Thank u so much my dear friends… I was overwhelmed seeing the number of ur comments… I couldn’t believe that it crossed 90 ( including my too)…. Thank u so much… And yup , many people cooperated me and guys, my deary friends , pls tell on which swaragini page u all will be available then I can have loads of chat with u all until my next os or os series … Love you guys… Keep supporting me…


NOTE- vyushu, ashi, reethi, asmitha ( loved ur idea but couldn’t properly work on it) , Nikita, geethu, niku, divyarani, jiya, jwala, naina ( I personally really like ur idea ), ansa… I have tried to make sure That I reach ur expectations and A big thank u for suggesting



Sun rose … sparkling it’s tender Rays… Swara shifted in his sleep … She was agitated .. She smiled and tightly hugged her husband’s body which she thought was her pillow… She then realised what was she doing and quickly removed her hand… She acted as if she is in deep sleep when she saw movement in sanskaar’s body..

( SANSKAAR thinks that Swara is asleep) Here SANSKAAR woke up … Seeing swara’s graceful face, he gave a wide grin and steeped her more in his embrace … He placed a kiss on her forehead and continued..

SANSKAAR- Swara , I promise that I will protect u from all bad… I am really sorry… I thought by hurting u my revenge will complete … My inner self will get patience .. It will get satisfaction … I thought that by hurting u , I’ll show that shekhar the pain of betrayal but no, I hurted u … Only u .. That creature also hurted u… Every time I saw u in pain , I felt someone snatched my soul but I was so drowned in these revenge schemes that I couldn’t .. Just couldn’t make out what was right and what wrong… I know I am not worthy of forgiveness after what I did to you but I really love u .. I may act selfish but I need u … I want u to be always by my side till eternity and I would do anything possible to do so… I will again blossom the flower of trust in u… Doesn’t matter how much time it will take .. I will wait for u to accept me … To rejuvenate our love.. I will .. I love u so much Swara… Pls hold my hand again…

He started drooping , unknown of the fact that Swara had listened to all his words.. She knew the fact that she still loved sanskaar but wasn’t ready to accept it… She was hurt … Badly., she needed time to repair the scissure that had been created… Time to accept him.. She knew he was regretting for his deeds but as her thoughts spoke time was all she required for now..

She still laid on the bed to see what next sanskaar was going to do… She slightly opened her eyes and saw that after bathing, he had changed into a casual tee and jeans and was now approaching her.. She shut her eyes tight and sensed that sanskaar kept something on the side table … After he moved out , she moved her gaze to the table … There was a full bloomed pink rose which had a shade of white at the above… A genuine smile appeared on her face.. Beside the flower there was a chit … On the chit, it was written , ” KEEP SMILING. IT SUITS YOU.” Her smile brightened just like the glowing fireworks… She kept the rose and chit in a special box and hurried to get freshen up… Her bruises had healed a lot but the burns in her leg were still quite prominent ..


(Swara’s father in law- Durgaprasad Maheshwari … A very kind and sweet man.. Loves his wife Annapurna Maheshwari … Respects Swara as his own daughter… He signed a deal with swara’s father , shekhar and also got Swara married to sanskar so that their relation gets better… He was the one from whom SANSKAAR got to know as to how his mother fell in coma… But he had no idea about sanskaar’s revenge plan neither did he ever motivate or encourage him to do so… Even now he does not know about sanskaar’s deed and swara’s suffering)


Swara came downstairs and wished her father in law…

Swara- dad… Can I go to mom’s room … And talk to her.. I want to take her full responsibility .. I want to serve her .. Try to make her better…

Dp- of course beta… U do whatever u want … No restrictions…

Sanskaar heard it … His lips immediately formed a curve.. His eyes travelled where ever she went .. He thought himself as the most lucky man.. While she was going to serve her mother breakfast , he stopped her

Sanskaar- thank u Swara

Swara- for what SANSKAAR.,

SANSKAAR ( smilingly) – for everything.,

They had a short eyelock…

SANSKAAR – won’t u say bye to me… I am going to office..:

Swara doesn’t replies… She just follows the olden, dushman of everyone , silent treatment,,,

