SWASAN OS – HUMARA ISHQ by Yashu !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HIII TO ALL MY SWASAN FANS , THIS IS UR DEAR YASHU IT’S MY 1ST OS SWASAN , HOPE IT’S OKK , EVERYTHING IS WELCOMED EXCEPT EGGS
HATE THEM………….
LOVE U ALL !!!!!!!!!!!!

Swara – sanskar will ur dad be agree fr us……………..
sanskar – swara u dnt take tension it doesn’t suits u
swara smiles – okk baba , vesse do u remember first we doesn’t use to talk with each other n now see……….
Abeer – yes how cn I forget that……
Fb ( swasan r thinking )
A boy wearing blue denims with white tee and a jacket is coming on bike , he’s driving it really fast , just then a girl in short pink n white kurti with blue denims is passing by and the boy’s bike was about to hit her bt that boy stopped the bike in the nik of tym , that girl lost her balance and was about to fall bt the boy hold her waist with one hand n one hand on bike , both had an angry bt cute eyelock………
Girl – hey mister dnt u have any manners that how to drive a bike
Boy – ohhh hlo u were the one who came in front of me , u got only my bike to suicide
Girl – who the hell wanted to suicide , I was going n then u wre the one who came ……….
Boy – wtever
Girl – now will u leave me………… ( actually he was still hold her , and realized and left her ) n she was about to fall just then he holded her hand )
Boy – first learn to stand and helps her
Girl – thxxx
Boy – it’s alright , I knew it was ur mistake and he left……
Girl – ohhh mr, I said thxxx fr helping me in getting up , ( shouts ) it was ur mistake only……….DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!
SCENE SHIFTS……….
GRAPHIC ERA COLLEGE
The same girl was going towards her class holding her books and on the opp. Side same was boy was coming while listening music , and then wt happened ( u al know ) both collided and fall the girl was above the boy , both shared an eye- lock , bt it was broken as they realized the situation and both stood and composed themselves…..
Boy, girl together – wt’s ur problem……………
Girl – wt’s ur prblm , do u only find me to bump , how cheap…
Boy – ohh miss. Lecturer, y r u always blaming me, that’s ur fault
Girl – mr.attitude , firstly I’m nt a lecturer n it’s ur fault so I’ll blame u only
Boy – ohh just keep ur moth shut
Girl – y will I , u shut up………
Girl – DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!
Both gave a glaring look to each other n then left
Fb ends…..
swasan were laughing
sanskar – ya ya I remember it , in 1st meeting we were haters n now……..
swara – lover ( n both smiles )
sanskar – do u remember that golgappa fight……
swara laughed – yeah!!!!!! U were so tensed
– and u were sooo naughty

Fb starts
Boy – I need to teach that ms.lecturer a lesson…… oh yeah!!!!!! Wow sanskar wt an idea ( yups he’s sanskar , vesse abhi tak pta toh chal hi gya ohga hehehe )
sanskar goes to swara ( the girl is our swara , I knw that u knw , bt u knw that I knw that I have to tell u wt u knw , actually I knw n u also knw that u r getting confused , bt I knw dat u’r gonna like it , n u’ll also knw that wt I knw )
sanskar – hey , ms.lecturer , actually I think from past few weeks we’r always fighting , so I think wt’s the need to fight we can be frdz , I mean y to fight everyday n smiles ( I love his smile , he looks dam cute )
swara thinks – ohhh hoo mr. attitude that too with frdship offer , cnt even imagine something is fishy , bt he doesn’t knw me , if he’ll do something then I’ll teach him a good lesson
sanskar – so frdz…
swara – ya sure….. so wt’s ur name
sanskar – mr.attitude, hehehe , I’m sanskar….. sanskar maheshwari
swara – swara gadodia
sanskar – so let’s go out for some coffee
swara – yah!!!, sure , let’s go
They were going n then swara saw golgappa stall
swara – ohh wow golgappa , I lov it let’s go there
sanskar smirks – ya sure even I love them
Both goes there
sanskar – hey swara wt abt a golgappa fight , who so ever will win means he or she was right
swara thinks n then says – ya y not , bt u’ll loose
sanskar – I never play to loose
swara– n I always play to win…….
sanskar – hmm , nice confidence let’s start
The vendor gave them 1 by 1
1
2
3
4
( the counts become slow )
5
6
( swara is full with it n even sanskar )
7
( bt swara ate 7th n at in it sanskar signaled the vendor to add much spice )
swarar shouted – water ! water ! water !!
sanskar was also tensed
sanskar – swara take this r u okay ……… have it
swara drinks n started crying – that’s cheating I asked fr sweet n he gave spicy n I lost that’s nt done
sanskar – sorry swara , actually I asked him. Sorry , r u fine…….. n u won I lost
swara – really
sanskar – yes
swara – pakka
sanskar – yes fr sure bt plzz forgive me
swara – yippie!!!!!!! I won n u r asking forgiveness fr wt
sanskar – wt do u mean fr wt
swara – I mean I saw when u signaled to him , and I didn’t ate that one I changed it.
Sanskar shocked swara rocked
sanskar – it means u were acting this all , to win…..
swara winks and laughs , sanskar was also smiling seeing her laugh
swara – so now frdzz , bt pakka wala frdzz
sanskar – yes fr sure pakka wala frdzz n u r too naughty bt cute
swara – I knw n giggles u r nt less
Fb ends

