SWASAN โ€“ MR MAHESHWARI AND I CHAPTER 46

SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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chapter 45
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Wedding Special Part 2
CHAPTER 46
Uttara : Swara bhabhi! From today, This will be your room as well.
Swara blushed.
Uttara : Can I ask you something Swara?
Swara : Haan Uttara! Bol!
Uttara (teasing) : Why are you blushing today? You’ve come to his room so many times. In fact you even slept on his shoulder once, then why blush now? Is it because….. of the…. first night?
Swara (blushing crimson, a bit shocked) : UTTARA! Kuch bhi…
She entered the room and closed the door. A laughing Uttara called her once again.
Uttara : Arre… Meri bhai ki patni… Enjoy your first night… I want all details tomorrow.
Swara : UTTARA ki bacchi.. I will kill you. LEAVE….
Uttara went away snorting with laughter. Swara smiled goofily and looked round the room. Sanskaar’s room…. She couldn’t believe that she was going to be here from now on.
Swara Gadodia had been a simple girl. Swara Maheshwari was the wife of one of the most powerful and intelligent businessman in India!
Swara Gadodia was not beautiful. Swara Maheshwari believed that her husband thought her beautiful.
Swara Gadodia never expected to fall in love. She was supposed to be a spinster forever. Swara Maheshwari fell in love and now….
Now she was married to the man she loved.
She smiled.
Swara : Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…. I think you’re going to be very happy from now on.
She moved and stood in front of the mirror. Swara touched her mangalsutra and saw her sindoor in wonder.
Swara (thinking) : I am actually married. It’s a miracle…. A medical miracle as Ragini would say.
She sighed thinking about Ragini and Ma… Last night had been so nice. Ragini, Sakshi and she had stayed up most of the night with their mother and spoken about so many things. Funny memories of when they were little, memories of Papa, School, college, their small but cozy home in their town.
Swara (thinking) : How will I ever live without Ma and Ragini right beside me? Who will advise me? Will I ever feel like home here?
She thought of Badi Ma, mom, Adarsh, Laksh and smiled.
Swara (thinking) : How will I not feel at home here? Everyone here cares for me…. Love me… Even Sanskaar…
She stopped. A dull ache grew in her heart again. Her mind went back to when Sanskaar told her I don’t love you.
Swara (pushing away the thought, thinking fiercely) : It doesn’t matter. You cannot think about that now. You have to first bring back the old Sanskaar. Then you can think about making him fall in love with you..
She nodded her head and went to her suitcase.
Swara : Saree? Salwar? Nightsuit? What the hell should I wear? Oh God… Why am I feeling so nervous? Swara, Stop thinking so much, choose something at random and go.
She chose something and went to the washroom to freshen up and change. After about 10 minutes, she came out of the washroom wearing a simple dark blue saree. Her hair was left open but she still had to remove her jewelry, though she had already removed her bangles.
But when she came out, she saw Sanskaar sitting on the sofa, his turban undone and his hair messed up. Looking at his hair, Swara felt the utmost need to tousle it and run her fingers through the soft silky mass. But all she did was smile at him…
Swara (somewhat awkwardly) : Sanskaar!
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Sanskaar looked up and saw Swara. His Swara in a dark blue saree.. very simple after her wedding dress. She was smiling now…. but in a few minutes from now….
Swara : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar started and focused on her. He smiled slightly and got up. They both stood awkwardly for some time.
Swara : Umm.. I’ll just go remove these (Gesturing to her jewelry)
Sanskaar nodded. Swara went and sat in front of the dressing table. Sanskaar pulled another chair and sat besides her.
Swara : Kya?
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : Kuch nahi. Kyun… I can’t sit here?
Swara (chuckling) : No… Of course you can!
They grew silent again as she began removing her earrings, necklace. Finally, the only jewelry she had on was her engagement ring and mangalsutra.
Sanskaar (smiling) : Both indicating that she is mine… (smile fading) But for how long?
Sanskaar : Swara….
