swasan os

hhhiii , guys…..I was bore so I think to write a os…for our swasan… but with lots of suspence…. so if u get confused… & clear d confusion.. must reading it till end.. will all clear….. & mostly put your comments….
I will not explain character… now… but d story was only on #Swasan….

#Surpise….

A NIGHT… IN A HOME…..
A ph ringh… a young leady rcv a call…& get upset…. after cut d call… (actually her friend call her to join clg reunion.. after. 5 years…) she go to her 2n 1/2 years child.. who sleep peacefully….& patted her…a men come & joined her..

men: what happen shona..??? why u upset..??
Sw: wo… actually…. (not intersected to tell)
men: cups her face… shona… U want to go??? (as he lestion)
Sw:(hug him) no… jaan… if I go.. who will take care of u???? I miss u… & I knew u too…
man: (smile.) hm…actually yes… but I want u go… coz.. after u leave clg.. u never look back..& I knew it still give u pain…. plz.. go I inciest… & I’ll join u in after next day……
Sw: pad…??? babu.??(her kid)
man: (bark hug) with u… & der ragini is der n… so.??
Sw: ohh.. so she told u…
man: (smile…) hmm… aacha.. now… go & sleep.. my babu trouble u all d day….& I too…..
Sw:(blush…) no.. jaan… its my life…. I love u….
man: hmm.. Me to.. now sleep.. u need to packing tomorrow…. (peck her forehead. & both couple sleep)

@SATIATION…. TRAIN…..
SWARAGINI, LAKSH, BABU (Sw baby), BITTU (rag’s baby) (both same like.. avareg..2/3) Sw husband… see off dem….

@XYZ COLLEGE…
As soon they reached… Lak was in d department. of carrying bags…& two leady carry der kids… as they reaced… some of der classmates welcome dem.. as they reach first…. all happy to see Sw…as they don’t expect swara… that she come… all r happy…& specially #surprised to see d baby…. all girls gang… gossip…. Lak goes to boys.. sudden a handsome boy come hit him.. from back….

Lak:(turn…& shock) sanky…????(hug all boys)
all boys r in shock but soon they accept him…
& they decided sanlak shear room..
& swarag with kids.. as sanky still dnot knw Sw,& her baby….
as sanky recahd… in food places.. some girls… hold him.. hug him.. they excited to see.. clg’s hot flrt boy… ROMIO…
still hold his charm…. as he start flrting wid olds girl… he notice a girl.. ware saree… looking soo hot.. can’t see her face…but still.. Romio nature…. he go to her…..
San: (call her) hlw miss beautiful…..
Sw:(turnd…& shock to see him again)
San:(blank to see her again… he feel so happy… but den he notice.. her sindoor…) swara… u married???
Sw:(come out… from shock) yes…. (as that tym.. her babu come to her) mamma… mamma….
San:(turn…go from der)
Sw:(console herself..& busy in babu…) haa.. beeta….
swasan:(both feel that they had a same addiction between dem……) ( but San hurt to see… swara move on..)

At NIGHT…..
sw’s room….
Sw was talking in ph… wid her hubby…. & her babu to… rag was spending tym with friends..all r became upset too see.. clg’s their tym’s most lovely couple got separated…. somehow they r d main coz of that…..

(friends:- rahul,subu,mayank,nil.. aditi,Ritz,anu… api)

Sw: ” I miss u… r u reached well”

“yes I’m…& u.?? ”
Sw: ” ohh yes.. raglak is der n… anyway.. I miss u.. ”

“I knew..& I too.. now plz… stop behave like a wife..”
Sw: ” kya????”

“yes.. I mean.. why u ware saree..?? its ur clg life.. plz don’t u…I feel helpless….”
Sw:”lol ohh so ur bff.. did his job.. I mean click pic.?? & send u”

“yees… & u look awesome… I’m sceard… if u & ur ex again fallen luv….”
Sw: ” bye… good night… talk to ur babu….”

“sry…!! its a prank…. y u serious…”
Sw: “noo… U never told that again…”

“Im sry… I was kidding…. I love u.. & babu is nt sleeping now??? ”
Sw: “(lol) ur babu…?? & sleep so soon….”

“(lol) accha okk bye….”

as she cut d call… she feel happy…. after all d day…
She talk to her hubby…. who’s life start wid her…& end with dem….. after that… she Chang her dress according her hubby…. become a bubbly girl..but she only Chang her dress not mangalsuttra & sindoor…..

no one can tell that she had a child….. after that she goes to gang… other side San arrived der in sometime….. where all teasing SR.. San tont her..

