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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan a path hate to love episode 15
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Swasan a path hate to love episode 15

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Recap:”swara wrote her feelings in diary and met her friend Siya to realize that she’s also jealous with her. Sanskar gets the project of palace and he purchased the flowers for swara”
Swara is getting ready for Sanskar and wearing bangles when she heard the voice of horn of his car. She goes to terrace and looks down to his car which he’s parking in the porch. .
Swara looks him with all his affection and surpass her feelings for her husband.
She goes down fast and stands in front of him.

Her heartbeat is creating new music in her heart, a bright smile comes to her face and she wants to hug him but she controls herself. While Sanskar doesn’t notice her condition because he’s trying to take banquets of flowers from car.
Swara happy to see flowers:”these all are for me?”
Sanskar nods and carries flowers to their room. Swara thinks that she has chance to hug him but she again control herself.

Swara asks him for dinner, sanskar replies her with joyful mood because of his deal:”hmm dinner, I also didn’t take dinner but asked lavanya to make dessert also, I wanna eat something sweet”
He wants to take out his nightdress but she already handover his dress to him. He looks her with amazed and suddenly notices her appearance. She’s wearing dark pink churidar pajama and anarkali frock with lots of bangles. He’s not fond of traditional girls but he really attracts to her. He goes to her and pins her towards cupboard:”why did yu do all this singhars?”
Swara ups her eyes but she can clearly feels his penetrating eyes on her, specially his gaze is running through her body which fastened her heartbeat.
She wanna says him that she has done all this for her husband but she only says:”nothing special, I just want to do this” she knows very well he’ll catch her if she tells him lie, so she just told him half truth.

Sanskar feels the truth in his eyes and controls his lust because this time, he really doesn’t want to give her pain. He leaves her and takes his clothes for changing. The melodious rhythm of her ankler echoes in the room which makes him crazy, but he knows very well to control himself because he’s real man.
***************

Instead of orders lavanya to make dessert, she decided to make dessert for him but she doesn’t know about his likes and dislikes, amazingly his servants dont know about it too. Shanaya always ordered them, sanskar usually followed the diet plan according to Dr otherwise he takes dinner with shanaya or in hotel.

Swara to herself:”should I ask Sanskar, what he wanna eat? No …. I’ll give him surprise, he didn’t described any specific thing…” Suddenly she gets the idea and calls someone.
Swara:”mom! What’s sanskar’s favourite dessert?”
After greetings she asks from sujata. Sujata happy to know about her concern for his son and happily told her about his likes and dislikes.

Sujata:”I don’t know about his current likes and dislikes but that time, he was simple boy and eats everything, he wasn’t so foody to demands any specific thing, but he liked kheer so much, specially my hand’s kheer, I’m telling you recipe of kheer, I hope he reminds the taste of my hand” after saying this, she can easily understand the mixture of tear in her voice.
Swara hesitantly asks from her:”maa! Come here for some days naa” .
Sujata wipes her tears:”not now beta! I’ll come when your papa permits me because he didn’t accept your munhdikhai from your papa, so sanskar’s papa got furious from him, you please take care of him”

Swara wants to ask her about the incident which separates him from his parent, but she now wanna make kheer, so she just asks her one thing:”mom! How many time had passed when he separate from his family”
Sujata gets sad and she can feel this sadness from her voice:”more than ten years…”
Swara feels sad to listen it and disconnects the call after some formal talks.
She’s making kheer when Sanskar come downstairs and askes lavanya about her. Lavanya inform her, sanskar is calling her.

She taste hot kheer and praise herself and sujata mom who give her this recipe.
She comes out from kitchen, he’s sitting on the lounge and watching her with his right on her.
She comes to him and puts off his apron. And looks him questionably. He holds her hand and closes her to him.:”I told you naa whenever I’m at home, you are not allow to go away from my sight”
She reminds his rules and regulations and nods:”sorry I forgot, I was making kheer for you”
He smirks and looks into her eyes:”suddenly, Mrs Maheshwari realized the relationship with her husband! May I ask the reason of this changing?”

