swasan: we are perfect for each other (S2) Episode-5


Episode 5

-A week later-

A tear slipped my eye seeing our family photo. I, sanskar, ragini, lakshya, mom, dad, badi ma, bade papa. We all were so happy…until..

Today we are going to have a photoshoot. And seriously no one can be more happy than me. This is our baby’s first photoshoot. Ah.. Not baby. Its syon Swara! Before 4 days, he got a name. And he is all time smiling. Syon is an active child. Though he is small, he is always ready to play. I have noticed he is fond of bright colours. He loves soft things like his soft teddies and cushions.

Syon isn’t a cry baby. I have observed he doesn’t cry much till he is with his mom and dad. I don’t know he is going to be a right-handed boy or a left-handed. Don’t know why, I always wanted to be left-handed but my parents taught me to write with right hand, so I am a righty; therefore I want syon to be left-handed.

i have decided to take syon out most of the times because it will indirectly increase his immunity level. today we are going for photoshoot and beach too.

The photographer told us to kiss the baby on both cheeks. I held the baby from his sides and kissed his left cheek. Sanskar kissed right cheek. The photographer clicked a photo as a flash sound was heard plus we saw the light on us too. He told us to give us the same position meaning the last photo wasn’t appropriate. The photo session went on.

There was a picture on which I had to keep syon on my chest and sanskar hugged me. He had to kiss me On the space Between my nose and lips. I had to kiss on the space below his lips. It was quite awkward. I mean, in front of the photographer and all!!



I can see fishes playing. Children making sandcastles. Will syon also make them when he grows a little? I take off my footwear and stand on the soft, smooth sand. Syon is in my arms. I can see he is happy seeing a new place as its crowded. He doesn’t like to be alone.

The rythemic pounding of the waves is very peaceful. Its almost evening. We three move towards the blue ocean. The shore is very clean. The name of this beach is ‘Santa Monica Beach.’ Its very beautiful.
Its almost 5 hours from Las Vegas. Syon easily and happily travelled. I think he likes travelling, just like me! Point to be noted. Yes, I am noting his habits.

I suddenly felt sanskar’s hot breathe on my shoulder and his hands around me and syon. He has back hugged us. Such a loving hubby he is! The water hitting my legs gave me a tickling feeling. Suddenly my hair came in between and as I was holding Syon I couldn’t move them. Sanskar immediately understood and tied my hair into a top knot/ bun. I wonder how he knows all these things.

“When you were pregnant, i thought we would have a baby girl. I even imagined her eyelashes, rosy lips and long brown hair, just like you. Brown hair.. I thought it would disturb our daughter while playing so I learnt from YouTube: how to tie a top knot!” Wow! But did I say that too aloud?
“Yes you did!” I sighed.

Theirs person’s POV.

Sanskar’s yes-you-did reminded him of his time when their maid said the same to him. He was embarrassed that time. So is Swara now. They both are the same. Aren’t they?

Sanskar spoke, “Swara!”
“Yes sanskar!”


“Yes sanskar. Speak.”

“Swara.. Swara.. Swara..”

“Arrghh!! Speak sanskar. Don’t irritate me.” It made Swara aggravate.

“Can I ask you something?”


“Why would you want to be a friend with a mushroom?”
“Why will I want to be a friend with a .. Mushroom?”, She spoke stressing the word mushroom, ” I already have lots of friends.”

“Ughh!! Its because it is a fungi (fun-guy) yr!” He spoke and laughed. Swara’s eyes went wide. She stared at her laughing husband who always talks about microorganisms. Don’t know why!?

They reached home. The other family too booked a small bungalow adjacent to sanskar and swara’s mansion .

Maheswari’s discovered that they could see a baby’s room from one of the big windows of a guest room. They understood that its swara and sanskar’s baby’s room.

The room was beautifully decorated. They could see the whole room almost as it was the only room whose window was open. The dim lights brightened more as soon as sanskar switched on all the lights of the room. There were coloured lights too.

They attached a camera on the window such that they could see what was happening in the baby’s room. They knew it was wrong. But they had to. Because they already missed 3 months of their first grandchild’s and nephew’s life. They didn’t want to miss more.

The next day they checked the footage:
As soon as sanskar switched on the light, the room was filled with the baby’s giggles. The baby laughed very sweetly.

Hearing a shower-like sound they understood that swara and sanskar made The baby shower. They wanted to know the name of the baby. They also heard swara’s giggles with, “Syon, baby. Please don’t splash water on me.”

After some time they saw swara carrying a beautiful baby boy and sanskar wiping his body slowly. They could hear the voice of
A steel drum which echoed. Soon they saw swara with a giggling baby in her arms and a loud sound of drum.

They could see many things till night. The way Swara consoled her crying baby. The way swara sang melodious ‘lori’ to make her son sleep. The way sanskar became a horse for his son. The way they both played with their little bundle of joy. There was just one doubt in maheshwari’s minds. ‘Would sanskar forgive them?’

They have done an unforgivable mistake. They all consider the mistake as unforgivable. But do they know the other word for unforgivable mistake is crime? Accusing their own son and daughter in law.

