SWASAN – PYAAR KA DARD HAI

SWASAN – PYAAR KA DARD HAI

Heyy Anjali here!!!!
I finally figured out the name for my story… It may not suit the story at first… But it will make sense later on!
So…. We will begin with a short intro about the characters and then move on to chapter 1….
Hope you all like this as much as Mr Maheshwari and I… And yeah… I would like feedback from all of you for this…. I am starting this on my own… So not really sure…
Well.. Let’s go on with the intro and story…… Again… I hope you like it… Beginnings always make me nervous
PROLOGUE LINKS
http://www.tellyupdates.com/anjalis-new-swasan-fanfic-prologue-2/http://www.tellyupdates.com/anjalis-new-swasan-fanfic-prologue/——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
INTRODUCTION
Swara Gadodia – 20 years old! An extemely beautiful, cute, bubbly girl who is a hardcore romantic at heart! She always hopes to find her ONE… And she has… Until that day when everything goes wrong…..
Ragini Gadodia – 18 years old! An extremely beautiful girl who is practical at heart. She cannot understand how her sister can fantasize about her ONE…
Shekar Gadodia – Their father. A military doctor! A stern widower who loves his daughters but doesn’t know how to show it. Loved his wife Sharmishta a lot.
Sanskaar Maheshwari – 22 years old! A hottie!! A sweet guy who is heir to a rich business empire. Works with his father at Maheshwari Industries Pvt Ltd… Is a very relaxed and a happy go lucky guy.
Durgaprasad Maheshwari – Sanskaar’s bade papa! But became Sanskaar’s father ever since Sanskaar’s parents died when he was 5. Is a widower. His wife Annapurna died when Sanskaar was 19. Is a strict person who thinks only of his duty.
Laksh Rathore – Sanskaar’s best friend and owner of RATHORE HOTEL ENTERPRISES… Plays a sort of major role… Will decide soon…
They all live in a town PARNA which is about 3 hours from Kolkata. The Maheshwaris commute everyday to office.
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ONE LAST THING… In my prologues, It started with 8 years later… But my story starts from 8 years ago.. I didn’t want to show a flashback….
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CHAPTER 1
It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
How many times had she read this sentence? How many times had she read that book, for that matter. 300, 400, more than that? She didn’t know.
Swara set the book down on her lap and leaned back against the tree trunk under which she was sitting. She stared fondly at the book, PRIDE and PREJUDICE, which was almost falling apart due to the excessive usage.
Swara : Jane Austen Ji! Elizabeth got her Mr Darcy… Jane got her Mr Bingley. When am I going to get my ONE? Vaise… I don’t want a Mr Darcy. It will complicate my life too much. I will be happy with a simple Mr Bingley. Who fell in love with a simple town girl Jane. (her eyes glaze dreamily) My Mr Bingley… Yes.. One who will fall in love with right on the spot. One who will twirl me around and around until I’m no longer able to breathe. One who will comfort me when I’m sad….. Haaye… Mujhe kab milega mera voh?
She stared at the book again. Her father had gifted it to her when she was 12. It was her first romance novel. This was the novel that made her fantasize about her future life. Her future husband. She smiled and began wondering…
Swara (thinking) : Where will he be? What does he do? Does he have a fortune like Mr Bingley? Does he need a wife? Will I ever find him? Bhagwan Ji… Give me one clue na? You know that I’ve wanted to be a young blushing bride ever since I was 6. Ever since I went to Mitali aunty’s wedding. And when I got this book, My wish grew a thousandfold. Everyone gets their happy ending na? When will I get mine? I’m already 20 Bhagwan Ji! Do you want me to wrinkle before I meet my soulmate? At least give me a clue as to what he does.. I’m going mad picturing so many faces all these years. Will he match my dreams? Will he be my Mr Bingley? Will he be my Romeo? Without the problems ofcourse…
Her eyes widened and she looked up at the sky.
