Swasan os I LOVE YOU BUT I CAN’T BE YOURS by sanjana

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Hey guys sanjana here ….. guys I am first time writing an os so plz forgive me for any mistakes …. and about ff I will post it on thursday or friday … so lets start …. guys only swasan are the main characters …. if needed I will add more ….
Lets start
A collage is shown
Class
A girl was shown studying and some a group of girls are surrounding her .
Rhidhima – u know what swara {yes the girl who was studying is none other than our swara }…. today our new proffesor is going to come and u know what he is so handsome
Ragini- yes u r right ….
Swara – so what ??????

Vidhushi – what do u mean by SO WHAT ….. don’t u have any interest in boys ……
Rhidhima – no …. she only likes to study …. am I right miss bhenji ????
Sqara got teary eyes.
They gives hifi .. just then a angry voice comes from behind .
Voice – how dare u to say like this …..
Everyone turns back .
Rhidhima – sir aap …..
Ragini – who is he ?????
Rhidhi whispers – buddhu …. he is our new proffesor MR . SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI …..
Sanky can’t see swara ‘s face as her face was hid behind the girls . He comes to girls .
Sanky – how dare u to call anyone bhenji ……
Ragini – sry sir …..
Sanky – last warning now move ….

Girls leave …..
Sanky sees the face of swara . He was memerized to see her face . She was wearing a pink salwar suit with a side pony tail and some flakes of hair were coming out on her eye . and having tear in her eyes .
Sanky in mind – she is too cute …..
Sanky smiles .
Sanky – hello miss …….
Swara got afraid and stands immediately .
Swara – ye….s…. s…I..r
Sanky – why r u afraid ???
Swara – nothing sir ……
Sanky – ok no need to afraid …. if they again call u bhehenji then tell me ok ….
Swara nods yes . Sanky smiles n leaves.
Swara sits and start studying again .

Days passes on like this …… sanky and swara became good frnds . All girls are jealous seeing their closeness . Slowly slowly sanky started falling for swara . And one day he decided to propose her .
Canteen
Swara was sitting in canteen and solving some problem . Sanky comes to her .
Sanky{pointing to a chair in front of swara } – may I sit here?????
Swara – yes sir …. why not …..
Sanky sits on chair .
Sanky – swara I want to talk to u something important . Plz meet me in xyz place at evening .
Swara – but what????
Sanky – I said meet me matlab meet me ……
Swa- ok .

At evening
Swara reaches there . She was wearing a blue lagy and pink kurta and cute pony tail .
The place was dark . As soon as she enters There the light gets on and flowers start falling on her . She became happy . She comes in and her eyes were searching for sanskaar . Just then sanskaar comes wearing a white coat with a pant {same he wore on the day when he proposed swara in real swaragini . } Sanskaar bends on his knees . Swara was comfused by his act .
Sanskaar – today I am here to tell u about my love .
Swara was shocked .
He continues – u know what when I first time saw u I was mermerized . Slowly slowly I became ur frnd and started falling for u . And now I can’t imagine my life without u . Now my day start with u and ends on u . Will u be mine forever ????
Swara was hell shocked .
Swara {shouts } – how dare u to propose me ????? How can u think tgat I can love u …. u always supported me but that doesn’t mean I love u …. I HATE U MR . SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI ….. u believe me or not
….
Sanskaar was shocked . His woeld became upside down . Swara runs from there having tears in her eyes .

Next day .
Sanky comes in class n can’t find swara. Days passea on like this and swara doesn’t come to clg . One day sanky thought to enquir about her . He goes to her best frnd anniya .
Sanky – anniya …
Anniya – yes sir….
Sanky – can u tell me why swara is not coming to college ???
Anniya – I also don’t know sir ….
Sanky – can u give me her addresss
Anniya – ok sir …
Anniya tells him the address .

Sanky immediately goes to swara ‘s house .
A maid opens the door .
Sanky – where is swara ???
Maid – sir who r u ….
Sanky – I am sanskaar maheshwari swara ‘s proffesor ….. now plz tell me
Maid – sir she is in hospital ….
Sanky – what happened to her ????
Maid – I also don’t know sir …. but she became unconcious and her mum took her hospital …..
Sanky – can u tell me which hoapital ???
Maid – City Hospital …..
Sanky leaves .

