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SWASAN, “A PERFECT PLAN” (OS) by Mica

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Bismillah, Hi, i’m back, but sorry, this story is not eligible for readers under 16 years old,
not for romance, but somehow it gives less value, well “don’t try it at home”
take it as fun only…..no more talk, here we go..

A PERFECT PLAN

CHARACTER SKETCH :

SANSKAR MAHESWARY :27 years old, actor, married
SWARA GADODIA :22 years old, actress, orphan

A boy and a girl stood facing each others, tears rolled on their face
“i love you Arjun”
“i love you too Radhika”
they hugged each others tightly, cried.
“aaaannnd…cuuuuttt!” a man yelled from nearby, immediately they
released the hug,some noise sounded kinda humming bee from few crews
as they started to maintenance the stuff around, camera,lighting etc.

“It’s done for today,thank you so much Swara, Sanskar!”the director
said to the boy and the girl, “good job!”.
Swara and Sanskar only smiled, said “thank you!” in unison.

Swara started to walk to her cabin, meanwhile Sanskar spotted a girl
which gave an angry gaze on him, he walked fastly to her.
“What Kavita ? why you are angry ?” Sanskar asked in confusion.
“what is that haaa ?? how can you hug her so tight ? do you love her ?
do you like to hug her ?” Kavita blurt out in rage.
“Omg Kavitaa! how many times i should say that i don’t love her, it’s
just acting, she is my pair in this serial, it’s called professionalism.”
Sanskar irritated.
“Professionalism my foot! i knew it! i knew that you enjoy it!” Kavita
smirked.
sanskar closed his eyes in frustration, fist his palm and shook his head
to hear his wife nonsense talk.

‘Let’s go home! i don’t want you create any drama here” Sanskar hold
her hand, tried to drag her when she jerked him and walked to Swara
which stood in front of her cabin door.

“Hei, you! Swara!” Kavita called in rage.
“Hello Kavita maam! how are you ? ” Swara smiled.
“Stop acting innocent! i know you tried to seduce my husband! such
cheap girl!”Kavita pointed her finger on Swara, she dazed to hear that,
tears flew to her cheeks.
“Kavitaaa!’ Sanskar yelled from behind. He put his uncomfortable gaze
to Swara, folded his hand muted sorry to her.She only nodded.

sanskar dragged kavita, but again Kavita jerked him, turned to Swara,
“and tell your fans to stop their nonsense pairing you and my husband!
such cheap fellow!” Kavita walked away shouted ” don’t tell that i
didn’t warn you!’

Sanskar walked behind Kavita, followed her path, only to hear another
her blabbered ‘it’s lucky of me that Kavya also working in this project,
that she can put her eyes on you both huh! otherwise maybe that cheapo
Swara brings you to her bed!” Sanskar heard her silently, shook his head
in disbelief.Suddenly…

“Kavyaaa darling! thank god we meet here! i want ask you join me to
Flamboyant club tonight, i though you go home already!” Kavita run,
hugged kavya, leaving sanskar, they chit chat.

Swara was still sobbing when laksh came to her,asked in concern tone,
“Are you crying ? what happened ?” Swara only silent,yet put her gaze
to Kavita that stood lil far away from them with Kavya.

Followed her gaze, laksh understood, it made him i peak point of anger
“Every time she called you cheap, charactereless, and you only cry,crynd
shook her head in no. Laksh so annoyed on her.

“Every time she called you cheap, characterless, and you only cry,cry
and cry, stop it swara! she crossed the limits!” laksh scolded her.
She smiled faintly, ‘let’s it be, laksh!”
“But….!” laksh wanted to protest when someone called Swara. swara left

———————————————————————

“Tell me Kav what that cheapo did today to my husband ? “kavita started
to interrogate Kavya.
“Hmmm you can’t imagine! on hug scene today, they retake for more than
20 times you know ?” Kavya said in evil tone, made Kavita boiled in
anger.

“WWhat ? but i saw only once.”Kavita in confusion.
“As you arrived after they took a break! it’s happened before they took
a break! the directors so upset!” Kavya added fire “well you know that
cheapo only has opportunity on this matter, so smart!”

“AArrrrgghhhh!!!! i should slap her, huh!” Kavita turn to anger bull
turned around only to see Swara talked to Sanskar. She run to them,
lift her hand to slap Swara, but Laksh hold her hand on the middle.

“what wrong with you CHUDHAIL ?” laksh roared.
“I just left him for second, but you already roamed with my husband”
Kavita shoot Swara with her red eyes.
“I..i..director asked me to tell the tomorrow schedule to Sanskar!”
Swara stammered.

Kavita dragged sanskar made Sanskar startled back to sense to saw the
recent incident, but he couldn’t do anything as it will be more drama.

Kavya went close to Swara and laksh, offered to Swara “Swara, i’ll do
shopping! wanna join me ? ” she said sweetly.
“thank you Kavya, but sorry i will go with Laksh” swara smiled.
“Well OK then! Bye! ” kavya bid bye and walked away. Laksh, who stood
silently only gave annoyed gaze to Kavya act, took a glance on her
murmured “CHAMELEON!”, made swara chuckled.

————————————————————-

Morning, Swara checked her phone, waited she queue to take shoot when
Sanskar came to her.
“Morning Swara! hmm.. i want to apology for yesterday incident” sanskar
said hesitantly.
“Hi, morning! it’s OK! i understand her, seem your wife love you so
much! you lucky to have her.” Swara smiled.
“Lucky ?? well seem yes.” sanskar took a deep breath. “What are you
doing ?” he looked at her in curiosity.

“Oh, i only checked our fan page, we have crazy fans you know, they
named us as Radhika pair! cute isn’t it ?” Swara said with sparkled
eyes, handed her phone to Sanskar. They spared the moment.
well, there was a pairs of eyes who gave intense care to them, she was
none other than kavya. She made a call immediately,.. and we know the
rest, Kavita came there, yelled, shouted, created drama.

———————————————————–

“What is this Kavita ?” Sanskar threw the phone on bed, on empty space
beside Kavita who lied on her stomach. Kavita startled due Sanskar’s
act, she got up from bed.
“What happen ha ? why you throw away the phone ?”

