Swasan a path hate to love Episode 4

Hey guys! Thanks all of you for your positive feedback and dont worry about Sanskar’s character! He’s deep man, it’ll not easy to understand him, so just wait and watch guys! You’ll know about his good side also. And sorry raglak fans, as per its name, this story is only revolved around swasan, raglak are also there, but just for supporting characters. Sooo sorry guys for it.

Scene 1:
Swara goes to bed, sanskar comes to bed and says:”sorry I’m not used to sleep without my bed, so you’ve to tolerate me” He sits on a bed, take a sleeping pills and falls asleep. While swara is not feel good, but she feels relief because he’s sleeping and now she doesn’t need to fear from him. Stares him, he leans straight and puts his arm on his eyes. She notices that he’s used to sleep in this gesture. She comes close to him, night is wetting slowly slowly but full moon is smiling to see her movements. She recalls yesterday’s night and gets afraid and steps back. Swara turns side from him, a tears rolled down from her eye. She feels slow voice of his breathing and recalls their last moment. :”if he hates me, then why was he leave me” she again turns to him. He changes the side and now his face are in front of her. Night bulb is on and its dim light is doing black art in the room. His hairs are dispersed on his face and swara doesn’t believe that he’s the man, who doesn’t know the meaning of feelings. In sleeping, he comes to her hugs her, she’s in shocked, she’s afraid that either he’s sleeping or not. He looks his peaceful sleep, closes her eyes, feels protective in his arms, black magic is working on her. She falls asleep on his chest.

Scene 2 next morning: Sanskar gets up and finds her sleeping in his arms. He moves slowly and gets a bath. He goes downstairs and orders lavanya to take care of swara. He’s just leaving the home for office but he sees a car stops at his garage and Sujata gets down from the car with suit case. Sanskar:”what the hell is she doing here??” Sujata comes to him and hugs him but he’s in still cold position. Sujata:”beta! I thought my dil is new in this house. You’ll go for work, then there should be anyone who takes care her” Sanskar jerks:”there’s lots of servants to take care her” Sujata:”I know! But there’s so many rituals of new bahu, who takes the responsibility of it. And This is my responsibility as mother in law of her” Sanskar (with bitterness):”oh great!! Did you fulfill the responsibility of mother? And now you’re taking the responsibility of mother in law” Sujata is about to say something but they heard the voice of swara. :”who’s there Sanskar?” Both turns to her, swara sees sujata and takes blessing from her. Sujata to swara:”I come here for my only dil” Sanskar:”your Bhai sa permit you to stay here?” Sujata:”I gave reference to swara, and he’s not only permit me but also send shaghun for her” Sanskar:”I don’t…” But he looks swara’s confuse face and says:”ok mom! You take care your dil, I’m just leaving” Sujata:”god bless you beta” a tears comes in her eyes but she controls and brings swara to inside. He called Lavanya. Lavanya:”yes sir” Sanskar:”she’s my mom! Obey her but do careful about two things, first she can’t bring swara to outside, second listen their conversation carefully without their notice, I want complete report from you in evening” Lavanya:”ok sir!” Sanskar leaves the house.

Sujata is touring the house and swara tries to company her, but she still feels weakness. Sujata notices this and supports her to her room. Sujata:”you should take rest! I called that maid to bring breakfast for her” But Swara stops her:”aunty please I don’t want…” She comes to her:”first of all, call me mum” Swara gets alert because he recalls sanskar, he doesn’t want to take any punishment from him to disobey her mother. :”yes mom” Sujata hugs her:”you know, what you value for me, I saw hope in you” Swara is confused:”hope…? Sujata:”yes hope! He loves you so much, and you can change him, I can feel this” Swara in deep thinking:”love…” Suddenly she recalls their first night and nodes in no.:”no this is not love, this is his ego, his stubborn not love…” Sujata looks him with confusion and sits with her and holds her hands.:”I know he’s so hard but not for you, take me as your mother, dont think that I’m his mother, I’m with you in every thick and thin, just believes me” Swara looks her burst into tears and tells her everything. Sujata also gets worried to listen her. She wipes her tears and hugs her:”now don’t worry, I’m with you, he can’t harm you, you just help me to turn him back, I’ll do everything” Swara:”he cant change, he’s stone heart” Sujata:”he wasn’t like this, that chudail made him…” She tries to say further but someone knock the door. This is Lavanya. Lavanya:”ma’am breakfast is ready, may I bring in room or you both will come downstairs?” Sujata thinks:”bring breakfast here, and also tell me her medicines” Lavanya:”ok ma’am! And sujata ma’am! Sir gave a message for you, may you come outside the room” Sujata goes with Lavanya and she says:”sir said that if you want to live with swara ma’am then dont talk about him” she says just like robot. Sujata gets worried and understand that she’s spy of sanskar and now she can’t tell anything to Swara.

