Swasan a path hate to love Episode 11

Recap:”sanskar apologized to swara” There’s a deep silence between them, swara is starring him purposelessly. She doesn’t understand why her heart is attracted by him after his all misbehaving. Sanskar stands and pats her face:”go and get change, im waiting for you on dining table” Swara nods and feels still confused by his behaviour, but obey him silently. She opens the cupboard and goes to take a bath. She goes downstairs but wonders to see him waiting for her. Sanskar:”Dr told me that you’ve to eat only healthy diet, so I gave chart to Lavanya, you’ve to follow it ok?” Swara nods and takes a spoon of oats. Next moment, she split it:”what’s this? I cant eat it, I’m not ill to eat this type of food” Sanskar becomes serious to see her act:”ok! Dont eat, tell Lavanya what are you wanna eat” He slowly takes her bowl of oats and starts eating. She wonders to see his act:(maybe he’s such a miser, who doesn’t wanna waste a food).

He looks her face expression and understands her confusion:”you know Swara! Our country is developing country, there are millions of people who hardly eat one time meal properly because people like us, who wasted food just they dislike it and doesn’t wanna eat it” he completes his breakfast and gets up from his seat while swara feels ashamed to listen his words. But after few seconds, she jerks his words and takes her breakfast. ********** Sanskar leaved for his work while swara is standing in front of mirror:”look Swara! Now you’ve to live there, so you’ve two options either you want to escape the fact and live here as crying baby or you accept the fact that now he’s my husband and live here happily. Either you want or not but you’ve to live here so what’s the use of crying and denying the fact” she is optimist girl who always find second option to live happily, if she doesn’t find her priority to live. She ties pony tail and comes downstairs in kitchen. :”ok swara! What will you do today?” She calls Lavanya:”I wanna eat something, what to do?”

Lavanya smiles to see her behaviour but control it:” This is your home ma’am! What I should advice to you, you can orders me or to cook the dish” Swara nods and goes inside the kitchen, there are many servants are working. Swara:”who’s the cook?”
A servant come ahead:”there are four cooks ma’am and I’m the head of this kitchen” Swara feels dizzy to listen this:”what’s the use of four cooks, if only one person is here to eat” Kitchen head:”actually ma’am these four are expert in various kind of cuisines, as our boss is running the chain of hotels that’s why he has to maintain this thing is also at home” Swara wonders to listen his logic but jerks her shoulders:”well! I wanna eat aalu chat? Who’ll make for me?” Kitchen head:”ok! Ma’am, ill send you, your dish, anything else?”

Swara about to leave but stops:”well! Tell me one thing, which type of dishes your boss is eating?” Kitchen head:”actually he doesn’t order us specific things, often he takes dinner at hotel, otherwise shanaya ma’am come and she orders us” Swara feels jealous to listen her name but also feels suspicious:”was your shanaya ma’am come daily here?” K.H.:”almost daily, when she didn’t come here, then sir was also not come at home” She’s curious to listen it and want to know but Lavanya come to kitchen and indicates him through eyes. Kitchen head:”ma’am you go, ill send your food” Swara leaves kitchen in confused state. She shuffles the CDs of movies which are totally action or horror movies:”sanskar has bad taste” she chosen a movie from it and starts watching movie with eating chat(jab rahna hi hai yahan to Ro k rahne ka faida)

Sanskar is in the cabin of his hotel and talking with someone on phone. Sanskar:”Mr Gupta you’re taking so much time to convince maharaj partab Singh to sale his palace” Mr Gupta:”sir! I’ve convince them they already lost their property for the sake of their voluptuousness. You dont worry, you’ll listen good news soon” Sanskar:”good to you” Mr Gupta is the psychologist of Maharaj who has blackmailed by sanskar to convince maharaj to sale his palace to him. Mr Gupta has a daughter who is Dr but in her early career, she’s the reason of death child kavya. Mr Gupta:”so do you handle the matter of kavya?” Sanskar smirks:”kavya? Who’s kavya Mr Gupta?” Mr Gupta understands and disconnects the call. Sanskar thinks:”ohh!! I’ll finally get my dream” His phone rang. He attends the call. His secretary asked him that maharaj Partab Singh wanna talk to him. He smirks with proud and tells him to connect call. Sanskar:”so Maharaj Sahab! Are you agree with my deal?” Maharaj:” Your deal was really good Mr Maheshwari! How can I deny? Well! are you still wanna my palace with previous amount?”

