Swasan OS.


Swasan OS


It’s actually inspired from marathi movie MPM. I love the film n Swasan so combined both! There no characters except Swasan!

Swara: Mom! I’m not gonna wear a saree!? Firstly I’m going there for u n secondly how do expect me to wear traditional!? No! I’m wearing wat I usually wear! (Swara goes in her room n wears clothes n comes out. She was wearing a denim black short jumpsuit with purple n white stripes full sleeve top. She takes her backpack n leaves. She goes to the station n the train arrives at 5. She sits in it n puts on headphones n listens to songs. After some time a romantic song plays. She keeps on thinking.)
Swara: How he might be looking!? I’ve not even seen his face! Let it be Swara! Let it be!☺ (After some time she reaches Pune. She ties taxi n goes to the colony. There she finds some kids playing cricket. N one guy was also playing. He was looking handsome.)
Guy: That’s cheating! I’m not out! The ball didn’t touch my bat!! It’s cheating! Go I’m not playing!? (Swara smiles on his behaviour n realises that she had to go somewhere. She enters the building n rings bell. Rings again. Rings again. But no one opens the door.)
Swara: wat the hell!? I’ll call mom! (She calls her mom.) Ma! The door is locked! Call him n ask where he is!? (She cuts. After a minute her mom calls.)
Swara: He is not in pune!? Then why did u send me!? Come on mom! I’ll roam pune! Bye! (She cuts the call.) He is so foolish! Hriday Mardyam Go to hell! (She comes down n sits on bench. She gets engaged in watching the game. The guy again cheated n fooled kids. Swara smiled. The guy noticed her n came to her. He was wearing knee length trouser n pink n blue shirt wid jacket. He had a bali in his on ear. He was wearing a slipper!?He had headphones around neck.
He looked stupid but cute?. )
Swara: Who r u!?
Guy: I’m Sanskaar…… N u!?
Swara: Swara….. (They shake hands.)
Guy: I’ve seen u going upstairs….u returned early….no one’s home!?
Swara: Actually yes…. I wanted to meet Hriday Mardyam… but he is not home…
Sanskaar: oh! Hriday Mardyam! ? I know him! U r his girlfriend!?
Swara: No! I’m here to say No to marriage proposal…as my mom doesn’t understand me….He’ll do…
Sanskaar: not bad! But he is good! Trust me!
Swara: anyways… I’m not going to say yes.
Sanskaar: Why don’t u call him!?
Swara: oh yes! (She calls her mom n asks the number. Her mom gives her the number.) I’ll call him! (She dials the number.)
Sanskaar: Excuse me I wanna make one call….I’ll come!
Swara: sure! (He goes away. She dials the number but it comes unavailable. She calls again but unavailable! She gets irritated. She plans to go to coffee as it was 9:30 am. )
Swara:Sanskaar!? Where is café nearby!?
Sanskaar: u don’t have GPS! ?
Swara: No! Any problems!?
Sanskaar: Why wud I have any problems!? Take first right then straight then second left n then third right….best of luck!?
Swara: Wat!? First right…left…No! Third right…. Wat the f**k!!
Sanskaar: woah! Abusing words n all huh!??
Swara: U have some work!?
Sanskaar: No… I’ve to complete my game!?
Swara: What!? Game!!?? It wud be better if u accompany me to café!☺
Sanskaar: (raises eyebrow) Coffee!? or date!? Hriday Mardyam wud get angry ha!!?
Swara: shut up!!?
Sanskaar: ok ok ok! I’ll accompany you! Come…. (They sit on bike n leave.)
Swara: which year!?
Sanskaar: last year…Arts. N u!?
Swara: Last year Science….
Sanskaar: scholar huh!? (They reach the café. Get down n sit in café.)
Swara: one capuccino
Sanskaar: One hot chocolate drink…..
Swara: Seriously!? Chocolate drink!? R u a kid!??
Sanskaar: wat!? Is it a rule that only Kids drink it!? Adults can’t! ?
Swara: hmmm…….
Sanskaar: where do u live! ?
Swara: Mumbai….The fame!?
Sanskaar: oh!
Swara: u know Hriday Mardyam right!?
Sanskaar: Oho! looks like someone is on right path!
Swara: No! I just wanna know….
Sanskaar: He is singer S’s I’ve heard…..
Swara: woah!? N say about u… ( their drinks come n they have it.)
Sanskaar: I love my Pune! My pride! (boasts) U know us puneri right!? We live wid pride!
Swara: oh please!? Don’t boast too much!! (They finish their drinks.)
Swara: N yes….pay ur bill! I’m paying my owns….
Sanskaar: (shock) wat!? I don’t have money!!
Swara: wat!?
Sanskaar: Yes! I was playing game n u brought me here! I don’t have my wallet!
Swara: ok! I’ll pay….. (She pays the bill n they leave.) Hold on! (She he takes a paper n writes on it.) Give this to Hriday Mardyam…..
Sanskaar: wats this!? Oh! (tease) love note!?
Swara: shut up! I’ve written the reason for why I’m saying no…..
Sanskaar: wid out seeing him!?
Swara: who is he!? I mean my mom’s friend gave her a number which was of her relatives friend….wats the connection!? N I don’t wanna marry so soon!
Sanskaar: K! I’ll give. (He keeps it in pocket.) So….
Swara: so…!?? Bye! N yes where is Saras baug!?
