Swasan previous birth (ts) part 2

Hellloooo everyone …. Back with next part .!! Sorry for the lateπŸ˜…πŸ˜…
Part 2
Swasanavniel were in a room and swasan were sitting on respective chairs … Niel closed all the windows and switched off lights…

Avni started hypnotizing both of them …. Swasan were sitting with closed eyes…had they reached to their previous birth thought the writer….lets see..
Let us see what are they seeing,
Its 19th century i think A huge palace is shown … Outside there are huge number of people standing… They are here to see their newlywed king and queen…
People as soon as the king-queen arrive started cha: god bless our king and queen….god bless our king and queen
King: thank you so much for your love and the blessings you gave us…
After sometime king queen went inside and the people too departed from there
In a big room,
King : Sujata ji you’re looking tensed what happened
Sujata: Maharaj (king) my shonu is missing…if i didn’t got her then I’ll leave this palace and go away from you*childish cry*
(So they are Ram and Sujata … Anyone here who thought them to be swasan?)
King: she must be here only … Don’t worry we’ll get her…
He calls few soldiers and few maids and ask them to find Shonu.
“Don’t worry sujata you’re shonu will be with you in sometime…don’t talk about leaving meπŸ˜…”
Sujata: until i get my shonu back don’t come near me… For now I’m just leaving the room … If i didn’t got my shonu then ill leave this palace
Ram: sujata ji wa….*before he could complete she left*
O god this lady …loves that shonu more than me..huh… not fair… Now what should i do now*mind voice – go and find her shonu* yeah you’re right

Sanskar pov
Avni started hypnotizing me… After sometime i saw myself in a big palace… Walls are too big in size and people here were like giants … Were that time people this much big in size i wondered…. Maybe …first i was afraid seeing everything so big… I was wandering in the corridor ….. Suddenly i felt like someone is following me … I got scared 😨… I turned around and saw a big creature in front of me…. It was coming towards me… Seems like it will eat me up…. After sometime I was running and it was chasing me … O god was i dead so soon in my past life… I reached in a room…there was large mirror kept in which i saw the reflection of that creature and a rat….it means that rat is none other than me😰😰…nooooooooooo
Sanskar pov end
Swara pov
After being hypnotised everything became black, after sometime i found myself in a big and beautiful room… I went outside…. I saw a rat in front of me ….i love rats and he was looking so cute ….don’t know why but i started chasing it … We reached a room… There i saw a large mirror in which i could see that rat’s reflection and a cat’s also… I couldn’t see any cat here…. Does it mean i am that cat… I was a cat in my past life😨😨…nooooooooooo
Swara pov end

Present
Swasan opened their eyes with a jerk and saw avniel standing with their hands on their ears.
Niel: what did you saw that you are shouting like this?You both were king and queen naa
Swasan got up from chair and without paying any heed to avniel walked out of the room
Swasan are seen eating ice cream with a gloomy face(actually when they are sad,they eat ice-cream)
Sanskar- ye kya hua…. Kaise hua ….. Kyon hua…*sanskar was singing these lines in a crying voice
Swara: today your voice is sounding so melodious to my ears
Sanskar: thank you
Swara:what were you in your past life ?
Sanskar: first you tell
Swara: lets tell at the same time
Sanskar: 3
Swara:2
Sanskar:1
Swasan at the same time: cat/rat
“What”
Swasan turned towards the source of voice and found avniel rolling on the floor laughing holding their stomach
Niel:*Between laugh * someone was saying they were king and queen in their previous birth
Avni: now i got it why they always fight on small-small things…afterall they were cat and rat in their previous life πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.
Swasan became embarrassed and left from there taking their ice-cream bowls from the table
Scene stops on avniel laughing face and swasan embarrassed face with a ice cream bowl in their hand.

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A/N
Thanks for reading till the end .!!
Thanks for the comments in last chappy.
I want your suggestions: should i give the last chappy or should i give their chuha-billi love story ?
Please do tell about that.
Thank you.

42 comments

  1. Fenil

    Fenil

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    Awwwwwwwwwwww……vanisha drvi ki jai ho jai ho.
    Omg i was thinking why are u asking for chuha billi pics.
    I want chuha billi love story.
    Pet dard kar raha hai has has ke.
    AvNeil are so cute.
    Ummmmmhhhh chuha billi.
    Loved it.
    Talent bahar aa raha hain.
    Bhootni ko bhi add karn.

  2. pehchano kaun

    hehe…first i also thought it as swasan
    but i got a huge shock seeing them aas cat and rat
    hasi hi nahi rok paa rahi hoon
    my stomach is paining wid laughter
    love u to the core

  3. Manasvi

    Manasvi

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    Wait, what..??😐 it ended..!!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘
    I want more.. I want more..!! I am telling you, I will go on a strike..πŸ˜’

    Anyways, cat and rat.. Kya jodi haiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Aur aapki history itni powerful h??πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Aur meri pro pic ke baare mai aap kya kehna chahengeπŸ˜€ Mujhe pata hai ki achi hai, lekin phir bhi😜

    Aur yeh story continue karna..
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    Arrey, itni der mei toh aap next chapter bhi type kar dete..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ

    Love,
    MinnieπŸ’•

      • Manasvi

        Manasvi

        |Registered Member

        Mere itne bade se essay ka aapne itna saa jawaab diya.. Bohot naainsaafi hai😏

        Aur aapne meri pro pic ke baare mei koi tippani kyu nai ki??😭

        Aur mujhe link send karna galti se bhi mat bhulna, varna aap toh jaante hi hai ki mai serial killer huπŸ˜ˆπŸ‘»

    • Vanisha

      Vanisha

      |Author

      Ab tum mujh jaisi aalsi se kya ummeed kar sakti ho😩
      Tamari pro pic sari che(fenil bhai ne bataya tha)
      Yeah i wont forget to send linksπŸ˜“πŸ˜“

      • Manasvi

        Manasvi

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        Arrey waah.. Aapse ek chhotu sa hi sahi, lekin gujjo msg read karke mujhe bohot khushi huiπŸ™‡πŸ»

        Love you dii😘

  4. Soumya85

    Soumya85

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    Superb one vani aka my sizuka
    Loved it a lot
    It’s sooo funny yar
    Cat ratπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I can’t control my laughter
    Lol rofl
    And dare to end it now😑 don’t end it okay!! Varna u know meπŸ˜‰
    Love you😘😘😘😘

  5. Milestone

    Oh God…cat n rat…..I can’t hold my laugh…..I was laughing on the floor too….

  6. Ishuyamjha

    Ishuyamjha

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    awww vani it was awesome i thought the king and queen to be swasan but it was ramta and swasan’s previous birth is hilarious and i want chuha and billi’s love story and sorry for late comment

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