swasan: we are perfect for each other episode 2

Hey guys!! It’s me kritika!!..actually I wanna talk about this short story..this part is small..the reason is also given below..1st read this part and then the talk..n I tried hard not to put many dots.

So here we go,

Swasan shifted in Mumbai in sanskar’s small bunglow..its a bunglow with 4 master bedrooms and 2 simple bedrooms, a big enough kitchen, dining area in front of kitchen, a big hall, drawing room, gym room.

Sanskaar’s room was of royal blue and sky blue colour..a big balcony attached to it, where a swimming pool is also there.
Days passed, sanskar was depressed, so he made himself busy in office work. Swara felt very sad and lonely. Servants were there to do every work. But no one can take place of their family. FAMILY- it is just a 6-letter word but no one can alone form a family. A family shares everything- happiness, sadness, success, failure, etc but they are 1 unit. no one can break them. but here, they are broken. No one believes sanskar. They have lost not 1 , but 2 gems. One is the business master-sanskar and the other one is the savior-swara.

Swara wanted to make sanskar normal. Though she knew, she cant fulfill the place which he gave to his family, but she can make him happy, a bit maybe. She had a ray of hope in her, where as sanskar did not have.

Swara talked to her friend who is a counselor. She suggested swara to spend some time with sanskar. Swara’s mind sticked to this. She used to think very much about this. She thought if she asked sanskar to take her out somewhere, he would definitely deny her.though he wanted her happiness, but he used to go early to office n used to come late at night.he didn’t talk much to swara. So this was swara’s problem. After 4 days, an idea struck her mind. Swara thought, she can SEDUCE sanskar which would be the best way, to distract his mind from all kind of tensions.

Within 2 days, she bought some dresses(u know of what kind) and prepared herself by reading tips from internet.

She asked sanskar to come home early , since it was their anniversary the next day and she wanted to celebrate it at night.

They had cut the cake and wished each other. Now sanskar was n his room, sitting on the bed, working on his lappy. Swara went to have a bath(part of her plan). She came out wearing a baby pink nightie hardly covering her half thighs.

Swa- sanskar, don’t u think this laptop is taking my place?

She said coming near him. Sanskar saw her, he was dumbstruck to see her like that. She was biting her lower lip, which was a petal of rose where she applied strawberry lip balm.

She closed his lappy and sat in his lap.

Sw- baby..don’t u thi(nk)

He cut her off by placing his lips on her rose petals..it was a long kiss. A passionate one. One which showed their love. Then it turned into a hungry one.

He pulled her belt n undressed her. He kissed her neck, shoulder n wherever possible..

N finally he entered into her, she moaned with pleasure making him more crazy about her. He kisses her lips. The lips join as if 2 pieces of puzzule are joined together to form a pic.

The lips fit perfectly conveying they are made for each other.

They made love forgetting all their tensions. They found a new way to keep themselves away from depression. This happened almost daily..

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Hey guys! I know this episode is short. But what to do I have to drag this part to ask u a question. Guys I will be bringing a leap, so should I keep sanskar in coma or not? See, if I will keep him in coma, then maheshwari’s will be guilty. N if not, then the fight will be going on for long time and he will restrict swara also not to go to maheshwari’s.n I have to somehow finish this ss in 10-15 episodes. but on the other hand, I have to make swasan expecting with their 2nd child also which cant happen without sanskar(hehe).what to do guys?
N tell me should I post this ss tomorrow or movie world..everything is on u.
#poll
Coma-

1. yes
2. No
N guys, plz do comment..n yeah I AM NOT GONNA KILL ANY1 HERE.
N yeah many of u gave me suggestions especially Alisha M(tq dear). But guys, the first episode was told by my best friend which was to be written on YHM..but she didn’t have time , so she guided me to write episode 1 of swasan..now I am in dilemma.. help me guys!! N plz tell me ans of both ques.
n sry if its too much vulgar..

Credit to: kritika

40 comments

    • Vihu everyone has some technique to calm themselves down..swasan used this…this happened daily for some days dear..I am telling the thing after some days,.may be 15-20..n who becomes pregnant so soon..u will get to know in next episode.. I may be posting this noon..

  1. Anjali

    Yes put him in coma but obviously save him and update this ff tomorrow its interesting and yeah I’m not saying movie world insnt but I am just waiting for you to update it plz plz update it tomorrow ?

  2. swasantha

    Hey dear … If u want to finish in 10 to 15 episodes then Keep Sanskar in coma after a leap of a week or 2. Maybe. It’s my suggestion sanskar meeting with an accident after a leap of week and going into coma. Or something like that should do as u wanna finish it in 10 or 15 episodes. Thanks for such an amazing ff..

  3. if u are going to drag coma track more than 5 episodes then my answer is noooooooo…..
    If not i okay with coma track….

  4. Aahana

    Love it kritika nd plz post this one ff first nd dont make sanskar in coma u can make like this that sanskar is ignoring his family whenever they come near him nd dont let them meet with his child nd by this maheshwari’s r very mch guilty nd regretting on their deeds nd dear why u said that u want swasan to expect their 2nd child abhi toh phela bhi nhi aaya toh dusra kha se aayega

    • Tq ahana..soo much..☺?i am going to add ur suggestion a bit…even I was thinking the same…a leap will come with swasan’s born and unborn child..??

  5. afreen

    No coma scene….plz…
    The other option is best…in my pov by seeing grandchild every thing will be all right…its just my opinion…

  6. No dont put san in coma and jst a ques did lux did all dis bcoz of his jealously is he behind framing san as a culprit in front of his family

  7. Alisha M

    I was eagerly waiting for ur ff…Well if u think so den I think itz bttr if we go for a comma scene…Make swara pregnant b sanskar in comma…Make MF guilty,,n dey want to meet sanskar..But swara doesnt allow dem n make an emotional outburst frm swara’s side where she lists all thngs hw sanaskar took care of family n wat he got back…Nw MF will b more guilty bt swara wont accept appology n will tell dat she wud only accept appology if sanskar accepts der appology fst…N any member of MF who is close to sanskar n cares lyk sujata can talk wid sansakr n he might respond to do dat….Hehehe i dnt knw wat I wrote jst nw bt anyways do wat suits u d best….Hoping it might help…C u soon wid ur next udate dear…

    • Alisha dear yq soon much.. Even I was thinking the same..just some changes..c u soon too..n tq again for taking so much efforts for writing the comment… Tq dear,..☺??☺

  8. Tehreem (swasan lover)

    No ,Sanskar should not go in coma
    And please post movie world is possible today it self
    I am eagerly waiting for it

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