Swara gets confuse, not only his question but also his penetrating eyes on herself. But his gaze doesn’t make her feel uncomfortable because she has accepted his rights on her.
Sanskar comes close to her and touches her face:” Swara! You’re looking beautiful in this attire, a complete woman, no…. Actually… Not complete without nose pin,but its ok(he holds her waist and makes her sit on his lap) always look like this, beautiful… But only for me…” His hands are rubbing her body, they’re in lounge but this is home of sanskar, so he knows no one will move without his permission.
Swara feels confused in this posture, but his smell of perfume also making her crazy. This perfume is specially made to seduce woman but in shanaya’s point of view, sanskar’s personality is enough to seduce woman.

The ruler of sanskar’s mansion, tries to feel his queen. Queen… Who’s prisoner of this gold’s cage. Sanskar whispers in his ear with deep voice:” One week is over now, maybe you’re recover now, so should I use my husbandry rights on you”
Swara who is completely drawn in his trance, suddenly comes to her sense and depart from him.
Sanskar smirks to see her act and says:”so… You’re still afraid of me..” He leaves her and stands up from the couch.:”you should be sweetheart (he downs to her and holds her shoulder) because you dont know im werewolf swara! Nights are time to show my real face, I’m haunted swara, now I hunt, (he rubs her shoulder) I’m hunter, now you’re now my victims, my blood -ceil….”
Swara feels the fire in his eyes, which burning her body. She doesn’t know the reason but this time she wants to cold this fire, but she’s helpless because she’s not so much strong girl to stand in front of this fire.

Sanskar leaves her shoulders and calls Lavanya to arrange the table. Sanskar looks back to her and smirks:”be ready for tonight, I didn’t marry to you for show casing yourself as a wife, understand?” His tone is replete with authority.
Swara threatens with his behaviour and observes lack of humility in his behaviour, she nods her head and stands up to follow him.
***************
Sanskar is eating kheer after dinner, but he boggles after eating first bite.
Sanskar to swara:”did you made it?”
Swara nods in yes but this taste of kheer, is drowned himself in his old memories.
Sanskar hugs sujata and gives her the good news of his result, he does top in his university in the semester.
He always gives every good news to his mom first.
Sujata turns to her and says:”I know my son is sooo talented, ill make dessert on this happy occasion, your favourite kheer” she pulls his cheeks and he shouted:”mom! I’m grown-up now and university’s student, but you always treat me like I’m school students”
Sujata smiles to him:”for mothers, children are always children”
Sanskar unintentionally rubs his cheek, just like he’s rubbing the pulling mark of her. Swara notices his absence of mind and sighs to him because now she’s becoming used to it.
Swara:” Do you like it?”
Sanskar comes to his sense and looks her:”yes I like it, tell thanks to mom from me” he wipes his face from napkin and stands up from the chair.
While swara is in deep thought:”it means, he still remember the taste of mom’s hand after ten years” she stands up from her seat but she’s still in thought:”ten years… What happened ten years ago?”

She looks him with curiosity who is climbing the stairs. She sighs and follows him because he orders her to give him the source of blood. Actually I should say flesh because he’s werewolf, not vampire.
*************
Swara changes the clothes and now she’s in royal blue short dress. Sanskar looks her with thirsty eyes and signs her to come close to him.
She surpasses her emotions and goes to him. No matter, she’s start feeling for him but she’s still afraid from him because wheneverhe’s in mood of hunting, he gnaw his victim completely.
He holds her tight and looks her face. She’s not so timid girl, but she’s not strong enough to bear this pain again.

He assume her shivering and laughs:”why do yu so afraid from me?”
This time swara is wonder to look into his eyes, his eyes are still burning.
Swara collects some courage and says:”are you drunk?”
Sanskar’s eyes are widened because he’s really drunk, after his finalization of deal with maharaj, he drinks that time for celebrating his victory. But for him, this was minor tonic but he cant resist himself to see her in this beautiful attire because commonly she never care herself and meets him with her messy look.
He didn’t eat something from few days, so it’s very difficult t control hs addiction but swara’s fear, indirectly makes him in guilty. He leaves her and tries to smile to her.
Sanskar:”dont worry sweetheart, I dnt want to harass you, but dont look so beautiful to test my patience” he pulls her lock softly and lays down on the bed.
She sees, he takes sleeping pills again and wants to ask him about the reason to take sleeping pills. But before it, he sinks in his restless sleep and she left alone in the dreary night.
She goes to him and hugs him tight because she knows, this is her time without any fear. But she afraid when he tightens the grip of his arm.
His eyes are still close but he whispers in her ear:”I’m taking sleeping pills from long time, so now it’s not able to make sleep my conscious” he tightens his grip around swara and kisses her forehead.
Swara feels that someone throws bucket full water on her. Sanskar opens his eyes slowly and closes again:”dont feel shame, im your husband and this isn’t bad thing to hug your husband” she convinces from his words and closes her eyes peacefully.
**********
Swara comes out from bathroom to take bath and awakes him up.
Sanskar holds her handand tickles her lock into her ears. She blushes unwantedly and frees her hands from him.