Swara : hmm?
Sanskaar hit his head mentally. He had not meant to tell anything now. He wanted to avoid this conversation as long as possible.
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara : Haan? Bolo na?
Sanskaar : Er… er.. I will make space in that cupboard there. You can keep your things there.. I will move my suits and all.
Swara : It’s ok Sanskaar! I will do it myself tomorrow.
Sanskaar : Nahi, I’ll do it now na…
Swara : Arre.. Par.. You will be tired. Let me just do it tomorrow na..
Sanskaar (glaring at her) : Why are you behaving like a typical wife? Always doing everything…
Swara (glaring back) : Typical kisko kaha? I am not typical at any cost.. Understood?
Sanskaar : Swara, Why are you nagging me?
Swara (mouth dropping in shock) : I, nagging you?
Sanskaar (Crossing his arms, smirking) : Yes?
Swara : Sanskaar… When did I nag you? You’re the one troubling me…
Sanskaar : Kaisi patni ho tum… Fighting with me already?
Swara : Accha ji? Aur aap? What are you doing?
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara : Sanskaar!
Laksh (from outside) : Offo! Even now you both are fighting? Arre, thoda romance toh karo.. .Yeh kya hai?
Swara (exasperated) : LAKSH? Why the hell are you eavesdropping? Leaveee… NOW…
Laksh (amused) : I am ready to go Swara! But the newest member of our household is very anxious to meet you.
Swara (confused) : Newest member?
WOOF was her answer.
Swara’s eyes lit up just as Sanskaar’s drooped.
Sanskaar (groaning) : Is that
Swara (excitedly) : ZOZO!!!!!
She ran and opened the door and saw her scottie in Laksh’s arms. But he immediately jumped down and went to Swara as soon as he saw her. She knelt down and picked him up.
Swara (hugging Zozo tightly) : I missed you so much. Who asked you to go to the farm for so many days? You were supposed to go for 3 days… You went for an entire 8 days. Bad boy Zozo.. Bad bad boy…
She hit him lightly on his back. Zozo yelped reproachfully and whined at her.
Swara : Accha baba! Good boy Zozo…Good good boy… I love you!
Sanskaar : That monster is going to live here?
Swara (glaring) : He’s not a monster. Shut up Sanskaar… You come inside baby!
She pushed Zozo inside then hugged Laksh.
Swara : Thank you… who brought him here?
Laksh (the pleasure in his eyes dimming) : Ragini.. Someone had brought him back from the farm to Gadodia Nivas. But Zozo was really restless there and you know Sumi aunty.
Swara rolled her eyes. She did know her mother.
Swara : Jo bhi ho… My Zozo’s hereee….. YAYYYYY!
Laksh (teasing softly so that Sanskaar wouldn’t hear) : Swara! Vaise, Saare kissies Zozo ko mat do… Thoda Sanskaar ke liye bhi bacha lo…
Swara blushed hard and glared at him.
Swara : Besharam… Go now. BYE!
She slammed the door on his face and came and cuddled Zozo again,
Swara : My BABY!!!! I missed you soooooooooo much!
Sanskaar (disgustedly) : You missed this creature?
Swara (cooing at Zozo) : Zozo darling… Dekho na Sanskaar ko.. He’s just angry with you because you splashed water on him once. See, Such a big man is scared of you.
Sanskaar (raising his voice) : I am scared of no one and I am not angry with the dog.
Swara (scowling) : Then WHAT IS your problem? Wait… Are you jealous?
Sanskaar (scoffing) : Why would I be jealous?
Swara : Kyunki I looooove my Zozo… He’s so cute.. I love cuddling him. And he will never do anything to me.
Sanskaar : Haan toh?
Swara : Toh…
And she stopped. She had been about to say that wouldn’t Sanskaar like her to cuddle him also like that.
Swara (thinking) : Pagal ladki… Can’t even remain quiet!
Swara (thinking) : Toh… You are jealous that he doesn’t love you as much as he does me.
Sanskaar (dismissively) : He loves me.. Everyone loves me.
Swara (raising an eyebrow) : Accha? Zozo.. (pointing towards Sanskaar) GO…
Zozo woofed happily and went for Sanskaar’s ankles. But being a man of fast thinking, Sanskaar moved aside and began running around the room.
Sanskaar (glaring at a laughing Swara while trying to evade Zozo) : Swara! i’ll get you for this. How could you? Pagal ho kya? God… I shouldn’t have married you. Jeenna mushkil kardogi tum! Uff.. You cur! STOP!
He stopped running and turned to Zozo, A fierce scowl on his face.
Sanskaar : STOP ZOZO!
Zozo stopped and looked at Sanskaar adoringly. Swara stood looking astonished.
Sanskaar (pointing to a far corner) : SIT now.
Zozo obediently trotted off to his spot.
Swara (protesting) : You can’t order my dog like that.