Swara : Bhagwan Ji! I won’t face any problems with him na? I just want a simple loving marriage. With work, quarrels, dances, parties, poojas…. Haan but one condition! I should always win the quarrels. Whether it’s shopping or who gets to watch the television, Swara Gadodia will only win. Is that ok? I will not let him watch football and tennis when my Jon Snow is there… When I sit and watch Masterchef Australia.. When I watch my hindi movies. You know what… Even better.. Let him be the type of man who will come and watch my sappy sappy favourite movies… Kuch kuch hota hai, Kabhi khushi kabhi gham… We both will cuddle and watch together. Manzoor?
She finally stopped talking and then realized she was rambling to herself. She sighed. Ragini was always telling her to be more sensible and practical, that love was not for everyone and that she should stop living in the clouds and come back to the Earth.
She could practically hear Ragini’s voice in her head
*Swara! Again? How many times have you thought about your so called one? Everyday you are sure that today is the day you will meet him but he doesn’t. Seriously… How do you look at life this way? Swara! Swara! Sunn rahi ho? Are yaar! Kya karoon iss ladki ke saath. *
Swara laughed. Ragini was her angel. Her voice of reason. And somewhere Swara felt she was right. That love was not for everyone. But she couldn’t help it.
Everytime she read her books or watched her TV shows…. Be it Nicholas Sparks, Julia Quinn, Georgette Heyer, F.R.I.E.N.D.S, Modern family or her favourite author, Jane Austen, Her knees turned to jelly. She immediately began to think about her future. Will she be as loved as Elizabeth? Will she get a husband like Ross Geller? Without the divorces Of course…
Wait… Why was she thinking of Ross now?
Swara (rolling her eyes) : You have got to learn to focus Swara! Papa is right, you know! At the rate you keep rambling on and on.. Switching from one topic to another, You will lose your own head some day. Speaking of Papa, It is already 5…. He will be expecting you soon. But not right now… So Chalo, I will read for some more time. At least half an hour.
She arranged herself comfortably and began to read. After about ten minutes however, She dropped the book, got up to her feet and looked around her. She then went around the tree three times, before looking frantically on all sides. She even went near the lake and searched as far as she could.
Swara (wiping the sweat from her brow) : OH SHIT! I’ve lost him.
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Sanskaar Maheshwari, Heir to the humongous Maheshwari business empire was usually not a person given to fancies but now, he was sure he was in love.
Ever since he had laid eyes upon her he couldn’t seem to move. The girl by the lake. It wasn’t her beauty. Oops, that came out wrong. He just couldn’t see her that well from where he was.
He was completely sure that the girl was gorgeous. Her hair was silky black and straight. Her shoulders was angled and she wore a simple shirt with palazzos that seemed to be made for her. Yes, He was sure she was beautiful. But he had seen many beautiful ladies in his life.
It wasn’t her intelligence. Well, He didn’t mean to insult her but she had just walked around the tree THREE times for no reason. And earlier she had appeared to be talking to herself. Or maybe it was God… She was looking up quite often.
Yes… This girl was not like anyone else like he had met but she didn’t seem to be that weird either. Anyways, Sanskaar was sure that the girl had bewitched him and now he was in love with her. Or atleast halfway in love with her.
His eyes suddenly narrowed. What was she doing?
She was climbing the damn tree. He stared doubtfully at her bare feet and then at the huge banyan tree. Could she do it? She looked very small compared to the tree. Was she trying to kill herself?
This alarming thought brought him to his feet and he came out of his hiding place in the adjacent woods. He certainly couldn’t allow her to kill herself.
Sanskaar (thinking) : Why does this poor girl want to kill herself? And if she did, Why choose the tree? Wouldn’t the lake be a better choice?
He thought of her dying and the thought made his heart wrench with pain. Surprised, his pace slowed. She was a stranger. How had he gone and fallen in love with her?
Sanskaar : You’re one mad fellow. If Laksh ever found out… You’re screwed man! First things first though! Stop that girl from committing suicide.
His eyes grew wide. He was impressed. She was quite skilled at climbing the tree. She had already reached the first branch.
