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SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I CHAPTER 48

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SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
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SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I CHAPTER 47


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Swara challenging Sanskaar

CHAPTER 48
Swara began storming ,still seething.
Sanskaar’s voice checked her.
Sanskaar : I was not wrong, Swara! You want me as much as I want you. The kiss proved that. I could sense your desire… This is not love. When are you going to accept that?
Swara stopped and turned half smiling.
Swara : Sanskaar! Ek baat bolun?
Sanskaar (warily nodding) : Yes?
Swara (coming closer to Sanskaar) : If you really want to hurt me, Why don’t you try telling lies properly? (seeing Sanskaar’s look) I don’t know if it’s because you’re such a poor liar or if it’s because I love you so much. But it’s no use lying to me. It doesn’t work.
Sanskaar (angry) : That’s enough Swara! Stop telling me you love me. IT’S NOT TRUE!
Swara (shouting) : IT ISN’T? HOW DO YOU KNOW?
Sanskaar : Because I DON’T DESERVE THE LOVE!
Swara stopped, shocked. He doesn’t deserve it? What did he mean?
Sanskaar (his voice soft, a touch of desperation) : Just hate me. It will make it easier for you. We can live our lives separately. Have a perfect society marriage. We can have a son……
Swara (furious) : SHUT UP! Society marriage? Have children, Be civil with each other, have a sham marriage… That’s it?
Sanskaar turned away from her and recoiled. He hated the idea of that kind of marriage… But that’s what would happen. He WOULD make sure of that.
Swara : You know, The day you came to Kolkata from Darjeeling, you told me that we would have a marriage filled with respect and friendship. That I would be a good bahu. And though, I loved you even then, I agreed. Because I thought that we would have a happy marriage. Aaj I realised that you LIED to me. You’ve been lying since day 1. Friendship and respect it seems. Trust toh hai hi nahi, Toh respect kahan se aaega? Lied about our life, lied about my future, lies… Lies… LIES!
Sanskaar stared at her from the side of his eyes. She seemed exhausted. In barely one day of marriage he had reduced her into exhaustion.
Suddenly Sanskaar couldn’t bear it! He had to GET OUT OF THERE… He was suffocating in this house. With Swara’s confessions, their arguments, their feelings… He couldn’t stand it!
Sanskaar (muttering) : I have to go…

Swara : One last thing.
Sanskaar paused, but didn’t look at her.
Swara (moving to face him) : Try and make me hate you all you want. It won’t make me stop loving you. I don’t remember if I have told you this… So listen. I can NEVER stop loving you. Hate is just love gone bad! Hate doesn’t mean I won’t worry about you. It doesn’t mean that our marriage will become a sham one. THE REAL OPPOSITE OF LOVE IS APATHY. Jaante ho apathy ka matlab? It means Not caring about that person. It means that you don’t give a DAMN about that person.
Sanskaar raised his eyes to look at her.
Swara : Nothing you say can make me hate you. But, Even if you succeed, Just know that I will still be in love with you. As for making me not care about you anymore, Don’t even think of that. This love has become an integral part of me now. It’s like if I can’t love you, Swara is NOT THERE. SHE IS DEAD!
Sanskaar was besides her in an instant, his hand over her mouth.
Sanskaar (fiercely) : I don’t want to EVER MENTION about your death.
Swara (whispering from beneath his hand, her eyes boring into his) : Why? Why should it affect you?
Sanskaar (removing his hand ) : Because you are a Maheshwari.. And I have certain duties because of that. Including hoping that you be alright.
Swara’s eyes clouded with disappointment. She moved away from him and gestured for him to go. He looked at her like he wanted to tell something, but at the last minute, let it go. He left, both of them hurting.. Both of them shielding their fears.
Swara moved shakily to the bed post and stumbled and sat down. Why was this even happening?
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
She got up and walked around the room slowly. She remembered their first date, their karaoke… And the tears slowly fell. Try as she did, She couldn’t stop it.
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