But our sanskaar is sanskaar… He grabbed her arms and gave her a tight kiss on cheeks and rushed out saying, ” I love you Swara. ”

Swara to herself- ” I love u too SANSKAAR ”

( guessed it right guys..)
Swara has forgiven sanskaar after the morning incident but she acts as if still angry with him so that the little crack which has been formed in their relationship , is filled with sanskaar’s love and their trust…



Swara woke up in the morning just to find sanskaar missing… Which means that he had already waken up. She stood up straight and was amazed to see another chit and a yellow rose for her.. The chit stated ,” Swara go and open my drawer in the cupboard.”
She did as told and found a shimmery red box in it … She opened it and found a beautiful pendant with s&s carved on it… It was elegantly studded with diamonds … She found another chit in the box…
Chit- ” Swara … I don’t know u will like this gift or not.. But if u do then pls accept it and always wear it. This is a Piece of my heart which will always stay close to u and ur heart..” Swara’s happiness had no bound reading it.. She wore it and adorned her husband’s choice in the mirror..


It had been 3 weeks to their marriage.. Swara had fallen in love with sanskaar all over again.. Sanskaar’s sweet gestures had melted swara’s heart completely but she continued with the silent treatment … Day by day SANSKAAR was becoming more restless but he never allowed to express in front of her or through any of his actions.. Today was an important day for them … Swara had finally decided to announce to SANSKAAR that she had forgiven him and loved him from the depth of her soul..

It was morning now and she was standing infront of the mirror getting ready .. Her father in law had asked SANSKAAR to introduce her to the office people and for that purpose she was doing the preps.. She moved to her closet to select a saree for herself.. She checked each and every dress to select the best from them.. Her eyes landed on a blue saree and instantly, she was reminded of one of sanskaar’s chit where he mentioned that blue colour increased her glow.. Without any second thought, she enclothed her with that dress.. She decorated her ears with light danglers and her neck with the pendant gifted by SANSKAAR.. She applied deep black eyeliner and smoky shades on her eyes and embellished her lips with tangy red lipstick .. She was looking extremely stunning.. At last she took a small box and applied vermillion on her head.. The touch of the vermillion on forehead gave her extreme bliss and a lone tear escaped from her eye ..

At that time, SANSKAAR busy in his phone came inside..

SANSKAAR ( still seeing his phone) – Swara are u ready…

Swara- yea.. Let’s go..

It was then that he kept his cell aside and met the eyes of her lady love.. She was looking awfully beautiful and he was more happy to see her dressed in her choice… He had always considered her more beautiful than the Greek goddesses but today it seemed to him that even God would be jealous to see her as his possession …

He was staring at her intensely and was slowly moving towards her… He kissed her near the earlobe and said, ” u r looking gorgeous dear..” This simple line was enough for Swara to make her cheeks all red.. His sight then struck on her lips and his face inched close to her … Her eyes half- closed too leaned towards him…

Oops! There’s a knock on door and they depart from each other.. It was a servant who came to remind them that the car was ready,,


Swara and sanskaar were coming back from office but luckily or unluckily their car broke down.. Their house was just a little far away so they decided to walk and go.. They were really silent and to break the silence SANSKAAR spoke…” Swara did u forgive me.” Like always she didn’t reply .. Sanskaar was upset but then a plan striked in his mind.. He went in the middle of road and spoke, ” Swara until u forgive me .. I’ll keep doing sit-ups here.” And yes, in the middle of road, in front of all the people , sanskar was doing sit-ups .. Swara’s eye welled up .. she wanted to go and give him a bone crushing hug .. She moved to do so but from nowhere she saw a truck approaching towards him from back.. She shouted his name and ran .. Pushed both of their bodies and they came rolling down towards the ground with Swara on top of sanskaar.. Up on him she started beating him vigorously …

Swara- what was all that.. U idiot .. what would I do if something happens to u … U wait ( and she kept on beating him )

Sanskaar ( holding her hands)- arey baba… First u stand up then we will talk.. U r very heavy..

Swara ( angered)- what!! ( she tried to beat him but he had held her hands)

Both of them stood up..

Sanskaar- so Swara , u forgive me na..

Swara- no!!