Sanskaar: Shall I drop u!? (Swara smiles n nods. They sit on bike n leave.)
Swara: u puneri people r too much!
Sanskaar: oh hello! First look at ur self! Mumbaikar. ….
Swara: N the way u dress…
Sanskaar: not like the ur..
Swara: urs r out dated?
Sanskaar: Oh please!? (They have sweet fight till they reach the place. They get down n roam the place.)
Swara: u love u r Pune so much!?
Sanskaar: of course! We puneri r born wid pride! We have our fame baugs! Wat do u have!? Those beaches with salts!??
Swara: oh please! (They remain silent.)
Sanskaar: so…..!?
Sanskaar: Why u don’t wanna marry Hriday Mardyam!?
Swara: because I don’t puneri boys….
Sanskaar: be ware! u r wid puneri boy!
Swara: yeah! lol!? (They head to Dagdusheth Halwai Ganpati temple.)
Sanskaar: I’ll pray to bappa to give..
Swara: I can pray on my own! ?
Sanskaar: whatever…. (Both boast about their respective cities.)
Swara:it’s 2! I think I shall call him! (She takes out her phone.) Shoot!!
Sanskaar: Now wat!?
Swara: low battery,…. I need to save!
Sanskaar: don’t worry! take my phone! ?
Swara: N u feel I have his number!? I deleted it when I was angry..
Sanskaar: u r a true Mumbaikar! Use ur brain! call ur mom n ask!?
Swara: Yes… don’t boast! Wait! I’ll call later! Now I’m hungry….
Sanskaar: so let’s go to a hotel n I’ll make u eat puneri misal! u will love it
Swara: it’s too spicy!
Sanskaar: huh! Not more than those vada pavs….?
Swara: say whatever u want but I love it n wud always love it!
Sanskaar: oh is it!? (She nods. They go to a hotel n have lunch. Both boast about their cities. But she didn’t realise that she had started liking pune! They then visit Shanivar Wada…) a call
Swara: u have a girlfriend!?
Sanskaar: No…. I didn’t find Miss.perfect.
Swara: wat girlfriend!??
Sanskaar: boyfriend….
Swara: No… I didn’t find Mr. Perfect! (Both smile.)
Swara: Its 5!
Sanskaar: I know…
Swara: I’ve my train at 8…. Let’s check in ur colony….
Sanskaar: but u said u r not interested..
Swara: ha…….but still…Now I’ve came to say no! So I’ll better say on face!
Sanskaar: Yes! (He giggles.) (They head towards the colony. She goes up n rings bell but again no one opens. She comes down.)
Sanskaar: met him!? Said no!? or yes!? (tease)
Swara: He is still not home! how stupid these puneri boys r!?
Sanskaar: oh hello! Even I’m puneri! keep in mind!
Swara: wat ever….Leave me at train station…. (She doesn’t realise that she started to owe him which only loved ones do! They reach station.)
Sanskaar: Bye…
Swara:bye…. (She goes inside n learns that the train is 30 min late. She makes a call to mom.) Ma… Yes I’ve 30 mins…He is coming to meet me outside the station!?Now! K! I’ll go! (her battery gets off.She comes out n finds Sanskaar talking on phone. She feels like going to him. Actually she came out to see him?.)
Swara: hey!
Sanskaar: I’ll call u back! U didn’t go!? Changed mind!?
Swara: shh! How much u speak!?? Mom said he is here….
Sanskaar: (tease) oh!! Hriday Mardyam is here!?? Oh n u r blushing!?
(She forwards her hand.)
Swara: thanks…
Sanskaar: once I hold ur hands…We wud be inseparable!
Swara: thanks… (They shake hands.) N yes! give me ur number! I’ll note it! (She takes pen.) tell..
Sanskaar: (confused) let it be! I mean u will write on ur palm..wash it..just remember this day in ur life!
Swara: ok! (Both smile.)
Sanskaar: he came … (She turns back eagerly.But Sanskaar fooled her.) Look at ur expressions! U r so restless!
Swara: Don’t bug me!
Sanskaar: call him once then!
Swara: I don’t have number!?
Sanskaar: call ur mom n ask! (She calls her mom n takes number again. She makes a call on his phone.)
Swara: again engaged… I’ll leave! its late!
Sanskaar: Only one call!? Dial again! Might be ur luck is good!
Swara: ok…? now I’ve to type it again!
Sanskaar: Check in call list! It’s above ur number!
Swara: ok!! (She calls) engaged…. any ways bye! (She turns n leaves. She stops. She recollects wat he said just a minute before n wat she saw in his call list. )
Swara: (in mind) He said in call list above my number!?? My number!? (She turns) How do u have my number in call list!?
Sanskaar: (smiles) before that u think how can a person call his own number on his own phone!?
Swara: how can a person call his own number on own phone!? ? How stupid! It’s impossible! ? Anyways bye! (She turns to leave.)
Sanskaar: but u did!! Not once but twice…..
(Swara stops n turns.) U called a number wid the phone of same number! twice! Swara: (smiles) That means…..
Sanskaar: (forwards his hand) Hi! I’m Hriday Mardyam….. (he smiles)
Swara: (amused) wat!? really!?
Sanskaar: Yes! u called me from my phone! How stupid ??
Swara: Yes…. (She realises that she is late.) Now bye….
Sanskaar: N what about marriage!? (Swara turns n smiles.)
Swara: After all Mumbai fell in love wid Pune…? (Swara he leaves. He smiles.)
Sanskaar: N even Pune fell in love wid Mumbai..?