Sanskaar : She is a beautiful, talking to herself, crazy, climbing trees person. And you had to fall in love with her. Great, Sanskaar Maheswari. Just great!
Suddenly the girl shouted.
Girl : DUKEEE? WHERE ARE YOU? YOU’RE GOING TO GET IT FROM ME TODAY. WHERE ARE YOU? DUKE! DUKEEEE…
Sanskaar stopped. He was surprised again. Was this girl calling HIM? But then how did she know that he was called duke? Who was this woman? Well, he had better go answer her call!
Girl (again) : DUKE!
Sanskaar stood below her and smiled amiably.
Sanskaar : Hello!
She stared at him like he was some alien creature and then went back to shouting Duke again.
Sanskaar : I’m right here.
Girl : I can see that. Unfortunately, I have better work to do. I have to find Duke.
Sanskaar (Astonished) : But… I’m Duke.
Girl (focusing him for the first time) : I’m really sorry Mister, But you’re not.
Sanskaar (indignantly) : I Am DUKE!
Girl : Oh, I don’t disagree with that. I’m sure you are Duke. You’re just not my Duke.
Red hot jealousy tore through Sanskaar’s veins. Was this girl in love with someone else? Was she not for him?
Sanskaar (a bit curtly) : How do you know I’m not the Duke you seek?
Girl ( Without looking at him as he waited for the answer with bated breath) : Well.. Because my Duke is 8 and you’re well, significantly older than him.
Sanskaar (his heart lightening once again) : 8? You’re looking for an 8 year old boy named Duke?
Girl ( with weary patience) : Yes! Dilip Arora, Known to people as Duke. Now, will you let me complete my task?
Sanskaar : Oh sure! But, Why are you trying to commit suicide? Wouldn’t it be easier to just find him?
What the hell was he telling? Suicide? Why did he bring that up? She was clearly not trying to kill herself. And he knew that.
Sanskaar (thinking) : You wanted to converse with her and this is the topic you chose? (sarcastically) A job well done, Duke!
The girl was now looking at him like he was an insane person. She had climbed even higher, on the third branch or something.
Girl : Suicide?
Sanskaar (playing along) : Yes! What are you doing up there? You can find your Duke right here. Are you scared his parents will scold you?
Girl (exasperated) : I am not commiting suicide. Swara Gadodia isn’t a weak person. I climbed up here so that I can scour the area and maybe spot him. I am a rational human being. But you most certainly are an irrational alien.
Sanskaar snorted. He probably deserved that. So Swara was her name… Nice. Seemed to suit her. Too bad these leaves kept blocking her face.
Sanskaar : Nice to meet you Swara!
Swara : Listen… Are you going to be here a while, just chit-chatting?
Sanskaar (taken aback at her directness) : Probably, why?
Swara : Then you can help me search for him… Just start shouting Duke.
Sanskaar (skeptically) : You want me to shout Duke?
Swara (impatiently) : YES! That’s what I said. Help me find the boy. (muttering softly) The monster
Sanskaar grinned. She wasn’t so silent.
Sanskaar : I heard that.
Swara : I really couldn’t care less. He’s keeping me away from my book. I will call him whatever I wish. NOW GO AND SEARCH FOR THE MONKEY.
Sanskaar (gallantly) : Ofcourse Madam! Anything you say…. I am yours to command.
And he started searching for his namesake.
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PRECAP : no idea
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So, yeah…. Here is the first chapter. I have tried my best… As we go further I will give longer updates.
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED THIS!
I hope you guys will comment. Am a bit nervous about this…. Starting problems you know.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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MISS ME??? Will post MMAI next chapter on 2nd or 3rd June… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Till then I won’t see you… Well.. commenting ofcourse.. but nothing else….
Love you all…. hope this too will be a fantastic journey…
AND I AM SOOO SOO HAPPY THAT YOU ALL CONNECTED WITH ME ON FB… IT IS REALLY NICE TO CHAT WITH SOME OF YOU… THANK U SO MUCH FOR FULFILLING MY WISH ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ :* :*
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Credit to: Anjali

