing each other, smiling at each. They are continuously squeals seeing each till the nurses comes and gets them to give to
their parents.

(Only god knows what they were talking in the name of squealing)

After that they did not get chance to squeal. After a week, both the ladies gets discharged and takes to home.

Once they steps infront of their home, babies again started squealing seeing each other. Elders from both the families are smiling and kissing the babies hearing their
sounds. But only those two souls knows what they are talking.

Life goes on smoothly like this and it’s been 10 years now,

The babies are grown up now and their parents named them as Sanskar & Swara respectively. It can say coincidence or not but the name too got matches with them.

Swasan grown up together and they always stay together. One will not be in peace if the other is not there. They are like two bodies and one soul. Even their parents
are surprised seeing their bond and gets happy for them.

Again 10 years leap,

Now Swasan are grown up and studies in same college but in different department. They both are in deep love and the whole college knows it very well. They are the
evergreen and the best love birds in their college.

Even their parents knows about their relation and decides to get them married after their graduation.

And that day also comes, their graduation gets over and their marriage also gets fixed.

They happily get married with their parents blessings and so excited to step into their new life.

A voice over says,

Actually the leader did not punish them, he gave them a chance to make their love possible in earth. He purposely sent them to earth to get a new life, new parents,
new friends and ofcourse NEW LOVE. So now on what purpose he sent them .. it becomes true and he also gets happy seeing them there.

*********************The End*****************

So that’s it guys. How is this OS? Pls pls tell me and so tensed and curious to know your views on this. Pls pls don’t scold me if you don’t like it.

Note: The plot of the story regarding the Souls is an inspiration from a short film but the entire narration and scenes and dialogues are solely owned by me.(:P)

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  2. Rabia

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  3. Simin

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  6. Amazing ?

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