“It’s you! what happen to you? how can you be so rude to my fans ?
Sanskar yelled.

Kavita bend her body to grab the phone, checked it, it shown her insta
account..
=======
xxxxxx :@kavitamaheswary maam, i’m ardhika fans, do Swara and Sanskar
Sir like to spend time together off screen ?
Kavitamaheswary :SHUT UP B*TCH, MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS..
========

“Oh this one ?” Kavita smiled evilly, “she was the one who started,
those cheapo Swara’s fans, how they think about you and that Swara ?
how can they imagine about you and her ? did that moron understand
that you are married ha ? and why you angry on me ? i was doing right
only, Or wait… are you happy for their cheap thought ?” she asked
in angry tone, jealousy again drive her crazy.

“For god sake Kavita! stop it! stop your possessiveness, your jealousy,
stop bashing my fans!” he sat on bed, tried his best to give explanation
to her.
“You know, fans are important for actors, for me, we need them to
support us, to encourage us, i know sometime they crossing limit to us,
since some of them are immature on age or even on thought, but it’s
common, even SRK’s wife should have this deal with SRK-Kajol’s fans,
but look, SRK-Kajol are happy with their own family.” Sanskar gave
stern look to Kavita, “can you simply ignore them kinda Shakti arora’s
partner when Ishveer’s fans ask Shakti to unite with Radhika or try to
be mature to facing immature fans ? can you ?”

“I don’t care! it’s my right to be your wife to remind them that you
are married, that morons!” Kavita walked out from the room angrily.

“I’am the star, but you the one who get star syndrome” Sanskar murmured.

—————————————————————–

Day by day, Kavita insecurity increasing. She yelled and bashed Swara
all the time, scolded director when there were romance scene between
Swara and Sanskar, gave rude comment to fans, made Sanskar frustrated.
On his desperation Sanskar tried to talk to her

“Kavita dear, are you OK ? you are always angry nowadays, should we go
to doctor or may psychiatrist ?”
which made kavita exploded her anger, throwing all of any stuff at
their house “So, you think i’m mad ? i’m insane ? and you can leave me
with that cheapo ?” kavita hold his collar. He speechless.

Sanskar depended on Kavya to made Kavita calm any time she made drama
at his work. All that routine happened until the serial went off air
due low TRP… (nyah nyah nyah, muahahhahah)

—————————————————————-

Time passed, an evening, kavya went to kav-san as they had appointment
to go clubbing. Kavya and kavita waited Sanskar at living room when
Sanskar with his dashing body came there and said ” wow kavya! red
gown suit on you body!”
Something provoked kavita to hear sanskar’s word, she didn’t know what
happened when suddenly her hand grab kavya dress, tore it over and over
yelled “you love her dress ha ? she is pretty in this red dress, rite?”

Sanskar and kavya shocked to see kavita action.
“Kavitaaa! stop it! what are you doing!” sanskar shouted, tried to
pushed Kavita away from kavya who only stood there silently, sobbed,
clutched her gown from total damage due Kavita. Sanskar took his
blazer to cover kavya body as her gown tore on many parts.

Kavya run out from the house, meanwhile Kavita brought her anger, run
to her room upstairs, sanskar followed her.

“What is that! what is that kavita ? ha ?” sanskar slammed the door.
“You ask me what is that ? it is a wife’s deed when her husband give
other women a compliment! it is a wife’s right, you know! damn it!’
Kavita yelled back.

“Omg kav! i compliment her as i respect you being her best friend,
she is your best friend, what wrong with you ??” Sanskar rubbed his
head in frustration.

“Best friend ?? ” she laugh in sarcasm, “best friend who ready to back
stabbed me, because of her, you start ignoring me, yesterday night you
carried her on your arm, your fans start yelled so called KarYa the
shorten of sanskar Kavya, so sweet ha ? ” kavita screamed and cried.

“You knew that i carried her as she stumble on heavy drunk and i told
you already to ignore my fans, their act, their wish are beyond our
control kavitaaa!”

“I don’t care! you should only tell them to stop! you should stay
away from kavya also!”

“You know what? i’m feed up! i’m feed up with your possessiveness, i’m
feed up with your craziness, because of you i lost many contract, you
ruin everything, yelled to all my co actress, pushed, bashed my fans
for only asking signature from me, yelled to every women around me,
humiliate me in public, i’m give up! i’m leaving!” Sanskar lift his
hand.

“You can’t leave me, you know the consequences !” Kavita warned him in
worried tone.

“yeah i wish, but you know i can’t, i’m yours, my life is yours, so
please stop this, stop your jealousy, you should ask apology to kavya,
she is your best friend, you’ll be alone without her, you know that!’
Sanskar convinced her.

————————————————-

Here after, kavita and kavya were back to be best friend, but her
craziness and possessiveness still there, she rude to everyone,including
Ram and Sujatha, sanskar’s parent. Sanskar reputation somehow become
bad.

Another big incident happened when the trio went to public together.
There was a photographer who only asked sanskar and kavya to pose in
closeness and intimate as they both only the stars, not Kavita. It
boiled kavita in anger, moreover when the photografer upload it on
his insta, tagged kavya, many fans gave compliment about how suit they
both as couple. She couldn’t take it anymore, she burst out her anger,
threw everything, her behavior almost uncontrollable, got nightmare on
her sleep, acted as mad person, Sanskar so frustrated as she always
deny to go to psychiatrist.

——————————————————

Noon, Kavita was sitting on couch watching TV when her phone rang.
She lift it as she knew it was Sanskar who call her.

Kavita : Hello darling, what’s up ?

OS :Sanskaarr!! please put me down (girl voice)

(kavita whispered,”Kavya”)

OS :please Sanskaaarrr! put me down (girl voice)

Noo..nooo.. we’ll go to your room (boy voice)

(kavita whispered, “sanskaaaar”)
She dazed, shivered, the phone fall from her hand but she took it,
she run to kitchen, grabbed the biggest knife, grabbed her car key.
She drove car fastly in jet speed for 1 destination, Kavya’s house.
She put hand free tool to hear another convo from her phone.

