SWASAN โ€“ MR MAHESHWARI AND I CHAPTER 46

SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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chapter 45
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Wedding Special Part 2
CHAPTER 46
Uttara : Swara bhabhi! From today, This will be your room as well.
Swara blushed.
Uttara : Can I ask you something Swara?
Swara : Haan Uttara! Bol!
Uttara (teasing) : Why are you blushing today? You’ve come to his room so many times. In fact you even slept on his shoulder once, then why blush now? Is it because….. of the…. first night?
Swara (blushing crimson, a bit shocked) : UTTARA! Kuch bhi…
She entered the room and closed the door. A laughing Uttara called her once again.
Uttara : Arre… Meri bhai ki patni… Enjoy your first night… I want all details tomorrow.
Swara : UTTARA ki bacchi.. I will kill you. LEAVE….
Uttara went away snorting with laughter. Swara smiled goofily and looked round the room. Sanskaar’s room…. She couldn’t believe that she was going to be here from now on.
Swara Gadodia had been a simple girl. Swara Maheshwari was the wife of one of the most powerful and intelligent businessman in India!
Swara Gadodia was not beautiful. Swara Maheshwari believed that her husband thought her beautiful.
Swara Gadodia never expected to fall in love. She was supposed to be a spinster forever. Swara Maheshwari fell in love and now….
Now she was married to the man she loved.
She smiled.
Swara : Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…. I think you’re going to be very happy from now on.
She moved and stood in front of the mirror. Swara touched her mangalsutra and saw her sindoor in wonder.
Swara (thinking) : I am actually married. It’s a miracle…. A medical miracle as Ragini would say.
She sighed thinking about Ragini and Ma… Last night had been so nice. Ragini, Sakshi and she had stayed up most of the night with their mother and spoken about so many things. Funny memories of when they were little, memories of Papa, School, college, their small but cozy home in their town.
Swara (thinking) : How will I ever live without Ma and Ragini right beside me? Who will advise me? Will I ever feel like home here?
She thought of Badi Ma, mom, Adarsh, Laksh and smiled.
Swara (thinking) : How will I not feel at home here? Everyone here cares for me…. Love me… Even Sanskaar…
She stopped. A dull ache grew in her heart again. Her mind went back to when Sanskaar told her I don’t love you.
Swara (pushing away the thought, thinking fiercely) : It doesn’t matter. You cannot think about that now. You have to first bring back the old Sanskaar. Then you can think about making him fall in love with you..
She nodded her head and went to her suitcase.
Swara : Saree? Salwar? Nightsuit? What the hell should I wear? Oh God… Why am I feeling so nervous? Swara, Stop thinking so much, choose something at random and go.
She chose something and went to the washroom to freshen up and change. After about 10 minutes, she came out of the washroom wearing a simple dark blue saree. Her hair was left open but she still had to remove her jewelry, though she had already removed her bangles.
But when she came out, she saw Sanskaar sitting on the sofa, his turban undone and his hair messed up. Looking at his hair, Swara felt the utmost need to tousle it and run her fingers through the soft silky mass. But all she did was smile at him…
Swara (somewhat awkwardly) : Sanskaar!
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Sanskaar looked up and saw Swara. His Swara in a dark blue saree.. very simple after her wedding dress. She was smiling now…. but in a few minutes from now….
Swara : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar started and focused on her. He smiled slightly and got up. They both stood awkwardly for some time.
Swara : Umm.. I’ll just go remove these (Gesturing to her jewelry)
Sanskaar nodded. Swara went and sat in front of the dressing table. Sanskaar pulled another chair and sat besides her.
Swara : Kya?
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : Kuch nahi. Kyun… I can’t sit here?
Swara (chuckling) : No… Of course you can!
They grew silent again as she began removing her earrings, necklace. Finally, the only jewelry she had on was her engagement ring and mangalsutra.
Sanskaar (smiling) : Both indicating that she is mine… (smile fading) But for how long?
Sanskaar : Swara….
Swara : hmm?
Sanskaar hit his head mentally. He had not meant to tell anything now. He wanted to avoid this conversation as long as possible.
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara : Haan? Bolo na?
Sanskaar : Er… er.. I will make space in that cupboard there. You can keep your things there.. I will move my suits and all.
Swara : It’s ok Sanskaar! I will do it myself tomorrow.
Sanskaar : Nahi, I’ll do it now na…
Swara : Arre.. Par.. You will be tired. Let me just do it tomorrow na..
Sanskaar (glaring at her) : Why are you behaving like a typical wife? Always doing everything…
Swara (glaring back) : Typical kisko kaha? I am not typical at any cost.. Understood?
Sanskaar : Swara, Why are you nagging me?
Swara (mouth dropping in shock) : I, nagging you?
Sanskaar (Crossing his arms, smirking) : Yes?
Swara : Sanskaar… When did I nag you? You’re the one troubling me…
Sanskaar : Kaisi patni ho tum… Fighting with me already?
Swara : Accha ji? Aur aap? What are you doing?
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara : Sanskaar!
Laksh (from outside) : Offo! Even now you both are fighting? Arre, thoda romance toh karo.. .Yeh kya hai?
Swara (exasperated) : LAKSH? Why the hell are you eavesdropping? Leaveee… NOW…
Laksh (amused) : I am ready to go Swara! But the newest member of our household is very anxious to meet you.
Swara (confused) : Newest member?
WOOF was her answer.
Swara’s eyes lit up just as Sanskaar’s drooped.
Sanskaar (groaning) : Is that
Swara (excitedly) : ZOZO!!!!!
She ran and opened the door and saw her scottie in Laksh’s arms. But he immediately jumped down and went to Swara as soon as he saw her. She knelt down and picked him up.
Swara (hugging Zozo tightly) : I missed you so much. Who asked you to go to the farm for so many days? You were supposed to go for 3 days… You went for an entire 8 days. Bad boy Zozo.. Bad bad boy…
She hit him lightly on his back. Zozo yelped reproachfully and whined at her.
Swara : Accha baba! Good boy Zozo…Good good boy… I love you!
Sanskaar : That monster is going to live here?
Swara (glaring) : He’s not a monster. Shut up Sanskaar… You come inside baby!
She pushed Zozo inside then hugged Laksh.
Swara : Thank you… who brought him here?
Laksh (the pleasure in his eyes dimming) : Ragini.. Someone had brought him back from the farm to Gadodia Nivas. But Zozo was really restless there and you know Sumi aunty.
Swara rolled her eyes. She did know her mother.
Swara : Jo bhi ho… My Zozo’s hereee….. YAYYYYY!
Laksh (teasing softly so that Sanskaar wouldn’t hear) : Swara! Vaise, Saare kissies Zozo ko mat do… Thoda Sanskaar ke liye bhi bacha lo…
Swara blushed hard and glared at him.
Swara : Besharam… Go now. BYE!
She slammed the door on his face and came and cuddled Zozo again,
Swara : My BABY!!!! I missed you soooooooooo much!
Sanskaar (disgustedly) : You missed this creature?