Sanskaar turned to her, A mischevious grin on his face.
Sanskaar : At least, the dog knows who’s in charge.
Swara : You are so not in charge. You… aaaah.. Sanskaar stop chasing me..
She ran around the bed as she tried to avoid getting caught by Sanskaar.
Sanskaar : You can run but you won’t last Swara… See.. I’m almost touching you now.. Swara, I’ve caught you now….. Eeeeughhh UFF.
As he caught Swara, She slipped and fell on the bed and he on top of her. A sharp crackling sound was heard and then sound of muffled laughter from outside. But Swara and Sanskaar couldn’t or rather, didn’t pay attention to it. They were staring at each other. Swara’s soft brown eyes met Sanskaar’s intense ones and automatically their arms moved to entangle themselves.
Swara’s breathing grew shallow and ragged with desire. She could clearly see Sanskaar’s desire in his eyes as well.
Swara (whispering) : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar : Hmm?
Swara : Kiss me…
Sanskaar smiled triumphantly and bent down to kiss Swara. Just as their lips were about to touch, his eyes grew wide and he got up disgusted with himself. Swara too got up confused.
Swara : Sanskaar?
Sanskaar didn’t answer. He was battling withing himself. This was the moment of truth. He couldn’t allow himself to become weak again. Steeling himself, He turned around to look at Swara.
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Swara stared at him, clear confusion in her eyes. She didn’t know what was wrong. Just a few minutes ago, He was so happy to be with her. But now, She could see the reserved expression in his eyes. He was trying to remove all the emotion on his face.
Swara : Sanskaar?
Sanskaar (his voice wooden but clear) : Swara! Do you love me?
Swara’s eyes widened. She hadn’t expected this question at all. Should she allow herself to hope that maybe…
Sanskaar : Swara? Tell me, Do you love me? And I know the truth so you have no need to lie.
Swara straightened herself. Maybe this was all for the best… She had been apprehensive about telling him but if he really knew… Well, Swara Maheshwari (nee Gadodia) was not a coward.
Swara (eyes straightforward) : Yes! I love you Sanskaar… I’ve loved you for a long time now. Ever since Darjeeling.. Maybe even before that, But I realised it then only.
Sanskaar : Why?
Swara (her smile faltering a bit) : I don’t know. I just know that I love you.
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : You made a mistake.
Swara ( a slight fire reaching her eyes) : What do you mean?
Sanskaar : I told you…. It would be a mistake loving me. I don’t love you.
Swara (quietly) : I know. (raising her voice a little) I know you don’t love me Sanskaar… I know you don’t. But still, I love you.
Sanskaar : BUT YOU SHOULDN’T…
Swara (horrified by his attitude) : Sanskaar? What is wrong with you? I love you… That’s my problem.. Why are you bothered?
Sanskaar : Because I CAN NEVER love you Swara!
Swara : I KNOW… You’ve told me that many times. It’s really quite irritating now.
Sanskaar (moving forward and pinning Swara to the wall) : You DON’T understand… I can never love you.
Swara (crying out in pain) : OUCH!!! Why are you being like this? You can never love me fine… Do you love someone else?
Sanskaar didn’t answer.
Swara (now angry) : SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI! Leave me right now.
He left her and turned away. She blinked back the sudden tears that were appearing on her face.
Swara : Sanskaar!
He didn’t turn around to look at her. His eyes were red… He hated every minute of this. But it was done…. Only the catalyst remained.. Then Swara would hate him and he would deserve it.
Swara : I don’t think you love someone else. But.. If you do.. WHY did you marry me? You should have told me.
Sanskaar turned around finally. This was it…
Sanskaar : I married you because I…. I want you Swara.
Swara : Huh?
Sanskaar : I mean that I desire you. I like kissing you. I like the way your desire shows in your eyes when I touch you. I love the chemistry between us. But.. I don’t love you. I want you… but that is not the same as love.
A myriad of emotions crossed Swara’s face. Shock, hopelessness, anger, misery and finally anger again.
Swara : Liar!
Sanskaar’s eyes widened.
Swara : I would never have loved a man who spoke to me like that. I don’t know why you’re doing this, but this is not funny. I love you, right.. You will never love me, I know that. What is your problem, Mr Maheshwari?
