SwaSan OS ! {Will u Still Not Forgive Me?} by Kakali


Hellooo EV1.. Here m again with an OS ..This story/idea was in my mind from many days.. but due to lack of time i couldn’t pen down it.. !! But today i get some time to complete as m writing it since last few days.(adding one piece/part after another). hope u all like it..
Sorry for my grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. so without wasting time let’s move inside d story.. !!


“Chall mere ghore tik tikk tikkk,, Papa move fast,, chall mere ghore tikk tikk tikkk”…

” Papa i want that balloon.. that blue walaa. !! Papa come naa.. i want that balloon plzz plzzz.. get it to me.. !! ”

“Arrey Shona beta,wait… Shonaa ahistha chalo beta,, see cars r (couldn’t complete)

“Shonaaaaaa”….. a terrible scream.

“Papaaaaaaaa” …. a girl wakes up from her nightmare with a jerk sweating badly.. tears r flowing like never ending.. !!

After some minutes she gets normal n looks around finding herself in her own room… !!! that incident or accident or nightmare is not in her sleep only.. even that has become d bitter reality of her life..

She wipes her tears n gets up making way to a room where a lady around 45-46 nd a girl around 20-21 is sleeping peacefully … d girl is sleeping in that lady’s lap with a smile nd that lady is sleeping in sitting position leaning her head against d headboard… looking them like that a lone tear escapes from d 1st one girl’s eyes which were already wet… !!!

“Swara ,, what r u doing here? That too at this time? Is everything okk?” Someone asks her from behind…(*yup d 1st girl is our princess Swara)..

She hurriedly wipes her tears n turns around with plastering a cute smile “Haa, woo bhai, i came to take water,,see my jug is empty(shows him d jug)…(*haa that person is Laksh)

“Soo u should go to kitchen naa.!! Why u staring mom n Kavita?, (realise something n asks in concern) Swara did u got those nightmares again? U r okk na? Shall i call mom?” He is about to enter d room …

“Arrey mera buddhu bhai,, wait .. !! ( drages him to out of room) nothing like that.. it’s just i was going from here n saw Maa n Kavita sleeping .. look na they even forget to close d door !! N don’t disturb them.. let them sleep peacefully….” Swara says admiring Shomi n Kavita…

“Swara ! But what about u? What about ur sleep? Till how long u r going to bear the pain? Till how long they will punish u? ” asks Laksh averting his gaze from Swara to Shomi n Kavita …

“No bhai, they r not punishing me.. infect mom is punishing herself for my stupidity for whom all r suffering.. Maa lost her husband, Kavita n u lost Papa.. just bcz of me we r left alone.. Papa is no more with us.. ” Swara says looking Laksh Shomi n Kavita..

“Swara that day u also lost”(Swara cuts off)

“Let it b bhai, i don’t want to dig that incident again.. it will hurt everyone..” Swara says once again wiping her tears …

“Okk !! Okk ,, i won’t say ..u plz don’t cry..u know na,i can’t see u crying.. u r my strong Swara rit?”..

Swara happily nodes her head with a slight smile…

” Swara say Ramu Kaka to make d guest rooms ready, “..

“Guest ROOMS, but why? is anybody coming? “(
Asks Swara Confusingly…

“Yeah, Sanskar n his sister Ragini is coming.. actually both has opened new branch here at Kolkata..sooo … n also for a reason u will get to know soon… ” Says Laksh looking at Swara’s facial expression keenly…

“Sanssskaar,,, whyy here ? At our home?”Asks Swara with stammering voice n wide eyes..

“Soo what? R u not happy? He is coming after soo many days!! It’s been almost 2 years since i have seen him or Ragini,, i don’t know what happened that he suddenly left d city without even informing us” Says Laksh looking at his cell phone…

“Noo no nothing like that, i just asked as he is coming suddenly naa? Soo. Anyway i m going to inform Ramu kaka” Says Swara n runs from there to her room..

As soon as she enters her room,, she closes d door n falls on floor leaning against d door where tears start to flow from her eyes ….she gets flashback of some beautiful memories , 2 persons chasing each other with great laughter sound..


“Swara wait,, i will not leave u, how dare u call me Frogg…. waittt ” Says a boy continuously running behind a girl with a small angry pout showing his fake anger…

“Arey at first catch me, then u will show me n i will see u na Froggggg.. come n catch me if u can(sticking her toung out n showing her thumb down)” says a girl running kinda marathon laughing wholeheartedly…

The boy frowningly increases his speed n holds her wrist dragging her towards him….

The girl gets shocked with his action but she is not ready to loose soo “Ahh Sanskar !! (Screams) my ankleee,, !! “(Haa d boy is our Prince Sanskar)…

“Swara u okk,, what happened? Kahi lagi toh nehi? Let me see !!! ” asks Sanskar in a worried tone n frees her wrist in order to see her ankle…

Taking this as an opportunity Swara completely frees herself from him n again starts to run….

Sanskar didn’t took much time to understands her flop plan n again runs behind her… but this time with a sly smirk…(*omgg look at him..m feeling dizzy)

Swara bites her lower lip in tension as there is no way to escape for a beautiful sa colourful wall ….

“What u called me ? Frog rit? “says Sanskar taking a few steps towards her…

“Swara !! Now u r gone… bear UR Sanskar noww… God knows what he is upto”….Thinks Swara still biting her inner lips…

~~BG Music {“Piya o re Piya” Remix}~~(*my all time fav song)

{Piyaaaa o re piya…
Piya re piya re piya..
Piya o re piya…
Piya re piya re piyaa}.

“Tohh Swara u were saying something me like Karela,bhindi,frog”… whispers Sanskar near her ear …

Swara comes to sence finding him soo near to her…”nehi Sanskar .. woo toh mai bass aise hii” Swara says breathing heavily as he started to blow air in her ear..

{Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan,
Satoya ki ho ya bekasur re…..
Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan,
Dil to hoya majbor……
Main vari javan…..
Main vari javan}…

Swara feels tickling sensation n smiles due to shyness…. “Sanskar !! What r u doing? Let me go!!…”

Piyaaa o re piya…
Piya re piya re piya..
Piya o re piya…
piya re piya re piya}.

She is about to move but Sanskar again drages her through her delicate waist n murmurs “Nah, u can’t escape.. let me taste u my Karela taste… what’s say Miss Swara Gadodia??” Says Sanskar all time continuously gazing at her rosy lips…

“Haa, i remember.. i have some work.. will meet u after sometime Sanskar… now i need to goo… !!! ” Says Swara avoiding his killer gaze on her…..

{In duriyo ne nazdiki yo se
Saouda koi kar liya,,
Jhuke nigaho ne dil se ishk ka
Vada koi kar liya}.

Sanskar holds her waist more tightly demanding whatever he want …. Swara looks at his handsome face who is now eagerly waiting for her approval….

She shyly closes her eyes giving him a positive sign … in a friction of seconds she feels his rough lips on her rosy lips…. !!

{I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
I’vana fel you
Don’t you make it love or life
I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
U’vana fel you
Don’t you make it love or life}…

There was a sweet kiss between our SwaSan that turnes into a passionate one testing EO’s essence of love showing how much they love each other.. ..

Soon they broke d kiss feelings out of breath…..

{Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan..
Sato ki ho ya bekasur re
Saou saou taro se bhar ke ye daman
le chal mujhe kahi dur..
Piya o re Piya…
piya re piya re Piya..

“Soo how was my taste Swara?” Asks Sanskar teasingly…

“Shut up Sanskar!!” Says Swara beating him playfully n hides her face in his chest….

Sanskar smiles watching his blushing Swara n warps his arm around her hugging her as tight as he can… both has a satisfying n bright smile,,, feeling blessed in EO embrace… (*

{I love you baby,
I’m gone derive a crazy,,,
O baby hole me nov…
I’vana fel you don’t you make it love or life…
I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
I’vana fel you don’t you make it love or life}……


Swara’s chains of thoughts r broken hearing some sound …”Swara beti, jaldi aao… Laksh baba is calling u for Puja…

“Abhi Ayyi Ramu Kaka..just give me 10 minutes…” answers Swara n goes to washroom…


At Hall :::

Shomi is doing Puja n Laksh, Swara n Kavita is standing beside her…

After finishing Puja she moves towards them to give Arrti n Prasad…

Shomi gives Prasad to Laksh … he happily takes Prasad as well as her Blessings… “always be happy my son”!!…

Swara extends her hand with a smile to take Prasad but it fades away when Shomi passes from her doesn’t even looking at her once n give Prasad to Kavita… She kisses her forehead “Always b happy my daughter.”…

Swara withdraws her hand back , wiping her tears from d corner of eyes… !! She looks at Laksh who is about to say something …. “No Bhai.,, not now” Says Swara holding his hand …

Laksh fists his palm “Then when Swara? Whennn? ”

“Arrey let it b bhai.. now give me Prasad (indicating to d Ladoo).. at least i can have it from u rit.. !! So give me d big piece”… says Swara trying to lighten his mood…

“Tuu bhi na Swara..!! U will never change… loo open ur mouth(feeding her a big piece)…Pagal..!! “…

“Bhaii.. it’s tasty..!!U r d best bhai… Thnk u.. “says Swara giving him a side hug again wiping her tears without his knowledge….!!

“Arrey bass bass abb rulayegi kyaa?(now will u make me cry?)” Says Laksh in a dramatic manner wiping his fake tears.. !!

“Hawww bhai!! U can also shade crocodile tears like Ragini.. !! U both r same !! Mr n Mrs.Crocodile.. !!! ” says Swara to tease Laksh..

Hearing Ragini’s name Laksh’s back get straight n he left d place with a smile that was surely noticed by Swara… !!!

“Ohhoo my soon to b Bhabhi Ragini.. !! Welcome welcome… “shouts Swara happily..

“Ragini,, where is Raginii,?¿” Laksh comes back hearing Swara taking Ragini’s name…

“Bhai,,woo toh mai aisee hii chida rehi thi appko..,,,!!! Buddhuuu”says Swara n again runs to her room…

“This girl naaa”…. Laksh says n smiles shyly…


Next Day :::

“Hey Buddy !! What’s up? After a longg time… !!”

“Lucky !!! My buddy part2.. !! How r u? Seriously yaar After a longg time. !! Missed u like hell !!”

Sanskar n Laksh hug .. both r soo happy to meet EO after soo longg… !!

“Ehemm ehemm !! M also here.. !!. If u both have done ? Can i also meet Laksh?” Says a girl giggling n looking at both buddy n buddy part2 who were hugging EO from long n not ready to leave … !!!

Both comes to sence hearing her giggling sound n breaks d hug.. Lucky instantly looks at her n gets mesmerized seeing a Devine beauty … he is just too lost in her smile but comes to his sence feeling pain “ahh !! What’s this Ragini? Ur habit of pinching is still not changed na?” Says Laksh rubbing d place where she pinched him hard… !!

“Huh i was talking to u.. n u were lost somewhere.. kyuu? M i looking like an alien?” Asks Ragini looking at her once again from head to toe… !!

“U r looking like a Fairy.. ” says Shomi descending steps from stairs… !!

“Shomi aunty.. !! How r u? How is ur health? “Asks Ragini n runs to give her a bone crushing hug.. !!

Shomi hugs her back,, caressing her hair with lots of love. !! “M perfectly fine Raguu..!! How r u? U have become soo big.. now i should start to search a prince for u.. what’s say Laksh?” Says Shomi winking at Ragini.. !!

Ragini blushes at her statement where Laksh is also in a same situation.. !!

Sanskar comes to her n takes blessing “Aunty !! How r u going on? U r fine na?”..

Shomi gives him side hugg “yes my son.. m okk now.. !! Waise bhi…(Ragini cuts off)

“Aunty,Sanskar bhai.. now stop ur conversation… i m damn hungry.. !! My stomach is doing Gutur Gutur. ! aunty rest will u plz talk later.. now i wanna eat something…plzzzz ” says Ragini showing her puppy dog eyes..

“Sure Raguu abhi laati hoon.. u both go n fresh n up… !! I have made ur fav Gajar ka halwaa “.. ….says Shomi n goes to kitchen….

“Laksh where is Swara?” Here comes d most awaiting question for whom Sanskar is waiting..

Swara,, who was watching all that scenario from corner of hall comes wiping her tears … she has still not seen Sanskar ,, but only could hear their voice….. “Raguu ,, m here”…

Ragini turns towards d direction from where d voice is coming n sees Swara …. both runs n give EO breath taking hug… !! Both stays in a same position.. !!!

SwaRagini together ” I MISSED U SOO MUCH Swara Ragini… “…

After breaking d hug Swara looks at Sanskar who is only gazing Swara like eating her alive.. !! His eyes showings lots of emotions like Pain,happiness,sadness,anger, as well as disgust… !!! They have a passionate eye lock … !!

“Buddy , Ragini come ur rooms r ready..” says Lucky to Sanskar n Ragini… !!

“Haa Bhai chalooo… !! I m soo hungry.. let’s get fresh n up soon… i can’t wait more for Aunty’s hand made Halwa.. !! ” says Ragini Dragging Sanskar with her..

Sanskar turns n again looks at Swara for giving her a killing glare showing his hatred towards her..

“M i going to marry this mad girl?” Asks Laksh to himself scratching his hairs ….


At Dinner Table :::

“Wah Aunty wah, kya Halwa hai… maaja aa gaya.. !! I guess U have some magic in ur hand .. u can cook soo well.. !! Laksh, Swara n Kavita is so lucky.. !! Areey haa i forgot to ask about Kavita.. where is she? I haven’t seen her since i come here.. ” Asks Ragini taking a big spoon of Halwa.. !!

“Well thnk u for d compliment…n about Kavita, Actually Raguu, she has some assignments so went to her frnd’s home.. will come back after 3 days…. ”

“Ohh Okk , no problem.. !”

Ragini notices Swara who is playing with her food.. “Swara !! Why r u not eating anything.. !! Look naa Aunty has made soo yummy Halwa.. ! Did u take it? Noo na… yehh looo.. !! ” She wants to give Halwa to Swara but her hand doesn’t reach till her plate.. !!

“Aunty ..plzz pass d bowl to Swara.. look her plate is empty .. give her some Halwa.. otherwise i will finish everything.. !! ”

Shomi doesn’t say anything … Swara can easily understands that she is not comfortable “Raguu,, u take as much as u want !! Don’t think about me as i always got to eat MAA’S hand made food.. but u don’t naa… sooo grab d opportunity n eat all.. !! ”

“I know u can eat Aunty’s hand made food everyday but it doesn’t mean u will miss this awesome Halwaa.. !!”