Meanwhile Sanskaar took the car and left. He felt like killing himself. It was torture being like this with Swara! He stopped the car at a corner and got out. He just stared at the moving cars and other vehicles going at top speed. As he stared, a couple on the opposite end of the road caught his eye. They were laughing and buying ice cream from a vendor on the street. He averted his eyes at the sight. The fierce longing to bring Swara here jolted him and he got into the car and moved away, a single tear escaping.
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
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3 DAYS LATER
Swara and Sanskaar were not talking to each other. Swara did not like this and did her best to engage him in conversation but he simply ignored her. It was like talking to a wall.
Swara was out of her mind. She had taunted him, done everything she could to make him talk. She had even tried the cold shoulder with him, but it seemed to work too well.
Swara : At this rate, We will be the couple who have nothing to say to each other.
She was in her studio, well her work place, but it sounded cooler to call it studio. She had cleaned out a room in the house for her projects and so that she could have a quiet place to sit and draw. No one was allowed inside without her permission.
She sat there drawing when suddenly, a voice burst out.
Sanskaar : SWARA MAHESHWARI!
Swara chuckled. Fed up of their behaviour, She had taken measures into her own hands and had done something.
She could hear Sanskaar walking out from their room. Swara had decided to adopt a new attitude. She patiently waited for him as he stomped through the long corridor. She winced. He was really angry.

Swara (unfeelingly) : Good! He deserves it.
Sanskaar placed a hand on the knob of the door but it didn’t open.
Sanskaar (shouting) : SWARA! Open this door at once.
Swara took her time. Sanskaar could see her silhouette walking towards him, SLOWLY. He pounded on the door.
Sanskaar : SWARA! blo*dy, I KNOW you can walk faster than that.
Swara opened the door finally and walked out, immediately closing the door behind her. She didn’t want him to look at anything inside.
Swara (bored) : Yes?
Sanskaar’s eyes bulged out. What was this girl up to? He held up his right hand in which he was holding something. Swara saw it and burst out laughing.
Sanskaar (really angry now) : Do you know that I have a very important meeting in an hour?
Swara (in an impressed voice) : I know. With the Luthra Group of Industries na? I’m impressed. My husband is SO smart. He has got the LUTHRA GROUP to do business with him. I’m proud of you, Baby!
Sanskaar : Are you mocking me?
Swara (with round eyes) : Mock? you? Why would I?
Sanskaar : Toh phir yeh kya hai?
Swara stared at Sanskaar’s ties all tangled up together and forming a huge jumbled mess and began laughing again.
Swara : Wow… It’s a huge mess, isn’t it?
Sanskaar (sarcastically) : No, Of course not! It’s only going to take me a second to sort through this blo*dy thing.
Swara : Well, Good for you then! All the best, Mr Maheshwari.
She opened the door knob to enter her studio again, but Sanskaar caught her free hand and pulled it. She twisted around and neatly fell on Sanskaar’s chest. She looked up into his eyes and melted. She wanted tobe like that forever.

But, Sanskaar pulled her away from his chest but held her firmly.
Swara : you’re hurting me. Leave me!
Sanskaar (annoyed) : I don’t care. You deserve to be shaken in my opinion.
Swara (indignantly) : Well, In my opinion…
Sanskaar : Enough. I don’t have time for this. Why did you do this?
Swara : Mr Maheswari, How do you know I did this?
Sanskaar rolled his eyes, frustrated.
Sanskaar : Swara! I don’t have time for games. Now untangle this mess for me.
Swara : Your mess, You do it. I have nothing to do with this. Anyways, Why should I do your dirty work? Who am I to you?
Sanskaar : Goddamn it… You’re my wife.
Swara (disbelievingly) : Wife? Suddenly, How did I become your wife? I thought I was the person who was madly in love with you. And to whom, you’re lying. Lying every day, every hour, every minute and every second.
Sanskaar left Swara and walked away. She smiled triumphantly. She waited as Sanskaar borrowed Adarsh’s tie and went downstairs. She watched him go out the door.
Swara (muttering) : 1…. 2…. 3….
Sanskaar (shouting) : SWARA MAHESHWARI!
Swara began laughing and hurried down. Sanskaar was going to be livid with her. She COULDN’T wait.
Sanskaar was staring open-mouthed at his car. Swara ran out and stood next to him.
Swara (feigning innocence) : Yes Patidev?
Sanskaar snorted.. Whether it was with rage or disbelief he didn’t know himself. He pointed towards the car.
Sanskaar : Puncturing my tires? That too, all of them? ARE YOU NUTS, WOMAN?
Swara (surprised) : I’m sure I’m not nuts. If I’m nuts, Wouldn’t squirrels be here by now?
Sanskaar : Haan sure… Mock me. Who cares if the Luthra Group cancels their deal with me? It would only be a loss of few thousand crores. Nothing much.
Swara : Awesome!