102 comments

  1. sethooty

    Omg anjali new Ff…wow superb loved the first epi…Sanskar name duke..haha cute .
    Anyone gift u a romantic novel ..wen u r in 12

    • Anjali

      Heyy sethoo di!!! Yupp new ff… ???

      Glad you loved it….??
      Lol…. I don’t remember when I got it or read it.. I love pride and prejudice though….one of my absolute faves….??

      How are you???

  2. jaf

    Anjali! MMAI????????…. pls…. write this after u? End that i am impatiently waiting!
    I hope this ff’s journey would be amazing………..
    Coz u are a fab writer……

    • Anjali

      Heyy jaf….???

      Lol…. don’t worry… once my exams get over…ill start posting both simultaneously on alternate days…or if I can’t mmai definitely takes more precedence than this…so more epis of that only… so chill…

      Thnxxx ??? ur sooo sweeeet
      LOVE YOU!!!??

  3. Hi my first wife….how r u??If u be so irregular at this too i swear…i will marry again….and i will give importance to my meher and the next wife….just kidding…this chapter was good…u r really a rising star of TU…love u loads….(kissy)

    • Anjali

      Heyy chaitali… god… I’m so happy to see my husband here….?????????????????
      Haww….. suatan ke saath jaoge aap?? ???
      How can you??

      Let my exams finish…. uske baad…. I won’t be irregular. .????

      Meher sautan kaafi nhi ki aap ek aur lekar aaoge?? ??? jaaiye…. you don’t love me….

      But I loveeeeee u…..????

      And rising star?? Wow….. Idk about that….but glad you liked it…??

      • chalo xam ke liye abhi maaf kiya…sautan nehi launga…because i hate xams….nowadays this xams r eating my heads!

        Anjali ramprasad?I will send u a request…accept kar lena..ok??
        I love u too…mera dil itna bara hai ki dono biwi ko equally love karne ke liye kafi hai!

      • Anjali

        PAtidev forgave me…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

        Yayyyyyy!!! :* :* :*

        Hn I accepted ur request!!! ๐Ÿ™‚
        Aww…. Par mujhe sirf aap chahiye… Sautan nhi ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ˜‰

  4. Hope

    Fantasy!! Dreamer!! I’m dat kind of person.. Still waiting 4 my “Sanskar” actually Swara dreams abt Bingley..but me.Sanskar..
    I too watch f.r.i.e.n.d.s… But my fav is Chandler Bing.. He’s so cute..
    Then my fantasy book is “THE GLASSLAKE” by Maeve Binchy.. Ever since i read dat book…i started dreaming abt getting a bf lyk “Stevie”.. The beginning of d book is little bit boring..and u’ll never guess Stevie is d one 4 Kit.. But d story get interesting when deir lovestory starts….. I can write an essay abt dat book..and how madly i love it… I liked d tree climber.. Me too a tree climber! I still make mudpies wid my cousins.. And putting ur feet into a kid’s shoe is fun n nostalgic.. Long story short.. I lyk ur story..u nailed it..Rock it Anjooo..

    • Anjali

      Lol…. I’m not exactly a dreamer….I’m between both I guess…pata nhi yaar… but swara’s character turned out like this…so was wondering how it’ll be received….but ppl seem to like it…yayyyy

      I haven’t read the glasslake…. I will. Try it now…. yayyyy a new book suggestion.???

      Glad you like it hope….???

      Lol… I love ALL friends characters….but my fave is joey…. he is so adorable…???

  5. Harani

    Anjali ..yipee another Swasan ..oh my god ..swara Gadodia and sanskar’s meeting started with such a nok jhok..and it was so funny how sanky was red in jealousy even in his first meeting and most probably Pride and Prejudice is my fav novel ..which I read often sitting near the window …dreaming about my Mr.Darcy ..yeah and I am not wishing for Mr.Bingley ..nvm there is no thrill in marrying a man who will not show his little stunts and attitude ๐Ÿ˜›

    eeee …I think I am talking too much …even then I felt like telling this to you and yeah will be waiting for my all time fav MMAI …love you loads ๐Ÿ˜›
    again thank you for posting this wonderful work …:-)

    • Anjali

      Thnxxxx harani…… Yupp another swasan ff….????