Sanskar smiles and takes his clothes which she already arranged for him.
He gets fresh while she’s waiting for him to the breakfast, she recalls the last night sweet hug and feels butterflies in her stomach one side but on the other side, she thanks god to save her from his thirst.

He combs his hairs while she’s starring him with all her concern. He feels her gaze and turns to her:”Am I look handsome?” His asks in satirical tone.
Swara doesn’t understand what to answer, she recalls the last night and wants to change the topic. :”sanskar! May I ask something?”
Sanskar understands her confusion and doesn’t annoy her, and nods in yes.
Swara collects her courage and asks in one gulp:”why do you take sleeping pills?”
Sanskar turns to her completely and looks into her eyes:”I told you naa im werewolf, so i cant sleep naturally, sleeping pills give me some relief whenever I dont have flesh”
Swara looks confuse:”what do you mean sanskar?”
Sanskar looks this innocent soul and smiles:”simply, I’m addicted to women, if I’ll not take sleeping pills, then i must have woman below me”

Sanskar smirks and comes to her, he holds her hands and makes her prisoner in the cage of his arms. Swara likes his closeness as well as dislikes it.
Sanskar holds her chin asks her:”do you want, your husband go to another women for relaxation?”
Swara can’t want this thing for her husband, but she knows if she deny, he will want her body for the replacement of sleeping pills, she also doesn’t want it.
She pushes him and turns her back to him:”I dont care, if you go to another woman”
Sanskar shocks to listen it because she never expected this answer from her. Swara hears the voice of breaking things and turns back. Sanskar goes outside the room and she finds the broken bottles of perfumes.

She follows him to the porch, where he has gone by rushing his car without taking breakfast. He’s very health conscious, if he doesn’t take breakfast, it means he’s in full rage. She curses herself to make him angry and a tears of regret comes from her eyes.

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151 Comments

  1. Amirtha on January 6, 2016 10:05 pm

    Awesome cover pic babe???????????✌✌

    • saba on January 8, 2016 11:58 am

      thanks dear

  2. Kritika on January 6, 2016 10:13 pm

    Loved it bt feared what gonna happen woth swara in ne1xt epi

    • saba on January 8, 2016 11:58 am

      next episode is all about sanskar sweetie and thanks dear

  3. Manasvi on January 6, 2016 10:16 pm

    Thanks saba episode is good

    • saba on January 8, 2016 11:59 am

      you welcome dear

  4. Honey on January 6, 2016 10:18 pm

    Great episode.. Thank you for this fast update yaar… Nice.. Good.. Great… Wonderful.. Awesome… Lovely…

    • saba on January 8, 2016 11:59 am

      thanks honey, your dp is so good

  5. Devika on January 6, 2016 10:21 pm

    awesome saba . i love ur ff more than anyothers . u are really a wonderful writer. i am a silent reader of ur ff but i have missed ur ff so badly in the past few days. thanks for a great update

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:00 pm

      thanks dear and thanks for breaking your silent

  6. Devi on January 6, 2016 10:25 pm

    Awesome

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:00 pm

      thanks devi

  7. Arati on January 6, 2016 10:28 pm

    Nice one sabba, increase the closeness of swasan positive

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:01 pm

      thanks dear, theyll close dear but my track is not only to show their closeness

  8. Tara on January 6, 2016 10:30 pm

    Awesomeeeeee…. u r nailing it evrytime.. I’m out of words.. superbbbbbbbbbbbb.. reading it repeatedly. In love❤❤with ur fiction nd ur ff pic.. ????