Shomi without having any emotion serves Swara Halwa … !! Swara n Lucky’s eyes r filled with tears…

Swara without anyone’s notice wipes her tears n takes a spoonful of Halwa …. she feels soo blessed to eat her Maa’s hand made food after soo many years..

Laksh sees this n smiles ….. !!


Evening :::

Swara is passing through Sanskar’s room murmuring something underbreath… !! “This Raguu na.. she will kill me one day.. She is still a kid .. don’t know how Bhai will handle her… !!! Yeh Sanskar bhi(her words left incomplete as a strong arm drags her to a room n obviously it’s of our Sanskar… !!!

Her eyed widened at his sudden action n is about to say something but “Shhhhh Swaraaaa(pressing his finger on her lips in order to shut her mouth)… let me see u… !!! Sanskar hugs her whispering “I MISSED TO SOO MUCH SWARA.. !! “..

Swara’s breath stop for a second feeling him soo close to her like before.. !! She couldn’t stop her tearss n reciprocate d hug… He breaks d hug inhaling her scent nuzzling his face in het hair “Did u missed me Swara?”

Swara breaths heavily “Sannskaar !! I missed u” Swara couldn’t complete as Sanskar jerks her ….

“How could u miss me Swara Gadodia? We miss them whom we love .. But u never loved me … rit? Soo how can u miss me?” ..

“Sanskar nothing like that .. u don’t know how much I MISSED U there 2 years.. !! N u also know i LOVED U n I ONLY LOVE U.. !! ”

“Ohh is it sooo Miss Swara Gadodia… !! But i really don’t think soo. !!”

“U know Sanskar ,, u know it very well..!!”i love u d way u love me.. !! . I missed u d way u missed me.. !! ” says Swara Looking straight into his eyes.. !!

Sanskar smilies mockingly “ohh really!! Then why d hell u broke my heart that day? Why d hell u did that with me.. with us Swara?Why? (Holds her arms tightly)
Was I a thing for u to hand over me to other’s.. !! ? Was our LOVE so weak that thattt u forgot about us so easily !! (Jerking her arms)u wanted me to marry Kavita Rit? See m doing d same thing u said me.. !! Now m going to marry Kavita in front of u. !! U just wait n watch Swara.. !! I will punish u d way u punished all these 2 yeard… !!! “Says Sanskar wiping his tears.. !!

“Sanskar can’t u forgive me once?”

“No !!! never.. Swara.. !! I can’t forgive u ever … i will never forgive u Swara.. !! NEVER.. !! ” Says Sanskar shouting… !!

Swara shivers at his tone n rushes from there where tears were flowing for their eyes… !! Sanskar bangs his hand on wall” I will never forgive u Swara..!!. ”


Next Day :::

“Toh Pandit jii,, Day after tomorrow will b perfect day for d engagement rit?.. !! Soo Ragini n Laksh r u ready for taking a step forward to ur new life?’ Asks Shomi to both RagLak. !!!

RagLak nods their head with a positive sign.. !!! Both takes blessings from Shomi.. !! “Always be happy my children”…

“Bhai ..it was d reason Ragini came here.. ohooo !!! Now i get it.. !! ”

Swara hugs both RagLak” M soo happy for u bhai n my soon to b Bhabhii !!! Finally u both r going to b One… !! ”

“Of course Swara.. afterall they love EO truly.. !!” Says Sanskar giving them side hugs… (indirect taunt)…

Swara doesn’t say anything n left from there… !! Sanskar closes his fist tightly… !! Laksh notices Swara being changed from d day Sanskar has come … neither she talks with him nor she passes time with him like before.. !! As they both know EO from college… infect both were soo closed …
Their this kinda behavior makes Laksh confuse… !! Finally he decides to talk with Swara at night..

At Night :::{Swara’s room}

“Swara u r happy na with our relation.. !! I mean … (Swara cuts off)..

“Bhai what u asking? Huh why will i not b happy too see u both Happy? Haa tell mee.. !! ” answers Swara adjusting her wardrobe …

“Then what happened Swara?”..

A file falls down from her wardrobe… !! Swara has still not seen that.. Laksh moves n picks up d file… !! After reading d file he gets d biggest shock of his life.. !! He searches for another papers n gets some pics of SwaSan… !!

Tears start to flow from his eyes.. “what is this Swara? (*huh don’t think wrong readers..Swara has no any disease)… !! U r leaving for California that too day after my engagement.. !!! ”

Swara shockingly looks at him but acts as she doesn’t care much.. “Haa Bahi..!! M leaving ..actually it’s very goid job offer n i seriously don’t want to miss it.. “…

“U love Sanskar ?”that was really a thunder storm for Swara.. !!!

“Whaatt whatt u sayying Bhai? Nothiingg likee thaaat?” Swara says avoiding eye content .. !!

“What is this Swara?”shows her all d pics ..

Now Swara didn’t take much time to broke down.. !!! She was hardly holding her tears back.. but now she couldn’t.. she couldn’t stop her those pearls from flowing…

Laksh is shocked to see her in devastated state n takes her in his embrace where Swara cried her heart out n says everything from starting till d day Sanskar left d city… !!

“And after all this.. i don’t know to be here.. plzz Bhai,, don’t say it to anyone.. even though this news will not effect any of them.. but phir bhii.. !! Promise me u won’t say it to anyone… Laksh just nods.

Anyway Bhai(wiping her tears) let’s enjoy ur engagement together.. !! ..

Laksh without even uttering a single word left her room.. !!!


Engagement Day :::

Both RagLak exchange Rings.. ev1 claps for them.. !!

Ragini-Laksh r u not bored?

Laksh-Hmm!! U2..!! ?

Ragini-Haaa.. we r same..!! Gimme hifi.. !!

Laksh-Gimme Hifi..!!.

Ragini-Waise i have an idea..

Laksh-N what’s that?

Ragini-I will say Bhai n Swara to sing..

Laksh-Whaatt? Nooo.. !!

Ragini-Attention ev1..!! Today is my engagement with my soon to b hubby Laksh Gadodia.. !! N i want My Bhai Sanskar Maheswari n my friend Swara Gadodia to sing a song together as we all know both sings soo well …. soo what’s say people? Do u all wanna SwaSan to sing.. !!

All people ” Yesssssss we want”…

Ragini-Soo Bhai n Swara… get ready to sing n make ur tune of throat ready.. !! This is my upppsss sorry it’s our Demand.
. We wanna hear SWASAN.. !!!

SWASAN SWASAN SWASAN SWASAN SWASAN SWASAN(*i can write or say this name till my last breath repeatedly.. !! I feel soo proud to take this name SWASAN SWASAN SWASAN)…

Swara doesn’t know what to say or react … she can’t deny Ragini as she don’t want to spoil her mood.. !!

She looks at Sanskar n signals him through eyes… he nods his head as he also wants d same…

Taking a deep breath Swara starts,,,,

{~it’s d song from d film Super Nani,,,”Maheroo”.. }

(*i didn’t like this song.. but after watching a video of SwaSan on this song.. it was added into my fav list,,That’s d effect of SwaSan upon me…?)