      Lol…. even I would prefer a Mr Darcy….. thoda excitement toh banta h na…???

      Anyways… glad you liked it…???
      And Yupp mmai will start coming as soon as exams end…..????

      LOVE YOU ??

  6. tani

    really i am very njoying by
    reading ur ff eagerly waiting for next
    epispde โ€ฆall d best for new ff’s journey…. also waiting for Mr. maheswari n i’s update…

    • Anjali

      Heyy tani…??

      Glad you liked it….??
      Thanxxx…. hope this will be interesting the whole time…

      Mmai will come sooonnnn….????

  7. Anu Ann

    Its awesome dear…. Just now I read the prologues it was also too awesome… Waiting for next part

    • Anjali

      Heyy anu ann….. seeing you after a long long long time…???

      Glad you liked the prologue and this….????

      Will post asap….

  8. Kavya

    Awesome anjali!!? This chap was soo cute? I loved both swara nd sanskar in this. I’m also like swara? a girl who’s in fantasy land of her own?not searching for the ONE of course?

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx kavya!!! ???

      Lol…. this shade is swasan is not for long….so enjoy it while you cannnn….
      Fantasygirl huh?? Niceeee ????

    • Anjali

      Awww…… Thnxxx nanadji!!!! ?????Yupp duke
      ….

      I love that name/sound…???

      Will post soon…..
      Love you!!!! Meher suatan ko bye bye kahiye…. aap meri side pe ho….???

    • Anjali

      Hey nehasuhana!!! Aww… missed you all as well….. will post mmai from next Thursday onwards…once exams get over…???

  9. bisha

    Okay! I have started reading MMAI. But you wont get me soon there.

    Anyways, my badi bahu ki third story. Bohut accha. I am in love with this. This chapter 1 was funny and light compared to your prologues. Imsgine Swara climbing a banyan tree. OMG!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜› FUNNY LOL. And Sanskar’s lobe at first sight?! Keep writing dear. And yeah! Your FB ID? Please tell me so that i can poke my big nose there ๐Ÿ˜›

    • Anjali

      Lol….. don’t worry sasur ji…. am sure we will meet somewhere some time…??????

      Glad ur reading it…??

      Yupp third story…. can’t believe it myself…????
      Aww…. Glad you loved it…. ???

      Very light na? That’s how it will be for the first few epis before I start the actual part…???

      Banyan tree.???? I was trying to think of tree names…. but at 2 in the night my brain didn’t work…. so I was like…whatever just write it down…???????

      Fb id : anjali ramprasad

      Lol… Will be waiting for ur nose…??

  10. IREENA

    it was just awesome…the way you write I can imagine each n every scene….waiting for mmai post soon..

    • Anjali

      Thnxxxx Ireena!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Glad you liked it,….
      Will post mmai as soon as exams finish!!! <3 <3

    • Anjali

      Thnxx Sunehri ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ And OFC we can be friends… You don’t have to ask… ๐Ÿ™‚

      Just tell how old u r and what u do.. ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. R C B ian

    @Sanskar ~ Yes idiot she’s committing suicide. Why don’t you join her?

    Aww! Swara is so cute. And sanskar id an idiot. Sorry, I’m a little impartial towards anyone who loved Nicolas Sparks.
    Pride and Prejudice ???

    It was the first rom book which I read as well.
    @Swara ~ You’ll get Mr. Darcy and a complicated Elizabethic life. Thanks to my sister Anjali who’s going to put a twist ??

    Duke? We’ve a guy in our school whom we named Duke. As in Duke The Dog. And guess what? The background music playing when he enters the class.

    Who let the dogs bark. Voo boo boo.

