swasan raglak….a tale of pure love….chap 1

Hey guyz its mugdha again… Hope so some of you remember my ff swasan joined by destiny… Here is another piece of my minds creativity…

Vertical rays were falling on scorching hot road…its 12:00 noon…an afternoon of may…even the birds were not ready to come out….but wait….a man is walking… Barefoot on the road….torn clothes…unshaven face….his sorrowful eyes…it seems that something has pierced his feet….he saw it…a thorn….he bent and picked that thorn….he saw his feet…it was bleeding… He smiled… HE startrd to laugh…” hahaha..see kavita…see…u told me na…. I donT feel others pain…i only see mine…see now i cant even feel my pain now….but i can see others pain….m changed kavita…. M changed…plz come back….”

He again started walking aimlessly… Suddenly he saw a fruit Vendor….his feet took him there…his sunken belly tells that he had not eaten anything since 3-4 days…he went to the shop…shopkeeper was sleeping… Man took an apple from the shop….he succeeded….. He again started walking aimlessly on road…He was about to take a bite from the apple…but a pair of small hands of a kid became visible to him…he Saw a small girl begging… He dropped the apple in her hand…Girl saw him with her twinkling eyes….” thank u”..man looked at her….girl again smiled and sail” ur name sir”….her smile had some power…he thought for a while and said..” name…dead people do not have any name…but people used to call me sanskar Maheshwari… ”

So guyz hwz it….Tell me through comments plz….

Precap
Sanskar got hit by someone…. Laksh introduction…

Credit to: mugdha

10 comments

  1. mugdha

    Thx to all…hey friends… I had started to write another ff..swasan a saga of love…but left it in the middle as i was not well… So plz read that and tell me if u want me to continue that one too….n thx fr ur ? love

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