He remained silent. Swara came forward and kept a hand on his arm.
Swara (softly) : Please don’t shut me out. Tell me…We can solve it together.
How Sanskaar wanted to take her up on that offer. But the memory of Kavita prevented him. He could not bear to tell her his core belief.
Sanskaar (in a wooden, slightly choking voice) : You heard me.
Swara removed her hand in shock. They stood like that for several minutes, then Swara spoke again frustrated.
Swara : I don’t understand you…. You make me feel like a princess all these days. You make me believe I’m beautiful. You make me believe in myself. Then why do you act like this? It’s like…. It’s like you are TRYING TO MAKE ME HATE YOU.
Sanskaar’s eyes glazed and Swara knew she was right.
Swara (gasping) : Oh My God! Oh My God! I’m right, aren’t I ? You are trying to make me hate you. You don’t want me to love you.
He looked down, silent.
Swara (fire in her eyes) : Mr Maheshwari, LOOK AT ME! I said, Look at me.
He raised his eyes to look at his beautiful angry Goddess. She was literally glowing in her anger. Her nostrils were flared and her mouth was quivering.
At Swara’s shout, Zozo got up and crouched, whining. He ran below the bed and he waited there.
Swara : Listen hard… And listen well, Mr Maheshwari! I love you. You can’t change that. I have seen you… I know what you are.. I couldn’t have made a mistake by loving you.
Sanskaar stared at her in wonder.
Swara : Are you listening? I KNOW THE REAL YOU.. AND THIS IS NOT IT! You are hiding like you’ve always done, like you always will.
Sanskaar’s lips tightened and he held Swara’s arms tightly.
Sanskaar : I am NOT hiding.
Swara : Yes, You are. You have always been hiding. When I first met you, When we argued, when we decided to get married, during our dates, during all the wedding ceremonies… Why , Even now, when we are blo*dy so called husband and wife (Sanskaar flinches at her tone), You are hiding.
Sanskaar (his resolve weakening) : I am NOT!
Swara : Accha? Then tell me what is the matter with you and your Bade papa! Why are you so distant from your family?
Sanskaar (shocked at having all his home truths out) : Swara… STOP IT!
Swara : No! Why should I?
Sanskaar : Swara! That’s enough! I don’t want to talk about this anymore. Just stop loving me. PLEASE… I don’t need your love.
Swara stood silent for a few minutes. Zozo peeked out but then Swara spoke again and he crouched back in.
Swara : Sanskaar! You have told you don’t need my love. Fair enough… Maybe you don’t! But you also have no right to tell me that I can’t love you. You want the whole truth… Here it is.
Sanskaar looked at her devoid of emotion.
Swara : I know you have some big secret that you’re keeping from all of us. I know you are hurting inside. I know that you are keeping yourself apart from everyone. And I know that your secret concerns your Bade Papa! I have tried and tried to make you tell me.. That you could trust me…. But…
She stopped and turned away, blinking back sudden tears. No.. Now was not the time for tears.
Swara : Sanskaar! You are hurting. You have suffered, I get that. WHAT you don’t get is that everyone else also suffers when you suffer. Badi Ma, Mom, your brothers, Uttara, Me for that matter.. We all suffer when we see the guarded look in your eye. We suffer when you are quiet due to your grief. I know you were close to your Bade Papa… But what you don’t understand is that we are close to you as well.
Sanskaar tried to gauge what Swara was saying.
Swara : Please tell me.. What is the matter with you?
Sanskaar remained stony-faced. Swara waited for 2 minutes, then smiled sadly.
Swara : You know what? I thought I had married a man who owned the world, who was so smart and confident. And I did. But he’s also the man who doesn’t love his wife. (Sanskaar closing his eyes in pain) He’s also the man who doesn’t trust his wife. He’s a man who’s hiding from the truth. I married such a man.
She paused, then strode upto Sanskaar, held his arms and made him look at her.
Swara (determinedly) : I am NOT those typical bahus you see in these daily soaps. I am not going to cry and just leave this matter. I am not going to allow you to get away with what you’ve told. Even if you had told that you were in love with someone else, I would have understood… But by saying the ONLY relationship between us is LUST, You have insulted me. You threw my love in my face but that doesn’t stop me from loving you. YOU DON’T GET TO TELL ME WHAT I HAVE TO DO!