Haan..Thoda Thoda Shor Hai Dil Mein
Thoda Thoda Gum Sum Hai
Thodi Thodi Saaf Hai Baatein
Thodi Thodi Uljhan Hai

There is little bit noise in heart
It is little bit lost
Some talks(conversations) are clear
There is little bit complexity}…

[This time Sanskar closes his eyes n statrs to sing],,

Thoda Thoda Shor Hai Dil Mein
Thoda Thoda Gum Sum Hai
Thodi Thodi Saaf Hai Baatein
Thodi Thodi Uljhan Hai

{There is little bit noise in heart
It is little bit lost
Some talks(conversations) are clear
There is little bit complexity}…

[Swara takes few steps towards Sanskar]….

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroooo..

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced}…

[Sanskar also takes few steps towards her],,

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love(desire)
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced}

[Swara sings d next few lines remembering her 1st meet with Sanskar where she was about to fall but Sanskar held her from her waist helping her from falling…]…..

Tum Se Mili Toh Yun Laga
Khud Se Huyi Hoon Main Rubaroo
Mere Pyaar Ki
Har Daastaan
Tujh Pe Khatam
Tujh Se Shuru..

{When (I) met you,
felt like
I have come to myself,
face to face..
Each tale of my love
Ends with you, starts with you}..

[Sanskar follows her next lines remembering d same incident when Swara kissed in his cheeks tight to fulfil her Dare]….

Tum Se Mila Toh Yun Laga
Khud Se Huya Hoon Main Rubaroo
Mere Pyaar Ki Har Daastaan
Tujh Pe Khatam Tujh Se Shuru…

{When (I) met you,
felt like
I have come to myself,
face to face..
Each tale of my love
Ends with you, starts with you}…

[Swara continues her singing n looks at Sanskar… their eyes meet instantly placing a painful eyelock]

Dil Ki Sar Zameen Pe Tera Sajda Main Karoon
Aaja Mere Maahi Khud Ko Tujh Se Jod Doon

{On the territory of heart
I bow to you
Come my beloved
I will bind myself to you}….

[Sanskar moves towards her cupping her one cheeks n kisses her forehead]….

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo.

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced
Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love}..

[Swara sings d last few lines closing her eyes feeling d touch of her LOVE]…..

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo.

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced
Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love}..

Both SWASAN comes to sense hearing d clapping sounds n they find themselves at d same palce… !! It was just their imagination… imagination of their heart n soul.. !!

SWASAN wipes their tears …. !! Swara hurriedly goes to her room…

Sanskar had a urge to go behind her but couldn’t due to some of his friends.. !!

After sometime Sanskar goes towards Swara’s direction but he stood froze at his place watching a drunken boy trying to misbehave with Swara.. She is trying her best to frees herself from his clutchs but it’s of no use.. that blo*dy moron is touching her neck, exposed waist n belly sensually… !! She is feeling disgusted .. tears of helplessness is continuously flowing from her eyes.. !!

Sanskar looks at them with blood shot eyes(*omgg ?look at his eyes) n rushes to them .. !! He holds his hand n gives him a tight punch.. in no time d boy was lying on floor with blood all around his body… Sanskar beat him balck n blue?(*i wanted to write Black n baby pink as both r my fav colour.. but urghh let it b…?)…

Swara runs to her room following by Sanskar who is so damn tensed thinking about his LOVE in this state.. !!

Sanskar enters in her room but doesn’t find her … he is about to leave but again turns around hearing sobbing sound…

He looks on shock finding Swara in d corner sobbing hard.. !! He immediately goes n tries to calm her… !!

He holds her wrist but she jerks it saying “stay away from me,, don’t touch me,, stayy stayyy awwayy”…

Sanskar tightly closes his eyes”Swaraa it’s me,! It’s mee Sanskar ! Look at me.. !! (Cuping her cheeks)”..

Swara looks at him n hugs him”Sanskar ,, hee.. heee touchh m.ee heree(rubbing her neck).. Sanskarrr..”…

That is it for Sanskar.. he picks her up in his arms n moves towards bathroom… ! He makes her stand n turns on d Shower…

Water starts to flow through their body.. ! Swara is not in her sence just blabbering n saying Sanskar to stay away.. “Swara open ur eyes n look at me,, it’s me UR Sanskar. ! Look at me damn it(holds her shoulders tightly)…

“Noo noo Sanskar leave me..! Plzz ” says Swara with her shivering lips n Sanskar didn’t take much time to capture her those shivering petals..!!

Neither Swara reciprocate nor she did any movement..

Sanskar stops sucking her lips after making her calm..”Nothing happened Swara.. nothing.. u r safe “..

Swara nods n Sanskar immediately left her alone..

Sanskar runs his hand through hairs n shouts” i will not leave that bastard.. ! I will kill him..(*God knows what happened to that sinful soul)…


Next Day :::

“Knock knock”…

“Yeah come in”..

“Sanskar i wanted to say thnk u for yesterday’s help.. Thnk u “.. says Swara avoiding eye contect..

Checking his files n without even looking at her Sanskar answers ” No need of Thnk u Miss Swara. ! I should have done d same if there was any other girl instead of u .. U know it’s like my duty.. !! “..

Swara gets shock at d way he is speaking..”Yeah, i can understand, it was ur duty… anyway i came here to say Thnk u.. n i said that”..

Sanskar sees her with corner of his eyes “These bags,? R u going somewhere?”..

Swara stops n says “m leaving for California”..


At Hall :::

Everyone is present at hall.. !

Swara bends to take blessings from Shomi but she takes a step back n moves from there without saying anything… Swara touches d place where she was standing …

She goes to Kavita to hug her from Kavita also makes a way after her mom..

Swara helplessly wipes her tears n hugs Laksh n Ragini plastering a tight smile..

A lone tear escapes from Sanskar’s eyes watching his love going away from him.. but he can’t do anything.. ! !his ego is not letting him to do what his heart wants..

But Ragini n Sanskar was confused with d behaviour of Kavita n Shomi towards Swara.. Sanskar thinks to talk about it to Laksh…


Laksh’s Room :::

“Laksh is anything wrong with Aunty ? I mean is Kavita n Aunty angry with Swara..? Actually m observing them from many days both doesn’t talk with Swara properly.. ! Why ?” Asks Sanskar being so confuse…

Laksh smiles painfully” Yes, Sanskar ..Kavita n Maa is angry with Swara.!”

“But why?”

“Not from today. She is angry with Swara from d day Papa left us…Kavita n Maa is not talking with her from d day Papa left us.. !!”…

“What do u mean?”…

“U know Sanskar. Swara was only 9 when that horrible incident took place in our life.. We 5(Maa,Papa,Me,Swara n Kavita) were so happy.. i was 13 that time n Kavita was 6.. we went to market for shopping but when we were coming back Swara wanted to buy balloons, she was so adamant that didn’t listen Papa n run towards d balloon man …. We were shocked bcz a car was coming with full speed n at d last moment Papa pushed her n”……..(couldn’t complete)…

“Papa was spot death”….

“From d day Papa passed away… Swara is curving for Maa’s love.. that day we lost our Papa… but Swara .. She lost everything.. she lost her mother too.. !! She was blamed for Papa’s uncertain death..
Mom never talked with her from that day
.. never show any motherly affection towards her..”