    I love this story. Can’t wait for the next one. Ragini, c’mon! You’ll get your love soon so that you also day dream like Swara and me ???

    • R C B ian

      Sorry for rambling so much. Its just that I hadn’t been active here for two days ??

      Love you sis! And pray for RCB and me as well. I’ve an exam on Tuesday ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

    • Anjali

      Lol…. This is the first time i’ve seen u say anything about Sanskaar that was not complimentary.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      I love Nicholas Sparks… But Julia Quinn is my fave author… <3 <3 In the romance field ofc… ๐Ÿ™‚

      And yuppppp…… A complicated Darcy life is due…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Duke the dog… Aww…. So sad….. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      I just love the nameee…..

      Ragini's story might be season 2 pata nhi… Still thinking…

      Rambling?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
      And sorry…. Now i'm pissed off… Telling sorry to ur sis? Haww….. Jao…

      LOVE YOU TOO!! But no more sorries ok???

      And I miss you tooooooo…….. SO MUCH!
      I've exams on tue and wed… But after that, no more…..

      Will u pls come on fb… at least for some time? It's easier to chat there ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Jaf

    Thank you thank you thank you sooooo much!….
    OK job naya no. Diya mene Pls contact with that! Actually my account got deleted so the other no. It’s my mom’s….
    Kya batana chahti thi TUM’?????….
    And Ya i am chilling !!!!!
    At least after knowing that ur gonna continue MMAI

    • Jaf

      And Ya PRIDE & PREJUDICE is one of my favorite too. I love the way Elizabeth and Mr. Bingley mingle with their romance! Some what hate to love I guess! Coz its been almost 7years I read it! Bye ?
      Do text me! ?????

      • Jaf

        Wait! Wait! I guess Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy! I am hell confused ?
        Jane-darcy? Or Elizabeth -darcy? Or…
        Nah! I am sure Elizabeth -darcy?????
        I forgot silly me! ?????

    • Anjali

      Kuch nhi… Just that u werent ol for so many days.. So was wondering… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Ob I’ll continue MMAI… How could I not… If I didn’t everyone would kill me ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      ELIZABETH DARCY and JANE BINGLEY!!!! <3 <3 <3

      Lol… Haan u r mad!! But I love you :* :*

      • Jaf

        I know that u know ‘ I am mad’
        Huh?????….
        But you must be lucky to get a mad friend like me its very rare so…..
        Anyways I know why I’m mad cow of ur ff’s!

  13. stoneheart

    its intresting little piece … but still mr maheshwari and i is my 1 st favourite

    • Anjali

      Awww…. Ik !!! Koi baat nhi… As long as you like this as well… <3 <3 <3
      Love u stoneheart ji!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Anjali

      Heyyy Needhi!!!! Uk how happy I am to see u here??? ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Missed u loads… <3 <3

      Glad u loved it…. Will post asap!!!

      PHYSICS OVER…. CHUTKARA MIL GAYA MUJHE!!!! WOO HOOOOO!!!!

      I have chem and bio left… Bas… Aur kuch nhi…

  14. Ashu

    Hey anju!!!
    First of all…I missed u so so much!??
    But I was bsy the last 5 days…I was on a
    vacation…so couldn’t talk mch…

    But then I’m happy to see u with this new ff…. its a gd start dear….Pride and prejudice…wow!??
    And sanskaar…love at first sight, huh? And jealousy, hw cute!!!?? And suicide? That’s really lame excuse to start a convo…

    Waise…hw r u writing ur exams? Do it well, and come bck with a bang of MMAI!!???

    Love you sis???

    • Anjali

      Ashu <3 <3
      Heyy….. No problem…. I missed u too… But exams and all… so wasn't really active here anyways….

      Glad u like it…. Ikr… Idiot Sanskaar ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
      Yupp… Exams are going well…… Two more left then am baaack!!!!! <3

      LOVE YOU TOO….
      Btw… I didn't get a request from you… So have sent you one…. Do check it out.. ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Sueรฑo

    Hy my dea……. TE…… u rockd it as always…… so sanky….. love at frst sight n al ah!!!!! Nt bad….??
    Anywayz it ws damn cute…. swara imaginings n al…??