San: guys I told u n.. dat girls r only like mony.. look.. as soem example infrot of us…

Sw: guys… I really feel bore… plzz.. did some masti like before???? ( all agree…& decided to sing…song by San)
San:no… after clg.. I only sing for my ANGLE… not for others…. huh…. he leave…
Sw: guys.. program is tom n????
Ritz: plz.. tell something about ur hubby…??
Sw:(shy…) he is ssooo loving.. careing ,understanding.. a perfect… man…
friends teasing dem… not like others.. huh…

sudden her daughter come & tell..

babu: mamma… I saw papa hear….
Sw: no.. babu… he is in meeting n.. he come tomorrow…..
babu: pad.. mamma.. bittu also… see…
rag: bittu…. (scold) I told u n…. u always did…
Sw:(hug babu, bittu) y u scold bittu… maybe they mistake…. (kiss dem)
all shocked to see… Sw now.not angry in any matter……. she is total change……
rahul:(slip his mouth) if u lestion once… to San.. to sayad u still together….
Sw:(feel hurt…. & tears come out….)
all feel accord……

A mid NIGHT….
Sw can’t sleep… she continue remember… her past……

**clg final year… they all r gang… & swasan both opposite from first day…. San always flrt wid girls… at d last semester of clg.. its a proposed day… San come & proposed Sw.. infront of clg….. Sw was speechless…. but finally she accepted….. but as soon.. love turn in argument….. swasan both fighting abut his nature…

S- ” swara… I’ll change… but dis girls… r ”
sw- “wht.. if dey come u go???”
as they r fighting continue… again turned in llove…
s- I’m sry….
sw- me too..

San try to being change r flrt nature…..as days past….
swasan enjoyed dey r life… all girls r jealous to Sw… but she is happy with San….. friends teasing dem…

& take a risk… to dem… a girl come to San…when dy busy in gossiping…. Sw in cls… d girl come & flrt with San… but San as he try to.. change… he not give her so response… friends r notice… and dey cross deer limited….. they push San… to d girl… & unfortunately San looes his control… he close his eyes… & about too Kiss… sudden a pic of Sw come in his mind…. and he leave… immediately…**

Sw come out from her thoughts & notice her daughter sleep… she cover her carefully… & come out…. to corridor….. and see k San also der… swasan both look e-o… & San come to her… Sw was about to go… but San pind her to wall… Sw was shivering by his touch.. uncomfortable…. try to free…
Sw: leave me…
San: no….that day u wont lestion… but today u have to..
Sw; no.. now its not ipm for me… I hate u… u lair..
San: swara…. if I’m den what abut u..??
Sw: wht what I did..???
San: as u don’t knew…?? u gott married someone ideot..???& also having a baby..????
Sw: stop talking about my hubby…he is good… he just like my dearm… which I want in u… Mr. romio…
San:(flaming in anger… & to take revenge… kiss Her..)
Sw:(was shocked….) its a wild kiss… and was speechless……
San:(aftr kiss) Swara… I knew usdin tumne joo dekha.. that’s true.. but when I about to kiss.. I remembered about u.. so I stop…. USS din tum binna baat kia chali gayI… not even contact me…. how cud u..?? Sw how cud.. when I rcv invitation… to come I first think to get u back.. (said more words.)
Sw:I hv to go.. my daughter is alon… (she hide her tears… her pain…)

NEXT DAY @ PARTY….

sw.ware a blue dress… look so cute…. rag also damn cute… ragLak & bittu enters… in party… Sw entrd with her babu…
She meet her best friends kajal & her husband…. as they chit chat… Sw eye search for San….
San was sitting in bar.drinking appi… he also continued notice Sw… her baby still not notice him… she is busy in her…..

some girls who like San… goes to him… & force him to sing…. but their GRP was silent….. they all no very well… if they not created mu between dem… maybe they r together…..

@ that tym San gott a msg…. & agree to sing. As he read msg.. he smiled…. and blush…..

“PLZZ… END..OF DIS….. I & UR ANGEL CANT…. ”

he come to stage….

he guiter… & start sing….

San:
” Haan aa…Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye…”

he look to Sw… & feel hurt.. about der clg life….. remembered all good moments…..

“Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage
Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye……

he felt very bad…. & tears come out… friends also feel his pain..
other side Sw also feel sad….. but sudden her babu come to her….& she took her….in lap…& move to San…..

Sw:
“Haan aa.. o..
Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe
Beinteha pyaar doon
Saari hadein maine meri
Ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa
Awaargi ban gaye……

San look at they both coming…. friends shocked… raglak smile…. all confused…… as she reach…
babu: papa…… (kiss San’s cheek….) swasan both happy. now.. coz they miss e-o badly……. San kiss Sw forehead…
San: I love u….
Sw:I love u toooo……

swasan both:

” Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye,……..”

as soon they completed……friedns grab Dem…. and All hell shocked…..

nil: ohh hlw guys what’s going u..??
aditi: Sw u r married n.. dn????? I mena kya tum dono patch up??? again..
Ritz: shut up guys… her daughter call him papa.. yesterday night she also told…
rahul: what’s going on??? guys…???? (all confused… & ask lots of qoustion in one breath…..)
swasan: (smile…. & enjoyed….) #Surprise_guys…
BAbu; papa….
San: yes my angle??? kya hua appko???
Sw;missing u… a lot…
San:okk then now.. papa,mammma,angle goes to eat ice cream….
babu: clap…. and enjoyed… San took her from Sw.. And they 3 go to dinner… raglak also… as they 6 enjoyed a lot….. San feed angle..& sometimes Sw too…
Sw blush… she also feed babu…. and swara both feel so special to treated from sanlak….