Sanskaar- no!! Why ???

Swara ( teasingly)- what why!! U have to do something special from me.. Something unique … Then only I will melt .. I should feel that I am mrs. Swara sanskaar maheshwari ..

Sanskaar made a puppy face – ohkk … Mission wifey patao starts..

Swara giggles..

Sanskaar- but I have an other idea to make u feel as mrs. Sanskaar maheshwari …

Saying this he spins her round and is about to kiss her but Swara pushes him and runs…

Swara ( from far )- first wifey ko manao fir koi bhi gift le jaao..

Sanskaar- thik hai wifey… Then be ready at sharp 8 pm.. Driver will take u and ha don’t change ur dress … U look absolutely stunning ..

Swara blushed and soon reached the home… She got freshen up and again gave a beautiful decor to her face just like before as sanskaar said.. She was strolling round the garden impatiently .. Every minute she checked the clock but time seemed to halt for today..

Finally the clock striked 8… The driver made her reach a place but it was completely surrounded with darkness.. He gave her a packet and instructed her to go to an inhouse … Unlike the outside surroundings, The house was brightly lightened and she noticed a paper stuck on the packet..

” Swara.. These chits have been my best friend .. These have build my way to ur heart .. And this is the last chit I am going to give u… There’s a dress in the packet … Wear it and as u go out of this house.. Come straight. With love -: SANSKAAR ”

Swara opened the packet and took out the dress … It was a white long tube gown ( a dress which is till the ankles, is strapless and is tube shaped in the upper portion and frock styled in the lower portion ) .. She wore and opened her long straight hairs … As told , she moved out and then straight… Immediately flower petals started to fall on her… The darkened passage was lighted by fragarenced candles.. She now recognized the place .. The same place from where the whole story had started… Her mother’s home in Badi..

( note: naina suggested me to clear their misunderstandings at Badi.. Thank u naina.)

She moved in and was astounded to see the decorations .. The whole house was lit up with tiny, shiny light and candles.. The walls were curtained with lavender flowers and in mid there was a table .. Her eyes searched for SANSKAAR and there he was standing with a bouquet in his hands as he came closer to her , she could see how charming her man was looking in a complete white tuxedo and pants , highlighting more of the incredible decor.. SANSKAAR handed over her the bouquet and her face sprinkled joy seeing it … The whole bouquet was made up of chocolates.. Every inch of it was chocolate .. Well chocolates are her first love…
( asmitha.. Thank u for chocolates…)

She hugged tight sanskaar as if her whole world depended on him.. And happy tears poured from her eyes..

SANSKAAR- Swara.. U r crying .. Don’t pls..

Swara- u know na these are happy tears sanskaar..

SANSKAAR- Swara .. Can u hear some voices .. ( Swara nodded no).. Arey see my stomach is growling so hard and u can’t hear them bad.. ( Swara flashed a smile).. And u know who has made the food.. ( Swara signed no).. The great chef SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI … Now come and sit..

They both sat on the chair and had food.

SANSKAAR- now time for next surprise .. Common stand up..

Swara- where?? Batao na pls.

Sanskaar- wait Swara.. We are going there only..

He took her out from the back door (ab guys yeh mat poochna back door kaha se aaya.. Bas aa Gaya ) and swara’s eye widened looking at the scene .. It was a wide dome it was completely covered with water,, in between a passage was made and a boat was settled.. On the other sides, numerous pairs of swan were floating in the water… SANSKAAR went inside the boat an offered his hand to Swara.. Swara happily sat on the boat… Sanskaar drived the boat and then they entered into a heaven on earth… The whole setup made them feel as if they were standing between the clouds. They moved out and the land was soft like cotton…

Swara- SANSKAAR .. This is beautiful.. It’s .. It’s so good ..

SANSKAAR- so u liked it .. Matlab wifey maan gayi.. ( Swara nodded in a yes)… Now time for gift wifey..

He slanted his face and captured her lips .. He moved his lips slowly on her while his arms explored her naked shoulders… Her hand firmly clutched the collar of his shirt.. Their bodies mingled alonged with their lips .. He chewed her lower lips and then sucked it hard.. She reciprocated with equal passion.. They broke out..