Sanskar:”sanskar will never turn to his tongue” Maharaj:”ok! Then I’m visiting Delhi nowadays, then we’ll meet soon” Sanskar smiles:”sure! I’ll welcome you there” he disconnected the call and recalls something. Fb shows that two kids are playing in the palace while their parents are being attended by king of that palace. Lucky:”this is beautiful place naa Bhai? I wish I can stay here forever” Sanskar:”you know lucky! One day, ill get one palace and ill make one of my hotel there” Laksh:”Bhai! You cant get the palace, this is so big” Rp and dp come to listen them. Dp holds sanskar and says:”you’ll see ram! My son will be organized the great chain of hotels in India and that chain will complete when he get the palace to place his hotel” this words of dp are always remembered by him. He doesn’t want to remind any member of his family but in the deep inside, he feels the pain to reminisces them. ********* Sanskar arrives at home while swara is as usual in front of his eyes. Sanskar is also silent while swara is also reserves and limited girl so there’s nothing between them to talk about.

Swara feels bother to live in a room where sanskar is doing his work. Swara:”sanskar!” Sanskar:”hmm..” He says without taking off his eyes from laptop. Swara:”I need some books and movie cds, I feel bother at home whole day” Sanskar looks her:”ok! You make a list of your stuff, driver will bring all the stuff you want” Swara:”hmm..” She sees him with full concentration and scold her heart who wanna absorb him in it. Sanskar:”if you want to sleep, you can” Swara:”but dinner…” She’s waiting him for dinner. Sanskar:”I already took my dinner (he suddenly boggles) dont you take your dinner?” Swara nods in “no”. Sanskar:”intercom Lavanya to bring your dinner” he says and again concentrate on his work. Swara fumes to see him in this state:(what a man he’s! Is work more important than me?). She intercoms lavanaya and took dinner like obedient girl. She doesn’t understand what to do in this bog house. **************

In mid night, swara’s eyes are open without any reason. She doesn’t understand the reason of her awakening. She saw that sanskar is still working on his laptop and ash tray is filled by ash of cigarettes. She wakes up and sits in a posture of half laying. Sanskar feels her and turns to her. Swara:”you’re still awakening sanskar?” Sanskar:”I’m working in a very special project, why you wake up?” Swara feels restless to see him in this condition. Her heart is silent completely like a night, but her eyes are want to see him continuously. Swara:”I don’t feel sleepy” Sanskar:”hmm..(he again looks on laptop but turns to her to remind something) if you’re feeling sleepy, then will you make coffee for me?”

Swara nods and puts on her gown. She goes to kitchen and starts making coffee for him. She’s continuously thinking about him and his behaviour. She feels pity to see him working and her heart are waking up in her chest and whisper in her ears:”go and take out his tiredness in you” she jerks the voice of her heart and give him a coffee. She also brings for herself and takes a sip of coffee to see him with thief’s eyes. Swara:”sanskar! You should go to sleep now” Sanskar smiles bitterly:”I cant sleep swara! I need support to sleep, so you dont worry and go to sleep, its better to go for sleep otherwise ill loose my control” Swara gets up immediately to listen it:”aaaawww! (yawning) I feel sleepy, goodnight” He smiles on her act and again concentrate on his work.