Hospital
he enquires rexeptionist about swara and she told him the roomno.
Sanky goes to the room and she sees swara lying unconcious on bed with a oxgen mask attached on her nose n a pipe attached to her wrist through a glass on the door . He becomes sad . He turns amd sees a lady talking to a doctor . He recognizes her as swara’s mum as swara had shown photo of her mum . He goes and hid behind a wall amd listen’s her n doctor’s talk .
Mishti{swara’s mom} – doctor ….. plz save my shona….
Doc- I don’t wetger we will able to save her not …. but as u know she has a hole in her heart we need someone’s heart

Mishti – take my heart ..
Doc – sry I can’t take ur heart …. u r an old lady ….. and more ever who will take care of her after u …. she is no one none other than u ….
Mishti cries while sanky is shocked . He understood that why swa said no to his proposal . {I hope guys u all also understood .}

At evening
Mishti comes to swara’s room who now gained consciousness .
Mishti – someone had came to meet u shona ??????
Swara {in a vert very low voice }- who.???
Sarmishta calls the person . The person comes . Swara was shocked to see the person . He is none other than sanky .
Swara {trying to shout}- u here jao yahan se …
Mishti – calm diwn shona .. and listen to him once ….
Sanskaar comes and hold her shoulder tightly and asks mishti to leave . Miahti leaves . Sanky had already told mishti about his proposal .

Sanky – U R SOOO BAD …. U BROKE MY HEART …. GIVEN ME PAIN…. I HATE U MISS SWARA GADODIYA …. HOW DARE U TO GIVE ME PAIN.?????? HIW DARE U ….. I HATE U ….
Swara was not able to listen HATE word from his mouth for her . She put her lips on sanky.’s lips and start kissing him . It was passionate lip lock.. soon they parted due to lack of oxygen .
Swara – never say HATE word to me ??? BCOZ I LOVE U ….. when I 1st saw I was also mermerized to see u …. slowly slowly I become to fall for u … but u know since 6 months I kniw that I have a hole in my heart … so how can I say yes when u proposed ……
Sanky -calm down angel … don’t worry I just said this so that u can say I LOVE U ….to me .
Swara hugs sanky . The breaks hug . Doc comes .
Doc – miss gadodiya …u r in a very critical stage and tomorrow is ur opreation and we had not got any heart till now …. if this will be the situation then sry …. we will not able to help u ….
Swara got teary eyes .

Next morning
Doc – congo miss gadodiya we had got heart for u …
Swara {happily}- but of whom ????
Dpc – u will get to know after the opretion …
Swara was very happy that she is going to spend her whole life with his sanky .
Swara was soon opreted .

After opretion
Swara {trying tonspeak}- plz doctor tell me who is the person .
Doc gives him a gift . Swara opens the gift and found a photo of her and sanky and also she found a letter.

In Letter – my angel … happy birthday … I know today is not ur birthday but today u got a new life …. I know u got happy that u are going to get a new life with me ….. and see u got a new life but difference is that it is WITHOUT me {a tear skipped from swara’s eyes } … n know u are excited to know wgo had given u the heart its me … I had given u that heart on that day only when I saw u 1st time …. this is just I have given u my heart officially and now plz take care of heart …. it only beats for u and will always beat for u .. and plz now don’t cry like a crocodile … bcoz my heart can’t see u in pain …. my angel … and keep this photo with u …. this our memory SWASAN’S memory ….. and plz don’t try to come to me {suicide} … main nahi chahta tum mera peecha karte karte swarg tak aa jao….
I LOVE U BUT I CAN’T BE YOURS ….
UR AND ALWAYS BE URS
SANKY ….

Swara cries aloud . Mishti knows everything and was seeing this standing at the door . She was crying like anything . She was not able to control herself . Here swara decided to live her life again . As sanky is always with her in her heart and her memories .

Guys how was it …. I was crying while writing the letter wala part … I know this concept is little common but plz do read and comment ….. guys sry for sad ending and I will come back with another os with a happy ending …

Lots of love ..
Ur sanju …..

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67 Comments
  1. It awesome dear.it’s true love story

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx …. and yes its true love ….

  2. Anniya

    Sanju now I will ask u ,y u separated my swasan.
    Its really awsm os, after reading it I am crying….

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Sry anniya but the concept of story ia that only and I seprated swasan only one time and u seprate them in every os ??
      Thnx ??

  3. awesome….. no words…

  4. Bhavana

    superb sanju

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx bhavana….

  5. G.Chandu

    awesome…dude !!! I read this concept many times… but still it’s looks like fresh and a new style..!!

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and I will try to come up with new concept

  6. Aww I too cried a lot….. ????it’s so beautiful dear…. Loved it?????????????

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx vidhi darlo …. love u dear….