Swara (cooing at Zozo) : Zozo darling… Dekho na Sanskaar ko.. He’s just angry with you because you splashed water on him once. See, Such a big man is scared of you.
Sanskaar (raising his voice) : I am scared of no one and I am not angry with the dog.
Swara (scowling) : Then WHAT IS your problem? Wait… Are you jealous?
Sanskaar (scoffing) : Why would I be jealous?
Swara : Kyunki I looooove my Zozo… He’s so cute.. I love cuddling him. And he will never do anything to me.
Sanskaar : Haan toh?
Swara : Toh…
And she stopped. She had been about to say that wouldn’t Sanskaar like her to cuddle him also like that.
Swara (thinking) : Pagal ladki… Can’t even remain quiet!
Swara (thinking) : Toh… You are jealous that he doesn’t love you as much as he does me.
Sanskaar (dismissively) : He loves me.. Everyone loves me.
Swara (raising an eyebrow) : Accha? Zozo.. (pointing towards Sanskaar) GO…
Zozo woofed happily and went for Sanskaar’s ankles. But being a man of fast thinking, Sanskaar moved aside and began running around the room.
Sanskaar (glaring at a laughing Swara while trying to evade Zozo) : Swara! i’ll get you for this. How could you? Pagal ho kya? God… I shouldn’t have married you. Jeenna mushkil kardogi tum! Uff.. You cur! STOP!
He stopped running and turned to Zozo, A fierce scowl on his face.
Sanskaar : STOP ZOZO!
Zozo stopped and looked at Sanskaar adoringly. Swara stood looking astonished.
Sanskaar (pointing to a far corner) : SIT now.
Zozo obediently trotted off to his spot.
Swara (protesting) : You can’t order my dog like that.
Sanskaar turned to her, A mischevious grin on his face.
Sanskaar : At least, the dog knows who’s in charge.
Swara : You are so not in charge. You… aaaah.. Sanskaar stop chasing me..
She ran around the bed as she tried to avoid getting caught by Sanskaar.
Sanskaar : You can run but you won’t last Swara… See.. I’m almost touching you now.. Swara, I’ve caught you now….. Eeeeughhh UFF.
As he caught Swara, She slipped and fell on the bed and he on top of her. A sharp crackling sound was heard and then sound of muffled laughter from outside. But Swara and Sanskaar couldn’t or rather, didn’t pay attention to it. They were staring at each other. Swara’s soft brown eyes met Sanskaar’s intense ones and automatically their arms moved to entangle themselves.
Swara’s breathing grew shallow and ragged with desire. She could clearly see Sanskaar’s desire in his eyes as well.
Swara (whispering) : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar : Hmm?
Swara : Kiss me…
Sanskaar smiled triumphantly and bent down to kiss Swara. Just as their lips were about to touch, his eyes grew wide and he got up disgusted with himself. Swara too got up confused.
Swara : Sanskaar?
Sanskaar didn’t answer. He was battling withing himself. This was the moment of truth. He couldn’t allow himself to become weak again. Steeling himself, He turned around to look at Swara.
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Swara stared at him, clear confusion in her eyes. She didn’t know what was wrong. Just a few minutes ago, He was so happy to be with her. But now, She could see the reserved expression in his eyes. He was trying to remove all the emotion on his face.
Swara : Sanskaar?
Sanskaar (his voice wooden but clear) : Swara! Do you love me?
Swara’s eyes widened. She hadn’t expected this question at all. Should she allow herself to hope that maybe…
Sanskaar : Swara? Tell me, Do you love me? And I know the truth so you have no need to lie.
Swara straightened herself. Maybe this was all for the best… She had been apprehensive about telling him but if he really knew… Well, Swara Maheshwari (nee Gadodia) was not a coward.
Swara (eyes straightforward) : Yes! I love you Sanskaar… I’ve loved you for a long time now. Ever since Darjeeling.. Maybe even before that, But I realised it then only.
Sanskaar : Why?
Swara (her smile faltering a bit) : I don’t know. I just know that I love you.
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : You made a mistake.
Swara ( a slight fire reaching her eyes) : What do you mean?
Sanskaar : I told you…. It would be a mistake loving me. I don’t love you.
Swara (quietly) : I know. (raising her voice a little) I know you don’t love me Sanskaar… I know you don’t. But still, I love you.
Sanskaar : BUT YOU SHOULDN’T…
Swara (horrified by his attitude) : Sanskaar? What is wrong with you? I love you… That’s my problem.. Why are you bothered?
Sanskaar : Because I CAN NEVER love you Swara!
Swara : I KNOW… You’ve told me that many times. It’s really quite irritating now.
Sanskaar (moving forward and pinning Swara to the wall) : You DON’T understand… I can never love you.
Swara (crying out in pain) : OUCH!!! Why are you being like this? You can never love me fine… Do you love someone else?
Sanskaar didn’t answer.
Swara (now angry) : SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI! Leave me right now.
He left her and turned away. She blinked back the sudden tears that were appearing on her face.
Swara : Sanskaar!
He didn’t turn around to look at her. His eyes were red… He hated every minute of this. But it was done…. Only the catalyst remained.. Then Swara would hate him and he would deserve it.
Swara : I don’t think you love someone else. But.. If you do.. WHY did you marry me? You should have told me.
Sanskaar turned around finally. This was it…
Sanskaar : I married you because I…. I want you Swara.
Swara : Huh?
Sanskaar : I mean that I desire you. I like kissing you. I like the way your desire shows in your eyes when I touch you. I love the chemistry between us. But.. I don’t love you. I want you… but that is not the same as love.
A myriad of emotions crossed Swara’s face. Shock, hopelessness, anger, misery and finally anger again.
Swara : Liar!
Sanskaar’s eyes widened.
Swara : I would never have loved a man who spoke to me like that. I don’t know why you’re doing this, but this is not funny. I love you, right.. You will never love me, I know that. What is your problem, Mr Maheshwari?
He remained silent. Swara came forward and kept a hand on his arm.
Swara (softly) : Please don’t shut me out. Tell me…We can solve it together.
How Sanskaar wanted to take her up on that offer. But the memory of Kavita prevented him. He could not bear to tell her his core belief.
Sanskaar (in a wooden, slightly choking voice) : You heard me.
Swara removed her hand in shock. They stood like that for several minutes, then Swara spoke again frustrated.
Swara : I don’t understand you…. You make me feel like a princess all these days. You make me believe I’m beautiful. You make me believe in myself. Then why do you act like this? It’s like…. It’s like you are TRYING TO MAKE ME HATE YOU.
Sanskaar’s eyes glazed and Swara knew she was right.
Swara (gasping) : Oh My God! Oh My God! I’m right, aren’t I ? You are trying to make me hate you. You don’t want me to love you.
He looked down, silent.
Swara (fire in her eyes) : Mr Maheshwari, LOOK AT ME! I said, Look at me.
He raised his eyes to look at his beautiful angry Goddess. She was literally glowing in her anger. Her nostrils were flared and her mouth was quivering.
At Swara’s shout, Zozo got up and crouched, whining. He ran below the bed and he waited there.
Swara : Listen hard… And listen well, Mr Maheshwari! I love you. You can’t change that. I have seen you… I know what you are.. I couldn’t have made a mistake by loving you.