“Mom somehow consoled herself as we were still kids n she had to take care of us..!! N she did.. she became strong for us. !! Looked after us without any hesitation.. !! Maa always tried to fulfil every duty as a mother as well as a father.. !! “…

“U know Sanskar ,, me n Kavita always slept in Maa’s lap,, but Swara .. she was left alone.. there was no one who can consoled a innocent soul… !! Who made her sleep without those nightmares… At that time Swara wanted Maa’s embrace d most.. but nooo,, Maa couldn’t fulfil that duty … coz according to her only bcz of Swara’s Zid Papa is not with us.. !! Swara used to cried all night holding her Doraemon side pillow but it was of no use.”.

“That incident not only changed our life but also every relation changed.. !! Kavita always blamed her for being d reason of Papa’s death.. !! Her hopefull eyes always searched for Maa when she got up from those nightmares but nooo Maa was not there with her.. !! Maa was not there … Maa was not there to take her in embrace.. !! ”

“I always asked Maa why she did this with Swara but d answer was ONLY SILENCE.. !! ”

“People say Time heals every wound.. but some wounds r can’t be healed with times.. infect it gets more deeper… same happened with Swara.. she made her separate from us.. her behaviour got totally changed… our bubbly n naughty Swara was no more.. She was lost somewhere… !! I have seen her crying alone … i have seen her sleepless eyes.. i have seen her breaking down… she still can’t sleep peacefully.. her eyes soo tired like has not sleeping from years.. !! But Maa never seen her face once with love.. there was nothing which can Maa shared with her … not even hated… all her tears were gone unnoticed by Maa
!! ” (staring Swara’s pic)..

Turns around to looks at Sanskar” N then one day u came in her life.. she once again started to smile , to laugh… We were getting our Swara back.. but Destiny didn’t take much time to stole her even that smile.. !!”

“U remember Sanskar when u both wanted to talk about ur relation to Maa!!?”

Sanskar nods in anticipation..

Laksh continuous” That day was d most beautiful day for Swara.. she was soo happy n was going to share it with Maa but her words couldn’t come out of throat as Maa was thinking about our(RagLak) n urs n Kavita’s marriage.. !! ”

“From that day Swara never tried to talk with u… bcz she didn’t wanted to snatch anything from anyone.. specially when it was Maa’s decision… n after that u all know. “…

Sanskar was standing there numb…there was no emotion in his face… he was blank..?being rooted in his place he couldn’t move.. but there was thud sound for whom both turns n sees Shomi … her eyes r filled with tears…

Laksh sadly smiles n says ” Why r u crying Maa? Now everything is in d way u wanted… no need of crying Maa.. !!”…

“Noo Swara ,, u can’t do this.. !! U can’t love my Sanskar.. u can’t snatch my Sanskar… u can’t Swaraaaa u can’t… ” Kavita Shouts like a mad scratching her hairs..” i won’t leave u this time.. !! At 1st u took my Papa from us.. now u Want my Sanskar… noooooo Swara. Nooooo.. !! ” says Kavita grabbing her car keys ….

“Kavitaaa beta “….

“No i can’t let Swara goo.. !! I LOVE HER.. I ONLY LOVE SWARA.. !! i need to stop her.. ”

“Sanskar beta i will also come with u” says Shomi…

“Jii aunty..”


At Airport :::

Kavita drages Swara out of airport n starts to screams ” u wanted to snatch my Sanskar .. ! Swara why u want those things which i love d most.. Nooo nooo noooo this it won’t happen.. i won’t let u do that… understand u blo*dy murderer… u can’t snatch my Sanskar.. !! “Shouts at her top voice..

“Kavita calm down… !! Nothing like that… Sanskar is urs only.. plzzz calm down.. ur health will” (Kavita cuts off )…

“I don’t care … i don’t caree.. ” again shouts Kavita taking steps backward…

Swara tries to calm her down but she became out of control … at that time Swara sees a truck is coming towards Kavita … that horrible day again flashes on her eyes but after some second there was a loud Scream ” Kavitaaaaaaaa”..

Shomi n Sanskar shakingly takes steps n view they witness took their breath away…

There Swara is lying on pool of blood breathing heavily…

Shomi n Sanskar couldn’t move but comes to sence when people r saying to call ambulance…

Swara is about to shut her eyes but d next word she heard from her Maa feels like getting a new life… “Swara, Swara BETA open ur eyes.. see ur Maa is calling u.. !! Swaraaa…!!!” Calls Shomi tapping her cheeks…

Swara slowly opens her eyes ” Maa”!!

“Haaa Swara m here.. !! Seee Swara.. !!Nothing will (Swara cuts off)


“Noo m not angry with u.. listen to me Swara.. plzz don’t close ur eyes.. Ambulance is coming.!! “…

“Then why r u not calling me Shona?? Maa,,, plzz call me once Shona.. i wanna hear it from u.. !.plzz once call me Shona like u called me in childhood…”…

“Haaa Shonaa..!! Shonaa .. i will always call u Shona.. !…”

Swara smiles brightly n avartes her gaze to Sanskar n calls his name weakly ” Sannsskarr”…

Sanskar takes her in his embrace “Swara !! Can u hear me…? Swaraa.. !(watches closing her eyes) open ur eyes Swara.. !! Plzzz Swara. .! ”

“WILL U STILL NOT FORGIVE ME?”…. asks Swara with her trembling voice…

“Noo Swara .. m not angry with u. ! N i can’t b for long.. !! Listen Swara everything will b fine.. !! U don’t close ur eyes.. !okk look at me. !.. look at me Swara.. !! U know na i can’t live without u.. u know naa I ONLY LOVE U.. !! Swara r u listening what m saying.. !! Swaraaaa… !!”..


She looks at Shomi n Sanskar for once with a smile “I need to Leave… Papa is calling me.. !! ” that was d last lines Swara said for d last time n her hand fall from Shomi’s grip … She shut her eyes peacefully n her heart finally stopped beating ….