  7. Great work….keep going dear….n can u plz tell me ur ff name..bcz if I am not a reader of it…then i will make sure I could read it as I really love n appreciate your writing…GOD BLESS YOU….!!

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and I write 2 ff ….
      1 . SWARAGINI LOVE ME HATE ME BUT DON’T LEAVE ME – it was my 1st ff and I has finiahed it its is probably having 35 parts ….

      1. Sanjanaagrawal

        2. Swasan a story of betrayal – I am still writing this ff and till now I have completed 34 to 35 parts and I will continue it tomorrow ……
        Do read these two and let me know through ur precious comments

      2. I would surely do…but how could I read 34-35 episodes all together it may take time…..thanks for the reply n GOD BLESS YOU!!

  8. Mind blowing Di…It was not bad…It was fantastic DI…The letter part was very emotional…Please post next part of your ff soon…Confused???I know you will be confused…SO let me tell you I was a silent reader of your both ffs…But I thought to Break my silence…Well Tomorrow is Raksha Bandhan…Happy Raksha Bandhan Sanju Di…I hope you dont mind if I call u Sanju

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx prakriti for breaking ur silence …. plz now always commenting and once again thnx for liking my ff and same to u ….

  9. Mica

    awesome sanju huhuhu

  10. I cOmnt 1 time its vanished. Can i cry. U took my heart by it. Tried my times to cry but failed . Coz m stonehart serzina.

  11. Very emotional yaar.. Even I cried while reading the last part.
    But the os was awesome.
    Do write more.

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and I was till now feeling bad for this sad ending and I will come bavk with more …

  12. Y always u rock and i sock. Love it. N teach me how to cmnt. Why always write extra thing. Sanju dear u write first os bt awsome.

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and don’t worry I will teach u to cry … ??? and once again for liking my os

  13. Awesome dear

  14. Superb awesome

  15. Shrinjal

    Excellent Sanjana! Mind blowing! Will you please read my ffs also….please?

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and can u give me ur ff name I think so I am reading it ….

      1. Shrinjal

        Kismat Connection
        Sau Tarah Ke…Taud de…Ishq ka harz kya hai?

        Waiting for your comment!

      2. Sanjanaagrawal

        I read kismat connection and about sau tarah ke …. taud de toh ishq ka marz jya hai I also read that one but u posted only 1 epsiode

  16. Aanya..

    Ossm dear loved it from the core of my heart n I’m still crying yr but it was ossm…mere Wale se bhi acha

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx aanya ….. and I also cried while writing … and i don’t think so it is better than urs …..

  17. so emotional i am crying

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Sorry myna to made u cry and next time I will come up with an happy ending ….

  18. Diva

    Oh god sanjana you made me cry yaar so sweet loved it….well anyways I am saying this everywhere that do read my SS Junooniyat Hai Yahi as it has got a really new plot do read and comment….will be looking forward to your comments????

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Oh sry to made u cry but I was also crying while writing ….. oh I will try to read …. but can u tell me how many parts had u written ….

      1. Diva

        Till now I have written only 7parts…thanks at least you’ll try glad to hear that..?

  19. Mystery

    It was the best story……it make me cry

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx mystery …

  20. Janviiivyas

    Outstanding

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx jaanvivyaas……

    2. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx for breaking ur silence n sry ro make u cry and ur welcome ….

  21. ohhhhh myyyyy godddd you broke my silence ………………..
    you know what di i am a silent reader of both your ffs but today this os broke my silence ……..
    i am crying till now…………………………….
    wow…………………………………
    so nice os thanks di for such an amazing os
    thank you once again

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx for breaking silence and sr to make u cry ….

  22. Khushiii

    Awesome mindblowing just loved it

  23. Sahana

    superb sanjana..u made me cry..

  24. Arunika

    Beyond words!!!

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx arunika ….

      1. Shrinjal

        Sanjana I posted till episode 4 but after that I quitted it. Yeah plz comment regularly On kismat..

  25. Wow awesome sanju.. painful ending.. loved it

  26. I was literally weeping in the end! How can love be so selfless! You were really so damn good at it, hope to see more from you soon!

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and I am plznning to write a two shots on next saturday …. and till then u can read my ff

  27. SNY

    It awesome diii..
    Vry emotional …it make me cry ????? u r rocking…

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx sny …….

  28. Dr it was sooo nice and a little emotional but this is one of the best……

  29. Its amazing

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