Sanskaar opened his mouth to speak, but she cut him off.
Swara : I’m not done, Mr Maheshwari. I think you have forgotten what type of girl I am. I fought the whole society for Ragini. I shouted at a man because he insulted Sakshi. I am very fierce and unstoppable when it comes to someone’s protection. And now.. I will fight with you for my self respect. From today, YOU had better watch out. This is my challenge to you.
She gave a sarcastic laugh.
Swara : After all, We love challenges na.. Continue trying to make me hate you. Continue your pathetic attempts. But ultimately, You will learn what love is. I once told you what it means. Now I will show you what it means. I will punish you.. But I will show you.
She left Sanskaar’s arms and turned around. She began walking to the bed, but stopped and looked at Sanskaar again.
Swara : Mr Maheshwari…. You once told me that I will be a dutiful bahu and a good wife. I will fulfill the first half of you wish. As for the good wife part, Until you take back your words, I won’t be. I am Swara Gadodia still. The day you accept the truth of our relationship and feel like you can trust me, I will be Swara Maheshwari. There is not just lust between us.. And you know that. Now I’m going to bed… Good night! (talking softer) Zozo baby… Bahar aa jao.. I’m sorry I scared you.
She picked up Zozo and they sat on the bed.
Swara : Which side of the bed do you sleep?
Sanskaar was surpised but pointed to the left side. Swara nodded, then went to the left side and slept.
Swara : From today, You sleep in the right.
And huggng Zozo, She closed her eyes.
Sanskaar stared at Swara, her words echoing through his brain. Everything she had said was true. She had understood him so perfectly. But he hadn’t. He loved her… But he didn’t understand the depth of her love.
Finally he smiled.
Sanskaar : Thank you so much Swara for loving me. Thank you… But… I don’t deserve it. I really don’t! Why don’t you understand? I am sooo sorry but… I have to do this.
He went and kneeled next to her sleeping form and held her hand. He placed a feathery light kiss on her hand and came to the other side. He sat back and closed his eyes.
And that was when Swara allowed her tears to fall. She opened her eyes and saw his supposedly sleeping form.
Swara (thinking) : I definitely did not expect this to happen. What the hell happened to you that you cannot accept my love? (fiercely) I will change you. You cannot insult our relationship like that. We have more than lust and you will realise it. I don’t care if you don’t love me. But I will show you how much I love you. Yeh vaada raha!
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan
Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )… (2)
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
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PRECAP : Challenge shuru
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So… This is it… How did you like it??
PLEASE, I WOULD LIKE ALL MY SILENT READERS TO COMMENT FOR THIS CHAPTER… I HAVE TRIED REALLY HARD TO GET BOTH THEIR EMOTIONS’ RIGHT… AND I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW YOUR OPINION.
MY REGULAR COMMENTERS, PLEASE DO TELL ME IF U LIKE THIS TRACK… IT’S GOING TO BE INTENSE AS WELL AS LIGHT. I WANT YOUR OPINION ON WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN.
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And yeah, No Kavita… My pyaari si Zozo is back! Hopefully to help Swara.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Only Radhika suggested Zozo.. But she switched to Kavi.. Still 5 points to her.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
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LOVE YOU ALL!!! WILL BE BACK SOON ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
I will post pkdh within 2 days.. So sorry for the delay there…
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Again, Don’t be angry with my Sanskaar… Poor guy.. His behaviour is perfectly justified. I first thought of bringing another girl for him, like to make Swara jealous.. Then I changed my mind. NO FILMY STUFF ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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166 comments