OS : well..which one your room ? (Boy voice)

this one (girl voice)

OK! here we are, beside your bed, let me put you slowly (boy voice)

let me see it (boy voice)

can i touch ? (boy voice)

aaahhhhh Saanskaarrr! (girl voice)

slowwlyy pleeaseee ( girl voice)

Kavita increased her speed on highest level, ignored all of angry words
from other drivers.

Sanskar did his work when suddenly there was a bang on the door.
“Kavitaaa!” Sanskar and kavya said in unison, shocked.
Kavita stood there hold a shiny big knife with full of fury.

They both so scared.
“Kavita please put you knife down! let me explain.”
Sanskar said in scared tone “her leg got sprain and i helped her.”
Kavita didn’t pay a heed on him, her gaze fixed only to Kavya who lied
on the bed, she couldn’t move due the sprain. She walked to her, lift
her knife, sanskar tried to push her, but there was strange power of
kavita that overpower him, she pushed him, made him fall.

kavya rolled her body, yelled ” help me please ! help me”. Kavita
successed to stab her tigh, Kavya screamed, she again got stabbed on
her hips. Sanskar attacked Kavita from behind, pushed her down.

Both Kavya and sanskar yelled for help for sometime, fortunately,
there was a servant who heard them, he run to them, “please call
police and ambulance, hurry up!” Sanskar gave him order while tried
to handle Kavita’s brutality.

after sometime, ambulance and police came there, Kavya brought in rush
by ambulance, Kavita acted as mad person, yelled ” don’t touch him,
don’t touch my husband! i’ll kill you! don’t leave me anskar!”
she mumbled that words over and over on police’s hand.

Sanskar only sat on the floor as lifeless body.

————————————————————-

After some hearing at court, the verdict was putting kavita at mental
asylum being mentality disorder patient.

Sanskar went out from court in his sad face, walked to many reporters
who already waited him to get his statement.
“Sanskar sir, how is your feeling now ? what your future plan ?”
one reporter asked.
“I dunno what to do, i can’t think much, this tragedy is shocking me!”
sanskar answered in desperation.

“You should divorce her Sanskar!” a lady voice interfere from behind.

“Mom!! how could you ? she is suffering rite now !”

“It’s for you betterment, ask any people here who able to wait a
criminal and mad person which we don’t know when she become normal.
you should give me grand children soon.” Sujatha in challenge tone.

“ha ya beta! your mother is rite,” some people said.

“Sign this divorce paper Sanskar, it’s only need your signature.”
Sujatha handed him a paper, with a hesitation he signed it.

“can i bring it mom ? and please, i need time and space, let me go!”
Sanskar took the paper, walked away from that crowd.

—————————————————————–

Sanskar walked aimlessly on a lonely road, his face sweating due the
hot of the sun, messed hair, his tie loosen, his blazer on his shoulder,
he clutched his divorce paper at his right hand. Sometime he kicked
the stone which blocked his way.

Suddenly he stopped as he saw there was a sport car on the edge of
road, lil far away from him. There was a beautiful girl stood beside
the car, wore a knee length gown wrapped her s*xy body, a lady hat
covered her head. She waved her hand to him.

He stood quitely for a while, then smiled widely, he run to her,
strecthed his arm. He threw his blazer on back seat once he headed the
car, wrapped his arm to her waist, lift her and twirled her around.
“Saaaannskaaarr!” she screamed, they laughed together.

Sanskar joined his forehead to her, murmured in excitement.
“We did it baby! we did it! i’m free now! i’m free! your PERFECT PLAN
made me free! i love you baby! i love you!” he kissed her everywhere
in happiness.

“Look at this, this is my divorce paper, we can unite now, we can
marry.” he showed the paper to her,the tears flew from his eyes.

“Omg, you are crying honey!” she smiled in tears too, shed his tears.

“Because i’m soo happy! you made me happy! i love you Swara! i love
you soo much!” he hugged her tightly, she did the same.

they released the hug, then he smashed his lips to hers, kissed her
passionately, she even reciprocate the kiss, they tasted the sweetness
of each others, poured the love, the missing feeling, their happiness.
they took a break for a while then continue the kiss.
“i missed your lips soo much.” sanskar murmured between their kiss.
“we can do that for long our life” she smiled and broke the kiss, she
wrapped her arm on his body, and put her head on his embrace.

“What our plan now ?” he asked still hugged her.
She smiled and whispered on his ear, she said in husky tone, ” a
honeymoon before the wedding, what say ?”

He widened his eyes, cupped her face ” You are naughty, i’ll love that!’
then pecked her lips.

“Let me drive!” he gave his palm, asked the car key.

“Nope!i’m driving, you are in my service now prince! ” Swara opened
the car’s door.

“Whoo hoo thank you princess!”he hopped in. Swara then sat on driver
seat. She gave a sunglasses to him and put a sunglasses for herself.
the car steered it’s wheel on their journey,

“Where will you bring me ?” Sanskar took a map in front of him.

“It’s surprise prince! ” Swara winked.

————————————————————

“Saaanskaarrr! stop it! it’s ticklish you know!” Swara got annoyed as
Sanskar disturbed her by kissed here everywhere, her hand, arm, neck,
cheeks continuously.

“Sorry dear, i can’t control myself, i missed you soo bad!” he started
kiss her shoulder again.
“Sanskaarr! it’s public! don’t be so shameless.” she jerked him.
“UUgghhh it’s lonely road, no one looking ” he took a glance to the
road and back kissed her.

“Did you remove the drug from her cupboard already ? ” Swara asked.
“Sure honey! i won’t forget that!” he gave a tight kiss on Swara’s
cheeks and back to his seat. ” Poor Kavita, she didn’t realize that
her vitamins were drugs, really you are such brilliant girl, baby!
beauty with brain!” he kissed her hand proudly.

———flashback———–

a lavish room, 2 bodies lied on the bed, covered by a soft bed cover,
hiding their naked body. Their breath panting heavily, the sweat
popped up from their shining skin which red due the hotness of their
bodies. They are Swara and Sanskar.

Swara put her head on his embrace, tried to arrange her breath to the
normal speed, after the feeling that somehow she was normal, she moved,
put her mouth to his ear whispering ” How is that ?”
Sanskar only smiled and rolling her beneath him, whispered to her ”
you are soo amazing!” then he kissed her earlobe, licked her neck.