When it was not their mistake. They discriminated between the couples. And today when they are guilty, who knows if swara or sanskar would even like to see their face? Swara and sanskar are very happy. It can be clearly seen they are completely satisfied. They don’t need anything more.

Days passed.. 14 beautiful days passed. Maheshwari’s were contented seeing their son and daughter in law happy. But as we say human are never satisfied with what they have, same is here! They want swara and sanskar to forgive them. They are very much sure that swara and sanskar are angry on them. But they aren’t sure if they are going to forgive them.

“sanskar sir! I have got a very important news. Maheshwari family has come from India and they are spying on you by living in the bunglow at your home’e left side.” Sanskar’s PA spoke quickly as soon as he got the news.
“What The hell?”

Sanskar continued, “they won’t get peace without disturbing my family. Maheshwari’s i am coming.” He spoke in rage gritting his pearl white strong teeth.
“maheshwari familyy” sanskar roared as soon as he stepped in durga prasad maheshwari’s bunglow.

Very sorry for the late update. Was out of station. And now its very hectic because school had started. No proof read. Very sorry for typos. Thanks so much for your comments. Thank and sorry!!

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  1. Madam ji post soon… And its beyond awesome… Love it… Ummmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaah ??? ????

  2. Superb…!!! It’s soo lovely…to read their happy moments…!! And sanskar is soo sweet and funny too…!!Loved him…!! After reading the ending…I am eagerly waiting for next part…!!

  3. it was just amazing a perfect swasan family
    post soon can’t wait to see sanskar and maheswari family face off and they shouldn’t be forgiven

  4. Soujanya


  5. nice episode. update soon

  6. Dharani


  7. Balaji

    Wah! It’s superb Kritika! I love each and every epi. How Sanskar stands for Swara, how he care for her and their baby, when she is in coma, his reaction and finally their moments with baby Syan. It’s just superb and I am spell bounded to your writing style. But I feel pity for Raglak. Yes I really feel pity. In your first episode,
    Swara made vase broke down mistakenly and Ragini fall down and lose her unborn baby. Swara never thought her mistake will result such an disaster.It’s an accident we can’t blame Swara for that. But for a mother,there is no other worst thing than losing her baby. Ragini carried her first baby . when a mother carries a child , not only baby grows. The parents dream also grows. They imagine how will be the baby look like mother or husband, boy or girl. Their imagination, dreams, love also grows with baby. But when it’s broken, their condition is unimaginable Kritika. The pain, sorrow should make them broke down inside fully and emotions will taken over them. they can’t think only dark of sadness occupy their mind. Even though their heart knows Swara did a mistake and it’s a accident, but mind will point Swara. they think like that because of Swara’s mistake, they lost their baby. Because man mind is not wise. It can’t be. It is the reality.
    Raglak lose their thinking capability and accuses Swara. Sanskar is taking Swara’s side as a good husband but he failed to understand Laksh’s feelings as a brother. Sanskar failed to understand Laksh sorrow and broken state of losing his baby ,as anger hides his eyes. The ones who should handle the situation, I mean elders , failed to handle the situation. They sent Swasan out. Like a good in bad. It’s also good for Swara because Ragini lost their child and Swara carries her baby. In my pov, Love,Revenge and Guilt are the most strong feelings which can change anyone’s life upside down. Whenever she face Ragini face, guilt will kill her inside. In Second episode, swara come out of guilt with the help of councellor. If swara lives infront of Ragini, Ragini suffering will definitely make her feel guilt. After that , now Swasan have a little cute happy family after so much suffering. but Raglak and maheshwari’s repents. When Raglak suppress their sadness and can differentiate between good and bad, they realized that Swara’s is a mistake and it’s an accident. now they want to get their moments with syan.but they hesitate when thinking about Sanskar. Now I say why I feel pity for Raglak in your ff. Sanskar life is perfect now, but Raglak it can’t. even though Raglak may have child in future and lead a happy life, losing their first baby will remain as a scar for life long and I want Syan to enjoy grandparents love because I know how much important to a grandchild. Even parents have expectations but Grandparents didn’t have any expectation. They just love their grandchild unconditionally.Well! This much long comment. It’s just my pov. If I am hurt anyone or make them feel bad, i am sorry. I just want to express my pov.
    All the best for your future work friend and keep smiling, take care.

  8. Arshaanya

    Hey kritika u posted it again… i posted my comment on other post… bt again i’ll tell u m loving it so much…. swasan moments with syon u showed dem beautifully ??
    Dere photoshoot d last pic ❤❤ nd at beach sanskar hugging both from back ??? dese r moments r bliss for swasan fanz… love u for giving such a beautiful update ??
    N coming to d maheshwaris plz dun let swasan forgve dem… want swasan n syon away frm dem
    Continue soon

  9. Vyshu10

    awesome….swasanyon r adorable…the wy u have described what all things swasanyon do is awesome

  10. Deeksha gupta

    U posted dis chappy again ..i already commented but again awsm part ..

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