Scene 4: Sanskar comes in house but instead of going his room, he goes to study and calls Lavanya. Lavanya comes, he’s working on laptop. Lavanya:”yes sir!” Her attitude is perfectly like obedient servant, she doesn’t suspicious about his deeds, doesn’t ask any questions, just obey what he asks him to do. That’s the reason she’s staying here from long time. Sanskar(without off his eyes from laptop):”what’s the report” Lavanya:”I carried your massage to sujata ma’am, she didn’t say anything about you to swara ma’am, she was just taking care and pampered her all the day” Sanskar:”hmm… You can go”

Scene 5:
Sanskar goes to his room, where sujata asking swara to wear saree like typical Indian married woman but she’s denying continuously because she remembers his words. He smiles:”obedient girl” Both turns to him.:”mom! Don’t spoil my wife, I know how to treat her” Sujata wants to say something but swara presses her hand, so she stops. Sujata:”ok beta! If you like her in suit, then who am I to say something” He ignores her mom and turns to swara:”you now look better, I hope mom helped to recover your weakness, so maybe you can make coffee for me naa” Swara nodes but he recalls him:”listen my sweet wife” swara turns to him but doesn’t say anything. Sanskar:”now it’s your duty, to make coffee for me, when arrive at home like a good wife” swara nodes and leaves and sanskar comes to sujata. Sanskar:”why are you worried suddenly for my life, I know your intentions, so if you want I’ll not insult you and ask you to leave my house then don’t spoil her mind and dont intrupt in my house’s matter” Sujata:”but beta…” But Sanskar raises his hands and leaves from there in rage.

Scene 6:
Sanskar comes in room, while he comes to her, swara starts to saying:”I’m still ill… Dr told me to take rest until…” Sanskar starts laughing to listen her:”oh great!! Thanks to my mom who gives tongue in your mouth, but you should not forget that this is my house(he comes close to her) and what you considers me? An animal naa?” Swara nodes in no, but he turns to her and says:”I know you considers me as an animal, listen to me very careful, I cant tolerate that woman in my house, specially when she’s filling your ears, if you want your life, then ill not find her in this house” he shouts on her and she afraids from him and nodes while crying. Sanskar:”good girl…” He goes to bed :”now come to me” Swara doesn’t move because of fear from him. Sanskar:”this is mom influence that you’re not taking me serious, look swara! I’m not the man, who lives without woman, if you’ll not come to me, then I’ve to call someone else, do you want your husband with other woman?” Swara nodes in no and slowly moves to him. Sanskar holds her and removes her hairs from her face slowly.

There’s heavy silent in the room, swara is shivering because of fear, sanskar looks her with all his concentration. :”why do you afraid from me?” Then he holds her tight, she’s still shivering. Sanskar:”I think you’ll die soon, if I’ll close to you” tears are falling from her eyes and he irritates:”why you girls start crying?” He stands up. She comes to him and controls her tears:”I’m not crying” Sanskar:”you’re not crying then I’m idiot, swara I dont want this drama in my house” Swara from him and suddenly she comes to him and hugs him from back:”I’m sorry Sanskar, it’ll not happened further” He smiles victory and turns to her:”I said you, I got what I want” He cups her face and she’s looking down, her lips are shivering, he comes close to her and grips his arms around her. She slowly looks up to his face, there’s deep silence between them. He tighten his grip that he doesn’t wanna allow air to pass between them. He kissed her on her neck and whispers in her ear:”I like your bold step to hug me, this realized me that you’re mine, only mine, are you mine naa swara” Swara nodes slowly, he throws her on bed and goes to his side. He takes the pills and leans on his side with his same gesture and says slowly:

“I dont let you die, so enjoy your freedom until you recover your weakness” With the affect of pills, he falls asleep but swara is still starring her,:”what a mystery you’re sanskar?, you didn’t want to come close to me, you just wanna judge me, what’s paining you from inside? Who are you sanskar? You’re doing effort from two years to get me, how did I accept a characterless person as my husband? But dont understand why god choose you as mu life partner? What’s destiny planning for us? I don’t understand believe which face of yours, when you met me first , what you did with me first night, which face you disguise yesterday or now?” She sighs slowly and closes her eyes because she has full life to solve this mystery named sanskar.