“Sanskaarr! stop! you should go now !” she pushed him slowly. He turned
his body back. “i hate this! uughh can i stay here tonight ?”
Swara slide her half of body above sanskar’s, ” you can’t dear! she
will more suspicious to us !” she draw circle on his chest.
” Why don’t you divorce her ?”

“I wish i can, huh! but without a really good reason, it will be a huge
scandal for us, i can’t bear that ” He said irritated.
“So, you only care about your name ? your reputation ?” Swara pouted,
she felt disappointment.

” No.. no.. no..! don’t take me wrong dear, it’s not about mine, but
yours! ” he cupped her face, looked at her lovingly, ” look, we are
the best jody on tv nowadays, can you imagine if only i divorce her
and marry you ? they will bash you badly, point out your character,
labeling you as homewrecker,i can’t bear that, i can’t see you sad!
i love you so much Swara! you are the first girl i madly in love”
He hugged her tight, caressed her hair. She overwhelmed to hear his
words.

” You know what ? sometime i think to give her poison, but still,
public will somehow suspicious to us .” He took deep breath.

“Don’t be so sadist!” she pouted. “Hmmm.. ahh idea!” she snapped her
fingers. ” How if we gave her drug ?

“Drug ? narcotics ? ” Sanskar surprised.

” Noo, it’s difference, it’s drug for mentality disorder patient, i
ever heard from my psychiatrist’s friend, there is a drug for schizophrenia
patient, with a correct dosage it will be medicine, but in wrong dosage
it will be dangerous, it create hallucination, over worried, clumsiness,
it’s not harm for body, but affect much the nerve.” Swara explained.

“Goodd! seem it will be PERFECT PLAN dear! the drug will triggered her
to do such low thing without create any auspiciousness, and may we can
get sympathy from public also! uugghh i love youuu!”

“Deal then ? i will get the drug tomorrow, put them on her vitamin
bottle, uummaah!” she pecked his lips.

——flashback end—————-

“And now here we are! dream comes true! everything turned as our
expectation! i got divorce that too forced by public, whoo hoo! ”
sanskar screamed.
“Ha! what to say your sad acting too fabulous dear,- “Mom!!
how could you ? she is suffering rite now !”-” she mimicked his face.
“you saw it ? you saw that interview ? god! ” sanskar laughed.
“you know what ? your plan to hire the photographer really effective,
asked him to upload the pic, and fans reactions, goosshh! you such
a great planner.”

“Even you!the way you manipulated her by the phone game, so s*xy!”
She kissed his cheeks.

” Imagine how smart our children later.” they both giggled.

“ugh! what is this ? ” Sanskar noticed a bag beside his feet. “omg!
champagne ? you and your PERFECT PLAN!” he shook his head in disbelief,
“can i ? ” he asked permission.
“Sure! why not!i ” she smiled.

POOP! the champagne opened, “time to celebrate!” he shouted, took 2
glasses from the bag, poured the champagne to a glass and handed it
to Swara, Swara shook her head in no. Sanskar pouted.
“Honey,i’m driving now! i can’t take a risk for us,better you drink it,
i know you are very thirsty right now after walked for long time under
the sun.” sanskar sighed.

“Where is the cooler box ?” Sanskar asked after gulp the champagne.
“Oh, in the back seat!”
Sanskar then put champagne on it, tidy up the lil mess, and sat back,
turned the radio. they both enjoy their jurney.

After few hours, Swara stopped the car at the edge of the cliff, the
top of hill. the view just too beautiful, the beach view beneath far
away,the forest and big trees around. She hopped out the car, stretched
her arm out releasing her tiredness. She didn’t let herself but take
a deep breath, inhaled the pure oxygen to full her lung, soo fresh.

She turned her gaze to sanskar who falling in a sleep, his face was
peaceful, she smiled to see him. Swara hopped in the car, moved closer
to Sanskar and whispered on his ear ” honey! wake up! it’s your turn
to drive.” in soft and calm tone.

_________________ S T O P H E R E __________________________________

For ending of this story, i have 2 option : SAD ENDING & HAPPY ENDING
you can choose one you prefer….
sooo, here we go..

_____________________________________________________________

OPTION 1 : SAD ENDING

Swara hopped in the car, moved closer to Sanskar and whispered on his
ear ” honey! wake up! it’s your turn to drive.” in soft and calm tone.
“Hmmm..seem the sleeping powder i had spread on the glass gave you
great effect.” she smiled evilly.

Swara lift Sanskar’s body with full of struggle, slide it a side inch
by inch, put him on driver seat. She tied his body and his arm with
seat belt, pretended it as rope, then put a stone on gas pedal. As she
thought everything perfect, she close the car’s door and leaned her
body to waking up Sanskar.

After sometime, Sanskar opened his eyes, smiled to see Swara’s face
beside him, “Sorry Jaan, i fall….” before he could complete his
sentences, he realized that he couldn’t move his body. “Swara what is
this ? your another surprise ?” he was in excitement.

“Everyday is surprise Mr Sanskar Maheswary !” Swara smirked.
“Swara! please release me! don’t scare me!” Sanskar began to scared as
he sensed something.

“Well what i can say is, Karma is a b*tch Mr ! do you remember Neha
Gadodia ? your college friend ? i’m her young sister, swara Gadodia!”
She whispered at his ear in full of hatred.

“Nnneehaaa! Yyyoouuu!” Sanskar whispered, His eyes wider, shocked, his
face turned white in pale.
“Yeah, me! soo..enjoy your ride to hell!” She started the engine, as
the stone step on it’s gas pedal, the car moved fastly, brought
sanskar’s body fallen to the cliff. Sanskar felt the wind brushed his
face when he closed his eyes in tears, murmured ” I love you, Swara!”
Next second, he felt the crush on his car and his body before the
sound …BOOOOOMMM!!!!!!!! the car exploded.

Stood at the edge of cliff, Swara’s body stiffened to hear the sound.
She put on her sunglasses, whispered “GOODBYE BASTARD!” on cold tone.

Next morning, there were 2 girls sat on couch in front of TV, watched
the news program, the headline of news was SANSKAR MAHESWARY, THE
SHINING STAR COMMITTED SUICIDE DUE DEPRESSION, he seem unable to
handle the huge scandal revolved on his life bla bla bla…..

