swasan raglak….a tale of pure love….chap 7

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Recap
Swasan past…ragsan going to meet swara

Chap
Sanskar and ragini were in car…laksh was driving… There was a different silence in the car.. An unknown fear is engulfing sanskar…
“swara is fine na..” this is the seventh time sanskar had asked…but the reply was same….”u ll see urself “….ragini replied…. But this time…sanskar’s patience was over…
Sanskar: ragu… What happened after i ran away from the marriage…
Ragini took a deep breath… She opened her lips…to say something… Finally some words came out….
Ragini: sanky bhai…
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Swara was waiting for her to be called in mandap…she was very happy… Decked up in bridal attire..she was looking not less than a princess…suddenly she felt some noise…she came out of room….a voice pricked her ear….sanskar is not in his room….swara was numb…again another voice…he left a letter…. Her eyes moved….again a voice….sanskar loved somebody else….so he went to her leaving the marriage….. Swara’s legs trembled….she sat down….on the floor….again she heard a voice….this time…her ragu….laksh plz dont say this….swara di loves him so much…how can i tell her this thing…. Swara was again numb…her brain stopped working…. She did not know what to say or do…but finally she gathered all her strength… She stood up…Noone had ever seen her breaking down…but this time..it was… It was a different thing…she was bearing the child of the person who ran away from the marriage… She ran to the mandap…ragini saw her….
Ragini: swara di…

Swara: where is sanskar….
Ragini was mum…laksh… Ap…dp…all were mum…
Swara: laksh plz…for god sake…just tell me whatever i ve listened was wrong…
LakSh was not able to meet her gaze…
Swara this time shouted…noooooooooooo…..plzz…..dont….dont do this….
Laksh handed her the letter… Swara read that….but…. She tored it….tored it to as many pices as she could and throw them to fire…..
Swara: i dont believe… He ll come….he ll come i know…..
SLAPPPPPP
It was ragu who slapped swara….

Ragini : didi…plz…come to senses…he s not coming back…he s gone…..
Swara shouted…noooooooooo….it is not true….he ll come….
Ragini: no di….plz be stroNg….
Swara went to laksh… She holded his hand….
Swara: laksh see na…what she is saying… Plz tell her not to say anything rubbish like this…plz….
Suddenly someone threw water on her face… Swara looked at her…it was ap…..with tears in her eyes…..swara broke down…… Ap hugged her…
Ap: beta…m sry….my son…it was mu son’s mistake…
Swara: ma…if he didn’t want to marry then he should have said na….i ll never force him…his happiness was mine…but…running away on the day of marriage…..

Swara cried….everyone there was having tears in their eyes….seeing the girl in bridal attire… Crying for her husband…. Swara felt dizzy…. She got unconscious…. Dp n ap took her to hospital… Raglak n dp ap found about her pregnancy… Nobody said even a word to swara… They knew it was sanskar’s mistake….9 months passed…swara talked less…cried more…not because sanskar left her…but because of society’s taunts…she left her proffession… She sat in home…in one room…she refused to gp out..after 9 months…she gave birth to a baby girl…beautiful as her…this was the first tym she smiled in the last 9 months…but the reason was some different…. Ragini was there to take care of swara…. Suddenly she heard some noise… She woke up…she got shocked to see the bad empty….she looked down from the window…. Her swara di was lying in the pool of blood…. She attempted to suicide…..Wardboys took her inside the hospital… The same operation theatre wheee once swara used to save people’s life…was now the stage of swara’s life n death drama…ragini was numb….how can her di do something like this…she went to her room to calm down crying shubhi… She saw a letter….she opened it with trembling hands….

Ragu
I know u ll be devastated to know this…but i dont have the strength to live more…take care of u n shubhi…m going…
Urs
Swara

Letter slipped from ragini’s hands…she sat on the floor…she saw shubhi crying for her mother…. And then herself crying for mother like elder sister….
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Sanskar was shocked and speechless to hear this….tears streamed down…from his eyes…..
Sanskar: ragu…m…
Ragini: no need to say anything…. Swara di said…whenever u ll come…we should forgive u…and accept ur love for kavita…
Sanskar: swara is…swara is no more?
Laksh: no bhai…. Even god also dont want to accept her this early….she is alive…waiting for her prince….
Sanskar: means….
Ragini: she is leading a life worse than death….

Sanskar: where is she….
Laksh: we have reached….
Sanskar looked out….on seeing the board sanskar was shocked…. Not even in his worst nightmare he had seen swara here….his bestie here… . ST. PETER’S MENTAL ASYLUM KOLKATA…
Sanskar: ragu….
Ragini got teary eyed….she hugged laksh n cried…sanskar was shivering…. A chill of fear ran down his spine….the girl who always gave everything to him….who was ready to give up her love for him….just for him…the one who loved him truly is now here….just because of one mistake…..

Ragini: so should we move in…

Sanskar nodded…. His legs were now trembling… They stepped in the asylum… They saw different kind of people there….some were quite…some were laughing for no reason… But sanskar’s eyes were searching for a different person…ragini met a nurse…
Ragini: sister…where is swara di…
Nurse: oh…she…she is the cutest here..u didn’t come to meet her yesterday na…so she is angry…
Ragini: ohh…then where is my angry bird…
Nurse pointed out at a cornor…..sanskar’s gaze shifted there…. A girl was sitting keeping her back to the door….she was holding a mangalsutra which she was trying to wear…Nurse went to her…
Nurse: swara… SSee who came to meet u…
Swara looked up
Nurse: ur ragu…
Swara: ragu has come…ask her to meet me…
Nurse came out…she smiled at ragini…

Ragini: did she trouble u…
Nurse: trouble… No..never….most of the staff here has worked with dr.swara….she was really a very good doctor…. But destiny… She never troubles anyone…but she always ask….when my groom ll come….
Sanskar got teary eyed….laksh hold his hand…
Nurse: so did u find that person…i mean her groom who ran away after making her pregnant….. Ask him never to come in front of me….i ll crush his bones….
Nurse went away…ragini looked at sanskar…
Sanskar: i deserve this…

Ragini stepped inside swara’s room..swara turned….she hugged ragini….tightly….
Ragini: how r u swara di…..
Swara: u r bad…u told me u ll come everyday…. But u did not…
Ragini: sry di..
Swara: acha…now tell me…has sanskar come…
Ragini: no di
Swara: oho…call him…n ask him to come fast…dp unclw ll be vry angry…
Ragini gets tear in her eyes…. Sanskar was watching this from outside… He was not able to tolerate anymore…. He ran outside….he sat on a bench… N cried…. He felt a hand on his shoulder…. It was laksh… He hugged him….sanskar broke down….
Sanskar: m i that bad lucky… Even god will also not forgive me…my one mistake…. Spoiled her life…. Punish me…

And he cried…to let out all his pain… His guilt….

Precap
Sanskar brings swara home

Credit to: mugdha

17 comments

  1. Pinkistar

    Ohh my god never expected I never use to comment mostly some times but ur ff forced me to comment u……. ? really dear how can u write such a wonderful story I was assuming something else brilliant……

  2. Awsome but emotional yaar…….. One mistake change her life so much ?? feeling bad for swara …….. Today’s epi was unexpected yaar ?while reading I was crying ?? …………. Plzzzz update soon ???

  3. shan

    awesome…..i guessed it right…..very emotional dr…..i cried after reading it…..swara loves sanky unconditionally…..but u should have made that kavitha betrayed sanky then only he could have realised d mistake he did with swara……but u showed that kavitha died and without any chance he came to swara…..i felt like that but its awesome……

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