Sanskaar : No… NOT AWESOME SWARA! This is not funny. You can’t AFFECT MY BUSINESS! This is all your fault. Mom and Badi Ma have taken the driver and the spare car. Adarsh and Laksh have theirs. Stupid Laksh.. Who asked him to take his car to Darjeeling?
Swara : First of all, Don’t call MY best friend stupid. He’s way better than you. Second, How is this my fault?
Sanskaar : Why did you puncture the tyres?
Swara (her eyes twinkling) : It’s really fun. You should try it sometime. The hissing noise it makes… Wow.. There’s nothing like it. Try karoge na?
Sanskaar : Swara Maheshwari! What the hell is wrong with you? How could you jeopardise my deal?
Swara’s eyes became serious in an instant.
Swara (quietly) : Don’t you dare talk to me about jeopardising, Mr Maheshwari. You don’t have the right anymore. You PLAYED with my life. You are PLAYING with my life. It has come to a standstill. I can neither forget you… Nor will you allow me to be yours. So don’t you dare talk about jeopardising.
Sanskaar (hating the words that were about to come out of his mouth) : It doesn’t have to be so bad, Swara! I told you… We can have a lovely marriage. One that doesn’t involve feelings, One that doesn’t have complications. 2 children will be enough for you na?
Swara (going red at his words) : Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari! SHUT YOUR blo*dy MOUTH BEFORE I PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE.
Sanskaar became silent.
Swara : What has happened to you? I thought you were the best person in the world. I never thought that I would come to like you. But I did. I liked you, Then I loved you. I love you, not loved. But why did you change? How can you let your past affect our future? Do you seriously not care one bit for me?
Sanskaar wanted to kneel down immediately and beg for her forgiveness. He wanted to tell her just how much he loved her and his true intentions.
Sanskaar : I told you, I don’t care about you. I only want you. I want you really bad!
Swara (disgusted) : Believe your lie all you want. I know what’s the truth. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have a drawing to complete. And you… You have 35 minutes left for your meeting. And by the way, I will tell you one thing.
Sanskaar waited.
Swara : You know the Bade Papa for whom you’re doing all this? If I’m not wrong about him, I’m pretty sure he would be disappointed in you if he saw you today.
Sanskaar watched her blankly as she entered the house.
Sanskaar : Is this true? Will Bade Papa really hate me for this?
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Guys, I’m really sorry! I don’t know if the spark is here or not. I have done my best with this. If it is missing again, I wil bring it back soon…
And I’m really really not good with this hate track which is why I think it’s not nice anymore… So sorry for that again..
Please do help me..
I need an idea where Sanskaar really manages to hurt Swara!
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Initially, I was planning to post my 50th episode today, being a special day. But I couldn’t 🙁 🙁
Anyways, 48 is also a nice number and I’m completely stumped that I will actually reach 50 episodes. 😮 😮
Well, I know it’s not much of a gift… But it is my birthday and I wanted to post a chapter today. Even if it sucks.
And I really want gifts from you all 😛 😛
Very selfish and narcisstic I know… But can’t help it.
As my gift, Please all of you… Including my silent readers.. Please do comment! And give me suggestions… Thnxxx <3 <3
Love you!!!!
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161 Comments
  1. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! hope u have a rocking day;) 😉
    n today,s post was also really good.hmm… even im in thoughts, yeh swara mein bohut dam hain.keep posting n again, a very happy vaala birthday;)