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:02 pm

      thanks tara! im lucky to have a friend and supporter like you tara

  9. Sneha garewal on January 6, 2016 10:37 pm

    Nice

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:02 pm

      thanks dear

  10. Kittu on January 6, 2016 10:38 pm

    Jus superb yr..vry nice

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:02 pm

      thank you dear

  11. jaya on January 6, 2016 10:38 pm

    thanks for fast update..

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:03 pm

      thanks dear ive uploaded next part

  12. swara on January 6, 2016 10:38 pm

    wow super

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:03 pm

      thanks swara

  13. Aastha on January 6, 2016 10:38 pm

    Ur ff is amazing……waiting for the next one

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:04 pm

      thanks dear and ive uploaded next part

  14. Anjii on January 6, 2016 10:39 pm

    I’m a silent reader but your ff are really good in fact best plzz continue waiting for the next part

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:04 pm

      thanks anjii to break your silent, stay connected

  15. pia on January 6, 2016 10:42 pm

    its amazing…. eagerly waiting for your next update 🙂

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:04 pm

      thanks piya

  16. Prtibha on January 6, 2016 10:43 pm

    Awesome…n swara should have not said that yr…she hurt him…..n saba update soon please

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:05 pm

      thanks dear, yeah she hurt him because her love is not so high to protect him and hurt herself, she is at beginning stage

  17. Nidhi on January 6, 2016 10:46 pm

    Wow dear…It is really amazing

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:06 pm

      thanks dear

  18. Shraddha on January 6, 2016 10:48 pm

    Sabaaa wat do I say….ur a fab writer we all know but the way u plot ur story is just splendid like u meke us want MORE N more n more with each update of urs…. U literally make me crave for ur ffs just wen I’ll be jumping seeing ur ff in few minutes I go like Goddd wens next coming. …. Ur too good saba?

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:10 pm

      thanks dear fr your beautiful words

  19. jjoy on January 6, 2016 10:49 pm

    bore track.

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:10 pm

      why do you feel it bore dear?

  20. Hayathi on January 6, 2016 10:51 pm

    Wowww i like this type of husbend in real life caring as well as comanding

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:11 pm

      dont wish like that dear, this type of husbands seem good in stories only

  21. Prit on January 6, 2016 10:58 pm

    I hate u diii…u made me to love this ff and now i am addicted… Now I want to go inside ur brain and to have all d ideas of the story to complete it….until then i can’t be satisfied… Ny way thanx a lottttttt…??? u made my night…

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:12 pm

      thanks sweetie!! hey you hate me but really ilove you all and come and explore my brain if you can

  22. MANNU on January 6, 2016 10:59 pm

    Nice update….. tis is my first comment in this ff,just can’t control myself from commenting in this part:-)

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:13 pm

      thanks dear and now please keep commenting dear and welcome

  23. Aditi Singh on January 6, 2016 11:00 pm

    the night scene was really funny….update soon next part….

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:13 pm

      thanks dear ive uploaded

  24. Navi on January 6, 2016 11:01 pm

    Actually i need appreciate u saba… u bring up a totally different story frm othr ff.. today epi ws nice…

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:13 pm

      a big thank you navi

  25. Shazia on January 6, 2016 11:02 pm

    Amazing mind blowing superb yar saba…
    Plzzzz i requst uhhh plzzzz update nxxttttt part as soon as possible…
    Ur way of writing is superb yar….

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:14 pm

      thanks shazia and ive updated next part

  26. bhuvi on January 6, 2016 11:03 pm

    Superb superb superb….

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:14 pm

      thanks bhuvi dear

  27. abi on January 6, 2016 11:05 pm

    what happened swara????how can u say dis???do no how he s going to react……waiting 4 nxt update….

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:15 pm

      you can read his react in next ep and read again youll know reason of her words

  28. Sasha on January 6, 2016 11:08 pm

    Plz plz plz updt nxt part. It was so awesome!!!!!!!!.i think its time tht swara loses fear.anyhw write whats on ur mind . I simply liv it.luv u loads

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:18 pm

      thanks dear for your love

  29. silly on January 6, 2016 11:13 pm

    I really love ur ff… U shud update it more often…

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:18 pm

      thanks dear

  30. jiya on January 6, 2016 11:16 pm

    awesome

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:18 pm

      thanks dear

  31. manny on January 6, 2016 11:18 pm

    Pls saba i want nxt update as soon as possible i just love ur story

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:19 pm

      thanks dear ive uploaded next part

  32. mns on January 6, 2016 11:25 pm

    Fabulous n I also recall my memories which is more or less same to ur creative. I m sure that u hve some magical with ur writings n also I hve no words to express it.