Sanskaar stared at her in wonder.
Swara : Are you listening? I KNOW THE REAL YOU.. AND THIS IS NOT IT! You are hiding like you’ve always done, like you always will.
Sanskaar’s lips tightened and he held Swara’s arms tightly.
Sanskaar : I am NOT hiding.
Swara : Yes, You are. You have always been hiding. When I first met you, When we argued, when we decided to get married, during our dates, during all the wedding ceremonies… Why , Even now, when we are bl**dy so called husband and wife (Sanskaar flinches at her tone), You are hiding.
Sanskaar (his resolve weakening) : I am NOT!
Swara : Accha? Then tell me what is the matter with you and your Bade papa! Why are you so distant from your family?
Sanskaar (shocked at having all his home truths out) : Swara… STOP IT!
Swara : No! Why should I?
Sanskaar : Swara! That’s enough! I don’t want to talk about this anymore. Just stop loving me. PLEASE… I don’t need your love.
Swara stood silent for a few minutes. Zozo peeked out but then Swara spoke again and he crouched back in.
Swara : Sanskaar! You have told you don’t need my love. Fair enough… Maybe you don’t! But you also have no right to tell me that I can’t love you. You want the whole truth… Here it is.
Sanskaar looked at her devoid of emotion.
Swara : I know you have some big secret that you’re keeping from all of us. I know you are hurting inside. I know that you are keeping yourself apart from everyone. And I know that your secret concerns your Bade Papa! I have tried and tried to make you tell me.. That you could trust me…. But…
She stopped and turned away, blinking back sudden tears. No.. Now was not the time for tears.
Swara : Sanskaar! You are hurting. You have suffered, I get that. WHAT you don’t get is that everyone else also suffers when you suffer. Badi Ma, Mom, your brothers, Uttara, Me for that matter.. We all suffer when we see the guarded look in your eye. We suffer when you are quiet due to your grief. I know you were close to your Bade Papa… But what you don’t understand is that we are close to you as well.
Sanskaar tried to gauge what Swara was saying.
Swara : Please tell me.. What is the matter with you?
Sanskaar remained stony-faced. Swara waited for 2 minutes, then smiled sadly.
Swara : You know what? I thought I had married a man who owned the world, who was so smart and confident. And I did. But he’s also the man who doesn’t love his wife. (Sanskaar closing his eyes in pain) He’s also the man who doesn’t trust his wife. He’s a man who’s hiding from the truth. I married such a man.
She paused, then strode upto Sanskaar, held his arms and made him look at her.
Swara (determinedly) : I am NOT those typical bahus you see in these daily soaps. I am not going to cry and just leave this matter. I am not going to allow you to get away with what you’ve told. Even if you had told that you were in love with someone else, I would have understood… But by saying the ONLY relationship between us is LUST, You have insulted me. You threw my love in my face but that doesn’t stop me from loving you. YOU DON’T GET TO TELL ME WHAT I HAVE TO DO!
Sanskaar opened his mouth to speak, but she cut him off.
Swara : I’m not done, Mr Maheshwari. I think you have forgotten what type of girl I am. I fought the whole society for Ragini. I shouted at a man because he insulted Sakshi. I am very fierce and unstoppable when it comes to someone’s protection. And now.. I will fight with you for my self respect. From today, YOU had better watch out. This is my challenge to you.
She gave a sarcastic laugh.
Swara : After all, We love challenges na.. Continue trying to make me hate you. Continue your pathetic attempts. But ultimately, You will learn what love is. I once told you what it means. Now I will show you what it means. I will punish you.. But I will show you.
She left Sanskaar’s arms and turned around. She began walking to the bed, but stopped and looked at Sanskaar again.
Swara : Mr Maheshwari…. You once told me that I will be a dutiful bahu and a good wife. I will fulfill the first half of you wish. As for the good wife part, Until you take back your words, I won’t be. I am Swara Gadodia still. The day you accept the truth of our relationship and feel like you can trust me, I will be Swara Maheshwari. There is not just lust between us.. And you know that. Now I’m going to bed… Good night! (talking softer) Zozo baby… Bahar aa jao.. I’m sorry I scared you.
She picked up Zozo and they sat on the bed.
Swara : Which side of the bed do you sleep?
Sanskaar was surpised but pointed to the left side. Swara nodded, then went to the left side and slept.
Swara : From today, You sleep in the right.
And huggng Zozo, She closed her eyes.
Sanskaar stared at Swara, her words echoing through his brain. Everything she had said was true. She had understood him so perfectly. But he hadn’t. He loved her… But he didn’t understand the depth of her love.
Finally he smiled.
Sanskaar : Thank you so much Swara for loving me. Thank you… But… I don’t deserve it. I really don’t! Why don’t you understand? I am sooo sorry but… I have to do this.
He went and kneeled next to her sleeping form and held her hand. He placed a feathery light kiss on her hand and came to the other side. He sat back and closed his eyes.
And that was when Swara allowed her tears to fall. She opened her eyes and saw his supposedly sleeping form.
Swara (thinking) : I definitely did not expect this to happen. What the hell happened to you that you cannot accept my love? (fiercely) I will change you. You cannot insult our relationship like that. We have more than lust and you will realise it. I don’t care if you don’t love me. But I will show you how much I love you. Yeh vaada raha!
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan
Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )… (2)
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
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PRECAP : Challenge shuru
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So… This is it… How did you like it??
PLEASE, I WOULD LIKE ALL MY SILENT READERS TO COMMENT FOR THIS CHAPTER… I HAVE TRIED REALLY HARD TO GET BOTH THEIR EMOTIONS’ RIGHT… AND I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW YOUR OPINION.
MY REGULAR COMMENTERS, PLEASE DO TELL ME IF U LIKE THIS TRACK… IT’S GOING TO BE INTENSE AS WELL AS LIGHT. I WANT YOUR OPINION ON WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN.
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And yeah, No Kavita… My pyaari si Zozo is back! Hopefully to help Swara.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Only Radhika suggested Zozo.. But she switched to Kavi.. Still 5 points to her.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
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LOVE YOU ALL!!! WILL BE BACK SOON ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
I will post pkdh within 2 days.. So sorry for the delay there…
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Again, Don’t be angry with my Sanskaar… Poor guy.. His behaviour is perfectly justified. I first thought of bringing another girl for him, like to make Swara jealous.. Then I changed my mind. NO FILMY STUFF ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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166 comments