Credit to: Saba


  1. Honey

    Hey saba I can’t wait so long to read ur FF yaar.. Please try to make it at least once in two days… Loving it…

  2. Dolly

    Wow ..saba u r really an good writer ….loved swasan moments ….make it more longer …love the plot of the story it’s really interesting. ..to read …love u saba ?

  3. Shraddha

    Finallyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can’t tell u how much I had waited not even for my holidays I was this crazy??? Gosh wat an episode as usual ur BANG ON finally swara started to accept her life n sanskaar started to open up to her wat else do I need…. Keep it coming n plzzzzzzz Saba I beg plzzzz update daily no plzzzz?

  4. meghs

    swara strted to get concern for sanskar
    so she is started falling for sanskar…

    as she is bored make swara rags spend some time …their nice bonding…

  5. pratiksha

    good episode but u could have written more. I want swasan romance .plz update soon dear . and why din’t u update yesterday……. plz update every day.

  6. bhuvi

    Hey my dear saba… Good episode… Swa is falling for san… N san is changing his behaviour towards swa… Am so happy… N eagerly waiting for their acknowledgement of their feels to each other…

  7. Fabulous episode dear!!!! I love his attitude man!!! Just killing!!!! The way u conveying his character chanceless Saba!!! Great writer!!! Swara was jealous(hahaha)!!! And especially last para awesome dear and last dialogue”otherwise ill loose my control”(laughing)!!!?

  8. jyotii

    speechless!! Again you cracked it!! No words for you!! You know Saba you are a outstanding writer!!! I am learning from you!!! Please update the next part as soon as you can!! Am waiting for it!! πŸ™‚

  9. praise

    Whoooaaa so finally saba is here wid her next part of swasan ff πŸ™‚
    I ws waiting fr it since lng πŸ™‚
    I lyk dis part n especially d last part πŸ™‚
    N d scenes wen swara’s heart speaks πŸ™‚
    So nw our swara is changing…i lyk dis avtar of her…bindaas πŸ™‚

  10. sethooty

    Again u nailed it Dr ..loved it and that last para..wen he said he will lose his control, then swara’s reaction was ..haha ..superb

  11. Ira

    Hi …..actually I am ure ffs silent readers and I luv ure ff ……I have a request if u can write a ff on zindagi gulzar hai as its a very popular show on hum tv ……I know it will be a burden on u , it’s a humble request

    • Saba

      Hey ira! Thanks dear to broke out your silent, I think zindagi gulzar hai is completely perfect show that it doesn’t need any fan fiction dear! And how can I compete with Umera Ahmed! One of my favourite writer dear! Sorry if you feel bad, but I can’t write dear because I dont want to change this beautiful show

  12. akku

    really awesome. .
    is today part is short. ?
    sorry if u feel bad..
    bt I must say I’m really addicted to ur ff….

  13. Sara

    Last part really made me laugh…..hahaha?????✌?loved the way u write saba lovedit.stilll laughing at the last lines…

  14. Kiara

    Finally its you…
    A big smile came when i saw your update…
    Dude plz have mercy on us, plz don’t make us wait for your fan fictions.
    Loved it…
    Last para was awesome.. loved swara’s yawning reaction. Waiting for your next episode… and this time its a request to update early…

    • Saba

      Thanks kiara! I also like last para, sorry dear I’ve mentioned already that im taking a break but still exms date isn’t come out still so maybe ill upload next part but I’m not sure dear, if I update then ill must inform all of you in fiction lover! Thanks dear

  15. Tara

    Wowwwww… plzzzz update daily dear.. i am waiting whole day and daily to read this ff.. I always scroll to chk ur stry. Today it’s soooo superbbbbb nd fabulous. Frm the starting wer sanskar care for her like anything, actually it’s a advice for all of us not to waste food, prompt fullfilling of his duty as husband… getting her stuff she wants.. wureeeh.. wat a husband’s char u hav potrayed. Though he is not good sometimes, he is tooooo good other times.. loveeee ur stry. Plzz update daily yaar like b4.. I’m addicted to ur this ff

