swasan: we are perfect for each other episode 5

hey guys!! kritika here!! a girl named #tvisha has copied this ff n posted on this site only with her name n people are praising her..what to do…i wasnt going to post today but to take some action against her, i posted…now tell me guys what to do?? she kept the name – perfect for each other… how come outer world is like this????
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Episode 5

Swara runs to sanskar’s room… no one is there except him… he is sitting.. as soon as he heard running footsteps, he peeped from his bed towards the door and there he saw his princess,running.. swara forgetting everything ran in the room and hugged very tightly her sanskar.. they both depended on the hug…crying…

Outside-

Doctor stopped every1 from going inside as only 1 person was allowed…

Inside-

Swasan are hugging..swara is crying miserably..sobbing actually.. while, tears are flowing from sanskar’s eyes.. he is patting her back..

N the song bolna from kapoor n sons is playing in bg.
Hmm…
Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm… aa…
Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan
Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na
Saare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm…
Tere sang hasna main
Tere sang rona
Tujhme hi rehna main
Tujhme hi khona
Dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
Dil naiyo kholna
Marke bhi maahi tosey
Munh na modna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Sanskar breaks the hug…n cups swara’s face..

Sanskar- shh swara..!dont cry jaan!! No..!!

Swara cries even more listening his voice..

Swara b/w her sobs- sanskar..how can I not cry?? After 5 years, I have heard ur voice..u know how much I was craving for ur voice, touch!!! It hurts me here sanskar here..
(pointing to her heart )

Sanskar- swara…

Saying her name from his mouth, he takes her into a bone crushing hug..

Sanskar- u know swara..in these 5 years, I was helpless..i could see u , our swayam…, listen u both, n whenever u both touched me , I felt very helpless..this was the most worst feeling in the world where u can here ur loved one, but couldn’t even talk to them..i missed u soo much jaan!! Soo much..

Swara- I love u sanskar..i love u…n I missed u the most..

Sanskar- I love u too swara n I missed u more,.

Sw-no I missed u more..

Sa- no it was me who missed u more..

Sw- i..

Sa- no i!!

Sw- arre I am sa(ying)

He cut her off by placing his rough lips on her rosy soft onces..she pulls his back to deepen the kiss..they broke the kiss due to lack of air…

As soon as they broke the kiss, swara ran into his embrace..n he happily welcomed her..

Sw- u know sanskar..this is the best feeling in the world u get from ur love..

Sa- hmmm..u know swara I have missed my son’s 5 years…now I wanna fulfill his each n every wish…swara where is he?? Call him na!!

Swa- nods and goes out to take swayam..

As soon as she goes out, she closes the door of his room..

All surround her..

Sw- only swayam will come..(to the kid) come baby…

Swayam goes inside slowly.

Lak- plz swara let us also see him…he is my bhai..

Swa- no mr.maheswari..no…I wont let u see him..if he sees u, his health may hamper..n I cant risk sanskar’s life…so u better stay away and u all just go from here…just go I said..

Every1 turns to go, but suju still didn’t turn..swara assures her by her eyes..sujata smiles, with any1 noticing them, kisses her forehead n goes..

Inside,

Swayam slowly sits on the bed, n slowly touches sanskar’s cheek..

Swayam-dad!! U really came!!

Sanskar becomes emotional when he calls him dad..he takes his son in a warm embrace..

Tere dil ka mere dil se from koi aap sa plays in bg..

Oh dil se dil ka rishta juda
Pal do pal mein mitta nahi
Bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi
(Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain )
Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain

Teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun
Main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam
Dard baat lenge ham sun
In palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

Kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona
Dekha nahi jaata hain sun
Shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain
Khushbuye lutati hain sun
Udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain

Swayam breaks the hug..

Swayam- dad!!! U know how much I love u! every1 in my class comes with their dads in PTA meeting, perform with their papa’ s on family day(donno there is such day or not…but
remember kritika has created this day..hehehe), I missed all these things…now will do these things with me??

Sanskar- yes swayam…yes..!! even I missed ur 5 years na!!

Swayam – papa!! I promise I will give u greeting card on father’s day..n I will make it myself n u should take me outside on children’s day, give me chocolates and (he keeps on blabbering…swara’s genes u know…lol)

Sanskar feels extreme happiness n kisses his cheeks and 4head..n then emotionally looks at swara who is watching all these standing near the door with happiness tears..

Precap- swasanyam moments…

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guys help me n take strict action against her…she has copied my ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im hell angry now!!!!!
#100% pure ur kritika

Credit to: kritika

38 comments

  1. Dhara

    Superb as usual.. Don’t worry.. When I read 1st episode of other ff then only I commented that I have already read it.. No one can take credit from you.. Just ignore her..

  2. Kritika we being your followers will comment on the page and inform people about her actions.. I’ll ask u just one thing .. Tell me clearly , have u ever posted this ff on some other site .. Facebook , indiaforums or so..

    • Hey riya, first of all tq soo much for ur support..on her ff also I saw ur large comment…I post it only here..but it gets posted on other sites also..every ff hets posted on the site- writtenupdates.in
      N as I removed the cursor over the lines , I realised we can copy paste it…
      Just that I can tell u..otherwise I only n only post here..
      Tq again riya..

  3. Shagun

    I have just commented on her ff that how cam she do that
    Ur epi was awesome
    Make laksh jealous because of raglak closeness

    • I saw ur comment there also..tq soo much dear..for ur support n compliment… I think u wanna say that I should make lakshya jealous of swasan closeness…okk..will do that when swasan forgive them..

  4. Labdhi

    Kritika everyone knows u write this ff nd we luv u nd ur idea nd we will take action against her if she posts another part nd awesom part as usual

  5. musku

    Hey kritika ur ff is really good but make it long..plzzzz…n ya I also commented on that cheaters post …how can anyone do that..huh??. Leave it …plzzz post next part soon…n long one

  6. Sathya

    hey Kriti..don’t worry yar. We all know it is urs..and you know what cheaters cannot be live in peaceful environment. Now almost everyone got to know that she copied urs and now no one will read hers…that will be a great shame for her. You just ignore her and continue ur ff with your great writing skills. our full support is for you only.:) 🙂 🙂

  7. Nive...

    Kriti dont take tension dear… just leave it… we all know its yours ff… coming to this epi its awesome…

  8. It’s really good yaar…i think that girl’s name is arohi….because because she is the one who copied neha’s fiction….i don’t know whether Neha know or what…but I saw same story line by line on desi.com….before her update Neha update that fiction here…..feeling bad for you both…..they even change their own names…how cruel

  9. zellafarook

    Hey kritika that very thing can copy ur ff but not ur talent ..so just ignore her to the..really hate someone like to the core..and yes u r seperb

  10. Actually I read 1st episode again I never noticed d writter I thought y kritika updating double time tat too changing pic..and I thought u hv update for new readers anyway u told tat u will reaveal ur name..

  11. Jyotii

    Chotu! The episode is mind blowing! Superb!! Keep writing like this! And about that girl I told uh to ignore her! :)!;This ff is only uhrs!NOBODY ELSE’S! 😉

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