“Swaraaaaaaaaaaa / Shonaaaaaaaaa”… these two words echoed in d whole place…

~~~The End~~~…


” So what u think about d story Mr n Mrs.Kapoor..!! Will i take ur tears as a positive sign.”…

“”VaHe Is In “”in this project”…

“That’s awesome.. !! Let’s rock this film with SwaSanChuu Tele Films”….

“Suree !! VaHe will rock it.”… shaking hands with EO … !!

“See u soon Mr. n Mrs. Kapoor.. !!”…’

“””””””–THE END–“”””””…

Finally i completed it.. !! Now m ready to eat ur slippers n panipuri… u can throw them….!! Waaaa !! *run

But honestly “M sorry if it was not not good or not upto marks”?

Thnk u sooo much for reading…
God bless u all …. <3 <3….

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  1. Hemanshi Balani

    My bachhaaaaaa…..muahhhhh
    Soooo awesome……and sooo cute but u made us cry once again!!!
    And why always swara had to suffer!!!

    Anyways…it was awesome
    Beyond cute

    Sorry wasn’t able to comment before was a bit busy

    You know your chotu or choti is missing your ff ‘dream’
    He/she is angry on you for ending it

    Anyways….love u lotsssss

    1. Hemanshi Balani

      And one minute….just now saw u didnt comment on my ff…..i am sooo angry on u!!!
      Was reading comments when i thiught ti reply i saw u didnt comment …….

      Baby is feeling soo bad…..feeling like crying
      Baby’s maasi hasnt ccommented on 15th episode…



      Baby isnt talking to kaku maasiiii

    2. Kakali

      Hemaaaa Diiii,,, teddy baccha bear hug .. !! love u dherrr sara !!! u know i missed u sooo much.. !! umahh !!
      awww don’t b Angry Dii.. !! sometimes even i also think why always Swara has to suffer? but d only answer is silence… huhuhu !!!
      But thnk u sooo much Dii for ur cutee sa comment..!! *huggg lightly…

      awwww Golu/Angel is also angry with her massii… nope nopeee i can’t bear this. !! Beta aap logo kr mumma kaam the kya jo aap logo ne bhi unki team join kar li? nooo u both have to b in my side.. .. Kaku maasi’s side… soo don’t b Angry on me… m waiting for u Golu/Angel… come soon …. Love u both..

      waaaaa now holding my ear n saying sorry many times… i was not available in TU last few days.. sooo couldn’t comment… but don’t worry my Bacchus… now i will fly n will read as well as comment also…okiiiii m coming Hemaaa Diii n my Golu/Angel… ?*ready to take off with my private punctured rocket..!! ;-*

  2. Mahjabeen

    Ahhh darls its too optional…u madeemade cry…huhhh….rlly da story wsWS too painful…but yyeah m happy dat it ws a script..loved it….it ws amazing dear….
    Take cr
    Love u??

    1. Kakali

      Mahuuuuu !! *wipe ur pearls !! Thnk u soooo much dear… m glad u loved it… ! waaa Thnk God i made d end that way otherwise nooo i fun wanna imagine myself in that place… !!
      Stay blessed dear… love u loads… TC… ;-*

  3. Mahjabeen

    Ahhh darls its too emotional…u made me cry…huhhh….rlly da story wsWS too painful…but yyeah m happy dat it ws a script..loved it….it ws amazing dear….
    Take cr
    Love u??

  4. Sweeta

    Soo emotional and heart touching dear….it’s script bt t story is really awesome nd wonderful ????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    1. Kakali

      Sweetaaa !!! Thnk u sooo much dear… it feels soo good to hear that it touched ur heart.. TY once again dear for ur golden words.. It means a lot..TC .. always stay blessed.. !! ;-*

  5. it was so damnnnnnnnnnnnn sad
    tears are just not stopping
    di why do u always kill swara
    but i still loved it

    di could u pls give me the link of that swasan video of Maheroo
    plssssssssss do give the link

    1. Kakali

      Mynaaaa !! my lil sis.. don’t cry dear… *wipe ur pearls.. !!
      waaa it’s needed to Swara’s departure… but m glad u cried even though u loved it.. !! Thnk u sooo much dear !!!

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qrfNFXLms0&index=44&list=PLE_uQhHryBf1bWEM6N-5LCZeGvUD37Ztx <– here m giving u a link.. check it out .. m sure u gonna enjoy it thoroughly coz ut contains a lot's of SwaSan video which r damn good.. among of these Maheroo is one of.. but i don't remember which one one is exact.. !! u watch them… n enjoy with popcorn… have a great time with our SwaSan… !!! ;-*

      1. thank u so so soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much di

    2. Kakali

      U r welcome my lil sis…!! Hope u enjoyed… !! ? ;-*

  6. Radhika..

    Hey di nice to see u again with such a beautiful story u know I think one day u will become one of the famous writers .
    About the is what to say again the story is just amazing or may i say its like full of emotions happiness, sorrow, joy, fear, love, sacrifice, craving, sadness…….. What not a full of everything…… No words I have to describe all the things emotions with whom u fill the os.
    A girl whom sister and mom are angry on her for some reason and they didn’t talk to her. She have some fear in her bad dreams surrounded her a unknown which somewhere is reality here to make her afraid but one person is here her and than her to be bhabhi and her brother whom they met after 2 years. She remember her happy times with him. And he also behave rude with but somewhere he know hurting her hurt him. But still he do that because he think she is the soul reason of everything.when. someone hurt her his heart stab. And than the day of her bhai engagement come the same day she is gonna to leave everyone forever but where she is going?? Than when she leave the behaviour of her mom and sister confuse the guy. And he. Ask about that from her bro he say they think her as soul reason of their dad death so they behave like this to them and when u come in her life she is happy but again my mom want ur alliance with my other sis. So she just obey that and u also hate hher. Hearingthis mom and the guy break down and they went to the girl but there scene is sisters fighting with each other and accident is gonna happen of sis but girl pushed and come in front and she lied in pool of blood and ask forgiveness from mom and boy but they only want her to be here.
    Here come the main twist its a story for vàhe new serial and someone is reading the story .
    U maintain the twist in the whole story just waitingvwhen the suspense is gonna end one thing connect to the other. Full of suspense at last the end i feel like really di killed swara and sanskar is alive than their love story is not completed they just cherish their love but than come the next one its a story writting. How u maintain so much of suspence di??
    I am confused that how come u write so good and wih so much of suspence till the end.
    The story is just amazing. Swara all the time suffering and craving for mothery love but she never got but when it is gonna
    Leave all of them leaving the world than everyone want to let be with her. But they cant . as it is the same thing “”ab pachtavat hovat kya jab chidiya chugh gai khet””” same is there . when she leave them than they got their importance.
    And the love swara want from sanskar in the form of sanskar she sacrificed it for her mom saying and than also everyone hate her because of this also but atlast when they got to know the truth they just have one thing with them crying for the deeds they do. Nothing is here in there hands just one thing they can do crying for the loss the loss which they never cared for.
    The story is full emotional di. Just love the way u portray the story and the way u describe every scene every line everything is just out of word to describe………………..
    Thanku for writing such a beautiful story..
    U know after 1 week or more I come here on telly update and fins ur story and read it . thankgod i didn’t missed it. As many story r still landing have to read them aslo gonna go to read them. And have to write also by.