sanskar – that was the starting of our love
swara – hmmm , I still remember when u proposed me…
Fb starts
sanskar was very tensed thinks – omg swara , how will say her , ohh noo , directly , no no wt if she said no , u cnt loose her frdship , bt wt if she said yes. OMG!!!!!!!!! Wt to do wt to do ya idea!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sanskar took his guitar n leaves where swara is n he saw her and went towards her and started singing
Vou…vou…vou…vo
Vou…vou…vou…vo
Nara na…naa
Na…nana…na…
Na ra na ra ne na ra na
Na ra na ra na nana
Nara nara nara nara
Nara ne…
Juki teri palkon mein
Mil jaaye mujhe panaah
Palkein gire aasu bhari
Reh jaaye mere nishaan
Tute dil ki mat kar
Tu fikar mere humnava
Pyaar doon tujhko is kadar
Reh jaaye mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan
Khakh mein mil javu main
Jaise ke ek lamha
Aa lagja sine se
Banja mera rehnuma
Dekhta hua sapne tere
Sun le meri jaane ja
Khwab ye sach ho jaaye
Agar khuda ho meherban
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Na ra na ra ne na ra na
Na ra na ra na nana
Nara nara nara nara
Nara ne…
Sajde mein tere sar jukta bas
Chahat ki hain ye dastaan
Ruth gaya mera rab jo mujhse
Toh mita de voh mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan
Mere nishaan
Mere nishaan nishaan nishaan
Mere nishaan nishaan nishaan
Mere nishaan nishaan nishaan
Mere nishaan

Swara – sanskar actually I knw I cnt say from the day I met u I fell fr u , as firstly we were haters , bt u knw u were the first person ever who fought with me , n I dnt knw gradually I fell fr u , firstly I thought that it’s an infatuation , bt it isn’y I dnt want to name my love as infatuation , I really love u swara , from the core of my heart , swara only u r there on my every breath , my heartbeat , in my everything only u there , no one no one can be compared to u , I love u will u be my girl forever ………….
Swara – yes sanskar , I love u too , I knw it’s nt love that 1st sight bt it’s something really better than it , we started our journey as haters n will continue it as lovers
And both hugged each other
Fb ends.
swara – u were so cute.
Sanskar – I knw n winks
swara – Sanskar I think we should go to uncle , if he’ll get to knw frm somewhere else it’s nt good
sanskar half- heartedly said yes bt he knew that his dad would never agree
SWASAN LEFT FOR MAHESHWARI MANSION
There RP was sitting on the sofa n swasan came
sanskar – dad actually I wanted to tell u something
RP without looking at him – yes say
sanskar tells him that he loves swara n if he’ll marry the girl would only be SWARA RP knew that his son is really stubborn so no point to say no ,he thinks something n said – oh that’s great , I’ll be proud if swara will be my DIL that’s a good news……….. I am ready fr it , we’ll also do a celebration fr it next week……. I’m so happy and hugged swara n swara touches his feet , RP left , swara was very happy sanskar was shocked+ confused…….
swara – I am so happy sanskar .. oh gosh cnt tell u and in excitement hugged sanskar
sanskar – hmm
swara broke the hug – sanskar u seemed worried , r u nt happy
Sanskar – no swara nothing like that bt Ram Prasad is not a guy that understands love , he only minutes , something is fishy , I’m not feeling good…
swara – ohh hoo sanskar , u r thinking too much , now go n sleep it’s late even I need to go
Sanskar – ok I’ll drop u , he drops her and n before leaving tightly hugged her
swara – sanskar , wt happened , dnt take tension there’s nothing fishy , go n sleep properly
Sanskar with fake smile – yeah!!
Next morning
Sanskar went to swara’s house bt didn’t found her and all things were messed up. sanskar shouted SWARA!!!!!!!!! I knw who has done it n drove his car very rashly , he went to MM
Sanskar – mr. Ram Prasad, I never thought that u’ll stoop so low!! ( shouts ) where’s my swara………
RP laughs evily – the place she deserves
Sanskar – she deserves place in my heart, just tell my u bl***y where is she….
rp – ohh hoo ok ok let me tell , at least u cn see her dead………
Sanskar – don’t dare 2 speak a word more………….ok………. I knw where would be she