  1. From Nepal

    OK this time i am the first…. but i have not read it… i will read ad comment again…..hehe ๐Ÿ™‚

    • From Nepal

      wow swara was amazing in today’s episode….simply amazing…
      Thank god she will not hate sanskar….what a relief… i am sure the coming chapters will be more amazing….

      Love u for this…… :* :*

  2. Eva

    |Registered Member

    Hayy..i hope that I’m the first one…bhut accha episode tha…full of fight and romance..zada toh fight hii tha..and emotions bhi acchi tarikeseh portray kiya…suprb choti devrani ji?

  3. Ashu

    |Registered Member

    Anju anju anjuuuuuuj!!!!!???????????????????
    I really really really loved it!!!?????
    I don’t have words now to say abt this!!!! Its awesome!!! This is my gd night treat!!!! I’m so in love with this ff, and my sanskaar????

    I’m not at all angry with sanksaar!!! I know his behaviour is justified, and I really loved u for making swara understand him so so so perfectly!!! You portrayed swara’s love so so so well!!! How mch she understands sanskaar, cld clearly be seen here????????????

    U really really nailed today’s track!!!!!!!!! I’m saying so mch, bt still not getting the right words to comment!!!!

    And I got one thing, whatever sanskaar does to make swara hate him, in the end, he will end up hurting himself, and…. swara wld win the challenge! She can never hate him!!!!

    At the beginning, it was fun!!! With Zozo!!!??????????????
    But then it has become way too intense!!!!

    And nw I’m waiting for the upcoming intense track eagerly!!!!โ™ฅโ™ฅ

    Loved this chappy???
    Loads loads and loads of hugs and love for u????????
    Love u sis???

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Not the right words???

      This was just perfect…. I understood exactly what you wanted to say and am really glad to have u as a reader…..

      So so so so so so happy that you loved the chapter!!!!!!!!! ??????

      Let’s see what happens aage…. ???

      LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! IK I HAVE TOLD VERY LITTLE…. BUT I SACCHI DONT KNOW WHAT TO TELL….???

  4. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Anjali di………

    This is what called perfection. U have shown both emotions accurately.

    Yeah both r justified in their own place. Swara’s anger, determination and Sanskar’s grief and belief…everything is just perfect.

    I would only say one word STUPENDOUS.

    Love u Anjali di.

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Perfection?? ??? you’re kidding….

      But am really happy you loved it… ????
      Thnxxxxxxxxxxxx…… ?????

      Love you toooooo….. ???

  5. Shraddha

    This is by far THE BEST episode of MMAI for me!!!!! I think even the reconciliation won’t be this good enough because this so damm freaking Awesome!!!!
    I have no words n I’m so damm happy that she got to know n again the Realistic Anjali gives us her taste n not being typical stereotype daily soap story teller where swara would sit n cry n do all sort of shit!!!
    I’m so spell bound by this episode because this was totally not expected from me …
    Anjali I love you so much I can’t tell you HOW MUCH OF AN AWESOME WRITER YOU ARE!!!!
    Truly spectacular episode!!!
    Each n every dialogue utters harsh truth of their emotions n swara s confrontation is just mind blowing really!!!
    The way you have portrayed Both their emotions trust me when I’m saying this
    U have done ABSOLUTE justice to their emotions their povs ssly epic one it is.
    Good night take care

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Uk
      I have no idea what to tell you…..

      Ur comment…. ????

      I’m really glad you found this to be the best episode… and that u found it realistic… that was my aim…
      I do want to say some more to you… but I really don’t know how to put it in words…

      Thank you…. thank you soooo much for reading my story and loving it…. and most of all, being my friend…. Srsly…. Thnxxx my smiley!!!!! ????????

      LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! ???

      • Shraddha

        You don’t have to tell me dear??
        I get it…. sometimes it’s not just words that emote well eyes do but in our situation that also does not fit as an option but there’s this understanding that exists that’s make us know what we want to tell…..

        Oh God so much of not so me comments??no emojis so much of lovey doveyness Just not so mee???lol??
        Anyway I’m glad that day I took interest n read ur story that I got a beautiful story to hook up with
        N I’m so glad that I thought to comment n keep it on that I got a Monkey like uuuuuuu??????

      • Anjali30

        |Author

        lolol…

        I know ur not lovey dovey but ur still wordy…just like me… ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

        I’m the best monkey here ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ( i guess that’s bcos i’m the only one)

  6. Chanu

    Wow.. Awsome as always lv it… Ur emotions r jst like real. I feels it hppn 2 me… Ur writing skills r amazing dr.Lets see when he going 2 confess!!??.. My poor sanskar. ๐Ÿ™

    Byee
    Lv u <3
    Be hpy always!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Chanu

        Anjali… ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Awww u r soo sweet. Do u remember me!!! Even my exams. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ u hv lots & lots f fans oopps.. Sry frnds here. & i cmnt here nly few times. Phir bi thumko muje yaad hai. Mai bohoth kush hu. (dnt know my hindi is โˆš or ร— bt i think u cn understand it) yaaay yaaay.. ๐Ÿ˜€ lv u.. Ummmmahh.. :-* see i told u that u r sooo gd prsn. ๐Ÿ˜€

        if u r not a grl. I surely marry you. U r such a swt & lvly person. Dnt u hv any elder bro jst like u!!??? ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜› if u hv tell me. I surly cm 2 india & mry ur bro. Heee hee ๐Ÿ˜‰

        I nly cm here 2 check my replys. That time i saw ur mmai in recent posts. i 4gt evrythng even my exams. (evrytime i 4gt i hv exams) sooo i read ur epi. After that i cdnt stop cmnt here.
        My exams ddnt start yet. Im surely gonna die.. They says its rly hard this time.. Oh god!!! ๐Ÿ™ if i ddnt cmnt here after 2 mnths u cn think i dead in my exams due 2 heart attack.