    Love ya……. waiting fr MAMI

    • Anjali

      Suneo <3 <3

      Lol…. Glad you liked it…. Yupp… Love at first sight… completely different from mmai na?
      But don't worry… This is gonna changeeee sooooon!!

      LOVE YOU TOO!!! Will post mmai soon :* :*

  16. vyshu

    Miss u dear….nice start. I’m sure u were writing abt yourself n not swara. Ross Geller…..LOL! U reminded me of Mannie (mdrn fmly)……lost in dreamland.

    I m very sad….i may not be able to read ur ffs for another 10days or so?

    • Anjali

      Heyyy vyshu!!! Missed you too ๐Ÿ™

      Lol… not about me… I certainly love all the books that I’ve mentioned… But not the fantasizing part.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      Manny… I love him…. I love Ross… Actually I love all F.R.I.E.N.D.S characters… <3 <3 <3

      Awww… Don't be sad… exams???

      Do them very well… And come baaaackkkkk <3 <3

  17. Jaf

    Hey! Read piece of silence season 2 I have posted yesterday itself. I mean it’s 12:06 now so!
    Pls do read!

  18. Pari

    Pls…..come fast wd mmai…its a trtre scrolling down through this cyclone of ff s evryday n nt finding urs dre ??…..and about dis one u rocked like evrytym…..u knw wat??? Reading ur ffs are a treat….so happy to get 2 treats together frm nw on.??….bt hope to get those regularly …..frm a silent reader turned speaker …lol ??

    • Anjali

      Lol…..thank you sooo much pari….

      AM SOOO HAOOY THAT YOU SPOKE.UP ?????

      Yupp…. mmai will come soon now… in 3 days or so…???

      And am glad you like this one also….awww….ur really sweet ??

      I will def be regular once hols start…. but in case I can’t…mmai takes precedence over this…โ˜บโ˜บ

  19. โ™ฅpriyuโ™ฅ

    Awww my sanky , sooo cute and simple story , wait how can it be simple when ur writing this ….

    Woow new new ff , great ….

    Anjali di how r exams going on ?? ….

    Post mr maheshwari and i fastly …. , all the best for ur exams

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx priyu…. how are you??? ???

      Lol…. its def not simple….just wait and watch…?????
      Exams are going really well..??

      Just 2 left…. then am freeeee….?????????????

  20. Jammie

    Awesome start dear.. looking forward to this story.. missing MMAI.. pls post that also once u r free from exams..

    • Anjali

      Heyy jammie….??

      Glad you liked it… ???

      Mmai is coming sooon…. few days or so…???

  21. Juan

    awesome starting….. sanky is really amazing

    i am really missing u …..pls post MMAI when u r free from exams

    luv u

    • Anjali

      Heyyy juan!!!! ??

      Miss you toooooo ??
      Don’t worry… only two days more…then I’m freee…..

      Am glad you liked this…??
      Yupp mmai is coming sooon….
      LOVE YOU!!!!! ??

  22. Pari

    U r sweeter actly…..keep writting lyk dis.. n u wl b sweetest????….n my maun vrat z over …so i wl speak frm now on non stop….???….thnks for replying…??

      • Pari

        ?…yaa..juz lyk u…… Bdw i questn…what do u do?? I mean school??or College???? I wss sumwat cnfused…i hve to decide ur new nick name according to dat….my new frnd…???

  23. RUPA

    Heyyy Anjali di,

    Missed me ???

    Well i missed u badly. Sorry to disappear abruptly but we guys suddenly planned tour.
    But as now i’m back i’m not going to let u sleep even for a sec.
    For now i’m going to read missed chappies of MMAI.

    A NEW FF???
    Based on “PRIDE AND PREJUDICE”???
    I’m sure u gonna rock it sis and this chappy was really sweet.

    Do post soon. Love u loads Anjali di <3<3<3

    • Anjali

      RUPAAAAA….. I was wondering where you were for soooo long….