“Our mission is over, di! He got what he deserve!” a girl said in cry,
she hold other girl’s hand.
“Yeah Swara! you did it! you completed it! you punish the bastard who
killed and raped your sister! i wish she get peace wherever she is now!”
the other girl said in tears.

“Without you it won’t be happen! thank you soo much Kavya di!” Swara
hugged her.

“Come on! Don’t be! i know Neha was your sister, but She was my best
friend Swara! it’s my duty to get justice for her!” kavya released
the hug, swept Swara’s tears.

The news change the topic to Sanskar’s parent, the public blamed them
caused sanskar’s suicide as they forced him to divorce. Swara and Kavya
smiled to hear the news.

“Look! another culprits got punishment too.” Kavya said happily.

“You right di! they are the root of problems, they created monster but
covered it with the sheep woll for society, being parent, instead
giving punishment to their children for their crime, they hide it,
covered it for only their reputation on society.” Swara in concerned.
“So let society eat them alive ” Swara added.

“Same goes to Kavita!” Kavya exhaled a deep breath, “She seem got
mental illness for loong time ago! she knew that crime, but instead
reported it to police, she burnt the prove only to forced that bastard
married her.”
“You know how shocked me when Kavita confessed what she have been done?
how shocked me to found out that my friend able to do that.” Kavya in
sadness tone, sighed.

“Thank to alcohol, but that incident ended my clueless 2 years
investigation to find that bastard, kavya di! how frustrated me those
time.”

“Your big effort, your smartness and your PERFECT PLAN! i’m proud of
you! and tonight, laksh will propose me as he promised.” Kavya’s voice
full of excitement.

“Oh, i’m forget to say thank to Laksh bhay! how he protected me from
that CHUDHAIL! congratulation for you both di!” Swara smiled faintly.
Kavya sensed something weird, but before she would able to ask, Swara
run away from there, shocking Kavya.

Kavya followed her worriedly as she heard a vomit sound, “are you OK
Swara ? what happen ?” she found Swara stood in front of a wastafel,
vomitted. In chocked voice, “don’t say that you..!!!

“I’m pregnant!” Swara cut her question, cleaned her mouth with water,
then took tissue to dry it. Kavya stumbled back, she felt lifeless to
hear her statement, sad, confuse, mixed feeling, she only can whispered
2 words out from her mouth ” why Swara ?”

Swara stiffened her body, she looked herself on the mirror, a lone
tear felt from her eyes, “I LOVE THAT BASTARD, DI!”

———————– THE END —————————

__________________________________________________________________

OPTION 2 : HAPPY ENDING

Swara hopped in the car, moved closer to Sanskar and whispered on his
ear ” honey! wake up! it’s your turn to drive.” in soft and calm tone.
“honey! baby!” she caressed his cheeks, kissed his forehead.

Sanskar opened his eyes to feel her touch, “ugh oh! sorry jaan! i fall
a sleep!” he adjusted his sit, his face full of guilt.
“It’s OK! i know it’s hectic day for you! but it’s your turn to drive
now, i’m tired!” Swara pouted, it made Sanskar chuckled.
‘OK cute princess! “he pinched her nose cutely, hopped out the car.
Swara put herself on passenger seat.

Sanskar sat on driver seat only to realized something, “Omg! it’s so
beautiful views! can we stay for a while to enjoy sunset ? ” he said
in persuaded way, Swara nodded.
“Oh I love you so much darling!” he wrapped his arm on swara’s
shoulder, pulled her closer. Swara put her head on his shoulder, they
entwined their finger. Silent for sometimes.

“You know Swara! you lifted the loads from my shoulder by your PERFECT
PLAN! You don’t know how guilty i’m in this few years by the thought
that i killed your brother ! how i blamed myself as i didn’t give my
self to police because down deep in my heart i didn’t believe that i
able to do that and i afraid to give agony to my parent! blamed my
self to be a looser as i married her when she blackmailed me.” Sanskar
broke the silent, his eyes became moist.

Swara pulled herself closer to Sanskar embrace, said, “And i came to
you by a plan to take revenge from you, to destroy you, but then you
shared your problem with me without knowing that i’m Nikhil’s sister,
you TRUST me, showed me the copied picture of the incident, the
picture kavita’s have to blackmailed you! made me know that you only
trapped, made me melt and fall in love to you, i love you Sanskar!”
She kissed his cheeks.He smiled “i love you too!” then smashed his
lips to hers.

Swara startled for the moment, but then without wasting time, she
kissed back, passionately,tasted the sweetness of each others, the
fresh air around them demand them to feel more and more, the beautiful
environment made them feel so romantic, made them feel soo good.
they broke the kiss.

“You feel warmer now ?”Sanskar cupped her face.

“What ?” Swara in confusion.

“I know you are feeling cool now, that why i kissed you to make you
warmer!”

“You shameless, how can you kiss me to warm me!’ Swara hit his chest,
her cheeks turned red.

“Shameless ? me ? you asked me to do honeymoon before married and now
you call me shameless only for kissing ? how come ? ” Sanskar in fake
anger, he hide his smile.
Swara could do nothing but cursed him under her breath, her cheeks
more red by embarrassment, She turned her face away.

“Now, it’s perfect!” Sanskar wrapped Swara’s body with his tuxedo. His
action made Swara smiled happily, turned her face to Sanskar,
” thank you.”

“We forgot our champagne.” sanskar showed the bottle and the glass.
Swara took a glass from Sanskar. He poured the champagne to Swara’s
glass and his. they lifted the glass.

“For our PERFECT PLAN, our future aand our shamelessness” Sanskar
winked. Swara chuckles. CHEERRRSS!!!!

“by the way baby! how did you know that i was trapped ? “Sanskar in
curiosity asked.

“well, it’s simple, from the blood splashes on your shirt! if only
you stabbed my brother from close, used an 15 inch dagger,in full force
the pattern of blood splashes on your shirt won’t be like that! it
will be longer than dots, but your blood splashes pattern on your
shirt were dots, it obviously planted. You didn’t know as you were
drugged, you only knew that you woke up with blood in your shirt and
from the picture Kavita showed you. Down on the conclusion that, The
person who knew it,and used it, must be the killer. Don’t forget baby,
i’m a forensic student !” Swara explanation made Sanskar surprised.
He felt so proud to her, to have her.

he kissed her cheeks, “omg! i love you! i love your smartness!i love
you cuteness, i love your wildness!”
He looked at her lovingly ” how blessed me to have you as my soon to
be wife, to be my life partner.”

