SWASAN OS – MY PROMISE

hllww,,guys.. again I’m back.. with my next swasan Os..
so swasan is the main… so lets look….
friends who said loves always need to success..?? today My os is totally different plzz don’t beat me.. after reading.. good bad what every your comments plzz put… in comment box… ITS ALREADY UPLOADED IN FB. AND ITS MY FF… .

friend press(b) = boy, press (l)= lady

#My_promise

A girl.. in press conference she is successful dancer. & also a good guitarist…. guitar (there is named of her everything her boyfriend her soulmate…) her…….

press (b) : mam… today you become a successful dancer.. so what’s your next paln??
girl:(smile) nothing… ghar Jake practice… (all laugh)

press (l) : mam.. there is every woman behind a successful man.. soo who’s ur man.. behind yours success?? I mean boyfriend or fiancΓ©e??
giRL: yes.. I have also..(points to the guitar) look.. sanskar… hai uska man…

press (b) : mam.. whoud u like to shear your love story with us…???
press(all): plzz… mam… plzz.. swara mam.. plzz….

girl:(think.. for a while) aacha.. okk app mese koi mere sath mere ghar chalo.. I will give u personnel interview.. but seriously I have to leave now.. coz.. my dadima (not parvati ) waiting for me..

she leave….

yes friends the girl is swara…… who become a dancer now.. & the guitar ?? guitar hai to San kaha hai right???
San bhe hai…. have look..

swara reach to her home.. (actually its San’s home.)
as she reach made give her coffee…. she goes to the dance room.. & start practice… soon, a man, come & hug her form back…. a bright smile appire on her face… she blush

Sw: aggeye tum..???
man:haa.. kaisi dur rheta appni shona se…
Sw:sanskar.. kaise hoo tum????
San:accha hun,, mast.. mujhe kya hua???
Sw:(turn & look at him.. teary eyes.. touch her cheeks.)I love u San… I love u….
San:(hug her) I love you too three four…….
Sw:(laugh…& whipes her tears)

made:(enter) madam.. wo press wali madam ayyi hai…
Sw;okk.. tum jao.. unko bithao.. may atti hun…
San: jao.. swara.. ajj boll do humari kahani in duniawalo ko…
Sw:(kiss his cheeks & leave)

@Hall….

as swara come that girl stand & wish her…
girl: good evening mam…
Sw:hmm.. plzz be sitted… (they both sit)
girl:(excited) mam.. plzz tell us about your boyfriend..
Sw:uummm.. no.. husband…
girl:(shock) mam.. are u married.. ??? I mean??
Sw:hmm.. we did marriage in mandir…(see all of their pics which are frem in hall…)
girl: plzz tell mam.. if you don’t mind.. to shear??
Sw:(smile) ohh sure….

Sw:(flashback) humdono pehli bar.. mere dance class ke bahar mille the… uski bike ne merit scooty tod di thi to…

Sw:ohh hlw.. lad shab..gari dekh ke nahi chala skate??
San:(atti) excuse me.. gallti pakki hai…
Sw:nonsense.. parking lot me.. band khol n.. haI.. pattta nahi kaha kaha se atte hai… nababzade….
San:ohh hlw.. mis… stay in your limit…
Sw:(leave angrily)
after that they meet twice…. but not talk….

girl: (happy excited) fir kya hua??

Sw:(laugh) fir????? hum dubara melle… ek cultural show me… orr waha hum dono.. ek dushre ke dance or singing ke fan banne… (she laugh) orr bosti hui…

after program.. swara was returned in home.. but in way her scooty stopped… she was waiting for bus or auto. San reach there.. & give her lift..

San:(stop bike infront of Sw) need help..??
Sw:(happy) haa. wo..
San:come..??
Sw:jii???
San:come I’ll drop u home…
Sw:no its okk… I can maneg..
San:plzz.?? look m a big fan of your dancing.. & can’t leave the opportunity to drop u home…
Sw:(laugh) accha okk.. (she mount to his bike)

san :(start the bike) madam.. Zara pakad ke baithiye…
Sw:swara.. orr I can manneg… Mr.
San: if u swara.. then I’m sanskar.. not Mr.. (both laugh)

San drop her @ home.. when shona said…
Sw: Mr. sanskar.. thanks for the lift..
San:your welcomed swara.. I must say.. u dance from your heart..
Sw:(smile)& u sing.. form heart….
San:swara.. ek baat kahu???
Sw:(about to leave.. but stop) haa.. bollo??
San:(look den) I love.. us din Jo jhagra hua.. tabse uske badse jab bhe mill a hun.. I’m not jokeing….
Sw:(look down)
San:(start his bike.. & leave)

girl:(admiring their pic.. & imagining..) aaawww.. so sweet of u… fir kya hua???

till then. made pass coffee.. for both…

Sw:(sipping coffee) uske ek week bad humari batt hui.. jab uska accident hua… that.. wo bhe mare sister ke hatto.. orr.. humbhe mille.. or fir.. humara jhagra hua..

@Hospital..
ragini & sanskar is in doc cabin… Sw reach.. swasan meet.. again.. San hand have fracture… Sw get angry to see him.. swara send her sis… in this tym SSN also.. try to leave . at gate she stop him…

sw: hlw.. Mr. sanskar.. ruko.. kaha jaa rahe ho..??
San:(no ans)..
Sw:(breathing heavily.. as she running..) sanskar app ajeeb hoo
San:(confused) actually.. usdin.. ke lia.. I’m..m..so….
Sw:(hold his mouth) can I speak..?? (sad expression)
San:(nods in yes)
Sw:(hug him) I’m sorry may usdin reply nahi karr payi..
San:(shock.. surprised happy) really???
Sw:(broke hug.. & shy smile) hmm… kya app mujhe guitar sikhoge???
San:(pull her close..) Bedle me???
Sw: (she smile)

swara & girl both laugh…… girl look tthos pics…..