  1. Pooja26

    Pooja26

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    awwww zozo i love him…….. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    swara told everythig….. baba re…….
    strong grl ha………..

    amazing… chappy…….
    excited for the nxt……..
    post asap……… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    love u dear anji…… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Sueรฑo

    OMG!!!!!!!! My TE s back to d work ah!!!!!!!!! Today’s epi ws EPIC lyk seriously I m jus in awe!!!!?????No words to describe it!!!!!! No offence bt thn in btw I felt tht d charm ws less…… bt nw u r back wid a BANG!!!!!!!!
    It ws totally super paisa wasool epi ah!!!!!!!???
    D teasing of It Uttara n Laksh……. ZOZO’s arrival…… ???????
    D way thr feelings ws expressed ws jus fab……….??? Tooo emotional epi it ws!!!!! Jus excellent………

    Love u……….. ????
    Hope to read ur nxt post soon??????????

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

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      Hey Sueno!!!

      Why offense?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ You ahould have just told me then itself…

      But anyways thnxxxxx <3 <3 ,3
      Glad u loved this…

      Will try to post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3

  3. Hadi

    Hadi

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    loved it anjali hope pagal sanskar will soon realize that its alll of no use n by this he is only giving pain to his love ones … swara !!! love swara bold one thats good what she said about of being gadodia sanskar have some shame hw can he said like that they share a relation of only lust i wanted to slap such persons but hats off to swara that she releized actual motive of sanky n not came into his talks otherwise sanky not left a single loop 4 swara to make her hate him
    anjali u splendidly write it no words to appreciate the way u describe both emotions n feelings n especiallly the last kiss part n the feelings of swara on kiss is just not described in words thanks for such a episode last but not least waiting for next dear

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Hadi!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will fulfill ur wish soooon… ๐Ÿ™‚
      Glad u loved it <3 <3 <3

      Will try to post soon ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. angel

    wow anji….looooooved it soooo much….perfect….wah swara my jhansi ki rani!!!!!zabardast…..ab tau swara hi sanskar ko akal de gi…..go swara go…..aaaaalllll the best anji…..love u looooads????

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      t’hnxx Angel ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Glad u loved it!!!
      lol…

      Love you tooo ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Sha

    Sha

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    U know wat anjali, I almost had tears in my eyes.. I could predict swara’s emotion very well.. I know I can’t hate my sanku, but,each n evry line of swara was like awe!! Totally enjoyed it.. I know I don’t comment often, but I have commented in the beginning of this ff.. Reading from the beginning ,Wat wil happen next my heart beats were fluttering,still it is..

    Eagerly waiting for the next post my HN..