        Enough f my bak bak. sry 4 bore u.. All the best!!! Write more.. May god bless you!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ be hpy always drl.
        Lv u <3 <3

      • Anjali30

        |Author

        Next time u tell sorry… I wont reply ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

        Lol… I do have bros.. But they’re not like me ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› They are more studious and perfect and blah blah.. They love to irritate me ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

        And how can I forget… Ik I am sometimes really forgetful.. But I do rremember names mostly!!!

  7. sweety

    Fabulous anjali……..I loved it……literally I thought swara will be heartbroken but to my surprise she became more determined……. Great work yaar…….
    But really yaar seeing sanskars situation I want to cry……..and no one can be angry with Sanskar at least not me…..yes coz his behavior is perfectly apt in view of the concept……
    Waiting for next update……

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thank you sweety!!!! ???

      Aww… don’t cry baby…. everything will be ok eventually….????

      Glad u liked it….. will post soon…

  8. Chaitali

    |Registered Member

    Zozo!!

    Really…i never guessed zozo!!

    This chappy is thoda funny,thoda emotional…and it was my favourite…love u a lot wifey!!

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Patidev!!!!! Lol… no one did…???

      Favourite really???? Awww…. thnxxxx!!! Glad u liked it…

      LOVE YOU TOOO HUSBAND!!!!

  9. Ariba

    |Registered Member

    I had my exams finished so i was searching for some really good ff n find urs n i read all of its parts in two days n i must say its just perfect??? u define everything to perfection be it SwaSan fight, challenges, romance, love or care???? i love their kisses the most the way u describe them???????

    About today’s part it was really fab u did justice 2 both characters?????? n thank god u didn’t brought kavi back r any new female opp sanskaar coz it would have been so typical n predictable i tw totally enjoyed it โค????โค
    Looking forward 2 their challenge plz post next part ASAP

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Silent reader… I love them!!!!

      Glad u chose my ff…. why did u choose it anyways???

      Perfect?? Srsly…. this is the second time that word has been used here….

      I have no idea what to say… just Thnxxx ariba!!!! ????
      Thnxxx for choosing mmai….
      Will post asap……

      • Ariba

        |Registered Member

        No i m not a silent reader whenever i read any ff i definitely comment

        Btw i was searching some good ff by reading intros n prologue i liked urs so read the whole

  10. Aami

    |Registered Member

    hy Anjuzzz……
    i dont no wht to say……. really now i am in deilima….. i njoyd till thy fall on the bed……the transfre from swara gadodia to swara sanskar maheshwari…. thier nik jok… n ZOZOs entry….. (really lvd it… jump in exitmntng… )thier chase….. in the room of a newly mrd couple thier is a third person tht tooo a puppy…. how cute n funny…..
    coming to nxt part…. i jst read it within one tym…. with out no cut or stop…. i feel really really sad for sanskar…. how he can be lyk tht….. omg he is a big bussiness tycoon….. plzzz sansakr opn ur mind to ur love….
    i really lvd swara….. the way of she talks… her order….. self cntrl for not cry…. evrythng just lve her (also the writer who writes it?)

    wytng for nxt with challenge for sanskar u will lose mr. sanskar maheshwari in front of ur wyf…. jst wyt n seee….

    lve u lotz dear… ???

  11. Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    Dare not bring anyone else…. That won’t be accepted…. More than sanskar you made me swara’s fan…. I liked her fierce nature and at the same time soft……

    Sanskar man…. What the hell u are doing but u seriously misjudged about ur wife….
    He really needs a chatakk to come back in reality and living…. N swara is determined to do so…..

    Challenges…. Well I would love to see this
    challenge hate love story…. Oops no hate trying to make hate but big duffer…. Thinking to do so…..
    I’m waiting for that one moment when swara will get to know that sanskar loves
    her back and still going on with his foolishness…..

    And I’m not hating sanskar…. I’m really horrified to read that one sentence of him
    (describing each emotion to sound it like lust)……. Good swara will kick him everytime like this…. A much needed one…..
    Zozo…. Ahh baby I’m so fond of puppies….. So cute ??

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Awwww neha…
      Seeing u here after a long time…. ??

      And yeah… I’m not gonna bring any one for anyone…???

      Don’t worry….. everything will be ok soon!!! ??

      Love you!!! ??

      • Neha_priya

        |Registered Member

        Sorry anju wait for 3-4 more days then I’ll be regular…. Two more exams left…. Let that get over ….

        Love you too baby

  12. Sakshi

    Anju really the chapter was mind blowing. ??
    Really i am not getting any words to comment.Loved each and every part ??
    After watching the dp I was ready to bring my revolver to shoot u but after reading the update I was happy.??
    Feeling very bad for swara and sanskar.Both are equally write in their point.??
    Thank god swara understand him that he just wanted her to hate him and her outburst to sanskar was just epic.
    Let’s see what happens nxt?
    Update next part asap warna i will shoot u??
    Love u anju??
    Bbye
    Take care
    ??

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Awww… Thnxxx sakshi…

      Lol… do u really have a revolver?? But am glad I didn’t disappoint u

      Glad u loved.it…

      Will post soon…

      Love u….??

  13. L Khan

    Omg……loved it……..nd swara’s confidence for her luv is superb
    ????????????????????????โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค

    You r mind blowing always………. Missed u alot……..??

    PlZzzz try to post soon……will wait for next part

  14. Nยฃ@

    Amazing.. I feel you have conveyed their emotions well. Emotional..
    Lots of love.. Keep it up.. ??

  15. Dev

    |Registered Member

    Heey anju….wat a fierce dialogue delivery of swara…..pah superb….zozos antics were comedy…..n poor sanky…he has 2 bear d swara whom he dint know now……
    Anyways…..love u lots…..hugs….pecks…..tc????

  16. Sumeeta

    |Registered Member

    Anjali kya epi hain.dhamakedar.mujhe laga swara will behave like tv ka adarsh wife .no she is strong to handle it

  17. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Zozo????? Like seriously di. I hav been thinking abt who it might be the whole di and it was zozo. ???????. Cmng to the epi di it was wonderful. I expected smethng like tis frm sanskar bt swara was extraordinary. And her dialouges were mind blowing. Such a nice answer to sanky. I loved her dialouges. Di i am nt able to find wrds to praise you. Hw the hell can u be soooooooooooooooooooooooooo creative. And on top of it u r sooo sweet that u called me the sweetest. I swear di i was litreally grinning like an idiot whn i saw that msg of urs. And whn my mom asked y i was doing that i had to cover up. Afterwards in room i was dancing and thanking god. I even tkd him that i wll vme to temple because so many good no no best things r happening in my life. Whn i frst started commenting i was really apphrehensive abt that. Cause u writers hav so many who read ur ff and i thought hw cld u remember me esp? Bt u all did. And di u even remeber my name. Nw i am th king that starting to comment on ffs was the best decision. It was ur ff in which i first commented. And i was so surprised by the sweet replies given by you that i was lime awwed by you. I th k its become too long.