Note:- the passage down or I may say the upcoming passage is not my original composition.. It is extracted from a book.. I actually forgot it’s name otherwise I would have mentioned it too.. It’s written really nicely … I have just made some changes in it to work on it with my story..

Swara was blushing hard.. She knew where they were heading to and she was ready … Sanskaar bent down, his lips against her cheek, brushing it lightly—and still that light touch sent shivers through her nerves, shivers that made her whole body tremble. “If you want me to stop, tell me now,” he whispered. When she still said nothing, he brushed his mouth against the hollow of her temple. “Or now.” He traced the line of her cheekbone. “Or now.” His lips were against hers.


But she had reached up and pulled him down to her, and the rest of his words were lost against her mouth. He kissed her gently, carefully, but it wasn’t gentleness she wanted, not now, not after all this time, and she knotted her fists in his shirt, pulling him harder against her. He groaned softly, low in his throat, and then his arms circled her, gathering her against him, and they rolled over on the ground, tangled together, still kissing. ( and after that u all know.. ?? )



Guys I am really sorry I know I am really late in posting but truly I was very busy… Don’t forget to drop your comments.. ☺️☺️

Credit to: Anu


    • Anu

      All I want to say is a big wala thank u jiya.. And yes I have made sure that I have replied to all.. Keep smiling and always be happy.. ??

  1. Mindblowing fabulous one anu….
    hi its ur junior holmes… strday2 tyms i typed it ws not posted nd i got pissed…
    now coming to ur erk ws superb…
    hi im navi nd i hav completed my Msc degree…. frm Tamil nadu…
    Hmm v cn chat in diz page itself.. according to readers demand… v cn hav it. Better if its ur page anu.. it wi b gud nd nice…

    • Anu

      Thank u junior Holmes … U completed masters in science degree … Baba re … My god there are great geniuses here… and yup u right I’ll drop a comment here so that everyone could read and chat on my page

  2. Divyarani

    It ws soooo good nd romantic…am gonna miss dis ff soo much…tq anuu fr considering our ideas…lov u dear…ur writing skills are too gud..and miss u dear..within shrt tym dis ff became very close to my heart….come up wid more luv stories of swasan…looking forward to see u…

    • Anu

      Love u too dear… For giving me so much love.. And ur most welcome.. It’s my responsibility to consider all of ur ideas .. Without a spectator there’s no rule of the king … I will surely come back with an another story.. But till then my one more os by the name SWASAN OS BY ANU- I LOVE U is there.. U can read that if u want and no need to miss me .. I will be available for u all here on this page.. Any time message me , u will get ur reply .. Thodi der baad I will message but pucca I will reply

  3. Anu

    Guys I have 2 requests… Pls fulfil them…

    1. Previous night at 12:00 am I was awake and I told u all that I will write the next part,,, but my di took my phone… She said no typing at night … According to my heavy schedule at 4:00 am I had to wake up because I had to go to airport .. I had a flight.. I slept merely for just 3 hours… Then at 8am I reached my destination and hotel at 10 am … From some days something would happen that I wouldn’t get proper sleep and as I lais my head on the pillow .. I felt asleep.. I woke up after 5 … Then I started writing and posted this .. At 7 pm I had to go somewhere so practically I had very little time to write because I had to get ready… So u all may now understand how busy I was… That why there must be many typo and grAmattical errors.. I didn’t gave a second reading to it .. Just wrote what came in mind.. So pls forgive me and feel ready to criticise me.. ☺️☺️

    2. All my dear friends I’ll be available here only on this page… Whenever anyone wants to chat with me.. Message il be there to reply… Navi suggested this idea … Thank u navi… Big wala hug..

    # so girly now I need to go and sleeping .. My eyes hace become swollen due to shortage of sleep.. Lol..and no girl will compromise with her beauty sleep .. Tc

    • Anu

      U r making me embarrassed asmitha.. It was ur idea.. Worth of praising .. And y should I take all the credit when there are so many others who have their contribution

  4. Diya

    Really awesome dear could u please tell the name of lead characters in the book u mentioned

    • Anu

      City of glass: cassandra clare… Leads clary and jace.. True say I haven’t read the book.. Because I got know it has some mushy mature stuff.. But u just once read the analysis of the book.. If u find it apprehensive to read , then quit

  5. vyshu

    Amazing ep…..and don’t take too much stress dear. We eagerly wait for ur ffs but dat doesn’t mean u have to sacrifice ur sleep for us. We can wait for d uploads as they r worth waiting!