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Shria 😀 😀
      I had a really good time 🙂 🙂

      Glad u liked it…

  2. Sweetie

    Hi beti..Happy B’day dear..May God fulfill all your wishes..?So here’s your gift..???????????
    Episode is awesome as always.. 🙂 Stay blessed and be happy.. 😀

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Sweetie 😀 😀

      Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂

      LOVE UR GIFT <3 <3 <3

  3. Happy birthday di…wish u a blissful day. .the story was also good

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Priyanshi 🙂 🙂

      glad you liked it 😀 😀

  4. Hey Anjali…. i am a very big fan of your writing. I am a silent reader and haven’t commented in any of your chapters….Infact i have read many many ffs but still i haven’t commented in any of them. But today i wanted to comment as i wanted to wish you a very very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I used to read a lot of ffs during the November time and all… but due to boards i had to quit reading ffs and when i continued after my boards, i lost the interest i had… that was when i read an analysis of the top 10 ffs… in that yours was the first one (yipee!!) and i thought to give it a try… i think by the time i started reading your ff you had completed 42 episodes or so… i liked it and read it in one go… since then i have become your very big fan. When i read one of your comments saying that you live in Chennai… i was happy as even i am from Chennai… i became even more happier when you said you are studying in srm… as even i am going to join that college only but not your campus… i am joining the other one (sigh!) But no issues… hope to meet you some day! ;P And yeah… i have always wanted to comment… but something or the other would’ve stopped me… i wanted to say that day itself… even we have that Appalam breaking tradition in my family… actually i think many tamil families have that tradition. So FINALLY i have commented for the first time!! I am very eager to know your reaction when you read my comment… Once again a very Happy b’day Anju di!! May all your wishes come true 🙂

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Achu 😀 😀
      Glad you came and commented!!!

      And thnxx for ur wishes 😀 😀
      Mine the first?? 😮 😮 wow…

      Yayy… Ur also in chennai…. And srm wow… which campus?? Ramapuram??

      Yeah… I love the appalam breaking thing…

      I actually read ur comment yesterday but by the time i came to this page it was 2 and i was soooo sleepy…

      Sorry for the late reply 🙁 🙁

      I am really happy to meet you….. A new friendd 😀 😀 😀

      1. No sorry and all Anju!! (Can I call you like that?)… I am actually happy that you commented back 😀
        And yeah ramapuram only… I thought of taking kattankulathur only… but you know it’s quite far away from my house… It might take some 1&1/2 hours or more to reach there… so I thought this campus is convenient.
        Can I ask you a question? Are you a hostelier? Or a day scholar? (You don’t need to answer if you think it’s personal di… just wanted to ask you… that’s it)
        And yeah I am looking forward to meet you someday soon… as I am your very big fan 😀

  5. Isabel

    Wish you a very good Happy Birthday, may God shower his blessings upon you always..

    The chapter was nice and amazing, waiting for your updates..

    Keep smiling 🙂

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Isabel 😀 😀
      Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. 1st of all wish u a very happy birthday??? may all ur wishes come true ??
    Today’s epi was fab, amazing, loved it❤❤❤ but can’t see swara in so much pain?

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Ariba!! 😀 😀
      Glad you loved it…
      <3 <3 <3 <3

  7. Mindblowing chappy…
    Happy Birthday dear….
    The spark was very much there…
    Loved it..
    Post PKDH plz…
    Waiting for it..
    Gift de diya na , ab chalo treat do..
    Love u…

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxxx Needhi 😀 😀
      Glad you loved it 🙂 🙂 🙂

      Will post pkdh soon 🙂 🙂

      LOVE YOU!!!!! <3 <3 <3

  8. hey happy birthday dear I m silent reader but as it’s your birthday I thought of commenting ….
    well about your ffs I love them don’t make sanskar hurt swara instead u can make sanskat realise what his badepapa really did ….he lived and enjoyed with his loved once… he gave his family members memories and make sanskar create memories….