“What ? wife ? when you proposed me huh!” Swara protested.

“Look!! sunset is starting! ” Sanskar pointed the sky which turned to
be orange and red. The sun descended, replace it by beautiful moon.
Then both lovey dovey enjoyed the sunset for moment, spared champagne.

“Let’s we continue our journey! ” Sanskar started the engine.
“And i’ll be your navigator!” Swara winked and gave mischievous smile
to him. Sanskar, who knew her type of smile, murmured under breath
” oh god, save me! but i will definitely love it.”

As per his prediction, Swara didn’t left a chance to disturb him,
kissed him everywhere, and he only enjoy it along their journey.

After a half of hour driving, they stopped in front of a small villa.
It’s beautiful in artistic country type, small real waterfall and pond
made it more unique, gives the peace feeling to the creatures around.
Sanskar spotted something in the corner, pointed it,
” can we go there ?” Swara nodded.

That is a graveyard. A name “NIKHIL GADODIA” printed well on it.
They walked closer, Sanskar kneel down, touched the graveyard said
” Hi dud! i’m so sorry for what have been done, but i want you know
that i love your sister so much, i want to spend my whole life with
her, i promise to give her happiness, to protect her, please bless me,
bless us. ”

Sanskar turned to Swara who stood with teary eyes, he walked closer
to her, took a small box from his pocket, kneel down in front of
Swara. He opened the box, there was a beautiful ring with a big
blinked diamond on it, he lift the open box to her, said
” Swara Gadodia, what i can say just i love you, i can’t live without
you, will you marry me ? will you spend whole your life with me ?
be my better half ? be my wife and the mother of all my children.
WILL YOU ?”

“YESS, YESS, YESS and YESS!” Swara gave her hand to him, and sanskar
slided the ring to her finger, stood up, twirled her. they cried in
happiness. “i love you too Sanskar” they kissed each other
passionately for a while.

“Sorry honey if this proposal too simple for you.” He too worried by
tought that might he disappointed his love.
“Noo.. it’s the best proposal ever, you propose me in front of my bhay!
you propose me in front of the important person in my life .” she
burst out crying in happiness, felt blessed to get someone who know
well about her. Sanskar hugged her and shed her tears, calmed her.

She walked closer to the graveyard. “Bhay! i missed you soo much! i
wish you happy now! i punished that culprit already.” she caressed
the graveyard. ” Look bhay, i found my love, my guardian angel, you
don’t worry about me know, rest in peace bhay! i love you.”

they left the graveyard, Sanskar wrapped his arm on her waist, mean
while Swara put her head on his shoulder.
“All children ?” Swara murmured in thoughtful voice, she lift her head
” how much children you want Sanskar ?”
Sanskar smiled and whispered on her ear” how about a cricket team”
She jerked, mouth open “that much ???” yet she whispered on Sanskar’s
ear in husky voice ” let’s start make it now!” she rushed to the villa,
left Sanskar in confusion.

“Swaraaa! waiiit!” Sanskar shocked by her behavior, once he realized
it, he only shook his head, murmured “oh god! i love this wild cat.”
He run to follow her.

5 MONTH LATER, they gave announcement their love relationship to public,
by the story that during the process of healing Sanskar’s wound, they
met each other after long time since their last farewell party of
their project. they became closer and fallen in love to each others.
Public blessed them as newly amazing couple. The news brought biggest
happiness to Ardhika’s fans as well as Swasan fans, their dreams come
true. Even Sanskar’s parent made her as their own daughter too.

At 1 good day, on a good month, 2 months after their announcement,
they married in a huge lavish party, united by god and blessed by
everyone. Mr Sanskar Maheswary and Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheswary,
SWASAN, the heavenly couple.

Sometime, lives is about GIMMICK and PERFECT PLAN.

——————- THE END ————————————–

___________________________________________________________________

A/N :tell me which one you prefer ? SAD ENDING or HAPPY ENDING ?or may you have other option ?
by your will, let me know your other option.
be frank, sad ending is my original plan, but i can’t let my swasanian family sad, …
and Kakali.. it’s my treat for you….
that’s all, wish you enjoy, LOVE YOU ALL..

147 Comments
  1. Mirna

    wowwwwwwww loved it mics dear this time i will go for sad ending ๐Ÿ™‚ tc

    1. Mica

      thank you soo much mirna for loving it god bless u

  2. Alku

    hahahaha…micaaa awesome dear….suits present scenerio…liked both happy nd sad ending…as swasan fan i prefer happy ending only….hahaha…loved it to core…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Mica

      Alkuuuu…hmmm something fishy with your laugh dear ๐Ÿ˜€
      thank you so much for loving it

  3. U know what Micaaaa,, now a days people r soo eager to make me cry,so as u..coz after reading this i got soo emotional that couldn’t stop my tears.. As a SwaSan fan as well as VaHe fan what else i want rather than seeing them happy n together..

    i reread it…. but being a reader/girl,i can’t accept some initial part somehow .. i dunno why.. m lil confuse regarding my own thoughts now.. but typing up coz my stupid fingers is drooling over the cute key-board…
    i loved the 1st part, as story proceeded i got a clear picture of ur “Behind the scene” n i was seriously happy n enjoying reading them..seriously CHUDAIL N KAVYA gosh it was a ROFL moment for me… Then suddenly everything got upside down when the twist came.. oh it was indeed “A Perfect Plane”.. but somehow their that kinda act showed them as coward.. like giving drug,making her mental n sending asylum n all..
    i know she was a mental piece n a criminal,thought SWASAN had many other ways to make her confess her crime.. but they choosed the literally short n wrong one which i didn’t like at all.. !!
    Well i know,it was needed for MY SwaSan’s reunion n upcoming life with EO.. ANYTHING FOR SWASAN… *Push CHUDAIL to Nalla..
    uiii u did rit giving warning at start,, i appreciate u for this…*hug