Scene shifts
Some people r forcefully taking swara somewhere ,
swara – plzzz leave me ,plzzz fr god sake , wt have I done
Man1 – u loved the son of Ram Prasad ……
Man2 – that too with middle class standard
Meher was shcked – that means uncle send u
Man1 – yes , n knw u r gonna die……… n both of them laughs
Oon the other hand abeer is driving very fastly
The goons r takig meher to ajungle n r about to shoot swara just then sanskar comes in between , swara and goons r shocked , n frm behind a goon shooted swara………. And the goons ran away as they knew if RP came 2 knw that sanskar is dead , they will be dead so they left…….
Both swasan falls…
swara while lying in Pain…- sanskar….y…y did…did u came…..
Sanskar with pain smiled – i.. have to..swara ….fr..fr u…. I .. I said na…. u … ur … my…my heartbeat…if some…something…will happen..to u…then…..even…i…I’m…suppose….to die…….
swara – i…I’m …sorry sanskar….b’coz of …me…today…..
Sanskar – no… swara ….it’s….my dad’s mistake….nt urs…… n wt…wt happened….if we couldn’t…. spend….our life…………we….we lived together…..and will……die together….
Swara – yes…y…ess abeer we’ll….be….be…. TOGETHER FOREVR…..
then both while lying holded each other’s hand and looked at each other with a smile that they r together………….. both shared a painful bt happy eye-lock as they r together forever…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HIIII HOW WAS IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! DO TELL ME……………………. BA BYE…………….. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U ALL MY DEAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUAHHHHHHHHH……………………

55 comments

  1. Radhika

    awesome os the fights the love story part is really nice and the golgappa fight swara is really very intellegent that she got his plan and the song was amazing its my favourite song from badtmeez dil and rp don’t do right by doing so the ending was sad but the stoory is really nice as we can’t judge it on the ending only and the bracket part is really lobely i know u know that we will like it but u know i have to. tell as i know and u know that its really amazing i know and u know chat love the know the most and love the os also loved it keep writting😃😃

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxx dear Radhika dear for such a lovely comment , will keep writing more dear…………………….😃😃😃😃

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

  2. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Superb dear…It was emotional as well as funny…And Your I know part was damn good….I have read that part almost 20 times…It was awesome…Please come with another is…Keep writing….
    Love u loads

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      awwww thanku shoo much Prakriti dear…………. will come with new asap…………………… thats so sweet of u that u raed it 20 times…………………

      loads of love to u too 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      keep smiling n stay blessed

      • Prakriti19

        |Registered Member

        You are of 12…That’ s great…But still I am younger you…I am 11 but study in 7…I guess you also study in 7…SO Can We Be Friends??

      • Yashasvi

        |Author

        dear i study in 8 , actually early admission and ya sure no need of asking yrrr , just msg me hii n we’ll be frds isme puchna kya😘😘😘

  3. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Yashasvi !!

    ‘Well writing something this good in 1st attempt is an amazing job.

    U made me cry girl !!

    U should have edited before posting. There is abeer’s name at some places instead of sanky’s and so was Swara’s .

    Apart from it rest all was okay.

    Keep writing !! I’ll keep reading !!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      oops sorry rupa , i think u r my dii as i’m of 12 so thanku dii !!!!!!!!!!!
      sorry i think i didnt notice……………….
      soo sorry fr making u cry………………..

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxx Uma dear , so sorry for making u cry , apni choti sis ko maaf kar do…………….. !!!!!!!!! 😘

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxx mica !!!!!!! dear but cnt start yrrr pehle hi 3 ff likh rhi hu ab 4th nhi 1st will end them then will write…………..

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘

  4. Maryam

    Very nice…..loved it..but in some places it was like u use the name Abeer instead of sanskar…. meher instead of swara…..other than this u n ur story both are fab. ….Keep writing more…GOD BLESS YOU!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      ohhh i’m really sorry maryam actually wrote an os on them too so glti se unka name likh diya , thanxxxx fr ur lovely cmnt

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      awww!!!!!!! meri chotu sarah love u baby !!!!!!!!!!!!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 n who said u r nt good u r better than me also , haina , am i right dear !!!!!!!

      keep smiling n stay blesed 😘😘😘

  5. Diva

    |Registered Member

    Hey yashasvi you rocked dear awesome loved it…even I write a SS Junooniyat hai yahi do read and comment your warms comments are welcomed and keep writing dear 😘😘😘

  6. Aanya..

    |Registered Member

    Awesome yr…Maja aa gaya…keep writing dear even I had uploaded an Os swasan os-ek recording esi bhi do read it plz dear…😘😘😘

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