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Hey hb… Good to see u here ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Glad you liked it… Aww…. Don’t cry ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Everything will be alright ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will post soon ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  6. Anu Ann

    Awesome episode dear… I’m very happy to see a strong swara….. …….. ……….. ……. Hope you’ll update next part soon

  7. Harani

    Harani

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    Anjali , I was going through a emotional rollercoaster,wahhh,,how good is your chAppy..sanky,love you man , the toughest part is to let the person you love to hate you .But he is doing it voluntarily…swara ,I wish her to fight more bravely,and make him understand soon,we can’t hold this separation for long ๐Ÿ™
    And zozo,I missed the cutie so much …
    Anju,love you loads .

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      emotional rollercaster…. LOLOL…
      Really?

      Well… Glad you liked it… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Love you tooHarani… <3 <3 <3

  8. Dhara

    Dhara

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    zozo my darling is back. Doggies are venika’s favourite? I knew it sanky will do something to make Swara hate him. But Swara is Swara not any typical girl. Swara will have to fight to make sanky trust him and tell about his fears. Anju (I like this name for u) Swara loves to fight. She will fight for husband with her husband? loved this part.

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      heyy Dhara!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Aww… soo cutte…. I generally don’t like dogs

      Lol… Everyone calls me anju ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Glad u loved this chappie ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. divya

    thankyou so much for not making it a filmy stuff loved the bold, understanding and challenging
    swara gadodia or maheshwari would love to see the challenge part upload soon love u loads tons kgs everything I don’t want to end the comment but wil have to end it it todays chapter was a big turning and new start of two lives loved it ………

  10. Sweetie

    Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Hi Anjali beti..How are you??I thought to comment on 50th chapter of MMAI,but you know my situation right,so commenting now.. ๐Ÿ˜€ And advance congratulations for the 50th chapter my dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Episode is so beautiful,I was so involved in it and I’m praying that this chapter should not end anywhere.. ๐Ÿ˜€ I loved Swara(no abala naari types)..I love girls to be like that and that’s the reason I’m attracted to this FF..Sanskar is such a poor guy,he’s not able to convey his feelings because of the fear he has gone through in Kavitha’s phase..I loved every part of it.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Keep writing such awesome stuff..Stay blessed and be happy yaar.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Love,
    Sweetie.

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Heyy Mummy!!!!

      50th chappie… lolol.. Never thought I will write more than 30…

      Glad u commented here ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      And yeah… am really happy u loved this ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU!!!!! <3 <3

  11. Radhika

    I love today chapter very much as swara confront her emotions in front of sanskar and sanskar character is truely justified
    there is so much things in today’s chapter teasing, fun time, angry, happiness, fight , and swara determination to know the truth
    the challenge part is going to be interested how swara is going to make sanskar realise that he can trust her and make him confess his love
    please di make sanskar realise that he can trust swara and confess his felling asap
    I am very happy because my guess is right but I go with kavita but I am happy that atleast on my 3 guesses there is zozo and I am the only one who guess zozo yippe ….???????? and thanku for giving 5 points ???? love this ff and love u di????????

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Radhika!!

      Yupp 5 points to u.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will fulfill ur wishes jaldiii….

      Glad u love this…

      LOVE YOU TOO!!!! <3 <3 <3

  12. Alishatani

    Alishatani

    |Registered Member

    U r just amazing.. No words to describe you.. Another Shakespeare needs to get birth so that we can use his words to describe your work. U just nailed it.. I luv u to the core and appreciate up work.. Waiting for challenge to start. Update soon. Love u loads
    ??????

  13. Nisha_Anu

    Nisha_Anu

    |Registered Member

    Nice chapter! But still why Sanskar? Im waiting for Pyar Ka Pain hai. ??
    And btw I posted prologue of Anonymous. I would be glad if you read it and lemme know your views! ??

    Love you โคโค

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      will post pkdh soon ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Thnxxx Sis!!!