    waaa !! let it b,, it’s all my moron mind’s creepy thoughts…
    Now lemme climb to Everest n sream” I HATE CHUDAIL”.. wish she got electric shocks more….
    again Whispers near ur ear “I LOVE MY SWASAN’S THIS STORY”. ;D
    what u asking about the end..? wahhh,, obviously i need the happy one n i’ll b ready with my fav hanky ……….m feeling much better,reading CHUDAIL’s madness n her punishment.. huh my curse works… back to my curse session…. LOVE IT DEAR,,
    Thnk u for writing this.. it’s kinda night making u know*wink like ur 1st OS “The Hug”made my night…
    Too much blabbering now a days.. huh all credit goes to F*N G**L… ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Mica

      waaaa Kakuuuuuuuu you got my point.. yeaahh it’s really2 value less…
      being the writer i can’t imagine myself on swara’s state to gave herself to her enemy
      it will somehow opposite with our moral and value hehehe..
      but i aside it for awhile and pour out the darkness from my side when we are rule the world, about drug, for 1st option, Swara prefer get justice for everything equally, so she want destroy all who involve, don’t forget about love too.

      for 2nd option, well i love that you didn’t satisfy about this, that you fell the flaw on it ๐Ÿ˜€
      as 2nd option i refer it to criticize about people and reputation, how people love to wear mask, about confess crime, it’s kinda big scandal, to make kavita confess crime will blow up everything, ( swasan relation, swakhil relation etc)
      popular people HATE scandal.
      that why i said about GIMMICK too, as it’s happening nowadays…
      same goes with Hypocrisy , the topic we talked yesterday ..ahem ahem

      in this story, 1 true thing about swasan is THEY LOVE EACH OTHER no matter the situation..

      for the rest..weeeellll it’s bad.. very bad ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      so, just let’s fun.. thank you soo very much.. ummahhh

  4. Deeksha

    Awesome……!!!!!!!! Awesome…….!!!!!!!! Awesome……….!!!!!!!! Amazing…….!!!!!!!!! Amazing…….!!!!!!!!! Amazing……!!!!!!!

    1. Mica

      thank you!!!! thank you!!! thank you!! soo much….

  5. Kaynatk01

    it was damn awesome though i loved happy ending much but in sad ending one i love swara the much though she took revenge but atlast she fall in love with him…..but i cant see my sanskaar bad so i prefer happy ending its really awesome written

    1. Mica

      waaaa,,, thank you soo very much Kay.. yeah it’s TRUTH in this world that SWASAN LOVE EACH OTHER no matter what the situation…

  6. Rabia0032

    Awesome dear yaar what to say about ur ending I lived it both ending awesome dear but dear I loved most happy ending beacuse I cant See swasan seprated…

    1. Mica

      thank you soo much dear for loving it, uugh even me

  7. Omgg yr no words seriously no words superb concept superb story suberb twist Nd superb Jodi SWASAN ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Mica

      waa,,thank you so very much.. what say SWASAN IS HEAVENLY COUPLE dear

  8. Well I don’t comment much but you forced me to comment on it๐Ÿ˜ฎ…… Yaar it’s just mind blowing, I guess you took it from real life only๐Ÿ˜œ as same is happening with us Swasan fans….. Well it’s just example don’t take it serious, Dhanya also sometimes feel insecure cz of fans๐Ÿ˜ก…… Firstly I was sad for Swara bcz she gets humiliated like Helly๐Ÿ˜ญ but after reading further I was shocked๐Ÿ˜ฑ, indeed it was A PERFECT PLAN๐Ÿ˜ˆ I’m so happy you give two movies in one ticket (buy one get one free๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜˜) and about ending well I only preferred Happy Ending cz I hate sad ending but in this OS I preferred Sad Ending more cz he deserves it but at the same time I was feeling pity cz he truly loved her which he confessed before taking last breath and then Swara’s confession after his death, Ohhhh God i just loved it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ and I even loved the Happy Ending……… Dear come back soon๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Mica

      haaaawww Toobaaaa! i forced you ? when ? *hide the hammer
      well….real life ? ahem ahem.. i dunno ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      thank you so very much for loving it ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Shifa96

    It’s awesome dear..loved both the endings.

    1. Mica

      thank you so much dear for loving it

  10. Wow loved it first time i want a sad ending cause i liked the ending but plz dont kill Sanskar โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

    1. Mica

      thank you for loving it, uugghh sorry for Sanskar, but well Swara keep their symbol of love on her

  11. Wow… Wonderful dear.. Loved it.
    I was laughing & imaging the persons in real life while reading this.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
    And the plan was a big surprise for me… Indeed it was a perfect plan..
    I love both endings.. But as a swasan fan i chose happy ending for them.

    1. Mica

      waa.. thank you so much for loving it dear…
      even i’m laughing to read you comment as i dunno what you talking about.. ๐Ÿ˜€

  12. Laaa

    didi….,!!!!!! it was awesome amazing fabulous fantabolus splendid extrodinary lovely os….i love both the endings n like the happy ending more awesome didi loved it love u keep going n where is ur ff….????post it asap now only read the 2nd part…it was awesome di….

    1. Mica

      waaa. thank you so much Laaa for loving it…uugghh bout Forever First Kiss ff, sorry may it will be delay, my laptop is broken so i couldn’t upload it.

  13. Mahavir

    awesome di i love sad ending…

    1. Mica

      thank you so much dear for loving it

  14. Rj12

    loved it loved both the endings๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    1. Mica

      thank you thank you for loving it ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  15. Heltej

    Mica it was superb dear! I liked the sad ending! Happy ending is also superb… I was thinking what will happen if the ‘someone real ‘ come to know that u wrote os about her!
    1.ur os will get promoted on her instagram
    2.u will be abused like anything
    3.u are not his real fan๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Mica the celebrity…. ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ
    Love you dear! Hug n hug… After a long time… Again hug!

    1. Mica

      Helteeeeeeejjjjj… omg dear!!! i missed you sooo much
      whooaaaa you here! you here!
      but uuughhhh i hate you! you scared me huhuhuhu
      seee… i’m shivering, trembling, paralyzing, my hand shaking like anything ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
      God..i’m really scaring.

      wait..wait..wait..who are you talking about ?*innocent

      whooaah really i miss you,,wish you have happy year…XOXO
      thank you so much

      1. Heltej

        Mica… How innocent are u!?… I know i know๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
        Pinching ur nose… Is it real u?
        Let me think… Thinking thinking…
        I missed u too alot… After the photoshoot of marriage now im free… N i have gained 2kg by eating so much…. Yummy foods!