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:19 pm

      hey dear thanks and will you tell me your story me on fb?

  33. akku on January 6, 2016 11:40 pm

    don’t know dear what to comment..
    sometimes feel sad for swara and also happy for her( in recent episodes only)
    sometimes ( sorry majority time ) angry to sanskar but today’s episode i don’t know feel sad for sanskar. .

    dear ur writing skills comment karne keliye get no words…
    u and ur ff’s are awesome, fabulous tremendous, simply out of world. ..

    addiction to ur ff’s increases second by second. .

    if I give 5% of this interest to my studies rather than ur ff then truly i will get rank in xams..

    shockingly I write comments this much…

    love u dear. ..

    thanks for ur fabulous fan fictions……..

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:23 pm

      thanks alllllloooootttt akku and sorry i made you addicted so you cant cincentrate on your exams and i also feel the mixture of sadness and happinesss whenever i write this story, by the way what are you studying?

  34. Shanaya on January 6, 2016 11:59 pm

    Superb

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:25 pm

      thanks shanaya

  35. kashis on January 7, 2016 12:11 am

    for this episode I just wanna say thanks sweety for not letting him in vamp look!!! u know very well why I said thanks now!! coming to werewolf, u know I share same thoughts for sanky as well, a flesh eater… oops I m sorry more than a flesh eater… lack of humanity and why he was in anger… ?? as swara replied him boldly… I mean u can say what ever u want but I can’t say what I feel.. he married her for her flesh… not for wifey right….. can’t write more dear!! u r genuinely bad but still love u for not making him vamp….

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:29 pm

      hey kashis finally you commented, yeah we did this discussion many time and dont worry next time ill make him vampire to irritate you, you know me very well. yup dear hes flesh eater but its his instinct, we cant curse to lion to hunt, so why he? even i also a flesh eater, i cant survive on veg, so commonly, for us, butcher halal many animals to eat, dear we all are same but its matter of sutiuation and off course we cant fight with ones instinct, i agree with your second point of view and love you too

  36. Ashu on January 7, 2016 12:18 am

    Update the next part soon

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:29 pm

      ive updated dear

  37. cherry on January 7, 2016 12:32 am

    Interesting. Keep updating

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:30 pm

      ive updated dear and thanks

  38. meena on January 7, 2016 1:07 am

    Plz update daily plz swara ko preagnent kro then sanskar loves har

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:31 pm

      hey dear they dont need baby to show their love but ill think about your suggestion

  39. Vinita on January 7, 2016 1:26 am

    Saba di aapki ff lajawab hai!!!!!! Jaise Ki Maine pehli bhi kahata aapki alfazon Mei jadoo Jo ise aur bhi nayab aur behtireen bana deti hai. Mai is baat se wakif nehi thi Ki aap ek aur ff likh rehi hai. Kal Maine jab swasan one shot para aur comments Mai Maine dekha Ki aap yeh ff likh rahi hai hamari Khushi Ki koi thikana nehi thi. I’m yours ke khatam hone ke baad Mai Roz intezar karti thi Ki kab aap ek aur ff likhegi.. Aaj wo Khushi ka lamha a Gaya!!!!!!!!!!

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:32 pm

      hey vinita! woh humara one shot tha, mera aur kashis ka aur thanks is comment k liye, mujhe such main bohat khushi hoti hai urdu main koi comment daikh kar

  40. Vinita on January 7, 2016 1:28 am

    Saba di pls over look the typos

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:33 pm

      yup dear this time, ive proofread my complete part. i hope youll like it

  41. Harani on January 7, 2016 6:25 am

    Really really awesome dr…swara’s change and sanskar bcmng more close to hr are really so nice …but wat is gonna happen next

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:34 pm

      thanks dear, youll knnow in next episodes

  42. surbhi on January 7, 2016 6:46 am

    Superb ??? mind blowing I am always eagerly waiting for your ff

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:34 pm

      thanks dear! youre great supporter dear

  43. Chinni on January 7, 2016 7:29 am

    Nice

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:35 pm

      thanks dear

  44. shabrin on January 7, 2016 7:49 am

    Awesome as always

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:35 pm

      thanks sweetie

  45. priyanshi on January 7, 2016 10:06 am

    Superb episode! !!