    Love u soooooooo much di
    ????????????????

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      lolol… U didn’t guess na?

      You don’t have to praise me… You just have to like my story ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ That’s more than enough…..

      And obviously ur the sweetest <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

      lol… i grin like that as well… when i see all ur comments ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Temple?? Good things?? What????

      Ik.. I remember bein scared to comment as well.. I think I started path to happiness before I started commenting….

      And no.. It's not too long… It can never be ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      LOVE U TOOO <3 <3

      • Fanficoholic

        |Registered Member

        Me starting commenting and u ppl replyng to me in the sweetest way possible u calling me the sweetest all these things r giving me immense happiness and pleasure. Soo i thought that i shd thank god fr this happiness by going to temple.

      • Anjali30

        |Author

        aww that’s really cutee… I don’t like temples a lot.. I mean I love going but the whole concept of praying i really don’t understand… Anyways..

        Love you Vaishu!!!

  18. Anisha

    |Registered Member

    Godddd! Anjali I thought you would give some romance sort of!
    Huh?
    Anyways it was amazing! ???
    The way Swara stood for herself acknowledging my Sanky’s cowardness
    Love you don’t be angry ?
    I was just a bit busy

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Romance ke liye time h… Don’t worry….

      Why will I be angry?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

      Glad u liked it Anisha!! Thnxxx <3 <3 <3 <3

      Love u ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  19. Swetha

    Hey Anjali I am a silent reader
    I just couldn’t stop myself from commenting after reading the chapter
    It was amazing

  20. shria

    anjali dis episode really was… heart touching, we can now really relate to swasans emotions,what both r feeling is justified. i just hope d siblings din hear this part;)
    u really r a hell of a writer

  21. ira

    hey
    I did not read it but I can say that it’s awesome and waiting for the next one
    ( sorry did not read it as I am going to my college )

  22. Purvi

    |Registered Member

    Awesomeโ€ฆ.. Continue soonโ€ฆ. Happy to see fierce swara…… Waiting for the challenge…….

  23. O Ahmed

    wooowww…swara was so good in it…just luv her….
    and Anjali u have written it so beautifuly yaar…???
    but i’m angry on sanskar..???
    bilkul buddhu he. ..??
    and waiting for PKDH…

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx O Ahmed!!! Glad u liked it….

      Will post pkdh soon… Too sleepy today to write… ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

      Aww… Don’t be angry… He’s not a buddhu.. :/ :/ It’s reallly natural… Irritating yupp…. But not buddhu….

  24. vyshu

    MINDBLOWING! U know, I have read this ep for 1 hour……just so emotions to take in at once. It was pretty intense.

    I loved d ep….. swara’s monologue at the beginning of the chapter, laksh’s eavesdropping, swara’s fierceness, sanky’s dilemna….Finally, the volcano has erupted!

    Oh god….i’m crying now. Can’t wait for next ep. Plz post soon dear.

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      One hour ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

      But it was sooo short!!

      Anyways… Glad u loved it ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      Aww… Don’t cry… It’ll be alright again!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Will post asap ๐Ÿ˜€

      • vyshu

        Yup one hour….I always visualize when I read and I was so intrigued yesterday. I had to take breaks in between. The ep was an emotional rollercoaster.

  25. Rain

    As usual u managed to nail it and make it awesome:):)

    I know Sanskar’s actions r justified but I’m still angry with him. What he said about lust… Well that’s not something a civilised convo shud be having in my opinion. Srsly he’s being annoying yaar. Pls make him our pyaara, playful Sanskar and show lots and lots of Swasan scenes. Bahot dino se yeh Sanskar Aise behave Kar raha hai. Pls pls pls pls pls Plssss Anju?????

    Loved the epi. Zozo part was the best. In fact in the last chap when everyone were guessing Kavitha and u kept saying we’ll see I kinda guessed it’s not Kavitha but didn’t know who it was so u didn’t try guessing:p

    Did I trouble u wid my extremely loooong comment? Sorry. Once u start writing I don’t stop so maybe comments r becoming long?

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Rain ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Lol…. Well… You should be angry with me then ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› But it was a convo with his wife… So it’s a diff sort of civilised…

      I will def show Sanskaar like that… but it will take some time… I can’t just change him randomly…. That’s too stupid.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› But pakka you’lll see what you want as soon as u can ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Glad u loved the chap.. lol…zozo <3 <3 <3

      Nope… Comments are never too long for me.. So don't bother apologising ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Rain

        lol k:) i anyways love all ur episodes whther it is showing some painful track or romantic or friendly or anything else…

  26. Aniya

    wow anjali the chapter was just awesome???
    Though i wished that sanskar would confess his feelings….but according to the circumstances his behavior is completely justified
    Eagerly waiting for nxt episode plz post it asap

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Aniya!!!

      Glad u find it justified!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will do my best to post it asap ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  27. Natasha

    |Registered Member

    Anju.. 1st of all bakbak am very sorry for late comment.. ?? I read it at night itself.. After that I just slept.. And when u told me to read it at night I didn’t read cz I didn’t want to spoil its essence by reading in chaos.. That time I was chatting on Fb.. And I wouldn’t be able to read it peacefully.. But I wanted to enjoy mmai to the fullest..cz its very close to my heart.. ??

    Now behna..coming to today’s chappy..whatever I will tell it will be less for todays chappy.. It’s beyond perfect.. As Shraddha said its the best ever chappy in mmai..omg.. :O U just nailed it buddy…

    1st ZoZo’s entry in ff its totally unexpected for me.. And then Again Zozo’s entry in newly married couple’s room..its quite funny.. ??After that Swara”s determination.. I just loved Swara’s dialogues.. Her challenge.. Realistic Anjali is back with a bang.. ?? U didn’t make it like daily soaps where in such cases heroine will sit and cry her heart out.. Then they will beg to hero.. This is the main difference with others..this is Anjali..realistic..This is her charm and strong point.. Hats off Anju.. U just made my day.. And no emotional Rona dona..u know buddy I just love this type love story..will challenge each other..its intense.. And I love intense love story..always lovey-dovey moments..not possible.. In reality our life is not the bed of roses..u just portrayed that with ur stupendous writing skill.. Sanskar’s effort to make her hate him.. Then Swara caught his actual intentions.. Omg.. Am speechless anju.. ??? Now I will love to c the challenges btwn our beloved couple..

    U had justified both of their point of views.. Nd hate my Sanskar..no way..never.. He is r8 in his place.. So no hate feelings.. ??

