swasan a new story( introduction)

swara shekhar godabia ex-super model,shakhar godabia & sumi’s daughter, shona’s maternal half-sister, sanskar’s wife, ap’s daughter-in-law and ragini’s Sister In Law*. sanskar maheshwari (ap’s son, swara’s husband, shona’s brother-in-law, ragini’s brother, sahil & kaviya’spaternal cousins and dp & shamista’s nephew)*. Sumi (swara & shona’s mother, shakhar’s ex-wife, sunil’s(any one ) ex-lover and sanskar’s mother-in-law)*. shakher (Dead) (swara’ father, Sumi’s ex-husband, sunil’s friend and sanskar’s father-in-law)*.laksh (swara’s maternal half-brother, sumi’s Son and sanskar’s brother-in-law)*. sunil( abhi’s father and ex-lover of Sumi and shakher’s friend)*. Shona(swara’s maternal hail-sister, Sumi’s daughter and sanskar’s sister-in-law)*.ragini maheshwari (sanskar’s sister, swara’s sister-in-law, sahil’s ex-fiancé, ap’s daughter, kaviys & sahil’s paternal cousin and dp ‘s niece)*.- ap(sanskar& ragini’s mother, swara’s mother-in-law,dp’s sister-in-law and sahil & kaviya’s paternal aunt)*.dp(sanskar & ragini’s paternal uncle, sahil& kaviya’s father and ap’s brother-in-law)*. Shamishta (dp’s Wife, sahilAnd kaviya Mother)*.abhi (sunil’s Son)*.kaviya ( dp andShamishta’s Daughter, sahil’s Younger Sister, sanskar And ragni’s Cousin)
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shall I continue or not

17 comments

  1. Kat

    Confused…please check spelling mistakes and also pls give some gaps b/w Every sentence

  2. Kumu

    Nice but little bit confusing..give gaps between sentences and write in little separate paragraphs as it will be easy for the readers..continue soon..

  3. Mars

    Mars

    |Registered Member

    Amazing dear. I just want to suggest you that concentrate on lead character then it won’t be confusing.
    Continue soon……waiting
    Thanks
    Take care

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