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Jaya 😀 😀

      Glad you came and commented… And that too, Just for my bday <3 <3 So sweet of you… And don't worry… Will soon unite them

      And am really happy you love my ffs… 😀 😀

  9. oh no anji i m late!!!ur bday??????????????????????

    happy bday to u happy bday to u
    happy bday dear anji happy bday to u
    la la la la la laaaaaaaa

    happy bday jalssu…….??????

    arey wah swara nice pranks….i loved it….
    and then the bade papa taunt at last!!!wuhu……….
    nailed it jaan……….

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Angel 😀 😀

      And don’t worry about being late 😛 😛 😛

      Glad you loved it
      LOVE YOU!!!! <3 <3 <3

  10. Jiya

    Many many happy returns of the day Anju!
    And thanks for this treat. Awsm chappy but I’m too sad to see swasan fighting specially sanky doing this shit

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Jiya 😀 😀
      Glad you liked it… 🙂 🙂
      Don’t worry… Will change it soon…

  11. Neha_priya

    Anju…….a very pleasant Happy Birthday my dear behna… I’m not liking this hate track much but fierce swara is nice….. I liked her attitude……. I just want to punch sanskar here……. God this man is a total blunder…
    What he’s doing…. Seriously spoiling his own marriage and breaking his love…. Good swara well said…. Yes his bade Papa would be hating him for this….. Seriously feeling pity on swara….. I know sanskar is also in pain but that psycho has chosen it for himself…..

    Anju it’s your birthday….. So good wishes for ur big day…. But plzz yeh hate track its just spoiling my mood especially that ?psycho ?

    Love you babes …tc and enjoy ✨??????✨
    ????????
    ????????
    ????????
    Party Time!

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Neha 😀 😀
      Glad you like Swara!!1 <3 <3 <3

      Will change the track soon.. And psycho :'( :'( :'(

      Love you!!!1 <3 <3 <3 😀 😀

  12. Nisha_Anu

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I wont say much as I’ve already submitted a surprise for you. An OS/Imagine for my pyaari sister. I love Pyar ka Pain. ??
    And I want Swara and Sanskar to be SWASAN soon. Chappy 50 tak please, okay? Consider it as a return gift!!

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Nishu <3 <3 <3

      I ABSOLUTELY LOVED UR SURPRISE <3 <3 😀 😀 😀 😀

      And yeah, I'll bring them back 🙂 🙂 🙂

  13. Many many happy returns of the day angel….. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU… ???
    God bless u with all the happiness,success and good health…. Loads of love…. ??

    And the chappy was amazing…… I m loving this strong side of swara…..
    And 2more chapters and they will be one for forever…. ??

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Dii <3 <3

      glad you liked it…. And will def bring them both together 😀 😀

  14. Happy birthday Anju. God bless you with lods of happiness?????

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxxx Dhara dii 😀 😀

  15. Happy birthday dear be happy & keep everyone happy. Don’t forget to celebrate ur next bday also as a writer in tu pls.

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Vamwolfan 😀 😀
      Glad you liked it…

      lol… I hope I’l be here next year as well <3 <3

  16. Fanficoholic

    Happy bday to u. Happy bday to u. Happy bday my dear anju di. Happy bday to u.??????????????????????????
    Di if u wld hav tld me itz ur bday tday i wld hav done smethng spl. I am really sad that i cld nt do anything spl fr u. ??????????

    And di the chappy was good. More than praising the chappy i want to tell u smethng. Daily i hav college frm 8 to 6. From 6:30 to 8:30 i have maths tuition. Frm 9 to 11 i complate my homework and read the syallabus tld on that day. Sometyms that 11 may become 11:30 r even 12. And i hav exam on sat and sun. In this busy schedule of mine my stress busters are these ffs. They reduce my stress so much. The stress of maintaning my first rank, the stress of getting good marks etc. make me really tired and exhausted. And i want to whole heartedly thank u all di fr writing such amazing ffs.