      Lol…. I have two exams left…. but after that ill be free and u can trouble me all day…???

      Yupp… new ff… and no…. not really connected to pride and prejudice…just references….

      ?????

      Now don’t disappear ok?? Or else tell me then go….??

      Love you…. will post soon…??

      • RUPA

        So it’s not connected to “PRIDE AND PREJUDICE”, by reading very first sentence of chappy i thought it was. But anyways story seems to intresting.

        Through the title of story i guess it’s going to have tragic and lots of twists ofcourse.

        And yeah i’ll surely inform u before becoming MR.INDIA.

        Bye and TC.

      • Anjali

        No… not pride and prejudice…. but there’ll be lots of references to it…

        Yupp…. don’t go without telling me again..???

        Interesting…. I hope it will be….????

  24. โ™ฅโ™ฅ Awesome one….I read both prologues and this chapter….it seems soo interesting….I loved it….eagerly waiting for next…

    And coming to mmai…it is becoming soo exciting to know what is going to be next….i m soo curious about it…loved ur both ff to the core…keep writing dear….and update next asap (both ffs)

    LOVE UHH…!!! โ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • Anjali

      Thnxxxx Ashu!! <3 <3 <3

      Glad u loved it….

      And mmai also ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Lol…Don't worry wont keep u waiting for long ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      Will update asap!!!

  25. Fanficoholic

    Diiiiiiii u jzt killed it muaahhh?????????
    So another amazing story frm u hah. Coollll i jst luv this????
    And di wat do u mean by u wll jst comment? U wll nt post any episode????????
    Dnt do that diii. Itni badi shocking news ko main digest nahi kar sakti aur agar mujhe indigestion ho gaya na toh main apni mummy ko bataungi ki yeh sab kuch aapki wajah se hai??????

    • Anjali

      Thnxx <3 <3

      Vaise i can't keep calling you fanficoholic… I'll go mad…

      So I'm gonna call you FIFI… or would u like something else????

      and the just comment was not for now.. I had posted this during exams
      So i told i woon't have time to post another epi until they get over that's all….

      ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      LOVE YOU!!

    • Fanficoholic

      Di my name is vaishnavi. U can me tat r vaishu. And i am glad ki the just comment is nt fr nw.

      Love u alsoooo diiiiiii
      ????????

  26. sudharshna udhayakumar

    Hi anjali di do I am not a regular commenter in your fanfic but I am a great fan of yours MMAI……
    I want your help now…..
    Can I know the meaning of PYAAR KA DARD HAI ……. PLS AS I DON’T KNOW HINDHI. ..help this poor sis….pls. ..

    • Anjali

      hey sudharshana…. u r a tamilian right?
      U have commented in my ff before?

      and u were writing the dehleez ff??

      Pls dont call urself my fan.. u r a friend..

      am glad u like my ff.. <3 <3

      Pyaar ka dard h means love is painful.. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  27. Wow yar..such a cute love story..and I find this swara so similar to me..hahaha..
    And sanky as usual.. Heartthrob. Really loved it anju..
    Post the next chap.asap..

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx Richa…

      Cute for some time only ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      Then it gets serious…

      wow… similar to u <3 <3

      haha…

      Glad u loved it richa!!!

  28. Dharsha

    Hey?????u updated on May 29 but I aM reading this only today…???

    But Better late than never ???

    Coming to the chappy….

    It’s sooooooooooooooo nice or I must say very cute ???

    SWASAN ???

    Swara is a girl who lives in her own bubble waiting for her heart’s hero….nice to hear it???

    Sanskar…..love at first sight ???

    Waiting for the next part very eagerly and excitedly ???

    PC. (Post Comment):::::::U posted MMAI ahhh….??? And I think the title will be apt. Anyways great going and am waiting for next excitedly ???

    • Anjali

      Aww… true… better late than never…

      glad u loved it…

      but it wont be cute for long ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      will post pkdh only after this weekend…

      yupp mmai is posted ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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