    Meet u again in comments di.
    Love u di
    Hope to see u again di With a new writting.

    1. Kakali

      Radhikaaaaa my Bacchaaaa !!! how r u? i missed u soooo much dear… u know i was waiting for ur comment.. huhuhu kya karuuu addat sii ban gayi hai naa tumhari aur tumhari cutee see comment ki..
      waaa this is not comment , it’s a small summary of my OS.. omgggg i still can’t believe u wrote everything in just some words that too containing everything .. *fanit.. !! yea u r rit , they could only b guilty… nothing else… it was too late to regret…

      waaa…. u r soooo talented my bacchaa…ur words kinda giving me more courage to write… heheeh
      … Thnk u soooo very much for ur precious n golden words… it means a ton… !! be always like this dear… stay happy n keep smiling… !! TC … love u dherr saraa… !! ;-*

      1. Radhika..

        I am ok ok di. How r u di??
        I too miss ur writings.
        And ur words, ur presence , everything related to u but not u. Why because may be u r always with me in my thoughts, or may be when I write any comment than u come up in my mind. But one Hong is sure u r with me.
        Really di u r waiting for mine comment its mine pleasure.
        Awwwww…….. That’s so sweet of u di……
        Really I give u a summary .
        Hmmm as u tell the story and potray it in such a beautiful way that I can write it so easily di. The way I fell I just wrote it down. Ur story touch my heart all together the story is very beautiful .
        Don’t get faint di I just wanna u be fine u have to do many things …….. So by fainting nothing will happen only health will affect and I don’t wanna ur health to be affect na di so don’t faint . take care.
        Hmmm all the people do the same mistake but can’t get it till the mistake get so big that we can’t repent for it anymore and the mistake become to much big. That the repentation also never change it.

        Really di I am talented¿¿?
        Fell pleasured that my words give u write more stories. If its like that than I will write more and more words. So u can write more and more di.
        Ur welcome di.and thanku too for ur sweeto and cuto sa reply.
        Hmm will try to be like this always as I don’t wanna change for anyone or anything.
        U too be like this always di.
        U too keep smiling.
        Take care di.
        Love u too di dheer se bhi jyada wala Sara.
        Love u di.
        Be happy. And thanku for such a beautiful story.????

  7. it was sooooooo emotional..u made me cryyyyyyyyyy..loved it..
    loved d end section..nice twist in d end..tc..

    1. Kakali

      Kumuuuuu Diii,,, Thnk u sooo much… sorry for making u cry but m sooo glad that u loved it… !!*hug.. U2 TC… ;-*

  8. Kaku dear..so good to see u back in TU..
    Hope u r doing well..
    The os is just awesome..first after reading the title, I taught it will be having a sad ending but loved the twist.
    Keep smiling..all the best for u’r exams and
    Take care

    1. Kakali

      Afraaaaa dear !!! happy to see u too dear…*hug..waaaa m soo glad u loved it.. !! Thnk u sooo much my dear.. !! m going well hope u r also doing d same.. !! missed u.. !!!
      TY once again… stay blessed n always keeo smiling… ?. ;-*

  9. Aliya123

    Kakali…..u r so bad….first time I have read your work….Nd…..u made me cry?????????………..wo bhi that toooooo muchhhh………poor swara……when she need everyone……….. Everyone blames him….and also after knowing the truth kavita starts her anger drama…..huuuu…..BT u made me cry……when I was reading swaras past ……I was crying holding my hanky……and then u made him die….when she get what she want…..u kill him……???………swasan story is incomplete……..

    1. Kakali

      Aliyaaaa !!! happy to see u here dear… !! Awww m genuinely sorry for making u cry…*wipe ur tears…
      yupp u r rit, when she needed ev1 there was no one for her … haaa that Kavita is too bad… *Rip…
      again yes there story was incomplete… but u know some story doesn’t have happy ending as Swara’s one.. She was needed to leave ev1 to feel her importance in their life.. waaa Thnk u soooo much dear.. !!! stay blessed n keep smiling… !! ;-*

  10. SwaSanFan.Goldie

    Hawwe…kya tha yeh? ? ???…Swara Dead…Aahhh Sooo Emotional OS Srsly..Loved it bt it made Me Cry too..especially da Last Scn ????..Hw cn U Kill Her Yaar ???…Amzing Part…I hate sad engomgs..they make me Cry like anything ????. .Nw Plzz write something Happy Ending wala OS.Plzz..basly need it after this OS ???

    1. Kakali

      Angellll !!! see i also can write emotional OS like u… huhh only u can give sad ending ? nohooo m also graduate in this post.. !! huhuhu.. !!
      ouii u hate sad endings but m fond of it .. !!
      yupoo dear next one will b only happy ending walaa.. pukka.. !!
      Thnk u sooo much dear.. !! stay blessed.. ;-*

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Hahahaha…U reallyade me Cry really..n haa sure uodate nxt happy wala os asap wid some Romance in it Hehehe ??. .waiting eagerly

    2. Kakali

      Sureee dear.. !!! whenever i will get time will write only happy wala OS… but about romance.. omgggg in this matter i m totally blank… kya bataw i can’t even write a kiss scene properly… as my hands starts to shake … even u tried to wrote some intense part during d bathroom scene n i wrote also but it ended up in a very funny way… sooo deleted that part. !! ;-*

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Hahaha..u cn try atleast…thoda toh u cn write na…bt still if u r nt comfortable den its ok…write as u wish..jst want a happy wala cute sa swasan OS frm U ??

    3. Kakali

      Sure Angel as u wish,, woo kehte hai naaa,,, ” Aapka hukum sar aankohon par”…

      i will try to write romance scenes n m very sure my romance part will set a new Trent where people would love to kick or throw me out of d universe…?!! it’s kinda? “Vhagwan mere aatma ko shanti de”…. ?

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Hahahahaha…Waiting fr ur Out of the World Romance ??

    4. Kakali

      Angell don’t tease me… u r waiting for my out of d world romance or waiting for people to kick n send me to out of d universe… irade kuck thik nehi lag rahe…
      but honestly dear i will b surely come back with an cute sa happy enfing wala thoda romamtic OS in April for sure as today is my last day here … will meet u soon Angel… !!
      rock with ur fantabulous works.. SwaSan fandom r blessed to have u… show ur gratitude towards our SwaSan till infinity… !!*hug..
      God bless u…
      once again TY… 🙂

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Waitimg..Continue soon..bt y r u leaving? Anything serious? ?

    5. Kakali

      Nopeeeooo dear nothing serious… actually my 12th board exams r going to start in few weeks…. soooo !!

      waaa i forgot to wish u “Marry Christmas n Happy New Year in advance Angel… “.. ;-* ?

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Ohh i cc..All The Best fr Ur Exams den..Study Well..so will U be bak after Exams? M Ya Same to U Fear ☺

  11. Tvisha

    Awesome but it was so emotional…. you made me cry???? You nailed

    1. Kakali

      Tvishaaaa .. !! Thnk u sooo much dear.. !! *wipe ur pearls…
      Stay blessed.. !! ;-*

  12. awesome excellent i have no words to express my feeling .u made me cry.

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Sneha.. !! *wipe ur pearls… stay blessed dear.. ! !! ;-*

  13. Samaira

    Haye itni sari picacchu. I was happy to see piccaccu but now really kaki di m angry with u again means again saperete them huh i hate u. I m not going to talk with u. I guess u dont remember me also ….

    1. Kakali

      Samairaaaa !!! i do remember u my sis.. !! how r u? happy to see u after a long time.. !! *hug.. !!
