swasan: we are perfect for each other (S2) PROLOGUE

Hey!! Its kritika here, back after four months. Some of you might remember me, for some of you I may be new. So actually I wrote a short story named “we are perfect for each other”. I have an awesome concept for its season 2, definitely not continuation though, but all I need is a good response. If I don’t get so, I will end it in the next episode..! it is not necessary to read season 1.
here goes a glimpse of the story!
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We were friends, then a couple, then a married couple, then 2 bodies but one soul. Today, we are just beside each other but I cannot see you, I cannot feel you, I cannot talk to you. My dear, I cannot respond you. It feels horrible.
I can hear you, love. Speak, speak. Take care of him, never let him feel alone. I know I am a very bad person. I cannot play any role in my life than living like a dead.

I never did that, sanskar! I know you believe me. But I am just hurting you now. You are crying because of me. Just me! Why do not you kill me god!

I am feeling something wet on my chest. Its him , oh god!

He is crying, with our seed in his arms. I have always been with him. To love him, to tease him, to console him, to make him happy! But today I cannot even see him.
just go home sanskar! Its hurting me. Go from here with our seed. Its piercing my whole body. My head aches! Aah..! I cannot say anything. It seems my vocal chords have died. I cant move a single part of my body.
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A/N
how is it? is it too bad? i am writing after 4 months!
ahh, if i will be happy with response, part 1 will be posted on 1 november. a special reason for that 😉
#comment_please
#kritika

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  1. Vyshu10

    superb…painful

    1. Kritika

      Thank u dear

  2. Alia

    Very nice

    1. Kritika

      Thanks dear

  3. Arshaanya

    Superb…
    Continue soon

  4. Nice..plz continue..tc..☺

    1. Kritika

      Tysm sweetie!!! U too tc

  5. Pikachu

    Next part jaldi nikal

  6. Pikachu

    Next part jaldi post kario. … Madam ji

    1. Kritika

      Sure piku!!! N thank u for your comment!!! U too post ur ff soon

  7. Nice continue

  8. Meher

    Swara is in coma???

    1. Kritika

      Meher mumma!! Log ffs mein coma se wapas ane ke liye hi jate hai!??

  9. Khushiii

    You’re backkk yay iy’s amazing continue soon

    1. Kritika

      Thank you soooooooo much dear

  10. Jyotii

    The words used are so touchy!!! Swara coma mein hai kya??????? M excited to read d next part!!! 🙂
    Ita good re!!! ???
    Luv u chotu???

    1. Kritika

      Thank uuuu tii dii..
      Love u too??

  11. FROZEN CHOCO

    welcome back dr… do continue… it’s nice..☺☺

    1. Kritika

      Tysm soo much nive dear!!

  12. Dharani

    nice continue soon

    1. Kritika

      Thanks dharani

  13. Wonderful

  14. Mahjabeen

    Awesome dear

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