    • Saba

      Hey Tara! I always find a supporter in you from my first episode to 11 thanks alot dear and where’s your next ff? I’m waiting and yeah do you in my group? I want to talk with you dear! If not please come md join dear

  16. hadi

    Once again a wonderful epi yr swara finally excepted sanky n sanky as always killer expression plz yr at least 50 episodes likhna iski tou…

  17. ayesha

    Hey saba..!! You are amazing writer..i appreciate all your fan fictions…no words for your writings..I have some ideas which will very well go with this story….plz give me a chance to share them with you n if u like them you can add them in your story…plz reply me your email id where I can share my ideas …will be waiting for ur reply..

  18. ayesha

    Hey saba…before updating your next part consider my ideas too because I think my ideas will give a new path to your story…please give ur email id as soon as possible…cant wait to share my ideas with you… Am eagerly waiting for ur reply….

  19. Saba

    Thanks hadi! I’m not sure about episodes, it totally depends of flow of my mind, well maybe it will bit longer but ill never drag it
    Thanks Tania, fransi and Mira

    Thanks nive, shabrin and dil! Guys I mentioned in group that im taking 2 weeks break for study, sorry guys you’ve to wait
    Thanks lavu, Sara and karthika! Yar ill try my best to upload next part, but im not making promise, sorry dear
    Thanks akku, you feel it short, I also felt that dear, next time ill make it long
    Thanks varu, karthi, archana and Sethooty!

    Thanks rivathi, manisha and shanaya!
    Thanks khushi, nidhi and sanam! Thank you hayathi! I always read your comment on my ff thanks alot guys

    Thanks yazh, kritika and manisha! thanks alot guys!

    • ayesha

      Hey..am not on fb..I can mail you..please give your email id..i had already written my ideas..just need to send u..sorry cant wait..thanks dear for considering my ideas too..

    • mira

      u mean we want to wait one week never it’s not fair Saba! PLEASE….. Saab update soon I can’t wait for one week try it

  20. Kaku

    I m always a silent reader of urs saba…u r writting skills r really nice….cn’t wait fr the next epi…pls update it soon..waiting eagerly fr the nxt e
    pi…n thnk u fr updating this epi…

  21. Harshita

    Saba u r too gd with ur writing dear…i hav becm a very big fan of ur writings….pls update next part soon…..

    • sethooty

      Hi ..sorry to reply on behalf of saba, her exams r going on these days..she is doing her masters na, so its very imp to concentrate on her studies..plz be patient yaar ..after her exams she will update soon

  22. Hi frndz….so priya is back wid ma cmnts…….Ur ff is an symbol of AWSUMNESS ….saba u Rock. ….d episode was fantabulous……i wish u could cntinu “i’m urs” too….i miss it badly…n sry fah nt cmntng fah a few days coz ma skl reopend on dis mon after a long holidays due to d flood…n will nt b able to read r cmnt ur ff in d nxt week coz i’m goin to ma granny’s home fah ma vacation. …will b back in a few days…..miss u ….miss ur ff??

    • Actually Amita its diff storyline!!!characters only similar but it revolves around swasan!!!! U can understand from title hate to love!!! Just read from episode 1!!!

  23. khushi

    Assalamvalikum saba…i came to know ur Pakistani wow…u know I love to vist Pakistan atleast once in my life…

    I love ur ff….though I comment sometimes…bt I always read ur ff….
    U don’t how I wait to ur ff…bus tellyupdates open kar ke tumharee ff dekthi paheli…

    I have seen comment tht ur having exams… So dear ALL THE BEST..?

    Allah se duva karonggi ke tuhare exams aache se hooo….inshallah ameen.

  24. kj

    saba when ur exam will complete n when u will continue to write this ff ….swasan a path hate to love…..waitin…

  25. sam

    Hi Saba…..can u update atleast 1 episode per day…i got attached to dis ff emotionally ……plz saba….we r waiting …fr a long time…update plz

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