      Lol… DWEverything will be ok soon ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3

  14. Jiya

    Jiya

    |Registered Member

    Seriously man,how can u do this sanky??
    Plz anju bring back that precious gem that u’ve explained before that loving nd caring one sanky?????
    Unite swasan

  15. JANVI

    hi anjali….
    i am janvi’s sister naira
    actully she was not able to visit this page coz she met with an accident last month nd injured herself very badly
    now she is much better nd whn i visited her she asked to me visit this site to inform you people
    tht she would deffinately read all d ffs as soon as she gets rid of those plasters
    n yup…. she misses u all…
    n specially u anju….. n a small msg specially for u tht she extremly sorry fr nt informing earlier. n luv u.take care

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      WOAH!!! What happened???

      Is she really alright???

      Thnxx Naira for telling me.. Tell her I forgive her ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› and ask her to be careful!!!!

      LOVE YOU!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  16. Anjali30

    Anjali30

    |Author

    Okk… I have seen all ur comments… Love you all for them.. but i am absolutely tooo tired to reply….

    I am sooooo Sorry ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

    I def promise to reply tomorrow.. Pls forgive me ๐Ÿ™

    Thnxxx sooo much!!

  17. Kritika

    Kritika

    |Registered Member

    Awww..it Zozo
    I love him ..
    So sweet of him…
    Wah..loved this swara…
    But don’t make her cry yr..
    Sanskar is dumbo..???
    Doing mazak..
    U also know episode was more than awsm..
    U also knw that I loved it..
    So that’s it..!??

  18. Richa

    Omg anju…I was glued to my phone for complete 20 min..reading each and every line..tears automatically coming out from my eyes..my mother thought what happened to me…
    This chapter is indeed the best one..u displayed the emotions of sanky and swara so beautifully simultaneously… I love you anjali.. How do u manage to write so perfect..
    OK it was Jojo..I was wrong?…but that’s okay…I am glad swara has some old companion.. And yes I love this track..its so intense.. Our Mr.maheshwari couldn’t open him mouth in front of swara?..
    Plz post the next asap…
    Love you sis.. But u did not send me the links of pkdh…in fb???..plz send that?

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Aww… Thnxx Richa!!!

      Glad u liked it ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      well… loved it.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      so sorry to make u cry… Will def send the links to u.. The net’s crappy here ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ But I can send it tom pakka

      Love you tooo!!!1 <3 <3 <3

  19. JANVI

    hey dear..
    now she is much better
    actually she got hit by a car while returning frm skl
    n ya.. i told her tht u forgave her n she was so happy tht she ate the medicines without any drama
    all thanks to u..

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      lol.. She doesn’t llike medicines?? Even I don’t ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      But tell her she HAS to..

  20. โ™ฅpriyuโ™ฅ

    Diii i missed u so much …. sorry for not commenting , situations were wrose …. death of my closet relative cum friend …. leave it ….

    Coming to the twist i thought swara would fall weak but came up like a thunderstorm …. i m shocked …. zozo is so cute …. but i am scared of dogs …. but i like them so much ….

    Missed me or not ha ?? R u on wattpad di …. if u r send me a message my user name is priyuS …. hope u dont mind …. again sorry for not commenting ….

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Sorry to hear about ur relative/friend….

      Be brave!!! โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

      And I was wondering where priyu was…. she had not been active at all….

      Anyways.. glad you liked the epi…. lol… even I don’t generally like dogs… they should be far away then I can admire them…???

      Love you priyu!!!!

  21. Anjali30

    Anjali30

    |Author

    SORRY FOR NOT POSTING THESE FEW DAYS… HAVE BEEN BUSY IN MY RELATIVE’S HOUSE!!! I’ll surely post pkdh or mmai asap ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Pravalika

      Plsssss post asap anju cant wait yaar its just an aweesome episode! I have no words to describe it love ya loads <3

      • Anjali30

        Anjali30

        |Author

        Thnxx Pravalika!! My relatives are actually not allowing me touch my lappy because they feel I don’t spend enough time with them.. But I am writing how much ever I can… Will try to post sooonnnn!!!

        SOO SORRY ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

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