Sw: uske bad… hum millte lage.. humara rishta ghehra hota gaya…. (have a confident smile..)

girl: uske bad..(she is interested.. to hear)

Sw:uske bad…1sal bad.. humari shadi hui… orr.. sach kahu, to zindegi ittni khoubsurat bhe hoti hai yh mujhe tab patta challa…. orr aisehi hum dono humri zindegi me khush reh te gaye…. pad… (silent…. become seriously)

girl: pad?????
Sw:(sad..) pad.. piccchle do sall sse issi competition ke tym I quiet for my accident… so its his last wish which I have to completed….. (start weeping…)

that girl hell shockd….

at that tym ragini & laksh enters with a cute one yer baby girl..
swara run to that girl.. kiss allover her face… (Sw was crying…) ragini hug her…..(swara..) laksh was also sad…
after pampering that baby… she run inside the room…

girl : mam.. mam.. soryy.. mam…
rag: no its okk… I’ll completed behalf of her… if u OK???

girl:(sad..) okk mam… pad mam.. kya sach me sir.?? I mean Kaise ????

rag: wo unki, first meet anniversary thi… to.. they both go for a ride.. & meat a very critical accident.. San was okk.. but swara had a big accident.. her heart gott damaged…… & that tym we also gott to knew ke.. after this strong accident.. sw’s baby is alive… (rag crying)

girl:(tears come down) mam…….
rag: tab….

@Hospital
swasan in sw’s cabin… swara had a idea.. to why San have to..

Sw:sanskar.. pllzz… don’t do this.. search n. for another.. heart doner….. (weeping badly)
San:(sad) look swara.. god save our child… & ragini laksh searching… for doner.. if they found okk.. but I don’t wanna. lose u…
Sw: plzz San.. with out u.. my life is hell.. plzz San… plzzz..
San:(touch her bally) shona.. look.. our baby… our love.. is day by day.. in u… shona.. or agar may na bhe rahu too kya..?? tum rahogi.. may rahun ga tumhare sath…. I promise… always…. mera dill to tumhara hi hai n….
Sw:(can’t speak anything)
San:(kiss her forehead) & shona.. promise me.. u win the dance competition… for me… promise shona.. U live your life…. promise…???
Sw:(wakeup & hug him tightly…….. & crying…) sanskar……
San:(become weak..) shona… (he leave the room)
Sw:mujhe chod ke matt Jjao… sanskar. I love u..
San:(stop & turn) I love you too….. (swara loose her senses……..)

after the operation… swara open her eyes.. take a long breath…… yes… San leave the world.. but his heart is beating…

dup dup dup dup dup dup dup…. (loudly) & say.. shona… don’t be weak…. u have to u have to… have to.. I’m always be with u…

alll was silent………..

baby: maa…,… mama… kaha hai????
rag; betta mama, room hai.. jao…
baby:okk. maa..

(she call raglak maa,baba)

girl: jii kya yh swara mam???
rag: jii… haa..yh bacchi swara or sanskar ki hai…..

that girl was about leave….. swara come to her…

Sw:sunniye… (hug her give her 1000 rupi & envelope.) & say bye….

Next day morning…. the girl open the news paper & gott a news which make her heart broke…

“”SUCCESSFUL DANCER SWARA MAHESWARI WAS PASSED LAST NIGHT..””

she immediately open the envelope..

“”SUNNIYE.. YH BAAT KISSI KO NAHI PATTA MERA SANSAKR.. ATTA HAI. MUJHSE MILLNE.. ROZZ HAR PALL WO MERE SATH HI HAI……… “””

She call rag. & gott to knew that

rag: swara.. kal uski Betti ke sath khelte khelte siddise girr gayi…
(FLASHBACK)

Sw: betta, rukko.. betta.. nahi betta girr jao ge… (raglak was admiring them..)

Lak: swara….
rag:swara… (shock)
baby: mama..(crying in shock) mamma…

rag:(come & hug her)
Lak:(come & plaCE sw’s head on her lap..) swara..
rag:laksh took her hospital…
Sw:(stop them) no.. guys I need to gooo.. he is waiting.. for me… I need to goooo… today he have no complained against me… sanskar. I fulfill your all dreams….
rag: nahi.. swara don’t say.. like this.. tum he kuch nahi hoga…
Sw:(try to touch her baby’s head..&) mama,papa both loves u… be a good gir…l….,………………..

rag:swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
baby: maa,, mama ko kya hua… mamma, aankhe kholo n… mammma… baba.. mamma ko kya hua?????
Lak:(hug rag & baby)

after 20 years…..
swasan daughter become a good singer… (by San) & also a good dancer…. (by shona) raglak told alll the truth.. to her……. she goes to swasan pic.. & hug that pic…..
baby: mamma,papa.. I also completed all your dreams…

****THE END*****

Nothing to say… u told is it touch your heart?????

25 comments

  1. Simin

    Dear i dont have words to describe how much i loved it i know sad ending but their souls will definetly meet in some other world

  2. Divya

    Death toh kabhi na kabhi aana hi hai, but living your dreams is true life.. This story… Adhura hote hue bhi pura hai. Very nice story. Like it. Heart touching one!

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