Precap: Fb of swasan why both hate each others.

Credit to: Saba


  1. kashis

    now sanskar is getting on my nerves… literally such a philanderer.. how can he said that ‘do you want your husband sleep with another women?’ and swara’s reaction is surprising enough… I am going to face multi personality disorder soon… ha! ha ! ha!

    • Saba

      Thanks sweetie! He’s not philanderer, he’s rakish person, just think dear, he’s rich business tycoon, with no character. So how can he live without woman?
      And which swara’s reaction surprise you?
      No no dear! If you’ll be suffering from multi personality disorder then who’ll give us an angel is my love? Yar come back soon hahaha dear! Well In Shaa Allah in future ill become psychologist, then ill treat you in free dont worry

      • kashis

        well saba, your view point is justified.. but thing rationally. his restrictions, his bossiness, angry man look everything is justified.. but a guy with bitter past can play with girls like toy… can never be justified. well he can punish swara, must be antagonistic to his mother due to past, but a response like sleeping round with different women.. is too much to bear… swara hugged him with fear that is also understood.. but still unable to accept sanskar with that deed..

    • Saba

      You’re right Kashis! He’s playing with her, but he’ll also realise it, but now as he has bitter past. So he doesn’t show his good side to her because from his heart, he doesn’t trust on anyone! You’re also right about sleeping with others woman matter, this is his nature and you’ll know it in further episodes! Hope you’ll not suffer multi personality disorder ?

      • kashis

        i m already suffering from it.. be a psychologist fast… to treat me freely.. I can’t take it more.. his rudeness is killing me from inside.. in ff also can’t bear this sanskar anymore.. u have 2 options.. change his bl**dy attitude or be a psychologist fast.. decision is yours???

    • Saba

      Hey dear! I think I’ll go with option 2! I’ll be psychologist fast! Because you’ve to bear more faces of his bl***y attitude! Because if i change once, I’ll be unnatural naa! And dont you bother from that sweet and caring sanskar! Take some change girl, he’ll change his attitude, first let him reveal in front of readers!!

  2. ahana

    really happy with sas bahu scene …
    swara is slowly trying to understand him…
    n excited for precap swasan past …
    y sanskar take sleep pill
    i think sanskar was hating sujatha becz of his life failure may be

    • Saba

      Thanks Ahana! And I’m glad to read your comment, sujata and swara will make great bond in future dear!
      As he told to swara:”im the man who cant live without woman” its the reason of his sleeping pills.
      Well yeah he hates his family

  3. ahana

    i started feeling that sanskar was deeply hurt in past may be due to his love failure or else so he trying to become monster made heart as stone …
    he just now want everything he wish…
    so he forfully made swara himself..
    this is from my point of view..

  4. Honey

    Oh really nice… I’m a silent reader of FF but I can’t stay silent on reading your FF… Very good writing skills yaar…

  5. sethooty

    As usual awesome Dr…waiting for swasans fb..in first episode u gave some details na ,how swara compelled to married him, but at that time I felt it was too short, happy to know that u will give fb of swasan bitter past and hatred …

    • Saba

      Thanks sethooty! Yeah dear that time, I decided to complete in one or two episodes, but now I’m carrying this ff so I’ve decided to give a brief history of their love-hate relationship

  6. leku

    Completely oh god do no what to comment…..I feel n read this episode….sujatha ji role is superb….sanskar innerman purely love swara I can feel from this episode..pls update next part soon saba

  7. Sree harini

    I just loved the way sanskar showing some concern towards swara..but I think no incident can make a person so bad that they act like a sadist at bed but to know the reason I must read..keep going saba

    • Saba

      Thanks Sree harini! If you feel like that no incident make him like that then im giving you one example (deriving from the novel “jo chalain to Jan se guzar gae”) if you sow acacia(babool) how you expect roses from that plant… That’s the reason of his personality, he gives to world what he takes from world

  8. I jst want the nxt part…. I’m dying to read d next one… plz yr.. nxt update… jst love ur ff…
    There’s a ques..
    R swasan newly married.?