    Anju..am proud to be ur frnd.. ???Really.. And at last in a sentence its Awesome beautiful,tremendous,superb, amazing, outstanding,mind blowing.. ??

    And update next chappy ASAP.. Otherwise i will come to blore through cell itself to beat u.. ???

    P.S.: Sorry for extra long comment..but I can’t help it.. ???Sorry anju..if u fl bored.. ??

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Well…. I have no idea what to tell you as well… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Uk what I feel from fb itself.. I told you…. And I’m really sleepy now… So I’m not even sure if I’ll do justice to ur comment… ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

      So am not telling u anything right now… Other than I love you… And am soooo lucky and happy to have met you!!1

      LOVE YOU , MY JANU!! <3 <3

      • Natasha

        |Registered Member

        Janu no.2.. no need to tell anything.. cz u deserve this.. ???? and u told me on Fb.then??? Enjoyed??? ??How was the movie??? ??Conjuring 2 ?!?? ??Nd buddy am also very much lucky as well as happy to get u as my janu no.2.. ???????? Btw y were u not sleeping when u were sleepy?? ???dont do this again.. then I will beat u.. don’t stress urself.. ??? Ab byeee.. aur haan.. Keep voting baby.. ???U know na we have to defeat ****…. (samajh le beta).. ????So keep voting.. Show swasan fandom once again.. ?? We will do our rest pagalpanti on fb.. ??Bye bye janu no.2… love u… ye le kissi.. ???????

  28. Dharsha

    |Registered Member

    Mixed emotions…

    For swara being so tensed…
    For swasan awkward silence…
    For laksh bringing in zozo…
    For sanky saying what he doesn’t wanna say…
    The most special wanted part is swara reply back…the needed one I guess
    Challenge…!!! The best of all I think…

  29. Riya

    Anjali.. It was awesome … No words to express.. It was just amazing.. Challenges.. All the best SWARA.. U will rock dear.. And zozo least expected.. And ok ok I won’t hate sanskaar but sanskaar it was very bad of u to bring the lust factor,, very bad and anju pyaar se we all call Riya guji ( gooji ) .. The hidden tale is that .. Few years back , our first ramadan together so in that we make dishes u all know.. So in the first day we made samosas but the shape of samosas were like gujhiya .. We have some to her in afternoon and she thought them to be gujiyas and kept it in fridge ., my God and then at evening when they had it , it was salty in taste instead of sweet( of course it would be, they were samosas yaar) .. We also came to know and after That I teased Riya a lot and everyone called her gujhiya or guji.. ??

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Aww… Thnxxx Riya!!! Glad u loved it… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Chill, Don’t worry… It’ll soon be alright!!!

      Gooji… <3 <3 <3 So cuteee and the story is really funny!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Love u gooji baby!!! <3

      • Riya

        |Registered Member

        Gooji baby loves u too .. Even me love u but I know that riya urf gooji baby loves u all more .. ??

  30. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    awwww zozo i love him…….. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    swara told everythig….. baba re…….
    strong grl ha………..

    amazing… chappy…….
    excited for the nxt……..
    post asap……… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    love u dear anji…… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

  31. Sueรฑo

    OMG!!!!!!!! My TE s back to d work ah!!!!!!!!! Today’s epi ws EPIC lyk seriously I m jus in awe!!!!?????No words to describe it!!!!!! No offence bt thn in btw I felt tht d charm ws less…… bt nw u r back wid a BANG!!!!!!!!
    It ws totally super paisa wasool epi ah!!!!!!!???
    D teasing of It Uttara n Laksh……. ZOZO’s arrival…… ???????
    D way thr feelings ws expressed ws jus fab……….??? Tooo emotional epi it ws!!!!! Jus excellent………

    Love u……….. ????
    Hope to read ur nxt post soon??????????

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Hey Sueno!!!

      Why offense?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ You ahould have just told me then itself…

      But anyways thnxxxxx <3 <3 ,3
      Glad u loved this…

      Will try to post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3

  32. Hadi

    |Registered Member

    loved it anjali hope pagal sanskar will soon realize that its alll of no use n by this he is only giving pain to his love ones … swara !!! love swara bold one thats good what she said about of being gadodia sanskar have some shame hw can he said like that they share a relation of only lust i wanted to slap such persons but hats off to swara that she releized actual motive of sanky n not came into his talks otherwise sanky not left a single loop 4 swara to make her hate him
    anjali u splendidly write it no words to appreciate the way u describe both emotions n feelings n especiallly the last kiss part n the feelings of swara on kiss is just not described in words thanks for such a episode last but not least waiting for next dear

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Hadi!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will fulfill ur wish soooon… ๐Ÿ™‚
      Glad u loved it <3 <3 <3

      Will try to post soon ๐Ÿ˜€

  33. angel

    wow anji….looooooved it soooo much….perfect….wah swara my jhansi ki rani!!!!!zabardast…..ab tau swara hi sanskar ko akal de gi…..go swara go…..aaaaalllll the best anji…..love u looooads????

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      t’hnxx Angel ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Glad u loved it!!!
      lol…

      Love you tooo ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  34. Sha

    |Registered Member

    U know wat anjali, I almost had tears in my eyes.. I could predict swara’s emotion very well.. I know I can’t hate my sanku, but,each n evry line of swara was like awe!! Totally enjoyed it.. I know I don’t comment often, but I have commented in the beginning of this ff.. Reading from the beginning ,Wat wil happen next my heart beats were fluttering,still it is..

    Eagerly waiting for the next post my HN..

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Hey hb… Good to see u here ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Glad you liked it… Aww…. Don’t cry ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Everything will be alright ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will post soon ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  35. Anu Ann

    Awesome episode dear… I’m very happy to see a strong swara….. …….. ……….. ……. Hope you’ll update next part soon

  36. Harani

    |Registered Member

    Anjali , I was going through a emotional rollercoaster,wahhh,,how good is your chAppy..sanky,love you man , the toughest part is to let the person you love to hate you .But he is doing it voluntarily…swara ,I wish her to fight more bravely,and make him understand soon,we can’t hold this separation for long ๐Ÿ™
    And zozo,I missed the cutie so much …
    Anju,love you loads .

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      emotional rollercaster…. LOLOL…
      Really?

      Well… Glad you liked it… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Love you tooHarani… <3 <3 <3

  37. Dhara

    |Registered Member

    zozo my darling is back. Doggies are venika’s favourite? I knew it sanky will do something to make Swara hate him. But Swara is Swara not any typical girl. Swara will have to fight to make sanky trust him and tell about his fears. Anju (I like this name for u) Swara loves to fight. She will fight for husband with her husband? loved this part.