??????as d party over with a big ???????

at night in bonfire…. all sit… together… swasan,raglak as couples… all ask to dem….

San:okk sry guys.. for dis prank… as she don’t come her.. I send her… & also come by flight… first she don’t knew…but in way I infrom her…..

Sw:hmm.. as after 4 years of marriage I never spend a night witout him… I feel so odd… but I enjoyed all of ur expression… about us…

San:exactly…. & we also clr something… like we want to clr in dis clg situation again… & we successful… I angin enjoyed to teasing.. my xgf….

Sw:(hit him.. playfully) shut up… sanskar…

San:(shy… naughty… as they talking… San was continue moving his hands in her back..to waist… Sw also enjoyed it… ) hmm.. I shud…

(its lil dark…so don’t wary.. no one see.dem)

Ritz: den who is angle??? I men’s I thought ur gf..
rag: kya Yarr tu v… wo to babu hai… San call her angle…

aditi: fir uska asli nam kya hai…???? & how u guys married????? plz CLR it……

San: actually its arranged marriage… after she leave clg.. I also go to my papa…& join him in businesses…after 9 months like one day he come & proposed me to get married… with his friends daughter…. I feel helpless…. I can’t find swara anywhere……

Sw: den.. I also get proposal… from papa… I was broken heart… so I don’t want… to marry… but papa.. was upset so I agree… I decided I won’t see d face of my wud b… &

San: & I Also…coz we both still had feelings for e-o…

friend: den.???????

San: den.. we got married.. as u all knew me sanky… so when she knew my name sanskar…. she dont get….

Ritz: but u gott to knew n.?? san???

Sw: no.. actually he not.. coz in family,my baba, papa I mean my father in law all call me shona…. so he also not..

rag: & d funny think is.. both according to retul… of shehra…. & ghunghoot….. dey got to knew at der first night… dat dey got married with eo only….

Lak: mostly… we also scared…. now what swara done…

San:exactly… I also sceard…. but she surprised me.. to come & hug me…. I was shocked….. den

Sw: coz… I knew d truth…. Dat day… u guys use his weakness….. so I & he… start our life… in n new way….

& after 1year… Our love fulfill with our SANSKRIT…

Lak: shona’s babu…. & San’s angle…..

swasan: but guys tum log n.. dushman se v… gaye guzre hoo…..

all friends say sorry….. and all goes to der room…
swasan shift in one room….. as baby sleep.. swasan both feel relax…… & sit together….

San:I miss u… a lot… tum mere. samne thi….& I can’t…. even talk to.u…. (sad)
Sw:accha & u…. we can come together n.. den..
San:(smile..) but if we come it not work.. n shona.. I miss u….
Sw:(put face) I miss u too… I revealed when yesterday we talk… & btw.. U knew what.. I really enjoyed… yesterday… I never face ur angry romance… (hide her face in his cheast…. hug him)
San:(smile…) u knew what… I really angry.. coz I back in tthos day……
Sw:I too…& mostly when u suggested me to ware like home cloths…
San: kal to faass gaya tha…. u knew angle see m..
Sw:(lol…) after all our daughter she is… ittni smartness to hogi n….
San:(push her to d bed…… & grab her..as she don’t go..) accah… now be ready… I’ll punished u…
Sw:(shy smile) for what..???
San: (naughty) in my abcence.. u meet with ur x…
Sw:(surprise…& fake anger..) ohh… den I’ll double punished u…
San:(kissing her neck… stop ) why…???
Sw: u kiss to ur x… how cud u San…”
both look e-o… and laugh………..

as.that tym… friends knocked… & they open a door… got a note….
“PLZ.. COME SOON… DONT TAKE BABU/ANGLE”
Swasan confused & run…. with babu… as they reach.. their was a date pland already…..

friend: (loudly)

#SSSUUURRRRPPPPPRRRRIIIIISSSSSSSEEEEEE
We r ssorry…. for our prank…. its for u…
swasan: (hugg all d GRP…) its for us…

they all celebrated…. der unity…again… raglak also.. kidds r sleep……

NEXT DAY….
all leave to der pls….. but dis tym…all happily….

***END***

NOTE:- Please… forgive me.. if I hurt u..all by firsts confusion… but hope u enjoyed… plzz putt your comments about dis #Os… I guess…..I… #Surpise u alll……

#mona

20 comments

    • navi

      Wow wow.. it ws superb surprsie nd nyc os.. i had instinct doubt while sanskar ws saying he wil sing for angel nd before scene wr swara ws taljing with hr hubby in phn dhn she changed simultaneously san came for bonfire nd angel telling i sw dad… bt by reading furthr i cinfirmed it.. superb os ritu..

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