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:37 pm

      thanks dear

  46. ?Cherry? on January 7, 2016 10:39 am

    Saba u always write so beautifully next epi plss?

    • ?Cherry? on January 7, 2016 10:41 am

      This cherry is your regular reader I saw some other cherry also commenting but I m the cherry who commented since the 1st epi

    • cherry on January 8, 2016 12:48 pm

      Hii. What a coincidence… Even my name is Cherry.

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:37 pm

      thanks dear t being a reglar reader of my ff

  47. karthi on January 7, 2016 11:38 am

    Oh awesome dear,,I can’t express on my words dear,,,,, u r always rocking writer dear,

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:41 pm

      thanks dear

  48. Prathiba on January 7, 2016 12:06 pm

    hiii,saba..super episode…pls make sanskar positive..want to see swasan romance

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:42 pm

      thanks dear! and hes already positive in my point of view

  49. Manasvi on January 7, 2016 12:09 pm

    Pls saba write next episodes early .u r very very good writer

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:43 pm

      thanks dear ive uploaded next part

  50. Rini on January 7, 2016 1:17 pm

    Saba can u give me ur fb page link and as usual a big smile on my face when reading this

    • Lucky on January 7, 2016 1:56 pm

      This is link of group : https://www.facebook.com/groups/1664251380519645/

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:43 pm

      thanks rini! lucky already gave you link, thanks lucky and i hope ill see you on group

  51. atiya on January 7, 2016 4:16 pm

    no words fo ur ff yaar any compliment wid be get short but seriouslyyyyy awesomeeee dear

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:44 pm

      thanks dear to like my ff

  52. swetha on January 7, 2016 4:48 pm

    Ur an awesome writer I have ever seen I just love your fan fiction waiting for next episode ur an great writer I bet u on that Saba ur the best and rocking

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:45 pm

      thanks dear

  53. zellafarook on January 7, 2016 5:56 pm

    Saba u r grea

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:46 pm

      thanks dear

  54. Manasvi on January 7, 2016 6:35 pm

    Pls write next episode we r waiting

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:47 pm

      ive uploaded dear

  55. maya on January 7, 2016 6:41 pm

    super sear I love tat very much updates next soon

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:47 pm

      thanks daer

  56. Tani on January 7, 2016 6:49 pm

    I hadnt read ur ff…bt aftr i read dis,,i wanted 2 read all…soo i started today n read all 15episodes of dis ff…I luved it yaar…u r awesum,,,u express things vry well…All d best yaar for all ur upcoming writings…Hope u get gud ideas n we get gud episode… <3

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:49 pm

      thanks tani! and thanks alot to read my all episodes

  57. sethooty on January 7, 2016 8:42 pm

    Loved it Dr…as usual superb..

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:50 pm

      thanks dear and aill wait for your long analyse

  58. Anam on January 7, 2016 9:44 pm

    I am getting addicted to ur story, sirf itna kahungi hamesha ki tarah aap ne dhoom macha di ,next part ka intezar hai! .

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:51 pm

      thanks anam! ive posted next part

  59. Dil on January 7, 2016 10:05 pm

    Hey thanks saba.. Aftr so many days got yr story.. Awaiting fr the new epi daily.. Tday epi too awasom.. I lov it.. realy peaceful than real swaragini story.. Awits fr the next epi soon..thanks tons

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:51 pm

      thanks dil dear for supporting me

  60. Soundarya on January 7, 2016 11:13 pm

    Actually awesome… Simply no words.. I’m totally addicted to this ff..Ur writing and creativity is simply marvellous… Please don’t stop writing this ff.. Because whenever I can’t see this ff’s update,I am totally becoming crazy.. I just get upset if I don’t read your ff.. This is my 1st cmnt.. And ya you are simply superb!!!!!