    • Anu

      No vyushu.. I am not stressing myself .. I love to write .. It’s my passion .. Aur baat rahi about sleep so check I slep from 10 to 5.. Yup I had many nights with less sleep .. But koi nahi I manage..and thank u for giving so much love to my ff

    • Anu

      Big hug .. Oops .. Well my dear friend navi from my side u take lots of chocolates .. That’s the greatest gift I give to anyone.. ☺️☺️

      • Anu I have a story actually it is the simple nice story…..I am already handling a FF if you want to know about the story then I will give you the story

        and ya we will talk there also…..
        Yaa I am on Fb if you want wecan also talk there

    • Anu

      Janavi I am not on fb dear so not possible to chat there.. We will have talks here and about ur story.. U r already handling cursy keys and u want to tell me the concept for an another story .. U r most welcome to tell me .. Just inform me what I ought to do .. Do u want me to work on that concept and post it here on tu??

      • Anu there is a page on Fb
        swasan the heavenly couple
        it is very good I have read the FF there …..
        and we also get news about future track

        Here I can tell the name of FF

      • Anu

        I am understanding janvi.. But I don’t use fb.. I have some personal security problems.. Which I can’t reveal .. And that ff has already been written by someone.. Many must have read it .. If we use that concept then people will blame us for palgarism of the concept or content.. It will create a great deal of havoc.. But if u need to tell me the idea then give me a rough concept of 5 to 6 lines.. We will add our own taste and no one can copy that right.. ☺️☺️☺️

  6. great story , issse jyada nahi likh sakti bcz I’m very lazy u see but i am a silent reader of u’re each & every ff & os so if i don’t comment still add my gr8 seperately ok love you & i guess i am younger to you & have no elder sis so will you as a sis , bolne ki jarurat nahi hai i know u are very sweet & will accept i think of every writer as di & some as sis as they are of my age ok thats it i can’t write more other writers please think i even commented on ure ffs as di took my energy to comment akhir apne bade bhai behno par ilzam lagana ham choto ka janm sidh ahikar hai♡♡♡

    • Anu

      Are waah meri behna.. Saara doshikaran hum par hi kar diya.. Dekho Bolne ki zarurat nahi hai.. U r by default my sis.. And love u too and my lazy bones u r not at all lazy.. Dekho sabse bada comment tumhara hi hai.. And ha ek aur baat u r misunderstanding me with someone else.. I have written just this os series and one more os.. I haven’t written any ffs..

    • Anu

      Thank u Nita .. Truly I found u so sweet from the beginning.. And coming I’ll write whenever I have time or I am getting bored.. Well in this month I’ll try to post one more series or small shots but next month , no chance.. But can try in the latter days of the month..

  7. First of all sry for commenting late…It was worth reading dear…Awesome work frm U as usual…waiting for ur nxt creation..!!!THUMBS UP for u:)

    • Anu

      Geethu.. I am not talking to u .. I am so angry with u.. Why are u saying sorry to me… Because u r late.. No ways .. I don’t like my friend saying sorry to me .. And by the way it was posted at night 2:00 am so obviously I couldn’t have read it yaar.. So pls no sorry ok.. Thank u and thumbs up for u too

      • Geethu

        Kk…All set!!:)when r u planning to post ur nxt creation.^¿^
        Love u lotz :*) and be back with a storm soon….!!

    • Anu

      Thank u Laiba deary.. I’ll surely try to come back soon but till then we will have lots and lots of here on this Tu page… Done na

      • L Khan

        Hey yaar i missed to read ur comments sorry yaar……..missing u alot nd ya if u r writing any ff or ss or os then plzz tell becz I think I’m not reading……….as we r Frnds now ( yes obviously frndship excepted ???) so I wanted to share a bit of my personal information with u……….I am from Kanpur I am still studying I study in Huddard High School n my real name is not Laiba

      • L Khan

        Hope u will read my comment dr I will wait for ur reply nd ya one more thing I did not read by ur name any comments so that’s why I think we r unable to communicate

  8. janvi vyas

    Anu so here is the story line…
    swara is the best cycle rider in her colony ….His bro lucky is the best car rider…sankaar die to ride cycle with her…..finally rides…sanskaar teaches swara scooty and they bash the wall of shop …….
    friendship than love than life partner…..

