swasan os….her pious love!

Hey guyss this is my first os….i had read a short story on fb and presenting to you people as swasan os….you all may find it similar with ambika’s ff one month agreement.
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“Enough is enough swara!! Why cant you get it this??”
“But sanskaar how can you leave me for that girl Ritika….cant you understand my love….please dont leave me for Samar sake…”
“Dont try to take my son name in between of these fights.. He will understand with time and this tym I’m not going to fall from my decision by Samar name”
“please sanskaar 10 years of marriage isn’t a joke. You have a child..why are you leaving me……please don’t leave!”,swara Said while crying miserably.
Swara and Sanskaar were childhood sweetheart….love marriage…..both had a beautiful life with their son named Samar.
But everything does not exist forever for instance sankaar love for swara.
One year back he found himself falling for ritika and indeed wanted to tie a knot with her but he needed to divorce swara.
Past few months they both had heated argument turning their relationship from bad to worse to worst… But who know the upcoming month for sankaar was going to worsen his life.
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Swara pov-
The day my sankaar told me he wanted to divorce me I was shattered..how could he?
How can he love someone else?
How can he leave Samar and me? I had to save my sanskaar from that b***c clutches..i had too…but things weren’t going fair as they had to…ritika was far ahead from me…infact they had made love last month but still he is mine only mine I loved him and will always….but today argument made me realised things aren’t easy…he wants to leave me. I cant force him to be with me.
After the argument I ran into the washroom having a hot bath and understanding the situation precisely…..
Yes, I had came to an decision one month. Yes for my son I had to do this m. I had to do this for my Samar.
I went out. As usual he was drinking alcohol… I came made a glass for him and said”, Sanskaar I’m ready to divorce you.
I could see his gleaming face.. Bullshit…but I continued saying but after a month. In this one month we have to behave like a typical husband and wife. I want to make few memories before leaving..pleade will you all night in this one month will carry me in bridal style in our bedroom and we three will enjoy and have our dinner all together!.
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(guys I wont be giving swara pov now only sanskaar pov)
SANSKAAR pov
When she said she will divorce me…i was amused finally she got some brains. But one month what the f**k! Fine only one month I will agree with all her shitty conditions…then divorce and my life with Ritika!
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THE TURMOILS BEGAN!!
SANSKAAR POV!
The agreement started first day at afternoon she went somewhere I didn’t even bother to ask her n why should I?
That night me, Samar ,Swara had dinner together…that was the peaceful night till yet..now it was a task to take swara in her arms! Yaa I was uncomfortable but those conditions oh yeah! I picked her in my arms…last tym when I carried her she was quite heavy but today she had lost some
Weight.
Samar was quite amused with it..he was perplexed..elated. He was not unaware of the fights which took place in our house and he should be shocked with it…and he is!
I carried her gently place her in bed…she was smiling from ear to ear….her natural smile!
Days started going….i was enjoying with my family yes my family.
We started to have fun visit places…watch movies.play cards….me and Samar late night cute fights. What does a man really wants a dotted wife a charming son
But I’m a naive person my Mind reminded me of the promise I kept with Ritika to take seven vows. Yes I’m stupid.
First I was uncomfortable for carrying swara but after five days I wanted to do this.she was being lighter day by day…i could notice her fading..but never had gathered courage to ask her the reasons.
22 days passed yes i started falling for swarA.. I loved her yes I do.how can I cheat her. I should be dammed for it. I decided that next day I will tell the truth to ritika. And will propose swara that she will never forget. I buyed a dress for her and kept a note from our evening date. I love swara and will love her till eternity
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Next Day
I went to ritika’s house
Me: Hey.
She: Hey, early morning..wow this bouquet and chocolates what for.. Umm let me guess ohhoo a perfect date.
Me’ritika listen
She: Aree yrr quite shhhh…i am getting ready now nothing more.
Me: Ritika,sorry I cannot marry you.. I love swara damm it…ya this is truth. I’m sorry.
Before I could say anything I felt a tight hand on my face.. Yes I deserved that..her angry face.
She: You bastard! Go to hell! Get loss……..
She was abusing me calling me off….i didn’t even listened to her…i ran from there to swara..to my swara.
As i reached him i could see everyone sobbing..why?? What happened…i could see Samar crying mercilessly. And then i figured out the dead body… No it’s not truth she’s swara.. I was blank….how can she leave me..i cried while shouting SWARA..I LOVE YOU..PLEASE FORGIVE ME…PLEASE…
We performed rituals….that scene crying voices still follow is still echoing in my ears…swara was my silhouette who would never leave me.
Two days after my death i found a letter from swara..in which she gave her medical report’s…what she was suffering from cancer. How couldn’t i know….while my inner self was cursing me…she made this agreement for Samar that he may not think that his parents were going to divorce.that he should love his father
I could never get a pious sole like her… I pecked on her photo and promised to my loquacious swara to love her always and to take care of my child Samar…SAMAR THE SYMBOL OF OUR LOVE!! I LOVE SWARA!!
the star above me twinkle ..i smiled by looking at it…it reminds me of swara..this twinkle signified she had forgiven me and is happy for me and Samar.
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Hey guys this was my first attempt hope you like it!.

Credit to: aashi

36 comments

  1. Neha

    MY GOD!!! AN AWESOME OS YAAR WHILE I WAS READING IT IT PRICKED IN MY HEART
    KEEP WRITING MORE PLEASE

  2. Bisha

    Yes Ashi. I read this in fb too. And its so emotional. I seriously loved your attempt to adapt the story and rewrite it. Keep it up dear. U made my heart cry.

  3. Dev

    I wudnt say that it was ur 1st attempt….coxz it was as good to read as other os n lovd it congratz n keep on writing more.. .

  4. Jyotii

    I am crying right now. Tears have formed within my eyes. Swara’s death shocked me! I just love it. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. It is amazing…..but i really dont like anyone’s death stuff….it is unbearable…especially of swasan..bt still it is so nice….keep writing and come up with next one…sorry if hurt you..

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