    And di may be i cant post long comments frm nw on. Bt def i wll try and comment in every epi.

    Love u loads di.
    ???????????

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx vaishu!!!!!

      And I don’t want anything spl from you…. Ur comment is enough <3 <3 <3

      And ur sooooo sweet 😀 😀
      I'm soooo glad i m helping you in ur busy busy life…..

      I can't believe you have homework… In coll… but its junior college na??

      And dont worry about the length of the comments… Uk i dont care about that <3 <3 <3 <3

      LOVE YOU!!!!!

  17. RUPA

    Happy Wala B’day Anjali di? ?? ? ??

    Have a blast dea…..

    And coming to chappie it was not at all boring.

    Love u more?????

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Rupa!!!! 😀 😀 😀

      Glad you liked it…. 🙂 🙂

      LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3 <3

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx aanya 😀 😀

  18. SHAN

    Awesome….. Happy birthday anjali…. ?

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Shan… 😀 😀

  19. Anjali30

    GUYS… Sorry… will reply to ur comments tom….

    THNXXX ALL OF YOU!!! <3 <3
    Love your wishes <3 😀 😀

  20. happy birthday……..dear

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Sanji 😀 😀 😀

  21. Tvisha

    Awesome and sorry for the late comment!!!

    happy birthday to you<3<3

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Tvisha!!! 😀 😀 😀

      Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂

  22. First of all, Happy birthday tooo u…??
    I am really sorry for not commenting on few of ur episodes….
    I really dont hav time 4 anything and even i am not able to watch swaragini?
    The epi was awesome as always

    Luv u and may u live long
    ????

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Juan!!! Gladd you liked it… 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

      And don’t tell sorry ,3 <3

      LOVE YOU!!!!! 🙂 🙂

  23. belated happy bday….n d emotions u r portraying is awesome

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Tani…. Glad you like my portayal 🙂 🙂

  24. Dhara

    Hi Anjali, I have posted my ff “Swara’s Arranged Love”. Don’t know when it will appear on TU. I have written something. Don’t know how’s it. I am really nervous. 🙂

    1. Anjali30

      I saw it Dhara dii…. It’s really fab 😀 😀 😀

  25. Happiest bday anju!!!!!! I know i am really late but happy bfay and u rocked it like always!!!! Pls post next part asap!???? love u loads

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Pravalika 😀 😀 😀
      Don’t worry about being late or whatever…

      Will post soon 🙂 🙂

      LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3

  26. Hey Anjali! First of all a very happy belated birthday???
    Many happy returns of the day and may all ur wishes come true like getting a husband like Sanskar or VK?

    Oh no! Bad news is that m still stuck up on chapter 25! And won’t be able to read more too as my exams are knocking on my door!
    But after that I promise to finish the rest and comment on ur ff daily?

    Till then ciao! Lots of love and giant panda hugs?

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxxxx Nupur <3 <3
      SANSKAAR 😀 😀 😀

      Don't worry… You'll eventually come to the end…

      Chill… 🙂 🙂 🙂
      ALL THE BEST!!!1

      LOVE YOU * Hugs you back *

  27. Rain_Lightwood

    Anjuuuuu I’m extremely sorry I’m late.

    First of all: HAPPY BELATED B’DAY GIRL. WHOA UR A YEAR OLDER? I must be sounding like those aunties who go around saying “Oh my god! Ur a year older” but a modernised Aunty I guess? Well I assure u I’m a teenager.

    Second: HOW THE HELL DO U WRITE SO WELL??????????????????????????????? I looooved the epi esp the last part! Let Sanskar think up a bit. I want him to think if what he’s doing is really right. If his Bade Papa wud be happy seeing him like this.