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:17 pm

      Hey dear! Thanks alot deaR and keep connecting sweetie and I’ll try my best to update soon

  61. Anjali on January 7, 2016 11:30 pm

    Upload next part please. .We are waiting from 2 days. .!

  62. khan on January 8, 2016 3:16 am

    This episode was awesome but Sry to say I lost interest in ur ff cause every person needs to remind you to write it ur posting it after many days and again that too 1, 2 days gap plz don’t test any ones patients Saba at least one ff in a day. Reply me for sure I wanna know a valid reason for ur not posting. Allah bless you.

    • saba on January 8, 2016 11:57 am

      hey anjali! ive uploaded next part and khan dont be angry please im human being so its nrmal when we stck in some problem so we cant concentrate , in our story sorry for late update dear

    • swapna on January 9, 2016 5:12 pm

      i haven’t found that next part pls update

  63. saba on January 8, 2016 11:54 am

    hey guys! im soooooo sorry for late update, and ive uploaded next part in tellyupdates as well as on facebook, so if you wanna read it early so go to group, youll find its next part and sorry guys again

  64. Manasvi on January 8, 2016 12:29 pm

    Thanks saba for updates

  65. sara on January 8, 2016 12:49 pm

    saba like always it is awesome. ..I just fall in love for ur ff every moment when I read it. ..

    • saba on January 8, 2016 12:54 pm

      thanks sara

  66. saba on January 8, 2016 12:52 pm

    thanks dear and keep commenting

  67. kj on January 8, 2016 12:55 pm

    saba u told u will write back to back after 6 Jan than please write it regularly

  68. dolly on January 8, 2016 12:58 pm

    Ur fan fiction is really awesome. The language u use everything . i have read all episode of ur fan fiction and also ir previous fan fiction i have read all episode. U are amazing.

    • saba on January 8, 2016 3:16 pm

      thanks dolly

  69. kj on January 8, 2016 1:04 pm

    which group

    • saba on January 8, 2016 3:17 pm

      sorry dear im trying my best to fulfill my promise and this is link of group https://www.facebook.com/groups/1664251380519645/?fref=nf

  70. Nidhi on January 8, 2016 2:38 pm

    Dear I have tead nxt part from fb…pls aoon upload part 17.. atleast upload one episode daily…you know I am crazy about ur ff.. waiting for ur ff..

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:00 pm

      Hey nidhi! Thanks dear,yeah I’ll try my best to upload daily

  71. Neha on January 8, 2016 3:07 pm

    Yeah saba which group becoz I m not getting it on tellyupdates and episode was awesome…but swara shouldn’t have said that

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:05 pm

      Thanks dear, and this is link of group https://www.facebook.com/groups/1664251380519645/?fref=nf

  72. kj on January 8, 2016 3:08 pm

    n as u said u have upload it in telly updates than y it is not showing….to all of us common yaar reply

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:07 pm

      Dear! I’ve uploaded. Sorry posted in morning,it’s not my fault that tellyupdates didn’t upload it yet, well you can read on this https://www.facebook.com/groups/166425138051964/?fref=nf link new part

  73. Meghs on January 8, 2016 4:58 pm

    How could swara say that … Obviously sanskar angry is justified ..

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:08 pm

      Right dear

  74. swetha on January 8, 2016 5:00 pm

    Saba if I have a twitter account plz give me ur I naa so that I can follow u on twitter and read ur fan fictions there actually I wont use FB so I cant read ur ff so I u have a twitter account can u give me ur id

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:11 pm

      Hey swetha! I’ve twitter account bit im not using it regularly, and also can’t any page on twitter to upload next part,so sorry dear for it,

  75. sindhuja on January 8, 2016 6:48 pm

    what to say… it’s just awesome as usual… i felt something is wrong with sanskar in the initial part of the update… then found out that he was in a drunken state… and when he said, ‘it’s not able to sleep my conscious’, loved it…

    • Saba on January 8, 2016 10:12 pm

      Hey sindhuja! Thanks dear happy to see you and where is your ff dear? Well your word can make my words dear

  76. kj on January 8, 2016 10:48 pm

    16 episode was very boring please make 17 good n yes ur all other ff was aausum of this chapter but not 16 episode…..sry..but its true

  77. ahana on January 12, 2016 10:41 pm

    plz update 17th part soon plz

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