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      heyy Dhara!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Aww… soo cutte…. I generally don’t like dogs

      Lol… Everyone calls me anju ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Glad u loved this chappie ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  38. divya

    thankyou so much for not making it a filmy stuff loved the bold, understanding and challenging
    swara gadodia or maheshwari would love to see the challenge part upload soon love u loads tons kgs everything I don’t want to end the comment but wil have to end it it todays chapter was a big turning and new start of two lives loved it ………

  39. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Hi Anjali beti..How are you??I thought to comment on 50th chapter of MMAI,but you know my situation right,so commenting now.. ๐Ÿ˜€ And advance congratulations for the 50th chapter my dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Episode is so beautiful,I was so involved in it and I’m praying that this chapter should not end anywhere.. ๐Ÿ˜€ I loved Swara(no abala naari types)..I love girls to be like that and that’s the reason I’m attracted to this FF..Sanskar is such a poor guy,he’s not able to convey his feelings because of the fear he has gone through in Kavitha’s phase..I loved every part of it.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Keep writing such awesome stuff..Stay blessed and be happy yaar.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Love,
    Sweetie.

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Heyy Mummy!!!!

      50th chappie… lolol.. Never thought I will write more than 30…

      Glad u commented here ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      And yeah… am really happy u loved this ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU!!!!! <3 <3

  40. Radhika

    I love today chapter very much as swara confront her emotions in front of sanskar and sanskar character is truely justified
    there is so much things in today’s chapter teasing, fun time, angry, happiness, fight , and swara determination to know the truth
    the challenge part is going to be interested how swara is going to make sanskar realise that he can trust her and make him confess his love
    please di make sanskar realise that he can trust swara and confess his felling asap
    I am very happy because my guess is right but I go with kavita but I am happy that atleast on my 3 guesses there is zozo and I am the only one who guess zozo yippe ….???????? and thanku for giving 5 points ???? love this ff and love u di????????

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Radhika!!

      Yupp 5 points to u.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Will fulfill ur wishes jaldiii….

      Glad u love this…

      LOVE YOU TOO!!!! <3 <3 <3

  41. Alishatani

    |Registered Member

    U r just amazing.. No words to describe you.. Another Shakespeare needs to get birth so that we can use his words to describe your work. U just nailed it.. I luv u to the core and appreciate up work.. Waiting for challenge to start. Update soon. Love u loads
    ??????

  42. Nisha_Anu

    |Registered Member

    Nice chapter! But still why Sanskar? Im waiting for Pyar Ka Pain hai. ??
    And btw I posted prologue of Anonymous. I would be glad if you read it and lemme know your views! ??

    Love you โคโค

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      will post pkdh soon ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Thnxxx Sis!!!

      Lol… DWEverything will be ok soon ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3

  43. Jiya

    |Registered Member

    Seriously man,how can u do this sanky??
    Plz anju bring back that precious gem that u’ve explained before that loving nd caring one sanky?????
    Unite swasan

  44. JANVI

    hi anjali….
    i am janvi’s sister naira
    actully she was not able to visit this page coz she met with an accident last month nd injured herself very badly
    now she is much better nd whn i visited her she asked to me visit this site to inform you people
    tht she would deffinately read all d ffs as soon as she gets rid of those plasters
    n yup…. she misses u all…
    n specially u anju….. n a small msg specially for u tht she extremly sorry fr nt informing earlier. n luv u.take care

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      WOAH!!! What happened???

      Is she really alright???

      Thnxx Naira for telling me.. Tell her I forgive her ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› and ask her to be careful!!!!

      LOVE YOU!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  45. Anjali30

    |Author

    Okk… I have seen all ur comments… Love you all for them.. but i am absolutely tooo tired to reply….

    I am sooooo Sorry ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

    I def promise to reply tomorrow.. Pls forgive me ๐Ÿ™

    Thnxxx sooo much!!

  46. Kritika

    |Registered Member

    Awww..it Zozo
    I love him ..
    So sweet of him…
    Wah..loved this swara…
    But don’t make her cry yr..
    Sanskar is dumbo..???
    Doing mazak..
    U also know episode was more than awsm..
    U also knw that I loved it..
    So that’s it..!??

  47. Richa

    Omg anju…I was glued to my phone for complete 20 min..reading each and every line..tears automatically coming out from my eyes..my mother thought what happened to me…
    This chapter is indeed the best one..u displayed the emotions of sanky and swara so beautifully simultaneously… I love you anjali.. How do u manage to write so perfect..
    OK it was Jojo..I was wrong?…but that’s okay…I am glad swara has some old companion.. And yes I love this track..its so intense.. Our Mr.maheshwari couldn’t open him mouth in front of swara?..
    Plz post the next asap…
    Love you sis.. But u did not send me the links of pkdh…in fb???..plz send that?

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Aww… Thnxx Richa!!!

      Glad u liked it ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      well… loved it.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      so sorry to make u cry… Will def send the links to u.. The net’s crappy here ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ But I can send it tom pakka

      Love you tooo!!!1 <3 <3 <3

  48. JANVI

    hey dear..
    now she is much better
    actually she got hit by a car while returning frm skl
    n ya.. i told her tht u forgave her n she was so happy tht she ate the medicines without any drama
    all thanks to u..

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      lol.. She doesn’t llike medicines?? Even I don’t ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      But tell her she HAS to..

  49. โ™ฅpriyuโ™ฅ

    Diii i missed u so much …. sorry for not commenting , situations were wrose …. death of my closet relative cum friend …. leave it ….

    Coming to the twist i thought swara would fall weak but came up like a thunderstorm …. i m shocked …. zozo is so cute …. but i am scared of dogs …. but i like them so much ….

    Missed me or not ha ?? R u on wattpad di …. if u r send me a message my user name is priyuS …. hope u dont mind …. again sorry for not commenting ….

    • Anjali30

      |Author

      Sorry to hear about ur relative/friend….

      Be brave!!! โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

      And I was wondering where priyu was…. she had not been active at all….

      Anyways.. glad you liked the epi…. lol… even I don’t generally like dogs… they should be far away then I can admire them…???

      Love you priyu!!!!

  50. Anjali30

    |Author

    SORRY FOR NOT POSTING THESE FEW DAYS… HAVE BEEN BUSY IN MY RELATIVE’S HOUSE!!! I’ll surely post pkdh or mmai asap ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Pravalika

      Plsssss post asap anju cant wait yaar its just an aweesome episode! I have no words to describe it love ya loads <3

      • Anjali30

        |Author

        Thnxx Pravalika!! My relatives are actually not allowing me touch my lappy because they feel I don’t spend enough time with them.. But I am writing how much ever I can… Will try to post sooonnnn!!!

        SOO SORRY ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

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