      2. Heltej

        I missed you too! Im thinking and thinking… How much innocent are you!?
        I love you! Hug and hug again hug…
        What to do… I was busy with post wedding shoot n so many marriage!
        Now i gained weight!
        Innocent girl

    2. PUNCH MI

      1. Heltej

        Ohh nooo๐Ÿ˜…

    3. PUNCH MICA,,, to check it’s really HELTEJ DI, u or someone else….!!! ๐Ÿ˜ถ
      Missed u Dii, stay happy n blessed..

    4. Vyshu10

      Hiiiiiii…..so glad to see u.

      Haha…so true. Mica “beware”

      1. Heltej

        Even im glad dear hows u?

      2. Mica

        Vyshuuuu…nooooo

    5. Mica

      waaaa,,, 2 kg ? hmmm mm don’t say bhukhad helly influence you or there is something ? omg,,, i wish it soo much for you

      1. Heltej

        Hahah… Influence of bhukaad helly only๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

    6. Vyshu10

      i m gud……haha answer mica’s question….u gained weight by eating or some other reason๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™Š

      1. Heltej

        Im truly innocent ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  16. Tamil

    Awesome loved it both ending

    1. Mica

      thank you so much for loving it

  17. Vyshu10

    OMG…..MINDBLOWING! Fantastic! Awesome….awesome….awesome. A big hug…….

    When kaku, arshu n all told me about this OS….i was so eager to read it. It took me 2 hrs to read this….i read half….i couldnt control my laughter/smirk/grin (so many emotions together)…we had a big discussion on this. Then i came back n read d other half. I liked both endings…..but as a swasan fan…happy one more.

    This is like Da Vinci’s code…normal to the onlookers but so much hidden. Innocent we๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

    1. Mica

      waaaaaa.. you know what ? i was waiting for you !!!!! big big big hug

      hahahhah,really we are very very innocent… we only write a story na ?

      thank you soo very much uummaaah

  18. Super marvellous….. Stupendous and magnificent…. And all the beautiful, epic words of the dictionary for such an awesome OS…. I surely preferred the sad ending….. Although,it was emotional but that was the real one….And close to reality…… Happy ending was also superficial….. It was seriously out of the world…. Loved it….. Beautifully each thing was planned and it was top-notching….
    Love,
    โคโคโค

    1. Mica

      goosshh i’m overwhelming dear.. haa..thank you soo very much for loving it โคโคโค

  19. Its amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ love it dear I become ur os fan ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Mica

      thank you soo much dear for loving it ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ aawwwwww

  20. Sethidisha002

    no i want happy ending

    1. Mica

      i put both the ending already dear, did you read it ?

  21. SWASAN

    woooww….. โค๏ธโค๏ธ โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    it was fantastic,……. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    fabulous ,…….. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    fantabulous ,…….. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    awesome,……. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    marvellous……. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    totally out of sight yaar… โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    loved it a lot… โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    indeed perfect plan……. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    both endings are really awesome…. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
    u nailed it…. โค๏ธโค๏ธ

    1. Mica

      thank you โค๏ธโค๏ธ
      thank you โค๏ธโค๏ธ
      thank you โค๏ธโค๏ธ
      thank you so much for loving it โค๏ธโค๏ธ

  22. Humayra175

    Awesome both of the. Endings well some points were were real the jealous wife part kinds of relates to varun wife ๐Ÿ˜‰

    1. Mica

      thank you soo very much..huh! was she really jealous ? hehehe.. ahem ahem

  23. MAHIRA

    Micaaaaaa !!!!
    What the!
    Pyaree sweety Cinderella swara who turns crualla!
    I LOVE IT
    Could image who is kavyaa…
    One day you’ll take time to explain to me the birthday issue lol
    My sadistic side loved the sad end.. Recalling durga/shorya story…
    How he was blind in his love to het
    The poor laksh always soooo innocent in Swasan matters… Should back off lol
    I literally was shocked that they were having… Shameless story :p… How good actress she is :p
    Then end… She finished loving the bastard… Heartbreaking :
    The happy ending was fabulous
    You and your nikhil mania *rolling my eyes to the sailing*
    Lovely Swasan putting aside any problem even as but big as a wife lol

    1. Mica

      Mahira didiiii… as i said i’m cute outside but b*tchy inside ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      who who who ? tell meeeee ? ahem ahem *very very very innocent this time
      birthday issue ? well it’s kakali specialization to explain *drag Kaku from bathtub of ice cream..
      i knew it, we somehow have sadistic issue ๐Ÿ˜€
      i can’t leave laksh ans nikhil.. what say! huhuhuhu
      thank you soo much for loving it…
      shameless us, how can we leave it….

  24. Humayra175

    I am sure she was jealous that’s why after they won best jodi award we did not get much swasan iv

    1. Mica

      ahem ahem……whoo hooo,

  25. Manasvi

    Micu dii..
    Hii.. How are you??
    Sorry for commenting this much late..
    But one ofy frnds told me to read your story, as she felt it too REAL.. And so I took a break and started reading..
    And believe me, its tooooooooooo REEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLL…๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜
    And sorry because I read it even after you gave the warning, but if there is no mature content, then I can read it, right??
    But I simply loved it..
    Both the endings were superb..
    But as I m a sad ending lover nowadays and I guess the sad ending was more unexpected, so I loved sad ending more..
    Love you dii..
    Take care..
    But but but, wait a minute..
    Where is forever first kiss, your ss??
    And what does that 69 mean?? *confused*

    1. Mica

      Manuuu deaaarr!!!! mg.. you read it ? i wish i didn’t spoil you hehhehe
      ReAAAl ???? is it so ? ahem ahem….
      whooaahh, i didn’t know you love sad ending…. it’s kinda unique …
      sorry, my SS got stuck as my laptop broken…and i hate to re write,,
      ugghhh.. better you forget about it, pleeaseee… maybe someday you will know it..
      thank you soo much dear..

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