So guys I hope u liked this OS!? Comment!

Hi it’s Simran posting on behalf of Duggu.? She has asked me to convey u that she wud be posting a ff named Ek Villain in on 28 March onwards. N also complete the Baby part n post. After Ek Villain She will post new ff named Yeh Jawani Hain Deewani. Best of luck n wish her too. Bye.?

Credit to: Duggu

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  1. even i love that movie yr……………no words fr u…..awesome..

  2. Nice one really good!!!

  3. This was simply amazing.

  4. it was such a beautiful story…. couldn’t help smiling at the end. lovely one.

  5. awsm dear……… luv it

  6. It’s nice but Ek villan will be like that movie.

  7. Are tu tar kharch chhan ff lihilay…mala phar avdle tujhi ff…I am also Marathi..I also like that movie…it is beyond admiration….thanks for your ff..and plz keep it on….and one more thing ” tu bhari , tujhi writing skills bhari , tujhi ff bhari chya mayla tujha sglach Lai bhari…”.

    1. Dhanyavad! ??

  8. I loved this….but what about twilight dairies??????? Duggu plz don’t stop that one…..plz….

  9. Mi fakt tharavikach ff vachate….pn MPM nav pahun mi he ff vachle……..mala khup aavdte yr MPM……awesome movie na….nav jari tu swara aaani sanskar vaprle asale tari majhya dolyasamor swapnil aani muktach hote yr……….

    1. Actually ?

  10. Loved it..

  11. Nice yaar

  12. Loved this a lot!
    Gr8 yrr!

  13. wow its amazing… i lov it

    1. ??lai bhari

  14. loved it

  15. i loved it! amazing story! vry nice!

  16. Plz update the baby ff soon

  17. wow yaar its really awesome i just loved it

  18. Wow Sonal! Proud to have a daughter like u! ?

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