      haaa this ti.e i seriously separate them but as u know it was just a script.. sooo no worry.. our SwaSan r still together.. !! Talk with me..
      Thnk u soooo much dear.. !! stay blessed.. !! ;-*

  14. Samaira

    Ab kuch kar kar ni vali thi na.

  15. Mica

    HEI YOU blo*dy MURDERER!!!!! i hate you.. huh!
    you know what, because you always make swara suffer, i’ll break up from TU for 1 year..
    so, enjoy your life without me huh!
    i’ll stop visiting TU on 31st December 2016 and i’ll be back on 1st January 2017….
    eat your punishment…..

    1. Kakali

      Micaaaaaaa !! u blo*dy hater…! i love u for d cute name.!TY!
      omggg 1 year punishment.. God it’s more bigger than mine one i guess..!but it’s yummyyyy…!

      i have a tasty news for u,, u know my Final Exam’s schedule has been out n it’s from 20th February..sooo from today u eat my punishment… roam without me n slippers here from now on.. !! puut puuuut !!!
      Thnk u Micaaaa *hug..
      stay blessed..! ;-*

      1. Chanu

        soooo their r lot more who ll leave tu…
        ill also joining 2 ur club.
        im leaving tu till August!!
        Iill cm back rite after my exams…
        till then miss u guys…
        lv u all sooo much…

  16. Chanu

    dnt tell me dis is also sad ending!!!
    till nw cdnt read it..
    poor me….

    1. Kakali

      Chanuuuuuu… nope no one will leave TU… not even u okk.. don’t u dare to think… ! Love u sooo much… !all d best for ur exams dear… ! ;-*

      1. Chanu

        My kaku bcm lady don!!?? 😮
        Poor me!!
        Im nt leaving tu..
        jst a lil break!! 😉
        Till August!!

  17. Chanu

    *with blood shot eyes.
    Wt u did??!! U again kill my swara…urrrgg…
    nt nly once u killed her in dis os lots f tym… huhuhuhhu…
    u heartless kaku!!! Y do u hv any prsnl dushmani with my swara??
    Always make her suffer!!
    My poor swara!! She ddi live her life after 9.. huhuhu..
    and y my sanku y??!! Y u leave her!?? Dnt u knw hw much she lvs u.. dis kuku naaa urrggg..
    always make my sanky bad by hurting his lv swara..
    *ill beat u to black &baby pink!! 😉

    Huuhhuhu.. its rly sad one.. bt at least in heaven she cn gt her lv 4m her papa..
    huhu I hate u shomi.. and kavitha.. ill kill u.. hw cn u say dat sanku is urs.. urrgg…

    Dis is da first one I read in new year. Y u make sad ending. Huhuh..
    bt like u said no one cn separate my swasan.. even their death.

    U knw wt piya o re piya is my fav too.. *same pinch
    and like u said nly bz f swasan I add lots f songs 2 my fav list.. yup.. dats da effect f swasan in me.. im madly in lv with them.. & I also cn say swasan till my last breath!!!!
    *swasan swasan swasan swasan swasan…………….

    Hayee lets nt talk abt my sankus and his looks..
    ill may slip in 2 coma..

    rly lvly os dr.. Its rly heart touching one.. u nailed it..
    lv it 2 da core..
    oh I 4gt.. I lv laksh soo much in dis.. he is soo lvly bro.. bt he sld hv say those b4…

    Keep writing

    be happy always
    lv you soo much..
    Happy new year dr

    1. Kakali

      Chanuu.. i dun have words to reply u dear.. i myself sun know how can i write so sad stories…! but i love it somehow… coz it exists more than happy one..sooo… still m writing an OS which has only a sad ending.. i won’t update it… people will kill me.. huhh… !! let it b…
      Thnk u sooooo very much dear…it’s so peaceful to hear that it touched ur heart…
      yhh Laksh should have said all those before but he himself got to know a day before na.. soo n it was seriously to late… SWARA HAD TO LEAVE… huhuhuhu
      .. once again TY dear…*hug… loads of love… TC … keep smiling always… God bless u my cute sis..ADORE OYA…
      A very Happy New Year to u tooo…” ;-*

      1. Chanu

        Heyyy kaku..
        ill surly kill u nw!!!!
        I lv 2 read ur stories!!! I dnt care its abt sad ending!!
        Jst upload it.. huhuhuh
        im jst saying dat I dnt like sad ending. Bt all my fav films hs sad ending!!
        SOo no worries!!
        uplod it my kaku..
        im soo sry dr.. I think ur notification bar is full f my cmnts..
        cholly with puppy dog eyes!!!
        Bt 2dy nly I ll be dis much active in tu till August!!!

    2. Kakali

      Yupoooo m a lady don… sooo fear of me..okkk… !! yeah ….. u will take a break…but… !
      heheheh ….. I wrote an OS but it almost 3rd of d story got deleted..sooo… i may will not b able to update… !
      Why u saying sorry Chanu? u know u r talking to me as a stranger n i dun like it… ! okk okk i can understand u r taking break na soo trying to forget me also.huh.. !! i love to read ur comments.. understood… !! don’t make me cry now..!

      1. Chanu

        ill nt say sry..!!
        R u happy nw my cute kaku..
        *pull ur cheecks..

        trying 2 4gt u!!??
        😮 😮
        r u seriously!!??
        Even when I lost my memory na then also ill nt be able 2 4gt u..
        hw cn I 4gt my siso!!?? Tell me??
        u dnt knw me then..

    3. Kakali

      urgh…. yes u can’t forget me even after memory loss.. okkk.. mind it… !! i know u Chanuuuuuuuuuuuu…*hug…
      don’t cry…*wipe ur pearls…. u know na ADORE OYA

      1. Chanu

        Yup I knw dat u lv me…
        sooo its ok… 😉
        Awwww.. u knw me na..
        ummmaaah… lv you… *biggggggggg hug…
        ill be offline 4m 2dy..
        bt dnt knw ill visit here b4 August. 😉
        Cz u knw na dis tu is dragging me 2 here nly..

    4. Kakali

      Chanuuuuuuuuu… m missing u sooo much mu sis..*teddy hugggg… love u dher sara….plz don’t b offline… atleast peep here sometime…. !! *again a hug… always stay blessed dear… come soon than we will enjoy together…okiiii….stay happy…

      1. Chanu

        Awwwwww my kaku drrr….my cute picchu…
        ill peep here and whenever I cm ill send u msgs dr…
        *hug hug hug hug àgain hug..
        Yup.. ll enjoy alot when I cm back.

        Stay blessed
        or haaaa
        Eat well. Dnt dare 2 skip ur meals or else ill never share my choco with u.. gt dat..
        take medicines on tym.. use ur spect. Umm take proper rest too…
        its ur sisos order!!

        Be happy always
        lv you alot…
        byE byeeeby

    5. Kakali

      Chanuuuuuuu…Thnk u dear for granting my request… *hyg… just a hi hello is enough for us dear…huh my breath almost stopped due to continuous hug… hehehe..
      yupppp my sis… as u wish as u order.. i will eat properly,yup meds at time even will use spects… okiii now…
      u too b always my sis… may God bkess u to get all ur dreams.. all ur dreams come true … i will b waiting for u…take care..n miss u soooo much… no bye byeee here.. we will meet again na… sooo don’t say all this.. okiiiii*huggggg ummah … stay blessed…;-*

  18. Shifa96

    Hey dear kaku..I have changed my user name from afra..
    Wishing u a very happy and a prosperous new year..have a great year ahead.☺☺
    Sry I am late as I was not online in tu.
    I had messaged u but still I commented here.
    Keep smiling? and stay blessed.

    1. Kakali

      Hiloooooo Afra… !! waaa Shifa is a very beautiful name dear…
      Thnk u soooo much my frnd .. even i also wish u d same “A very happy new n prosperous new year, may ur all dreams come true”…*hug
      nope dear.. u can never b late.. u rememberd me n wished me is really enough for me… haa dear i just saw ur msg .but u know my inbox is not working n i can’t even reply u.. for for that… ? again thnk u for ur wishes Afra… always stay blessed n happy…loads of love n hugs for u ;-*

  19. Shifa96

    My actual name is shifa not afra..that’s my sister’s name.
    All the best for your exams..
    Love u too?..
    Take care.

    1. Kakali

      Okiii Shifa… Thnk u for ur wishes dear n take care to u tooo… sray blessed… ;-*

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