  9. janvi vyas

    ragg is Shanky is sis..so the readers have all pairs
    swasan swalak raglak rag san swaragini and sanlak

    • Anu

      What do u mean not to credit.. The whole concept is yours then why the credit shouldn’t not be given to u.. I know friendship mein no Formalities .., friendship mein only order and I order that ur name will be included with me.. That’s all .. If u don’t mind janavi can I know ur age plz.. And I’ll try to write and complete the story as soon as possible but I am really scared of bashing .. I have seen many people on tu being bashed badly… If someone blames me for copying or something then… So I’ll make a lil changes … U won’t mind na

      • janvi vyas

        this concept is mine only the other was my sis idea for copying….and I am 13….. now I think that you will won’t keep friendship with me because I am 13 and you are 18….
        It is a month ago I started reading and writing FF but I have no friend…I have seen that there is a group
        which includes the characters of swaragini
        Eva is ragini
        meher is swara …and so on I also want some one

      • Anu

        wow it’s ur concept janvi.. U have really nice thinking power.. And why do u think I will break friendship with u because of age difference … I am not so sophisticated dear.. I knew already that u r younger to me ,, just wanted to confirm how many years .. Janvi we are elder to u .. We have a little more experience than what u have.. We are maturer than u but that doesn’t mean that we can’t be friends.. Age should never be a factor in friebdship.. I have friends who see studying in playgroup .. It doesn’t matter to me.. Matters is that someone should be at my side always.. And coming to what u said about a family group is , I can’t assure u.. I am new here .. U r also not for too much time but definitely I will ask others in case they message here.. So smile.. I know u r beautiful.. Just shine and pass ur beauty

    • Anu

      Ur most welcome and u too have a good night.. Me will not sleep before 2:00 according to schedule.. Have loads of work

      • Anu

        If u agree then pls tell me ur age too .. Afterwards I will tell why asked for ur all’s age

    • Anu

      Navi.. One of my friend here, janvi suggested to make a swaragini family tree.. Will u like to be a part of our family??

  10. Shagun

    Can i be a member of ur grp
    I m 13
    I m reading ff from starting i mean from the starting of this ff page

      • Anu

        Shagun u r most welcome and jaanvi.. I’ll start writing the os from today but in bits… Little little .. I will give u updates as to when it will get completed.. And get ur characters decided and tell me too.. Let we 3 be there and then we will expand our tree more.. Ok then have a good day

    • Anu

      SHANAYA I’ll kill u .. I am coming back na Kolkata.. I am even quitting tu .. What is all this … How can u use my name and say that I am not Riya but I’ll be using it,, I’ll be more hurt yaar.. Don’t do all these things .. I have to leave tu.. U all can’t force me to stay here .. Pls let me go .. These fake messages will hurt them and me more.. Pls

  11. Anu

    I am so sorry janvi but I have to quit tu for 1 month .. Just a minute ago I came to know .. There’s really a very very big problem.. A major work due to which I have to leave .. But u r there na .. U have my good luck and make a big family tree.. Dear I already told u that I have some problem and now I have to quit tu.. Hope u understand .. With lots of love .. Ur Anu di

    • janvi vyas

      Anu di please don’t go…what willI do without you….
      on exactly which date you are returning..

  12. naina

    thanks anu mera idea apne ss m lene k liye nd story is simply superb no words keep it up lots of lv

  13. ansa

    Guys can anybody. Tel me what does registered means? What does the function of register 0n tellyupdate

    • janvi vyas

      actually registered means people have account on tellupdate

      I have a invition for you that if you want to be a part of the me and Anu di’s family tree than comment that what you want to from swaragini’s cast limited seats and you can choose any one beyond swara and sanskaar…

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