    • Saba

      Thanks kritika! I’ll try my best to upload next part soon and yeah they’re newly Married couple, I think you didn’t read my first episode! Well must read dear for clearing your confusion

      • yes saba as i told told i love ur ff…. im reading it frm starting.. still there was some confusion.. bt how can sanskar forced swara… he kissed her without her permission..
        bt that was my favourite scene.. jst keep writing such scenes… i luv swasan chemistry like this…
        nxt part..

    • Saba

      Hey kritika! Thanks alot, you like sanskar in this gesture well in further episodes, your all confusion will clear!; keep reading dear

  9. Tara

    Super super superrrrr awesome osmmm excellentttt.. hey plzzzz ya let sanskar be lik tis 4 sometime.. i luv tis rude sanskar who forcibly makes her his’. .. plz let him b lik tis 4 few more epi

  10. Tania

    I was a silent reader but after reading your ff, I don’t know why but wanted to comment. I like this plot very much.

  11. Lucky

    Awesome dear! precap seem interesting.. Its look like sanskar is over possesive about swara and as typical girl swara nods no when ask do u want ur hubby with someone else is so cute. In first episode i feel that sanskar role is like a antogonist but now i feel like a grey character who is fighting with heart and mind (ego). First its difficult for me to imagine my favorite sanskar as villain but now i really love it as he has a soft corner also.

    • Saba

      Thanks alot lucky! I’m glad you like sanskar’s character and I also like that scene! Yeah she’s typical but loyal girl who knows the value of marriage

  12. angel

    Hi Saba….i ve been reading your ff but never commented but seriously now I cant take it anymore…u r an awesome writer…i think u had also writen another ff it was wonderful too but this is sth beyond….i love it….its really hard to imagine the innocent varun as such a devil but your thoughts provoked us….i live ur ff and I hope u change sanskar soon….love u and ur ff…plz continue and jeep updating daily……love u loads all the best….

    • Saba

      Thanks angel! You’re also one who’s ff I was reading from starting before writing my own ff! Its honour to get praise from you! And love you too sweetie and keep in touch dear!

  13. Kiara

    Your ff give craving for more…
    Seriously awesome…making a small request…as they are so good can you give 2 updates tommorow….not forcing you…
    Love the +ve sujata…

    • Saba

      Thanks dear that you like my ff, I also wish that I can upload two, but I’ve also another work and upload im yours too! Sorry dear at least its not possible nowadays! After some time ill try my best to upload two

  14. Akira

    Yr kya bolu m from 1 month m a silent reader..but u force me to do cmmnt ..u r mindblowing,,but here is 1 rqst for u m enjoying sanskar lyk dis let him be lyk dis for few more episodes nd ya make it lyk wt vl he do if swara fails to obey any of his rule..
    As m comnt frst tym thn pls take care of my rqst

    • Saba

      Thanks Akira dear for breaking your silent and dear yeah he’ll same in further episodes too! And i don’t understand your second request “make it lyk wt vl he do if swara fails to obey any of his rule..” Can you please explain and ill agree with your request

      • Akira

        Lyk i wanna know his limits,, dat if swara fails to obey any of his rule or restrictions then wt kinda punishment he vl give to swara,,!!

    • Saba

      Thanks for clearing my confusion! Well dear you’ll see that incident also when swara pay for her disobeying

  15. Saba

    Thanks pari dear! And ladoo, im uploading next episode, but I’ve to post im yours next part too, so it takes time sorry naa dear,
    Thanks alot dil!
    Thanks cutiiii and thanks alot sravs!
    Thanks dear anuradha! And sparkle, thanks but wait for a bit dear!
    Thanks Tania to break your silent, it’s pleasure to me that you comment on my ff
    Thanks archana, thanks divya! Yeah ill try my best to upload next soon

  16. Saba

    Thanks devi and bhuvi!
    Yeah hayathi! Actually I also personally love his character with this arrogant and cruel personality
    Thanks newbie, I like your ff too and thanks manisha!
    Thanks honey to comment on my ff
    Thanks aditi and jay!

  17. Saba

    Thanks rashmeet, thanks akku, ill upload soon next part.
    Thanks priya! And thanks alot surbhi for your lots of love, I always find your comment…
    Thanks all of you guys! For your love and support!

