Swasan Pyar to hona hi tha – Episode 1

Hello Guys…I am back with the first episode of Swasan Pyar to hona hi tha…Thank you so much for your support …I know many of you can’t imagine Sanskar loving Ragini…But Believe me there is a very big suspense behind it…But if you want I can change Ragini’s character with aaradhya of Krishnadasi because I want to show great bond between either Swaragini or Swardhya (Swara+aaradhya)…If you want Ragini then it will be Raglak also but if you choose aaradhya then it will be aara… By the way Swasan will be the lead pairs…But Storyline will be same …So choice will be yours…

So let’s start first Episode…………………..
The story begins…a lady is shown waking up a girl…
Lady- Beta, Wake up…It’s getting late…
Girl- Mom, Please let me sleep 5 more minutes…
Lady- She will not wake up like this…I have to do something…
Then she goes and takes a rubber cockroach and put it on girl’s face…
Lady-Shona, see there is cockroach on your face…
Listening this girl starts to shout…aaaaaaaaaaa mom help….
Listening the shout a man comes to the room and says what happened Shona…Why are you shouting? (Yes the girl is Swara…So definitely the lady is Sharmistha and the man is Shyam bose…)
Swara- See Dad, Mom has scared me by putting this rubber cockroach on my face…
Shyam- What Sharmistha why you have putted this rubber cockroach instead of it you have putted the real cockroach…He starts laughing…

Sharmistha also giggles…
Swara- How mean dad…I will not talk with you…
Shyam – Sorry Shona….See I will scold your mom…Sharmistha…Why you have done this…You know na
my shona is afraid of cockroaches…
Sharmistha- What to do Shayam…Your Shona is not waking up… she has to go school…Now you have waked up so go and fresh up…
Swara- as you order Mom…Saying this she salutes and goes to the bathroom…
Sharmistha- May she always smile like this…
Shyam- Yes… She will smile like this only…I know my shona is brave girl…Lets go down…
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At Dining table
Sharmistha- Shona, Today Don’t do any prank with teachers…I don’t want to listen any complain from your class teacher…
Swara- Mom, I am not doing any prank with teachers…Ragini and Sanskar are only doing this…
Shyam- Shona, Don’t Lie…I know you trio together are doing it…
Swara- Ok mom dad…Today no pranks…Ok Bye…
Sharmistha and Shekhar- Bye Shona…
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At school

Ragini- See Sanky, Topper is coming…
Sanskar- Yes, You are right…
Swara- I know I am Topper…No need to tell me…
Ragini- You know that tab to tum safe ho…
Sanskar- Shabash beta Shabash… (If you have watched 3 Idiots movie then you have understood it…)
Saying this they start laughing…
Swara- Today I will not leave both of you…
She start chasing them…
After some time she has caught them…
Swara- Now where you will go…Today I will not leave you…
Ragsan – *puppy face* please shona..
She starts to melt…
Swara- OK …But not next time..
Ragsan – Thank you Shona…

Ragini – shona Lets go Ice cream Parlour tomorrow…
Sanskar- yes Shona lets go…
Swara- Yes why not…
Ragini- Yes We will go there tomorrow…But now lets go to the class.
Nahi to That Lady Gabbar will start her lecture…
Sanskar- You are right…Let’s go…
They trio are going to class holding each other’s hands…
Whole School adore their bond…
Screen ends on the smiling faces of Swasanrag…….
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So guys this was the first chapter…Let me know this through comments…If there is any mistake or you want to give me any suggestions to change my writing skills you can tell me…
Please guys as it is a first chapter then I wish even silent readers to comment…Good and Bad both comments are allowed…

Ok bye all of you…………………………..

Credit to: Prakriti

21 comments

  1. Rizna

    Interesing storyline I like it so much and make Swaragini pls haa.But I will accept if you make Swardhya also.

  2. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Nice…. If u make swaradhya also it will b nice…. C to the majority…… If u want ragini then please finish of that sanskar loves ragini track….

    • Prakriti

      Thanks dear…Ya lets see the majority… But I cant finish the track of Ragsan soon because I have not started it also…I will start their love story after 5 Episode….

  3. Divyarani

    First episode ws vry good..i lovd it..if u keep aradhya it would b better…but still i wont force u….it’s on u…but plzz ragsan ka track end it soon…as i cant imagine dem…nevr

  4. Tanu

    I think swaradhya is better in every ff thier is ragsan I m just fed of that so plz it’s better ki aaradhya ho

    • Prakriti

      I think you are right Di..I will see …..
      Are u the Author of Swasan Bin Tere….
      love u so much Di..

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