    Thirdly: Ideas:- instead if lust and all maybe Sanskar can hit at her weaknesses to really hurt her. Like now she’s so used to hearing him go on about his so called lust I’m sure she’s turning deaf to that horseshit. But he still hasn’t hit at her weak points. Like he’s tried but it hasn’t affected her. So make him say something that will really hurt her. For ex: I’ve been bullied a lot about my weight. Now I’m just deaf to it. But if someone calls me a lier or a disloyal person or a backstabbing person then I’ll really feel hurt coz I’m not. In fact I’ve never said a major lie till date so if anyone says that to me I’ll feel hurt Na. So do something like that for Swara and Sanskar. Don’t make Sanskar say the things he’s said like a 100 times but something he deliberately says to hurt her and maybe he shud do it in front of a crowd to hurt her even more. I’m just telling it to u through my point of view. Like what I feel hurt about. I’m sure u have MUCH MUCH BETTER IDEAS IN TNAT GENIUS BRAIN OF URS.

    Lastly: I miss Laksh ??? and pls add some Zozo scenes Na pls?

    Hey did u see our swasan uniting? IT WAS SOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Swasan rocked it. Kaash Sahil had just died when Swara shoved him.

    Mahabharata likhna chaahati thi par yaar kya karu I cud only type one scene from Shakespeare’s plays. Agli baar I promise I’ll type a Mahabharata comment.

    Hope u enjoyed ur b’day❤️❤️

    Love,
    Rain

    1. Rain_Lightwood

      And for ideas, adding to it,maybe the hurting stuff can be the last straw for Swara and she maybe decides to confront him and tackle him to get him to spill the damned beans out of the bag.

    2. Anjali30

      Lol… I’m 19 now <3 <3 <3 😀 😀 😀

      And aww… Thnxxxx Glad you liked it…. Well… loved it…

      As for the idea, I do have something planned…. But will think about ur idea as well, Let's see what happens.. uk im very unpredictable na.. 😛 😛

      But thnxxx sooo much for thinking about mmai and helping me…

      And u dont like thnxx so Love you!!!! <3 <3

      1. Rain_Lightwood

        Awww love u too❤️❤️❤️

  28. RANdomfANCreationz

    First of all happy birthday to u and wow I loved the change in swara good way of replying to sanky I also feel very bad for sanky poor swasan, but I know all will be fine soon 🙂

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Fatarajao <3 <3 <3

      Yupp… IT will all be fine soon 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  29. Hey Anjali.. I m gr8 fan of ur writing.. From ff to one shots I’ve each one n loved all of them.. I m silent reader n m first time cmmnting on any of the ffs.. I wait for episodes eagerly.. N yes though a bit late belated Happy Birthday dear.. Stay blssd always.. N yes plz upload d nxt episode soon..

    Eagerly waiting.. Love u loads.. ?

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Shalini :D:D
      Glad you commented <3 <3 <3
      Am really happy u love my work 🙂 🙂
      Will def upload soon…

  30. Mica

    happy belated b’day anjali…wish the best for your life..
    your ff so enjoyable to read, really like it.
    btw, i’m so blind on hindi language, can you please give any translation toward your hindi sentence (except the lyric of songs, i can find out the translation easily on google) thank you soo much anjali…. your ff made my day.

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Mica….

      Glad you like it 😀 😀
      Will def give translation from now on if i use Hindi… 😀 😀

      And ur day 😮 😮
      That’s really <3 <3 to hear!!! 😀 😀

      1. Mica

        waaaaaaaa….. ty soo much then, can’t wait to read next episode xoxo

  31. Ugh… anjali ur bday… I’m very sorry for late… anways “Belated Birthday Wishes dear..” hmm… Iniya Pirinthanal vazhthukal… 🙂 🙂

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Nive 😀 😀

      Don’t worry about being late 😀 😀

  32. Naaz21

    Nice epiii

    1. Anjali30

      Thnxxx Naaz 😀 😀 😀

  33. Where is the next update di , i m missing it sooooooooo much and missing u too …. ????

    And where is ur bday cake …. i want to eat it …. ???? ???????? ????

  34. […] back with the next chapter!!! Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers…. HAVE FUN!!! Chapter 48 I realise some of you might be finding it hard to find the chapters among the million million […]

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