  18. Akira

    I commented frst tym but u didnt replied to me..:(:( i ws lookin forward for ur rply,,, u don knw hw mch i lv ur ff

  19. Tani

    Hey saba…
    Could you please add precap & recap too coz there r too many ffs & it gets really confusing to get the plot & story!!
    So plz add recap of story… just a request

  20. Anushka

    Hey saba I also comment first time l like thiss ff vry much than the others from my heart and I like sanskar arogant nature plz tell me approximate time you upload next part plz reply

  21. Riia

    I am also a silent reader but after reading ur ff I just can’t stay silent …it’s superb…. Plse upload d next part as soon as possible…

  22. Anushka

    Hove you uploaded episode 5 of SWASAN a path hate to love tell me yes or no and tell me from which link I am able to read it as I search in google by typing your ff name l didn’t find episode 05

  23. Saba

    Hey guys! I’ve posted my ff “I’m yours” but guys there’s some problem, I’ve no time to upload both ff, until ill free from my exams, so tell me which ff do you want before exams! I think I should first complete “I’m yours”! But decision is yours! Must tell me

    • Lucky

      Dear i love both of ur fan fiction but as you said i think also the same (to complete first “i’m yours “). Best of luck for your exams dear and when will ur exams finished? Have a great day

    • kashis

      ya saba.. u r truely r8.. upload it soon.. I dying to read it yaar… be a psychologist fast as u promised!! ha! ha! and I m not bored by his cute nature as I love that… when u love something, u love it the way it is… and never get bored… same rule applies to u as well. as i love u & ur ff, despite i m not liking that cruel side still eagerly waiting to read it. As I respect the story line and it demands that evil side, so I have to bear it.. no other options left with me…

    • leku

      Yeah saba both ur ff r awesome…we cant wait for both but its ur exam time so u concentrate in ur studies…its fine…finish “I’m yours” …waiting for it….

    • alle

      Hi Saba
      As usual it’s another super episode
      There is no words to comment except to wait for next part
      I like u r both ff it’s difficult to pic one.
      But I also think it’s better to continue “I m urs ff”
      when will u r xm completed?? Wish u very all the best

  24. Awesome?
    So interesting I was forced to leave the ff in between coz lunch was ready I quickly finished it B’coz I was eager to read ur ff…
    Pls update next part Soo ??

  25. sethooty

    loved both ff. As u started ” I am urs..on priority basis it should complete first, BT I want both Ff yaar , gonna miss other one badly ,can u upload it alternately.

    • Saba

      Hey aliza! Its story is simple! Sanskar is egoistic man and he liked swara but she rejected him. Her rejection hurts his ego. So just for the satisfaction of his ego he blackmailed her and forcefully married with her

  26. jenny

    pls update the next part sooon …………….ur’s is the best ff that i ever read .totally different storyline …………

  27. jenny

    this is just only a suggestion ( new entry) any male friend of swara into her life …………..this will irritate sanskar

    • Saba

      Hey jenny thanks for your suggestion! But sorry dear it cant apply on this ff, Because as I make the character of sanskar, he’ll not jealous of her male friend! He kill him.. Soooo sorry for it dear!!

      • Jenny

        Ok …….. Truly i just luvd this ff u r really good in writing…….i don’t want sanskar to kill any1..,..

  28. Rs

    Hai saba! Im 1st time commenting here ,im also a silent reader of ur ffs,im eagerly waiting 4 next update,i loved all ur ffs so pls update da next part soon.

  29. karthi

    Wow rocking ya i can’t express on the word dear i love your ff ya,i’m waiting for u r next update plz update soon darling

  30. Saba

    Hey guys! Thanks all of you for your love and support and yeah I carry “I’m yours” till my exams! My exams will take this month because still date isn’t confirm maybe it’ll start on 20, yeah untill im yours will complete. And sorry for fans of swasan! I’m also love this ff, ill try my best to upload this too! But priority is “im yours” yes jenny! I’ll not end it soon but im taking break till my exams! You’ve to wait but good news is that ill must upload its next episode today! And also try to upload further if ill have time! Thanks alot dear again!

  31. Anushka

    Ok if you exam has start I will not forced you to upload ff and best of luck if you get time to upload the episode 5 of swasan a path hate to love he you plz reply me here and just only tell that I have upload next part and when plz plz plz reply and best of luck again

    • Saba

      Thanks dear! I’ve uploaded next part, you can check but its better you check telly updates site to see new ff rather than search on google

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